My only other thing i would change would be making the hand bigger. Irl your hand (when fully outstretched) should be able to cover your face. The example shown might have been a stylistic choice though since anime characters typically have big heads compared to the rest of their bodies
@@raline46 Not necessarily alot of anime characters are drawn with unrealistic sized feet and hands. Best example I think is sailor moon. Alot of scenes the hands are super tiny vs the face, and that's just because smaller =cuter. I think anime has gotten alot better with proportions but they still slip up alot.
not saying this to sound contrarian, but my hand irl definitely doesnt cover my face, no matter how much i stretch it 😭 obviously im not the standard, and obviously you know that bodies are different and vary greatly etcetc, but yeah ig i just wanted to say that in case any baby artists read your comment and take it in a v b/w way (i know i wouldve as a baby artist hehe) ! 💜
@@Sleeplittlesheeps22 that's true and untrue some people have small hands and it won't fix with a realistic style but better shading and realistic anatomy helps so the bone structure works
@@moonsigil my guy, kooleen didn't invent this type of art style. just because she's popular doesn't mean everyone with a similar style is purposefully imitating her, that's plain bias. whenever you look at someone's art and think "wow, that's such a unique style", i can guarantee you that at least one other person on the planet has a similar one, intentional or not, and that's NORMAL. as diverse as art can be, the possibilities aren't literally endless, and there's bound to be overlap, especially with more "grounded" art styles like this. yes, there are people who try to imitate what they've seen others do on purpose, some with malicious intent. does that make mindlessly accusing someone of being a "clone" okay? no, that just makes you sound like a jerk.
I think in addition to your fixes I would pay closer attention to the way the hand kinda bends strangely below the wrist, making it look a little broken and like it doesn't being to the character
@@mittskks the wrist is EXTREMELY small, generally your wrist is half of how wide your neck is, plus nobody would be able to hold their arm like that without pain, also the problem with the hand is that it's super thin, a hand is supposed to be as wide as half your face (exactly why you're able to cover your face completely with two palms)
The only thing I noticed is the blue lighting on the iris. The iris would've caught on the other side because, correct me if I'm wrong, it has an inward cone-like shape so it would've been obstructed by the eye whites. :D
It's true but it seems that the artist just couldn't draw hands well. Angel still gave a good advice so the original artist would be mor aware of this moving forward
For me, one more thing to fix would be to make the shoulders a tiny bit wider. To me, it looks slightly out of proportion. But that could be a style choice since anime isn’t always in proportion
It's definitely looking better, but the forearm isn't looking like it's going towards the elbow, it just looks like a separate limb. So maybe flip it a little to the left. But overall awesome
i like how you try to work with the art style. some people just will try and make proportions closer to realism when the person is using a more cartoony or anime art style. I like that you work with the style and comment on its strengths while critiquing it.
I started sweing your shorts in my feed a few days ago and they're actually really entertaining while being prettt informative! You don't go and redraw the entire thing, but you give simple yet effective advice. I noticed that some of the tips you give stick in my head way better than if I were looking for more detailed and elaborate tips online 😅 Keep up the good work!
Definitely looks more realistic, and the lighting was an amazing touch, just one tiny detail, i liked the inaccurate palm more, i dont know why, it was just more pleasing for some reason
Even when changing the propotions of the hand it still looks out of place, the reasone is its rotation is wrong your hand cant fully rotate forward when placing it close to your face like this while keeping the arm straight try it for yourself itll hurt, the solution is to move the arm more to the right side or slightly rotate the hand to the left or making the the arm stick out from the side
Love how you improved the picture without changing the main elements, minor improvements make such a huge difference 😍
Bro thousands of likes but no replies?
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Fr lol
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you made it perfect omgg!
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@@gaminghour4392Discord I'm pretty sure
@@gaminghour4392 he has a discord channel where you can send artwork
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@@gaminghour4392thru his discord server most likely
bro can fix my life (ur so good)
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Lmao😭😭
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I just send a commission of my whole life story and be like, "heyy can you do smth about this?"
The shadow under the neck had a huge difference! There’s more depth to it in the after
My only other thing i would change would be making the hand bigger. Irl your hand (when fully outstretched) should be able to cover your face.
