Improve Your Pitch (Treatment Design Tips)

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  • Опубликовано: 30 сен 2024

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  • @nur-niaz
    @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +31

    If this video gets 5k likes, I will make this spec commercial to demonstrate the entire process. This will provide you with a better understanding of the process from beginning to end. Help me reach that goal by hitting the like button and leaving a comment!

    • @brianvisciglia3640
      @brianvisciglia3640 11 месяцев назад

      Great video and so helpful! Thank you! - Also is that a Mate on your desk? ;)

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thank you! Yerba Mate is THE BEST!@@brianvisciglia3640

    • @imdustinnichols5286
      @imdustinnichols5286 6 месяцев назад +2

      There wasn't 5k, but I would absolutely love to see this done bro

    • @AndreyMynka
      @AndreyMynka 6 месяцев назад

      Like im dustin mentioned this vid didn't hit 5k but it would be SOSOSO useful and awesome if you did go ahead and make that!

  • @JQmadeit
    @JQmadeit 11 месяцев назад +18

    Cant tell you enough how much youtube lacks this type of information in the industry! Thank you for making it!!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      My pleasure! ✨

    • @AlDelcyCreative
      @AlDelcyCreative 11 месяцев назад

      Because of gatekeeping obviously

  • @mtbleo3273
    @mtbleo3273 11 месяцев назад +2

    Question: I have some experience in videos and documentaries and I want to change into commercials. What could be the first steps? How can I get assigned to make a treatment?

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      You can’t really get assigned to write a treatment unless you have some form of a commercial portfolio and network within production companies. You can either make some spec commercials and send them to production companies OR write your best ideas as a treatment and try and pitch them to the smaller local brands, but then again - because there’s no evidence of your commercial directing abilities, chances are slim. Hence the first option is the surest way.

  • @yagohunt-laudi1810
    @yagohunt-laudi1810 11 месяцев назад +9

    Dude. Are you drinking MATE???? From an Argentine - much respect.

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +2

      MATE GANG!

  • @FSketcher
    @FSketcher 11 месяцев назад +1

    🔥🔥🔥🔥

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      ❤️❤️❤️

  • @ivantipikin4395
    @ivantipikin4395 5 месяцев назад +1

    Брат, отличное видео, подчерпнул для себя много нового, спасибо!

  • @JesusPlaza
    @JesusPlaza 6 месяцев назад

    QUESTION: Are you using any AI as part of your process now?????

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  6 месяцев назад +1

      Yep. I actually do use quite a few. So I use this platform called katalist for my storyboards. I use notion’s ai writer to help me tidy up my writing and organize my notes. And I use canva’s ai features to basically replace all my photoshop needs

  • @LarissaCorino
    @LarissaCorino 5 месяцев назад

    yesssssss thanks

  • @linavonsaviciute1483
    @linavonsaviciute1483 8 месяцев назад

    Awesome content & tone, the way you explain things in a cool manner. Could you possibly make a video on how to improve your live pitching skills? I find that this one is sometimes difficult, especially if you're working directly with the client, only brainstorming on ideas with them and trying to understand their expectations. Or perhaps you'd advice to never brainstorm with a client in a live call?

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  7 месяцев назад +1

      Yep. This something I try to avoid. I know that I need some quiet time and focus before I come up with something worthy. And usually my first idea isn’t my best. But that’s me.
      And then once I have a basis we can start discussing with the client and usually it gets better from there. Sometimes they’ll bring something up that makes it better.

  • @wildpatagoniafilms16
    @wildpatagoniafilms16 11 месяцев назад

    Great post! Question: when you add the reference options; audio/video... you get that done using also keyNote? thanks!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Yes you can! Either as a link in pdf, or as an interactive slide if you’re sending it as a keynote file.

  • @vanhils1958
    @vanhils1958 10 месяцев назад

    HI Nur, I do have a question, if there is something similar, but do we have to worry about protecting ideas? Like what if you send your Idea in this case to the final client (not the agency) and they won't take you as director but take the idea? I am curious about that. Any experience or ideas? Maybe that never happens?

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  10 месяцев назад

      It happens often and you can’t do much about it unfortunately. And if it makes you feel better - even if they take your idea it’s never gonna be done the way YOU envisioned it. I talk about it more in one of my previous QnA videos.

  • @lauritee
    @lauritee 11 месяцев назад +5

    Love your visual and editing style. Writing a good treatment is truly a artform in itself and you have mastered it.

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thank you so much! 🙏

  • @frangponcetta
    @frangponcetta 11 месяцев назад

    @nurniazfilms Do you have a green "mate" in the frame? As an Argentinian fan....I loved that 😊

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Yassss! Yerba Mate makes me invincible haha

  • @ericgoku2432
    @ericgoku2432 11 месяцев назад

    Please will you make the treatment you just created available for download? I pray you get more likes so you can shoot the commercial for real. Great tutorials by the way.

