My CSS 2023 Essay outline that made me pass the exam.

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  • Опубликовано: 15 окт 2024
  • When I was preparing for CSS, I always wanted to see a passed Essay outline in its exact wording and original formating. I did not get to see any but luckily I had preserved mine, so sharing it here with in-depth discussion on its various parts.
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  • @CSSwithDrHajra
    @CSSwithDrHajra  8 месяцев назад +16

    Hello everyone,
    I'm trying my best to answer all your queries in my comments, for any further queries, you may reach out through my social media handles :
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    Or
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    Good luck ❤

    • @successinevitable9630
      @successinevitable9630 8 месяцев назад

      Which topics or themes should we cover for CSS 2024 essay's paper??

    • @annieawan8272
      @annieawan8272 7 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you very much... Mera 1 question hai k aap ny sirf over view dia hai introduction ki heading k baad or udr thesis statement ki heading nai de bss waisy he likh dia hai tou thesis statement ki heading dena zarori hai ya miss kr dyn or wo kia aapki thesis statement hai

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  7 месяцев назад +3

      @@annieawan8272 not needed. Only write thesis statement at the end of your introduction

    • @PeshawarPathan-z9n
      @PeshawarPathan-z9n 5 месяцев назад +2

      If u don't mind it ,ma'am I m ur big fan from Peshawar how to collect data for essay and from which websites ,books etc and how to link angles with others plz help and make a video on linking with different themes ,

    • @abroozainab8448
      @abroozainab8448 5 месяцев назад

      @CSSwithDrHajra please share a video on body paragraph structuring thanks in advance

  • @darkpearl348
    @darkpearl348 6 месяцев назад +1

    I highly appreciate, thank you so much for your tip and tricks,

  • @usmanhaider1774
    @usmanhaider1774 3 месяца назад +2

    The only youtube channel where the teacher comes down to the student's level to make them understand, so her efforts are highly appreciable.

  • @fightwithmyself78
    @fightwithmyself78 6 месяцев назад

    Yes mam this is very helpful and informative video about the essay.

  • @KahaniSonu
    @KahaniSonu 2 месяца назад +1

    Thank you so much. That's one of the best videos I have ever watched on essay preparation and attempt.

  • @SamiMalik-m4v
    @SamiMalik-m4v 6 месяцев назад

    Great mam for explaining outline

  • @zaraihsan4695
    @zaraihsan4695 7 месяцев назад +3

    I ve attempted my essay today on this format. Alhamdulillah i am satisfied with it. JazakAllah Khair❤

    • @Css_journey
      @Css_journey 5 месяцев назад

      Can uh tell me.where is the slybus of English essay

    • @sheikhokasiyaapa2752
      @sheikhokasiyaapa2752 Месяц назад

      bro i don't understand if you may clarify it would help these are almost three hundred words and fpsc is asking about 2500 to 3000 where are those paragraphs i can't see how it can fulfill the fpsc criteria

    • @HopefulforJannah
      @HopefulforJannah Месяц назад

      ​@@sheikhokasiyaapa2752 It is only an outline not a full fledged essay.

  • @A.Mujeeb23
    @A.Mujeeb23 7 месяцев назад

    Thank you for disseminating such highly useful knowledge ❤🎉

  • @SureshKumar-hf9gv
    @SureshKumar-hf9gv 7 месяцев назад

    MashaAllah Worthful lecture

  • @alianwar6328
    @alianwar6328 Месяц назад

    Dr sahiba, it's helped alot thank so much.

  • @g.qadirbadini5345
    @g.qadirbadini5345 3 месяца назад

    well explained maam and i personally noted my mistakes which I had done in special CSS ..make more informative videos like this

  • @NajamSherazi-ly1yb
    @NajamSherazi-ly1yb 7 месяцев назад

    Excellent

  • @haseebrehmanjokhio3898
    @haseebrehmanjokhio3898 7 месяцев назад +1

    Great ma'am!!!
    Ma'am how to build up own thoughts, and arguments?

