First book of stories now available: UK: www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0CGXFZCH5 USA: www.amazon.com/dp/B0CGXFZCH5 The Peter Van Melsen Playlist: ruclips.net/p/PLeNNKRLWxwoO0VCrw61QeyrZk_DQYZycx
Whenever HorrorBabble reads a story, I automatically assume it's taking place in beginning of twentieth century and even when cellphones and laptops are mentioned, I still can't 'update' my mental picture of sets and characters...
holy cow, me too. we must be of the same generation, no? anyway that's where these stories belong - in Holmes's time - or the 3o''s like Poirot. . . Keep safe :)
My wife and I are camping, high up in the mountains in Southern California. We're sitting in front of a campfire in the middle of the forest as I listen to this.
But wait...........................................what was that ? Honey did you hear that ? ..................................................................................................................................Honey ?
Please KEEP WRITING!!! You give both the horror classics and mythos based stories an honest homage, while combining the two beautifully. This is nothing like the lazy mimicry that has totally overrun the creepypasta genre. The internet NEEDS you Ian!!
There are alot of Lovecraftian & cthulu mythos stories on audible,sadly it costs alot,BUT if u borrow someones credit card you can register and get one free book,then cancel within 30 days(best to do it directly after u bought a book so u dont forget ) Then you do this over and over with all your familys cards and u have a whole bunch off books,some collections are up to 20 hours! Happy listening Sadly none have the amazing voice as Ian but hey,the man can only read so much :)
I listen to your narration of Jack London's " to build a fire" every morning on my hikes through spotify but there is no place for me to say thank you on that platform. Thank you dearly for a beautiful narration of my all time favorite London short. Thank you.
Listening to these while falling asleep lead to interesting dreams. Did you know, for example, that the local scout group is tasked with going out and scrubbing the doors clean? The ajar one is a very unpopular one to scrub, because you might fall through.
It is interesting how you tied together Lovecraft's Alien Colour with the Hyperborean cycle of CAS. Despite certain similar elements, such as the presence of Old Ones, Lovecraft's and Smith's stories are remarkably different, especially considering how Smith's protagonists may sometimes interact with the Great Old Ones without death or sanity (i.e. Eibon, despite being an all-powerful wizard, can contact Tsathoggua without serious repercussions). That being said, I feel you captured this same sort of 'mechanism', if you will. Rather than having the Colour arrive on a meteor (a la Lovecraft), they enter through stranger doors; we have the same entity, but with a different shade of colour (mind the pun). I digress. Another great original work Ian. Thank you for sharing.
This is so wonderful - the writing, the story and setting, characters, and, of course, narration. Great job! Looking forward to the next Van Melsen adventure 🤠👍
Aaayyyyy, I live near Berchtesgaden and I can see the Untersberg from my house 🤣🤣🤣 So now I know where I WON'T go hiking again. Awesome work, superb storytelling and killer delivery as always. Thanks mister.
I tried over and over to listen to it, but there would be an interruption. Finally, last night I listened to it. Great story! I like the characters, the plot, style of prose, and that investigative theme. Great job!
I like the slow pacing - nobody is in any particular hurry to get anywhere and, considering where they are going, why would they be? It's almost like Lovecraft in reverse as the characters shuffle sideways to their fate rather than being impelled by the irresistible lure of forbidden knowledge. It's a comforting and comfortable horror tale and I have no problem with that.
Just as fantastic as the first! The climactic encounter with the "color" was wonderfully descriptive and full of fantastic imagery. So many unanswered questions, cannot await the next Van Melsen story!
This was an awesome story. I just loved the way it was presented and it had a great plot. I hope there are more stories like this one to come. Thanks. ♡
I just started the Van Melsen series. These are absolutely fantastic! I try to write myself, but it's so hard to find motivation after working all day. Anyway, I am so genuinely glad you're featuring your own work now in addition to that of other--because it's excellent! Well done.
These stories are awesome! Van Melsen is incredible! I listened to these out of order, so I listened to the first six in order this week. That took some time! Lol! These are great stories, and I immensely enjoy them. I think I would get along quite well with good ole' Van Melsen!
I really like these stories and that they same to been done in modern style like the old Carnacki stories atleast to myself makes them more memorable than the daily CPs that are churned out daily. Of course your great narration helps a great lot also
i scour through this channel looking for stories i haven’t heard yet and am always pleasantly surprised with what i find. you guys are amazing thank you so much for all the excellent content!!!
