ROBLOX STORY! You get an amount of time to live! ALL parts!

[@Jevorni]

I like this video not gonna lie you should make more

[@fahimakhani7027]

I like ur videoss

[@donjuanchotv7449]

Layla is cute😊

[@Secretstaycation_rulez-s1r]

True

[@srisoesilowatiharyanti5934]

Yeah

[@poppytag293]

But Layla is mean

[@Blissful_StrawberryYT]

@@poppytag293ikr

[@samd.3201]

Layla it’s not cute at all. I don’t know what you mean.

[@shethahomsombat2095]

Hi I am a big fan

[@MidDreamsStudios]

@@shethahomsombat2095 thank u for watching my videos!

[@TheHolyFroggers]

This is nicee

[@MadisonBuffett]

English or Spanish

[@Melody4u_109]

No

[@samswimming]

English

[@unknown-ip9iv]

For those who said spanish si mueves tu gay

[@richardcaycedo9140]

Espanyol

[@kevinseigneurie9718]

Omg my names layla

[@Gacha8298]

Fr

[@CUTESYGIRLfy4oy]

Can i be in a roblox story ive never been included in a roblox story

[@eileenaskin2019]

KEEP UP

[@Eniandmusashibff]

Idc if I lie

[@St4rberryxX]

Hi❤

[@isabelcourtenay2128]

Dora!

[@krystalstone6184]

MY SISTERS NAME IS LAYLA😭😭💀💀💀💀

[@fahimakhani7027]

Hi

[@oscieabee2674]

It’s always da GC

[@ShaniyahLambert]

😴in sleeping

[@chrisblizzard8116]

Poooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅so hard to type

[@ShaniyahLambert]

Layla 😬😬😬😑

[@MidDreamsStudios]

Guys do you have any feedback?

[@not_m4rsh]

I have some feed back, but i dont mean to be rude. This story is quite basic and honestly i didnt enjoy the video. It can be improved by making it more realistic. For example in this video, why would Layla give all her years away just to get attention and die afterwards? It doesnt make sense. And instead of the group babying Layla, why cant they just give her years? It just doesnt make sense, same with the little girl just appearing out of no where, its so random and stupid. More about the video, i dont know how to say this nicely but this video is just overall crappy. The video in the background is overused, the story idea is also overused and im sorry to say this but its just not good and very crappy. I'm not saying it has to be perfect, but im just trying to give you pointers on where you need to improve. Thank you.

[@kevinseigneurie9718]

This is a really good story it’s a pretty good story

[@carmenerasmus7764]

No.😊

[@masudtaj8573]

wdym no

[@sonne-serreperch5468]

@@not_m4rshbro wdym by h don’t mean to be rude.

[@audreeRiter]

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