  • @RamshaTanveerAhmed-vb5se
    @RamshaTanveerAhmed-vb5se 7 месяцев назад

    Just one word Ma'am ,JAZAK ALLAH❤❤❤

  • @hajrasarwar7213
    @hajrasarwar7213 8 месяцев назад

    Thank you so much sister🎉

  • @KhushMah891
    @KhushMah891 8 месяцев назад

    M so glad that I found u❤

  • @WaqaraliJamali-mr3kz
    @WaqaraliJamali-mr3kz 7 месяцев назад

    Mashallah, it was great

  • @mary3896
    @mary3896 28 дней назад +1

    Aoa mam ,mam conclusion k neechy page sy hi essay start krty ya next page py plz tell us❤

  • @ibnenawaz805
    @ibnenawaz805 8 месяцев назад +1

    zabardast mam i had listened a long ago that b.a english is a beginner's level of css essay
    it resembles with b.a english
    thank you so much

  • @amirrahim7580
    @amirrahim7580 8 месяцев назад

    Thank you very much. Very helpful video

    • @AbdulGhani-rg5ht
      @AbdulGhani-rg5ht 3 месяца назад

      Which documents are required for css admission..
      Please guide sir

  • @farooq2.0609
    @farooq2.0609 8 месяцев назад

    Wonderful explained

  • @ridafatima0405
    @ridafatima0405 5 месяцев назад +2

    Assalamualaikum
    My only concern is how to get the data for essays?
    Like which is the resources, how diverse has to study?

  • @muhammadhasnain9894
    @muhammadhasnain9894 7 месяцев назад

    Soo much helpful mashallah! Allah bless you

  • @shsm2611
    @shsm2611 7 месяцев назад

    thank you Mam!!

  • @Muhammadokasha-tz7sj
    @Muhammadokasha-tz7sj 7 месяцев назад +1

    Kindly mam shre this outline in documented form with us plz.

  • @AliRAZA-qo8ej
    @AliRAZA-qo8ej 8 месяцев назад

    Great and thank you

  • @AminahRizwan-x3h
    @AminahRizwan-x3h 8 дней назад

    You've given counter argument but no refutation. How did you pass this?

  • @amberliaqat6451
    @amberliaqat6451 2 месяца назад

    Thanks ...Ma'am kindly made a video on introduction writing with your sample example before 2025...please

  • @husnainplayz1614
    @husnainplayz1614 4 месяца назад

    great mam .....You split you essay in very effective and easy way

  • @sajidabatool341
    @sajidabatool341 8 месяцев назад

    Super informative and worth- watching beloved! ❤

  • @SweraFarooq
    @SweraFarooq 5 месяцев назад +2

    A.O.A MAM...examiner ny pakistan k perspective main essay ni pucha to kya hum itny case in point just pakistan k perspective main dy skty hain?

  • @Csspms2024
    @Csspms2024 6 месяцев назад

    I also watched videos of topper in essay but yours video is more effective & informative ✅🙏🏻

  • @afrasiyabkhan8681
    @afrasiyabkhan8681 7 месяцев назад

    Great sis❤

  • @m.aniquemani6574
    @m.aniquemani6574 8 месяцев назад

    Well done mam..... First time all things in one vedio

  • @advocate_asad
    @advocate_asad 4 месяца назад

    Good suggestions mam

  • @beastforcrick2642
    @beastforcrick2642 8 месяцев назад

    Very informative ma'am

  • @usamaabdulrauf2470
    @usamaabdulrauf2470 8 месяцев назад

    Keep up the good work.

  • @ghazalashaheen8541
    @ghazalashaheen8541 4 месяца назад

    JazakAllah Mam ❤

  • @AllGovernmentjobspreparation
    @AllGovernmentjobspreparation 5 месяцев назад

    Thank you so much Madam your way of teaching is very nice.

  • @muqaddasshakeel779
    @muqaddasshakeel779 4 месяца назад +1

    Maam jo headings k neechy likha hua hai blue se wo main material hai . Shuru se parhty aye hain k essays mai lengthy lengthy paragraphs hon . Kia esa nhi krna css mai?