This is an excellent story and a marked improvement over the enjoyable first Peter Van Melsen story. The switch to first person narration is a smart choice and the central mystery and nature of the entity conjures a compelling comic horror vibe more effectively than in the previous tale. The melding of affectionate homages to Peter Cushing and Lovecraft's works continues to be effective. However, I would like to see a little more fallibility, flaws and self-doubt in Van Melsen, otherwise the character risks becoming stale.
YES! More original content. *happy dance* You guys are so awesome with your recordings. Adding life to the characters along with the music and background sound affects to add to the feel us listeners get. The orignal content is so sweet listing to the tales you weave while building new worlds or expanding onto established ones creating new paths for fans to explore. So many of your recording, The Originals and Lovecraft especially, i keep going back to when i need to relax or to play as background sounds while i draw.
I have to admit that the most unnerving part of this narration was hearing you speak my name (Philippe) [you nailed the pronunciation] , while I thoroughly enjoyed the tale as well
It took me a week to find the time to sit down and listen to your new opus. Now that I finished I am nigh ecstatic! The story is every bit as captivating as I had hoped it would be, and more! Your choice of words is just perfect, Ian. I'm a professional word-person (commonly known as a philologist), and your prose hits right in my language centre. Atmospheric and captivating, the last time I felt like that was when I discovered Clark Ashton Smith's work. Similarly, the subtle humour shining through had me laugh out loud a few times. Long story short, I have become an ardent fan and hope that there will be more Van Melsen stories in the future! ____________ Edit: As a former denizen of the lands around the Untersberg, that little detail was highly appreciated.
Very well done - a great tale which brought two things to my mind - one - the Venus fly trap; and two, a John the Balladeer story by the great Manly Wade Wellman, about the strange things called Gardinels, which were scattered here and there among the most out of the way places in the old rural areas of the Southern mountain country. Not many who entered a Gardinel ever emerged.
Not related to the story but the line "you fool. Warren is dead" gives me nam flashbacks ever since first listening to YOUR reading of that story. The build up almost made me cry before the payoff sent real shivers down my spine!
I just got a job 4 days ago, and have to walk for an hour to get there. Listening to these on the way to and from work makes the journey infinitely more enjoyable. Thank you Horrorbabble ❤
Ian thinks he’s so big with his fancy, smokey, pillowy accent (that works on me like an Ambien, and I mean that in the best way possible) that he can just slip his own fiction into things and nobody will condemn him for his conflict of interest. I mean he’s totally right, but....
I initially found HorrorBabble in a search for Lovecraft stories. From this, I discovered the work of Robert Bloch, who I only knew as the writer of the story which became the Hitchcock film "Psycho". For the last week or so, I've been dipping into other writers' stories to decide which rabbit hole to go down next. The Van Melsen cases are so enjoyable and thrilling that I shall complete the set before moving on.
I cant help but feel like this is inspired by that one reddit thread "I'm a park search and rescue ranger, and I have some stories to tell" in which a park search and rescue ranger keeps finding staircases just randomly out in the woods, and his superiors keep telling them not to pay them any mind and do not under any circumstances touch them. The park ranger eventually finds out that if the stairs are touched, really bizarre things happen and people often end up dead. If it's not inspired by that, then well, It just made me think of it. Fantastic story, I cant get enough of this kind of content!
Ah, so this was written recently. I'd assumed it was a massive coincidence and I was actually here in the comments to make a joke about the similarity of concept.
Ian, I have to ask... Is this a possible explanation for the "birth" ov the Color out ov Space?! Either way it was wonderful. I spend a lot ov time in the forests ov the Pacific Northwest in the US. I adore tales like this.
Hi Jayme! Though it's inspired in part by Lovecraft's "Colour", it isn't intended to be directly related to it. The Pacific Northwest is a wonderful place. Thanks for listening!