The example shown might have been a stylistic choice though since anime characters typically have big heads compared to the rest of their bodies
Yeah
Yeah I noticed that also
@@raline46 Not necessarily alot of anime characters are drawn with unrealistic sized feet and hands. Best example I think is sailor moon. Alot of scenes the hands are super tiny vs the face, and that's just because smaller =cuter. I think anime has gotten alot better with proportions but they still slip up alot.
not saying this to sound contrarian, but my hand irl definitely doesnt cover my face, no matter how much i stretch it 😭 obviously im not the standard, and obviously you know that bodies are different and vary greatly etcetc, but yeah ig i just wanted to say that in case any baby artists read your comment and take it in a v b/w way (i know i wouldve as a baby artist hehe) ! 💜
@@Sleeplittlesheeps22 that's true and untrue some people have small hands and it won't fix with a realistic style but better shading and realistic anatomy helps so the bone structure works
I love how her skin looks much more livelier just from a simple change
That face is absolutely beautiful, they have a beautiful art style
it's a kooleen clone. very common
Tf do you mean a kooleen clone? Thats their own style. Kooleen isn’t that special my guy, your just a simp
@@moonsigilok? it's still a beautiful art style. and similar art styles aren't "clones". that's straight up rude.
@@shinisnotonfire well it's the truth. Kooleen has a ton of imitators and it's very easy to identify them 🤷🏻♀️
@@moonsigil my guy, kooleen didn't invent this type of art style. just because she's popular doesn't mean everyone with a similar style is purposefully imitating her, that's plain bias. whenever you look at someone's art and think "wow, that's such a unique style", i can guarantee you that at least one other person on the planet has a similar one, intentional or not, and that's NORMAL. as diverse as art can be, the possibilities aren't literally endless, and there's bound to be overlap, especially with more "grounded" art styles like this. yes, there are people who try to imitate what they've seen others do on purpose, some with malicious intent. does that make mindlessly accusing someone of being a "clone" okay? no, that just makes you sound like a jerk.
I think in addition to your fixes I would pay closer attention to the way the hand kinda bends strangely below the wrist, making it look a little broken and like it doesn't being to the character
Yes!
Yea I was going to say the arm also needs to be more rounded out at the bottom cause it kinda looks like a stick. Otherwise it's really good!
PLEASE I WAS WAITING TO FIND THIS COMMENT
@@Tomioka_Giyuu_ fr, there's no way to get that pose with a straight wrist
Now this made me smile. Keeping the idea that art style still needs proper anatomy while not changing the art style at all.
such a big improvement!! you made it look so much more dreamy!!
wow the i mage is really POPPING. But it's weird you didn't see her draw a toddler sized hand. Should have made the whole hand / forearm bigger
Maybe it isn't her hand...there might be some other kid who just put up his hand in front of her face and it got captured...
Considering the entire hand size is generally the same size of the face, it isnt really a mistake.
Yes I thought of that too but perhaps it’s style preferences
@@mittskks the wrist is EXTREMELY small, generally your wrist is half of how wide your neck is, plus nobody would be able to hold their arm like that without pain, also the problem with the hand is that it's super thin, a hand is supposed to be as wide as half your face (exactly why you're able to cover your face completely with two palms)
@@xylophone_8888 unrelated to most of that, but the pose is pretty easy, it's the fact it probably looks stupid if you scrolled down that's the prob
Bro just made fun of my hands in three different ways😭
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U drew it??
The only thing I noticed is the blue lighting on the iris. The iris would've caught on the other side because, correct me if I'm wrong, it has an inward cone-like shape so it would've been obstructed by the eye whites. :D
I thought about it too! The blue light should be on the side of iris where the light is coming from.
Wow... breathtaking.
You made it even better than it is 🤯
I love how he didn't like criticize and insult the art, because a lot of artists to that when 'fixing art'
Finally a person who explained how to draw hands thank you 🙏
The fact that you accepted the face looks really good and actually worked on what needed help is amazing ❤️❤️❤️
Some people's fingers are thicker/wider on top than bottom. Usually associated with club fingers.
It's true but it seems that the artist just couldn't draw hands well. Angel still gave a good advice so the original artist would be mor aware of this moving forward
For me, one more thing to fix would be to make the shoulders a tiny bit wider. To me, it looks slightly out of proportion. But that could be a style choice since anime isn’t always in proportion
I think it's the hand. It's making the shoulders look weird.
I like how he didn’t fully change the drawing like most people do
I've seen shorts with the same content/concept but I can say that yours is the best for me. You improved the drawing a lot.
that was already a good pic to start with, my mouth dropped at the end result
enhanced it very well
You also fixed the face's shadows, it looks better
I love it how you just fixed their mistake and didn’t just made fun of it.