  • @SamShaikhEP
    @SamShaikhEP 7 месяцев назад +1

    I did it the same essay but secured 18marks.....it was my second attempt

  • @tayyabfarooqi345
    @tayyabfarooqi345 2 месяца назад

    Once in a classroom, Dr. Arif Javed sb. said that you need to make outline into phrasal format. The one you mentioned is paragraph-styled. Does it make the difference??

  • @afrasiyabkhan1893
    @afrasiyabkhan1893 8 месяцев назад +1

    Did remember references and case studies during exam?

  • @arsalemursaleen1478
    @arsalemursaleen1478 8 месяцев назад

    very informative

  • @alyakbarbalti
    @alyakbarbalti 8 месяцев назад +1

    Appreciated 👍 Please may I have your outline in PDF?

  • @sairafatima9221
    @sairafatima9221 5 месяцев назад

    Thnku madam this will help alot

  • @SleepyAtom-kk1nl
    @SleepyAtom-kk1nl 15 дней назад

    Ma'am I want to know that how much you scored in css specially in Essay .

  • @ahujamuskaan7549
    @ahujamuskaan7549 20 дней назад

    Mam humein toh pata nhi hota ki css main konsa essay aaye ga toh hum statistics wali data kaise den apne kaise di itne kam time main kuch iss par suggestions den mam? Please

  • @EhsanullahKhan-o9p
    @EhsanullahKhan-o9p Месяц назад

    Please make a video on introductory paragraph

  • @mehakbatool6286
    @mehakbatool6286 Месяц назад

    Ma'am hamen sikhaya gaya hai k argumentative essay mein wayforwards nahi dety. 😢 please clear kr den

  • @fazilatmarjan9608
    @fazilatmarjan9608 5 месяцев назад

    Thank you for sharing
    Ma'am, how to write so many paragraphs within stipulated time ?
    Because i cannot write more than 12 paragraphs within in 3 hours.
    Please make a video on this or reply me here

  • @fatimasgallery
    @fatimasgallery 7 месяцев назад +1

    Maam, kindly clear this thing that are you talking about making all the arguments of the forward in a single paragraphs?our teachers told us that when you are making subpoint write a complete para on the sub heading of the main heading.

  • @Anab_Khan
    @Anab_Khan 5 месяцев назад +8

    I kindly disagree with you. The examniers of essay paper are not some stubborn ordinary people, but they have their education and career in literature. And, people from literature are more open to ideas irrespective of the ideas being conflicting to theirs.
    BTW, your work is really appreciating one, as running a channel is a headache.

    • @zaynmangrio
      @zaynmangrio 4 месяца назад

      Absolutely agree with you

    • @AbdulGhani-rg5ht
      @AbdulGhani-rg5ht 3 месяца назад

      Salam sir...
      Please tell me which documents are required for css admission..

  • @shahzaibparveez1187
    @shahzaibparveez1187 5 месяцев назад

    Thank you! Found it very informative.Ma'am, is it necessary for a thesis statement to be written in an outline ?

  • @JeromeWilliam777
    @JeromeWilliam777 4 месяца назад

    Madam please tell us if we don't know critical and convincing English can we write in simple way? You wrote in very tough way but our base is not strong enough

  • @nisargujjar7555
    @nisargujjar7555 8 месяцев назад

    Million dollar lecture ❤

  • @Sawera-b6o
    @Sawera-b6o 7 месяцев назад +1

    please start proper lectures for 2025 attempt (ESSAY )

  • @csshelpinghand4763
    @csshelpinghand4763 7 месяцев назад

    mam kindly provide an any full length written essay as i want to learn a number of things to learn please

  • @MsLance22
    @MsLance22 5 месяцев назад +15

    I wrote exactly the same outline but could score 32. You never know the true criteria of passing the essay. Practice could be the key.

    • @AbdulRehman-kb2yr
      @AbdulRehman-kb2yr 5 месяцев назад +5

      Its not just outline, maybe you lacked or failed to justify your points effectivity in your essay. Or, you did some structure & language related mistakes.

    • @Css_journey
      @Css_journey 5 месяцев назад

      Dear.essay ka slybus nhi hota kia

    • @Css_journey
      @Css_journey 5 месяцев назад

      Jesy baqi subjects ka hota h?