I love some of your word choices in this series it's rare to hear the words petrichor, ubiquitous, and phantasmagoria which I think is a shame as there some of my favourites along with mellifluous (which your work is), susurrus and fricative . ❤
great story, Isn. you’re just getting better and better at writing. let’s see: - reader and actor, cultivated voice and accent, composer, and god knows what else. you probably play the piano, too. (such an incredible and versatile instrument :). does Jennifer do the taping and noises off? really well done, too. :} 😺🙀
I reckon you're too generous, Alexa. We'll probably throw another behind the scenes video together at some point in order to better answer questions like that... :) Ian
HorrorBabble ok i’ll take half off the list. LOL great you’re doing another background story - i look forward to all your new stuff. some people are watching Netflix during the lockdown. i listen to stuff on UTube. i’ve listened to yours - some of them twice over :). do you think 1984 is scary enough to read? - considering what’s going on here in amurica? there is that one bit where they put rats after him and he’s terrified of them. take care, sweetie. alexa 🌷✨👻👀 :)
It would’ve been nice if the writer had taken the time to compose the actual banishment spell. Other than that, the story was very well written, and homage to Lovecraft, with its own personal flavor. The narrator, as always, is exceptional.
I have been attempting to learn from Ian's storytelling on this. Mechanically, I think he has used secondary characters to convey a broader range of emotions than might suit our hero alone. The Colours of Kahlo being so beautiful is a great contrast to Lovecraftian horror. And why not? Is a storm ugly just because it sinks a trawler? Is a lion leaping towards a gazelle any less majestic?
"Drinking Tea and Talking Death" post-mortem: Tea? 0. Could have given him a thermos? Or is that and eldritch anomaly to a True Englishman? Death? 4. Good numbers. Bonus points for the puppy surviving. 3/5 Melsens I'm taking a point off for him smoking he needs to live long and give us lots of stories.
First book of stories now available:
UK: www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0CGXFZCH5
USA: www.amazon.com/dp/B0CGXFZCH5
The Peter Van Melsen Playlist: ruclips.net/p/PLeNNKRLWxwoO0VCrw61QeyrZk_DQYZycx
Whenever HorrorBabble reads a story, I automatically assume it's taking place in beginning of twentieth century and even when cellphones and laptops are mentioned, I still can't 'update' my mental picture of sets and characters...
holy cow, me too. we must be of the same generation, no? anyway that's where these stories belong - in Holmes's time - or the 3o''s like Poirot. . . Keep safe :)
I too imagine early 1900s at least and laptops often break my imagination.
I had a bit of a jarring feeling in the other story, when he mentioned the girl wearing jeans
Me too, when he says email I imagine telegram and I replaced mentally all modern drivel with a more Lovecraft appropriate timeline
Same
My wife and I are camping, high up in the mountains in Southern California. We're sitting in front of a campfire in the middle of the forest as I listen to this.
But wait...........................................what was that ?
Honey did you hear that ?
..................................................................................................................................Honey ?
Lol great user name we've all felt that way.
Hopefully there weren't any out-of-place doors around.
Nice knowing ya!
Then you are living a fine life good sir!
I hope further prosperity for you and all of us deeper thinkers. AVE.
Please KEEP WRITING!!!
You give both the horror classics and mythos based stories an honest homage, while combining the two beautifully. This is nothing like the lazy mimicry that has totally overrun the creepypasta genre.
The internet NEEDS you Ian!!
It's now official. I'm addicted to these short stories.
Man!! I feel honored that a character of your story bore my name. That was a really captivating one. Good Job!
Lovecraftian horror Really is a unique gem amongst the horror genre. Thanks for the upload!
There are alot of Lovecraftian & cthulu mythos stories on audible,sadly it costs alot,BUT if u borrow someones credit card you can register and get one free book,then cancel within 30 days(best to do it directly after u bought a book so u dont forget )
Then you do this over and over with all your familys cards and u have a whole bunch off books,some collections are up to 20 hours! Happy listening
Sadly none have the amazing voice as Ian but hey,the man can only read so much :)
My name is Warren -- imagine my surprise to find I was dead! Cheers from the afterlife, wsj
My parents nickname for me is philipe so to some extent we're in this together my friend 😆
@cak01vej -- alas, all I remember is watching re-runs of 'I Love Lucy" -- the horror, the horror...Cheers, wsj
@@PhilieBlunt666 -- you should have insisted they call you H.P. -- although some would think that rather saucy! Cheers, my friend, wsj
@@awarningtothecuriouswerewolves Oh man, if i had any say in it i definitely would... But a family nickname you enjoy? Unheard of! 🤣
@@PhilieBlunt666 -- yeah, when I was a kid, I was called "Pencilhead" -- its a long story. Cheers, wsj
Another excellent story, I really enjoy Van Melsen. Thanks H.B.
I listen to your narration of Jack London's " to build a fire" every morning on my hikes through spotify but there is no place for me to say thank you on that platform. Thank you dearly for a beautiful narration of my all time favorite London short. Thank you.