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Yeah it’s already available for download. Check the links in the description 👍

  • @Emma974
    @Emma974 11 месяцев назад

    🙌🏼🙌🏼👏🏼👏🏼

  • @felipemalatesta
    @felipemalatesta 10 месяцев назад

    what a helpful video, thanks for sharing. I have a very important question, is that a mate at the left of the frame (the green cup with the bombilla in it)?

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  10 месяцев назад +1

      Yes, it is!

  • @lesliequarshie379
    @lesliequarshie379 11 месяцев назад

    let's go

  • @VictorBrodyagin
    @VictorBrodyagin 10 месяцев назад

    Damn!!

  • @linavonsaviciute1483
    @linavonsaviciute1483 11 месяцев назад

    Awesome vid! Can't wait for those 5k likes (wish these were views)

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thanks siiiirrr 🙏

  • @mattiapassaro1025
    @mattiapassaro1025 8 месяцев назад

    Bit of an amateur question, but would it be wise to make a treatment like this for a short film??

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  8 месяцев назад

      Yeah of course! You can use this for a short, a tv show, a music video or a commercial. The logic is exactly the same.

  • @yohannesgedamu3214
    @yohannesgedamu3214 4 месяца назад

    🤞🤞

  • @mokisacreativevideo9510
    @mokisacreativevideo9510 6 месяцев назад

  • @davidschwan
    @davidschwan 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you so much Bro pls do more Videos!!!!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      More to come! Thank you 🙏

  • @theanuissavage
    @theanuissavage 11 месяцев назад +1

    Let’s get this to 5k likes guys 🔥

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      🚀🚀🚀

  • @jjxmpngmg2869
    @jjxmpngmg2869 11 месяцев назад

    i see sum ezco elements there! I'm a fan already

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Ezco is the GOAT! 🖤🖤🖤

  • @robertdouble559
    @robertdouble559 10 месяцев назад +1

    ProMist factor set to 1990s levels! I've been seeing a lot of bloomed highlights lately, it's a fascinating trend. Style sure is a cyclical beast. Snarky filtration jokes aside, this is yet another great video Nur. Here's to 5k likes. NAY! 50,000 likes!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  10 месяцев назад

      🤣🤣🤣 yeah i like going over the top with these things from time to time

  • @BrianLallyOfficial
    @BrianLallyOfficial 11 месяцев назад +1

    Excellent work. Thanks for posting.

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Many thanks!

  • @fede.vinocur
    @fede.vinocur 11 месяцев назад

    You are awesome and so instructive ! Thank you a lot ! And... why do you have a 'mate' in your desk?! Greetings from an argentinian director !

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Because MATE is the best drink the humanity has ever invented 🤷‍♂️😂

    • @fede.vinocur
      @fede.vinocur 11 месяцев назад

      @@nur-niaz love it ! haha

  • @shamaruku
    @shamaruku 10 месяцев назад

    Will there be a store sale soon for the holidays? 🎉 please 😅

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  10 месяцев назад

      yes there will be :D

  • @katyfitzgerald683
    @katyfitzgerald683 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thanks so much for creating this! I’m applying for a job as a Directors Assistant at a top production company in my city. A large part of the job is image research and creating treatments (or helping to). I’m thinking of submitting a mock treatment along with the application/portfolio and wondering if I should use a mock ad brief or make it for a short film idea/script I’ve been sitting on for a while. Any advice would be appreciated!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Try to make it into a sellable ad as much as you can. That way it’s much easier to penetrate the market, when the idea you’re pitching will drive more sales/brand awareness/loyalty. It’s always best when your ideas are applicable in a commercial sense. If they’re too avangard, you can still try, but research the market first. Otherwise it’s just a passion project for yourself. Which is okay too as long as you understand the outcome.

  • @Teks123
    @Teks123 11 месяцев назад +1

    Do you ever participate in the creative process of what the commercial will be? or you always start from the agency brief? whats the process when there is no agency and you are dealing directly with the client

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      I actually do, although not as often nowadays as before. Direct-to-client work is mostly with smaller brands and smaller budgets. This can be either good or bad, depending on the people managing those brands. Some may have a cool product and fully trust your team's vision, while others may have little experience, unrealistic expectations, and a desire to micromanage, all while having limited budgets. Therefore, working directly with clients requires a case-by-case approach. Working with ad agencies helps to address these issues, although it might mean less input at the beginning of the script, because like you said - we hop on board when we get the brief.

  • @onecreativeman
    @onecreativeman 11 месяцев назад +1

    Really cool! A lot of production houses lack the seriousness of investing time on Treatment. 🤘🏻🤘🏻

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you! True 🤷‍♂️

  • @LukeDewar
    @LukeDewar 11 месяцев назад +1

    Lovely video again, I'm going to have to get all my friends to like this video, because I need that commercial breakdown haha. All the best Nur Niaz!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Yes please! 🖤✨

  • @alex_tybin
    @alex_tybin 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thanks for the interesting content! Keep it up!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thanks for watching!

  • @valentinosummo
    @valentinosummo 9 месяцев назад

    Hello Nur! Excellent and very useful video! Where could I find opportunities to pitch? Thanks for the value you provide!👍

  • @metrawhub2206
    @metrawhub2206 11 месяцев назад +1

    Amazing! Very smooth everything!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thank you! Cheers!