    • @HinaHinaawise
      @HinaHinaawise 4 месяца назад

      Hay sis me b bahoot confused hu😢

    • @MsLance22
      @MsLance22 4 месяца назад +3

      @@AbdulRehman-kb2yr Perhaps, but the fact that I scored 32 alone shows that language must have been sound. The problem could’ve been in argumentation.

  • @asadraza132
    @asadraza132 6 месяцев назад +1

    Mam ,can you please tell us where you get statistics for reference?

  • @hafizhasnainashraf3565
    @hafizhasnainashraf3565 4 месяца назад

    I am also doing Mbbs from Punjab .I want to ask u why u prefer css over Usmle ?

  • @01__Mirage
    @01__Mirage 5 месяцев назад +1

    We cannot compare it with Indian civil services examination UPSC ..no comparison...upsc is one of the toughest exams in world.

  • @zahidhussain-hh6dr
    @zahidhussain-hh6dr 4 месяца назад

    Ma,am please introduction and thesis statement bhe show karen like outlines.

  • @noorrana-s1v
    @noorrana-s1v Месяц назад

    Mam what was your word count for essay in paper?? Please reply

  • @MuhammadJan-m8t
    @MuhammadJan-m8t 8 месяцев назад

    Very helpful!

  • @ayeshasadiqa9319
    @ayeshasadiqa9319 Месяц назад

    please share another outline rather than the essay ( please share other than argumentative)

  • @HafizaRuqiaBakshPS
    @HafizaRuqiaBakshPS 2 месяца назад

    Assalamualaikim
    Mam gi apky GSA k notes agr kar ly tou wo cover ho jaye gii plzz mam gi guide kar dy

  • @M.yousafM.yousaf-jv1qd
    @M.yousafM.yousaf-jv1qd 5 месяцев назад +1

    Social media pe btaya ja raha hai CSS wohi pass krta hai jinki safarish hu
    Kiya ye Sach hai

  • @pakistan8736
    @pakistan8736 6 месяцев назад

    You are methodology is most best

  • @LearningTogether07
    @LearningTogether07 3 месяца назад +1

    Mam we were learned that the topics and sub topics of the outline should be in phrases not in sentences, but you maked the headings too long.

  • @muhammadishfaqmustafa
    @muhammadishfaqmustafa 8 месяцев назад

    Amazing mam bohat hi mext level ka ap na essay attempt karwaya h Jaza Ka Allah Mam

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  8 месяцев назад

      Thank you. Keep watching

    • @muhammadishfaqmustafa
      @muhammadishfaqmustafa 8 месяцев назад +1

      @@CSSwithDrHajra Mam ma css 2025 KY liay preparation kr raha ho tw mam AP koi English essay or English Precis ka session conduct kr rehien h online ya physical

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  8 месяцев назад

      @@muhammadishfaqmustafa yes

    • @muhammadishfaqmustafa
      @muhammadishfaqmustafa 8 месяцев назад

      @@CSSwithDrHajra Mam How can I contact you?

  • @hunain4769
    @hunain4769 8 месяцев назад

    Mam also please eassy ke bare me deatil videos bane kse , or kis trah different eassy ki prepration krni chye .

  • @NASAclips-gov
    @NASAclips-gov 8 месяцев назад

    Outstanding maam❤

  • @sherazali1086
    @sherazali1086 5 месяцев назад

    How did you prepare for the essay?I mean from where have you collected the data

  • @EshaturRazia-u3c
    @EshaturRazia-u3c 5 месяцев назад

    Outline ma examples or facts ni dane chahye. Kch teachers yh kehty hm..corredt me if I'm wrong?

  • @nayapakistanbywaqas2994
    @nayapakistanbywaqas2994 4 месяца назад

    Excellent ❤... you talked in detail and very realistic approach...seems like you are a student of Doctor arif javed .thanks

  • @m.aniquemani6574
    @m.aniquemani6574 8 месяцев назад +1

    Assalamualaikum mam.... Mam can u share complete essay please

  • @huraimkhan6822
    @huraimkhan6822 6 месяцев назад

    Thank you mam for such informative video. Mam which mentor or academy did u join for essay preparation?