Listening to these while falling asleep lead to interesting dreams. Did you know, for example, that the local scout group is tasked with going out and scrubbing the doors clean? The ajar one is a very unpopular one to scrub, because you might fall through.
It is interesting how you tied together Lovecraft's Alien Colour with the Hyperborean cycle of CAS. Despite certain similar elements, such as the presence of Old Ones, Lovecraft's and Smith's stories are remarkably different, especially considering how Smith's protagonists may sometimes interact with the Great Old Ones without death or sanity (i.e. Eibon, despite being an all-powerful wizard, can contact Tsathoggua without serious repercussions). That being said, I feel you captured this same sort of 'mechanism', if you will. Rather than having the Colour arrive on a meteor (a la Lovecraft), they enter through stranger doors; we have the same entity, but with a different shade of colour (mind the pun). I digress. Another great original work Ian. Thank you for sharing.
This is so wonderful - the writing, the story and setting, characters, and, of course, narration. Great job! Looking forward to the next Van Melsen adventure 🤠👍
Thank you!
I really love your Vam Melsen stories! So good
I'm very pleased!
Just realized I spelled it wrong 😮😂 Van Melsen. I've listened to them all, most more than once! I really hope that there are more to come!! ❤️
Aaayyyyy, I live near Berchtesgaden and I can see the Untersberg from my house 🤣🤣🤣 So now I know where I WON'T go hiking again.
Awesome work, superb storytelling and killer delivery as always. Thanks mister.
I tried over and over to listen to it, but there would be an interruption. Finally, last night I listened to it. Great story! I like the characters, the plot, style of prose, and that investigative theme. Great job!
First class story and first class storytelling
Totally agree these are great stories to chill out.
Truly fascinating tale of the beauty of colors and the dangers of my curiosity.
Brilliant!
Really looking forward to the next one.
Thank you.
Yeah I'd just realized ol Ian had hooked us up with the writing also. You go boy
You should listen to The Things that came from Winterhill.
Masterfully done! Both in writting and narration. So well done, thank you!
I like the slow pacing - nobody is in any particular hurry to get anywhere and, considering where they are going, why would they be? It's almost like Lovecraft in reverse as the characters shuffle sideways to their fate rather than being impelled by the irresistible lure of forbidden knowledge. It's a comforting and comfortable horror tale and I have no problem with that.
These are wonderful stories! Thank you for writing and performing them!
Just as fantastic as the first! The climactic encounter with the "color" was wonderfully descriptive and full of fantastic imagery. So many unanswered questions, cannot await the next Van Melsen story!
Thank you so much!
You have my infinite attention...again...I just enjoy the pleasure of each story thank you!!
ITS BEEN SO LONG BUT ITS FINALLY HERE,THANK YOU IAN - KEEP EM COMING!
This was an awesome story. I just loved the way it was presented and it had a great plot. I hope there are more stories like this one to come. Thanks. ♡
Love the new intro, I've been so excited for the next installment ever since the soul stealer
"unscheduled collapse"...lol...I nearly fell outta my chair.
Just as always, your tales and readings are magnificient. Nothing beats lying in bed and listening to some cosmic horror before falling asleep.
Thanks again!
So good, this series is the greatest
I just started the Van Melsen series. These are absolutely fantastic! I try to write myself, but it's so hard to find motivation after working all day. Anyway, I am so genuinely glad you're featuring your own work now in addition to that of other--because it's excellent! Well done.
Going back through the Van Melsen stories. What a treat.
Thanks, Marcus!
Gordon Kay's depiction in " The Color of the Forest" is really brilliant. I got a real eyeful of it on my tv.👍🙏
I think you mean 'Duncan Kay'! Thank you, either way!
Renee Artois would no doubt provide an interesting version! 😄
Great stuff Ian! your best so far i believe, very much in the mold of the Mythos and HPL himself, while retaining your voice. sweet!
Thanks, sir!
Well and imaginatively done once again Ian. Thank you!
These stories are awesome! Van Melsen is incredible!
I listened to these out of order, so I listened to the first six in order this week. That took some time! Lol!
These are great stories, and I immensely enjoy them.
I think I would get along quite well with good ole' Van Melsen!
I've always really loved (loathed) talking with someone who says you know after every statement
I really like the new branding! As usual thanks for the great work.
Another wonderful Van Melsen story. Keep up the good work.