  • @peaceandsounds1281
    @peaceandsounds1281 9 месяцев назад

    Please we need the commercial already😭 Absolutely love your work!!!

  • @KnockKnockProductions11
    @KnockKnockProductions11 11 месяцев назад

    Wow

  • @wbredclaritypictures7777
    @wbredclaritypictures7777 11 месяцев назад

    Awesomeness, have learnt a lot love and support from Kenya Africa

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thank youuu 🙏

  • @gustavo.visuals
    @gustavo.visuals 11 месяцев назад +1

    This is awesome! Found your channel a few weeks ago and it has been the best RUclips find of the year! Awesome content and value. Thank you 🔥❤️

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      I appreciate that! Welcome aboard 🖤

  • @regresasha
    @regresasha 11 месяцев назад +1

    Congratulations on winning the pitch
    ! and it's already interesting to see what kind of project it is

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +2

      It’s a spec! Hope we can get this to 5k ✨

    • @regresasha
      @regresasha 11 месяцев назад

      @@nur-niaz it is unreal cool to make such quality for such a cost🦾

  • @DeepStateofMe
    @DeepStateofMe 11 месяцев назад

    Thank you for sharing your process 👏🏼👏🏼

  • @mustatia8917
    @mustatia8917 10 месяцев назад

    Beautiful video Nur, it is a blessing the value you are providing for free.But this video made me curious about one thing...Where do we find agencies looking for freelancers for their commercials?

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  10 месяцев назад

      Thank you! Focus on finding production companies. They have access to all the agencies. And they’ll bring you commercial briefs. Make sure to sustain the relationship with the local producers.

  • @Kdontmiss_
    @Kdontmiss_ 8 месяцев назад

    You are a great inspiration bro. All the way from South Africa🔥❤️🔥

  • @alexandre_berquin
    @alexandre_berquin 10 месяцев назад

    The goat has talked and we all listened

  • @muhammadvikky
    @muhammadvikky 11 месяцев назад

    I love it! can't wait to they approve this pitch

  • @jayylls
    @jayylls 11 месяцев назад

    Just came across your account bro, absolutely LOVE IT!!!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Welcome aboard!

  • @PaolaMariaLeonetti
    @PaolaMariaLeonetti 10 месяцев назад

    sooo helpful thank you!💖

  • @SHVWNCOOPER
    @SHVWNCOOPER 11 месяцев назад +1

    i love this deck style. i've been using midjourney to generate my images for pitches lately and it's been a game changer

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +2

      Do you manage to get them looking exactly like you want or just use what it gives to you? I often want images to look like 16mm film, grainy and lit by hard light. Last time I dabbled into midjourney I couldn’t get anything close to it :(

    • @SHVWNCOOPER
      @SHVWNCOOPER 11 месяцев назад

      one more trick: getting the midjourney image 75% there, and then using photoshop generative fill to change those small things it decided to do like putting champagne bottles in the middle of their forehead , lol. @@nur-niaz

    • @jamesisaaks
      @jamesisaaks 11 месяцев назад

      was that MJ 5 yet ? its pretty good for cinematic images. prompting for 16mm grain and hard light should be do-able. you can upload a image and have MJ suggest prompts to revise engineer, good way to find tokens that might help. @@nur-niaz

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Will look into it! Thanks 🙏 @auzeone1

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Alright that’s genius. Haven’t even thought about it 😅 @SHVWNCOOPER

  • @sjoerdsiemes
    @sjoerdsiemes 11 месяцев назад

    Here for the algorithm, love these video's! Even your talking head shots are super well shot.

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thank you 🙏

  • @hellochibuzor
    @hellochibuzor 11 месяцев назад

    Please how do you record your screen?

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      I just use the built-in screen recorder in my Macbook :)

    • @hellochibuzor
      @hellochibuzor 11 месяцев назад

      @@nur-niaz Quick Time player?

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Idk 😂 it’s “Command + Shift + 5”. Works flawlessly!

    • @hellochibuzor
      @hellochibuzor 11 месяцев назад

      @@nur-niaz I’d try it out. ☺️

  • @farzadq
    @farzadq 11 месяцев назад

    would like to see this filmed as a spec advert for sure

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Me too! Let’s get this to 5k. I mean even if it gets less Imma probably make it anyways so that you guys can gain some insight into it 🙏

  • @leeroyntini
    @leeroyntini 11 месяцев назад

    Excited for this dude!

  • @danstrick3314
    @danstrick3314 11 месяцев назад

    Thank you so much!

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Glad it helped!

  • @GabrielCuillier
    @GabrielCuillier 11 месяцев назад

    Man killing it like always

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад

      Thank sir 🙏 much appreciated

  • @Tleuuuulin
    @Tleuuuulin 11 месяцев назад

    Thx for info bro

    • @nur-niaz
      @nur-niaz  11 месяцев назад +1

      Thanks for watching!