  • @emafairy3228
    @emafairy3228 8 месяцев назад

    Thanks a lot

  • @IshaGull-vy3rh
    @IshaGull-vy3rh 5 месяцев назад

    Asslam o alikum mam... Can we make haddenings in essay?or we just write on 1st page to make it clear to reader on which topic I would discuss in my whole essay

  • @amsalakmal
    @amsalakmal 4 месяца назад

    mam aik or bat ke ap css me kaha tak position lo to ap ki allocation ho jati hay or assistant commissioner bannay kay liay konsi position laini parti hay .

  • @AyeshaSiddique-j1v
    @AyeshaSiddique-j1v 2 месяца назад

    Hi mam ....I need notes of eng precise and composition....will u share it PlZ

  • @zkariakhan8630
    @zkariakhan8630 7 месяцев назад

    mam, ap ne is outline mai empty line choray hain, kya hum paper mai is tarah ker saktay hai?

  • @alyakbarbalti
    @alyakbarbalti 6 месяцев назад

    Ma'am would you please share this outline in pdf? it will be a great favor.

  • @jabbarlashari9640
    @jabbarlashari9640 7 месяцев назад

    Please share any of your complete written essay.

  • @Noone-nt7lr
    @Noone-nt7lr Месяц назад

    Kindly koi ye bta dey ke full stop use karna hai outline ke end me?

  • @aleesandilo6015
    @aleesandilo6015 5 месяцев назад

    Thank you mam❤

  • @abeehaamjad5231
    @abeehaamjad5231 8 месяцев назад

    Pls share how and from which sources you collected these facts,case studies etc

  • @Belle...06
    @Belle...06 5 месяцев назад

    Respected! I joined you just now. Wanna ask would you like to conduct essys class????

  • @BOOKSHELF007
    @BOOKSHELF007 2 месяца назад

    as we know that we can only discuss one idea in a paragraph so how can one talk about cyber bullying and training programs for teacher in single paragraph, these are different ideas...?

  • @Kitchenwithmamaofficial
    @Kitchenwithmamaofficial 4 месяца назад

    I want to learn English essay from you. How could I do that?

  • @JattSahibKiMemes
    @JattSahibKiMemes 7 месяцев назад

    Had you written thesis statement? If yes, then where? In the start or end of the introduction.

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  7 месяцев назад

      Always write it at the end of your Essay's introduction and nowhere else.

    • @JattSahibKiMemes
      @JattSahibKiMemes 7 месяцев назад

      @@CSSwithDrHajra thanks mam. Should it be stood out on separate lines or be written in continuity. And should I use specific words i.e. hence, to make it prominent.

    • @JattSahibKiMemes
      @JattSahibKiMemes 7 месяцев назад

      @@CSSwithDrHajra still waiting for your kind response

  • @KashifKhan-lf2uc
    @KashifKhan-lf2uc 4 месяца назад

    How many pages was you used
    for English essay?

  • @asadraza132
    @asadraza132 6 месяцев назад

    Great mam❤

  • @Shahidtanoli0055
    @Shahidtanoli0055 8 месяцев назад

    Ma'am, jo last ma outline likhi hain.. Us pa agr separate paragraph likhyn gy examiner penalize to ni kryga

  • @abidalilashri4426
    @abidalilashri4426 2 месяца назад

    this essay structure reminds me Sir Akhtar Nazir sb...

  • @bismillahbaloch2965
    @bismillahbaloch2965 7 месяцев назад

    Wonderful clarity ma'am... Stay blessed and happy 😊

  • @Anncode31
    @Anncode31 3 месяца назад

    plz make a video of full essay

  • @roshandeenjakhrani4277
    @roshandeenjakhrani4277 7 месяцев назад

    Mam thanks for the explanation.I attempted the same topic but got just 28 marks.After watching this video I understand that most of the paragraphs were relevent.But failed due lack of case studies with strong justification and obviously Grammer.So try to reshape my essays strategies at all

  • @syedsdaqathussain9099
    @syedsdaqathussain9099 8 месяцев назад

    Dearest ma'am, introductory paragraph mein Kia Tariqa adopt Kia Jae and Kia Likha Jae us mein?