Hi, Fantastic story; just like the first one. I am looking forward to the next story featuring Van Melsen.
Ian Gordon, your stories are outstanding!
If these stories have taught me anything oh, it's to leave random parts of structure alone.
Stairs, Doors, Chimneys...
I love this character! More, more, more of him, please!! thank you for the videos. Great writing and story.
More to come!
Great story Ian!! More, please!
As always..wonderful narration
Always expertly done
OMG Ian, that was sooo good! Loved it! When are you going to publish your stories? You are an amazing creative writer. Keep them coming!
I love how this series brings the Cthulhu mythos into the present day!
Loved it! Great work guys.
I didn't realize the narrator is the writer. Discovered these recently and I'm thoroughly addicted!
Thanks for listening!
I really like these stories and that they same to been done in modern style like the old Carnacki stories atleast to myself makes them more memorable than the daily CPs that are churned out daily. Of course your great narration helps a great lot also
i scour through this channel looking for stories i haven’t heard yet and am always pleasantly surprised with what i find. you guys are amazing thank you so much for all the excellent content!!!
Thanks again, Max.
also: thank you mr. gordon for your writing. keeping the classic voice of horror tales alive!
This is an excellent story and a marked improvement over the enjoyable first Peter Van Melsen story.
The switch to first person narration is a smart choice and the central mystery and nature of the entity conjures a compelling comic horror vibe more effectively than in the previous tale.
The melding of affectionate homages to Peter Cushing and Lovecraft's works continues to be effective. However, I would like to see a little more fallibility, flaws and self-doubt in Van Melsen, otherwise the character risks becoming stale.
I love these stories, great work.
Loch Doon! Nice. 👌
Relistening. One of my favourite Melsens.
YES! More original content. *happy dance*
You guys are so awesome with your recordings. Adding life to the characters along with the music and background sound affects to add to the feel us listeners get. The orignal content is so sweet listing to the tales you weave while building new worlds or expanding onto established ones creating new paths for fans to explore.
So many of your recording, The Originals and Lovecraft especially, i keep going back to when i need to relax or to play as background sounds while i draw.
I have to admit that the most unnerving part of this narration was hearing you speak my name (Philippe) [you nailed the pronunciation] , while I thoroughly enjoyed the tale as well
It took me a week to find the time to sit down and listen to your new opus. Now that I finished I am nigh ecstatic!
The story is every bit as captivating as I had hoped it would be, and more! Your choice of words is just perfect, Ian. I'm a professional word-person (commonly known as a philologist), and your prose hits right in my language centre. Atmospheric and captivating, the last time I felt like that was when I discovered Clark Ashton Smith's work. Similarly, the subtle humour shining through had me laugh out loud a few times.
Long story short, I have become an ardent fan and hope that there will be more Van Melsen stories in the future!
____________
Edit: As a former denizen of the lands around the Untersberg, that little detail was highly appreciated.
I didn't know you were published - congrats! great story,. . . :)
I intended to have this on "in the background", but you totally stole my attention. I'm absolutely loving the Van Melsen stories :)
Thanks, Lou! Always appreciated. Ian
He'll yeah!! What a treat, thank you very much!!
Very well done - a great tale which brought two things to my mind - one - the Venus fly trap; and two, a John the Balladeer story by the great Manly Wade Wellman, about the strange things called Gardinels, which were scattered here and there among the most out of the way places in the old rural areas of the Southern mountain country. Not many who entered a Gardinel ever emerged.
That was cool, now about those darn stairs...
Not related to the story but the line "you fool. Warren is dead" gives me nam flashbacks ever since first listening to YOUR reading of that story. The build up almost made me cry before the payoff sent real shivers down my spine!
What story is that line from?
Excellent video dude! Awesome intro from the unnameabel ☺👍
Fantastic work, Ian. Easily as enjoyable as any of the best classics from the genre
Glad you enjoyed it!
I just got a job 4 days ago, and have to walk for an hour to get there. Listening to these on the way to and from work makes the journey infinitely more enjoyable. Thank you Horrorbabble ❤
Ian thinks he’s so big with his fancy, smokey, pillowy accent (that works on me like an Ambien, and I mean that in the best way possible) that he can just slip his own fiction into things and nobody will condemn him for his conflict of interest.
I mean he’s totally right, but....