So cool i love your videos❤
NOOOOOOO. AFTER YOU ADDED THE BLUE SHADOWS, THE GIRL STOP LOOKING LIKE AN IDOL
WOW!! It was amazing to begin with, but you brought it to life! I learn so much from your videos, you’re a great one!
i’m not even gonna lie that opposite color lighting thing made it so perfect
the belly fat joke shouldn’t have made me wheeze that hard
My finger has belly fat there 😂
Bro NEEDS to be my art teacher.
You improved it brilliantly but the original artist still did an amazing job!
It's definitely looking better, but the forearm isn't looking like it's going towards the elbow, it just looks like a separate limb. So maybe flip it a little to the left. But overall awesome
The thumb having belly fat had me rolling on the ground 😂😂
This is the only guy that can fix me fr
The opposite color light source is such a good trick!
I love the fact that you always stick with the original lighting in the drawings.
The way he said " you made the tumb look like it has belly fat" got me dying
Wait no because this taught me so much I have been struggling with drawing hands but this helps a lot
"Drauing?:D" THE WAY HE SAID DRAWING AT THE END😂
watching these makes me realize just how important lighting is
I love your art
I bet bro can fix my depression
It looks Good!!
You perfect it.
I love it when artists do this without changing the character or the art style 🙏❤️
Took what was already there and just brought it to life
I just love how I learn about anatomy in here than in class for no reason
That was such a good tip about the hand! Thank you :)
I love how you dont change the art style while improving it
HOW. how do you make something that already looks good look EVEN BETTER
Me sorprende demasiado, porque aunque sean detalles mínimos, afectan demasiado al dibujo :0.
Muy buen dibujo y corrección 💗.
i like how you try to work with the art style. some people just will try and make proportions closer to realism when the person is using a more cartoony or anime art style. I like that you work with the style and comment on its strengths while critiquing it.
Dang the lighting and the shadow is so good
that complimentary color for a light source was soo brilliant!! I'm definitely gonna use it for my drawings now, thank youuu
U just yassified an already gud work of art 😮😮😮
This is why digital art is so difficult. Its 10% drawing 90% rendering, and you make it look so effortless
Pretty
Omg wow, you really improved it
Wow! I'mma use that opposite color part for the light source too.
He needs to be an art teacher! I’d sign up so fast!!
IT TURNED SO GORGEOUS ISTG
That's actually pretty cool!!!🎀
He brought ✨life✨ into this drawing 😇👌
This channel is so helpfull. Thank you so much
that hand looks so good omg
Always learn a lot of concepts in his single video and He fixes art not in his own artstyle but maintaining the stule of the original artist. SUBBED!!
I started sweing your shorts in my feed a few days ago and they're actually really entertaining while being prettt informative! You don't go and redraw the entire thing, but you give simple yet effective advice. I noticed that some of the tips you give stick in my head way better than if I were looking for more detailed and elaborate tips online 😅 Keep up the good work!
Its amazing how big of a difference that is. I suck at color theory and all that hard to understand stuff, so your channel is a big help.
That drawing is amazing even before th improvements
You made it so good omgggggg❤❤❤
WTH THIS IS SO GOOD
Damn it's good
i like the edits, aside from changing the eye color
I feel my art improving just by watching these videos
You always do so good with helping with peoples art
I adore that he doesn’t change the style
Incredible edit 😮✨💯
I learn new lesson about hand today, thanks
I subscribed because you’ve helped me understand the concept of shading and lighting and also body anatomy so thank you 😊
man you make it looks so easy
Its so good
The people must be happy he is helping people with learning about art and trying to tell them to keep on trying
Thank a lot I learnt so much🙏
Amazing 😍
Omg thank you man, I always I have trouble drawing hands and feet ❤❤
This man works black magic
It looks amazing but one other thing id recommend is tilting the hand a little to the right, otherwise the pose looks still and unnatural.
Wow it looks so much better! It’s not as flat too
bro the hand is perfect
HOLY SH**!!!!! Biggest before and after ive ever seen!!
that's... amazing
this is just crazy how you see all the stuff
You just earned yourself a new subscriber
Definitely looks more realistic, and the lighting was an amazing touch, just one tiny detail, i liked the inaccurate palm more, i dont know why, it was just more pleasing for some reason
Much better. Looks almost AI, but in a good way. 💀
Even when changing the propotions of the hand it still looks out of place, the reasone is its rotation is wrong your hand cant fully rotate forward when placing it close to your face like this while keeping the arm straight try it for yourself itll hurt, the solution is to move the arm more to the right side or slightly rotate the hand to the left or making the the arm stick out from the side
making the hands bigger also would've helped with proportions!
I was bout to throw a FIT if he said anything about that face cause it was so good already!