I enjoyed the way the narration was from Van Melsen's POV via his writings. Very much like the Call of Cthulhu in that regard
Excellent artwork and story, to say the least
I initially found HorrorBabble in a search for Lovecraft stories. From this, I discovered the work of Robert Bloch, who I only knew as the writer of the story which became the Hitchcock film "Psycho". For the last week or so, I've been dipping into other writers' stories to decide which rabbit hole to go down next. The Van Melsen cases are so enjoyable and thrilling that I shall complete the set before moving on.
Fabulous!
Excellent story Ian! 👍
Excellent. Thank you again. You all are quite a good talent.
I think I'd be too afraid to go through a portal even though I really want to know what's on the other side.
A glasgiw chap called phillipe...hmm (just teasing). Good narration (as always). Well done!!
I cant help but feel like this is inspired by that one reddit thread "I'm a park search and rescue ranger, and I have some stories to tell" in which a park search and rescue ranger keeps finding staircases just randomly out in the woods, and his superiors keep telling them not to pay them any mind and do not under any circumstances touch them. The park ranger eventually finds out that if the stairs are touched, really bizarre things happen and people often end up dead.
If it's not inspired by that, then well, It just made me think of it. Fantastic story, I cant get enough of this kind of content!
I'm very familiar with that thread! And yes, it certainly influenced certain elements of this story. Thanks for listening! Ian
excellent story and reading as always.
Thanks! Such a great story
Good one!! Loved it.
Bravo! Great story!
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 Good Story
Total awesomeness.
Time to wind down with the HorrorBabble crew.
Perfect for my sleepless night
AWESOME :-)
I'm imagining a children's series feat. Knick Knack the Pug: Paranormal Dog Investigator.
Love it!
So I take it you have read the "I am a US park ranger"/"Stairs in the woods" story?
Absolutely! Those accounts inspired the basic premise.
Ah, so this was written recently. I'd assumed it was a massive coincidence and I was actually here in the comments to make a joke about the similarity of concept.
Ian, I have to ask...
Is this a possible explanation for the "birth" ov the Color out ov Space?!
Either way it was wonderful.
I spend a lot ov time in the forests ov the Pacific Northwest in the US.
I adore tales like this.
Hi Jayme! Though it's inspired in part by Lovecraft's "Colour", it isn't intended to be directly related to it. The Pacific Northwest is a wonderful place. Thanks for listening!
I love some of your word choices in this series it's rare to hear the words petrichor, ubiquitous, and phantasmagoria which I think is a shame as there some of my favourites along with mellifluous (which your work is), susurrus and fricative . ❤
DUDE! New intro. Nice.
Dig the synth pad intro 👏 Really enjoying these Van Melsen stories. Have you talked to Arkham House?
They're a difficult bunch to contact!
In some other dimension they have a story called "the smell of the city" about us.
great story, Isn. you’re just getting better and better at writing. let’s see: - reader and actor, cultivated voice and accent, composer, and god knows what else. you probably play the piano, too. (such an incredible and versatile instrument :). does Jennifer do the taping and noises off? really well done, too. :} 😺🙀
I reckon you're too generous, Alexa. We'll probably throw another behind the scenes video together at some point in order to better answer questions like that... :) Ian
HorrorBabble ok i’ll take half off the list. LOL great you’re doing another background story - i look forward to all your new stuff. some people are watching Netflix during the lockdown. i listen to stuff on UTube. i’ve listened to yours - some of them twice over :).
do you think 1984 is scary enough to read? - considering what’s going on here in amurica? there is that one bit where they put rats after him and he’s terrified of them. take care, sweetie. alexa 🌷✨👻👀 :)
It would’ve been nice if the writer had taken the time to compose the actual banishment spell. Other than that, the story was very well written, and homage to Lovecraft, with its own personal flavor. The narrator, as always, is exceptional.
Masterful
I have been attempting to learn from Ian's storytelling on this. Mechanically, I think he has used secondary characters to convey a broader range of emotions than might suit our hero alone. The Colours of Kahlo being so beautiful is a great contrast to Lovecraftian horror. And why not? Is a storm ugly just because it sinks a trawler? Is a lion leaping towards a gazelle any less majestic?
"Drinking Tea and Talking Death" post-mortem:
Tea? 0. Could have given him a thermos?
Or is that and eldritch anomaly to a True Englishman?
Death? 4. Good numbers.
Bonus points for the puppy surviving.
3/5 Melsens I'm taking a point off for him smoking he needs to live long and give us lots of stories.