Feel SO HAPPY after you guys said you like my long story 💜💜 and I hope you guys like this one too, enjoyyyy What do you guys think about this one? Find me on insta ↓ instagram.com/miamifictionofficial/
So so cute author nim Can you make bonus like interaction of Dr. Kim and Jungkook and their daughter also getting boyfriend and both father and son getting over protective 😂 It's fine even if you can't okie I just said because it was so cute yet beautifully written.
After reading the title of this story I thought it would be a sad one but it was indeed a great, funny, cute & lovely story!!! REally Really loved it!!!!💜💜💜💜
I enjoyed this a lot, you approached the mafia element from an unusual perspective, and revolved through your story in a unique way. This was beautifully written, it was a fun story, but also had some deep, thought-provoking elements. It was easy to connect with your characters, and you provided a depth to Yn that completely fit with the Dr. persona you created for her. The connection between her and Jung kook was very interesting, and when you turned the corner to make the piece more serious, the timing was perfect, and we were ready to see what would transpire between them.... loved it. - St@nce
I knew y/n was not his mom 😏 and I really liked this one too but I wish we could have seen Jungkook's pov too, I did believe too that Jungkook liked her but I thought he liked her from before do he did all this drama for her to accept him sooner since has a mafia so maybe she wouldn't have accepted him if he approached her😅 but it was another way around lol. Also I have a question when did Jungkook fall for y/n though as we didnt get to see his pov. As we knew y/n liked him since a while ago!
Thank you. I try to make it less obvious about Jk feelings, but even from the start he actually admire her. That's why he react like that after he knew about her having a child. I'm sorry if it turn out quite confusing.
I just want to say I love long stories, they satisfy my cravings 😂keep it up❤..but I want to suggest you something (healthy suggestion ,if you want to follow or not it's all up to u )me and my friends watching ff from past 4 yrs and here is one that the style of font like you should cover full space not two line like in a one slide you should fill the one slide with 4 to 5 lines and time gap should between switching slides more than 10secs bcz my friends and many other readers do not read even good stories due to this bcz they get annoyed so that's why I suggest you write in this way but it's all upto u ,I love ur stories otherwise
I'm really sorry, I don't really get what you mean. Do you mean the gap between one line and the other is too short and fast? I'm sorry my English isn't good
Feel SO HAPPY after you guys said you like my long story 💜💜
and I hope you guys like this one too, enjoyyyy
What do you guys think about this one?
Find me on insta ↓
instagram.com/miamifictionofficial/
So so cute author nim Can you make bonus like interaction of Dr. Kim and Jungkook and their daughter also getting boyfriend and both father and son getting over protective 😂
It's fine even if you can't okie I just said because it was so cute yet beautifully written.
@@slayianaathank you so much. But I'm sorry I can't make bonus. But surely I'll make more about this kind of stories 💜
@@miamifictionofficial2 it's okay author nim I will wait for more masterpieces like this 🤍
Poor Gurl 😂 her brother us busy with his future wife and parents r busy with her new siblings
haha 😂😂😂
😂😂
That beard guy be like : what I did 😢🙂🥲😑
Gosh I laughed soo hard when his son said dad I'm gonna stay at my future wife's house 😂😂 and dad was like bro he's 10 😂
Your storylines are always eye-catching and your ffs are so Good bro ....keep it up
Thank you so muchhh
After reading the title of this story I thought it would be a sad one but it was indeed a great, funny, cute & lovely story!!! REally Really loved it!!!!💜💜💜💜
Such a beautiful FF with a few twists and turns making one want this love story to go on and on…… I couldn’t stop until the very end!
Yeayyy I'm glad
Mind-blowing story. Love and enjoyed it a lot. It's really touch my heart. Everything was too perfect. Thanks for this ff of yours.
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Hope for a happy ending with jk and y/n though.
I enjoyed this a lot, you approached the mafia element from an unusual perspective, and revolved through your story in a unique way.
This was beautifully written, it was a fun story, but also had some deep, thought-provoking elements.
It was easy to connect with your characters, and you provided a depth to Yn that completely fit with the Dr. persona you created for her.
The connection between her and Jung kook was very interesting, and when you turned the corner to make the piece more serious, the timing was perfect, and we were ready to see what would transpire between them.... loved it.
- St@nce
Thank you so much. It means a lot
I knew y/n was not his mom 😏 and I really liked this one too but I wish we could have seen Jungkook's pov too, I did believe too that Jungkook liked her but I thought he liked her from before do he did all this drama for her to accept him sooner since has a mafia so maybe she wouldn't have accepted him if he approached her😅 but it was another way around lol.
Also I have a question when did Jungkook fall for y/n though as we didnt get to see his pov. As we knew y/n liked him since a while ago!
Thank you.
I try to make it less obvious about Jk feelings, but even from the start he actually admire her. That's why he react like that after he knew about her having a child.
I'm sorry if it turn out quite confusing.
lOVE IT............................ That was a different and cute one....
I just want to say I love long stories, they satisfy my cravings 😂keep it up❤..but I want to suggest you something (healthy suggestion ,if you want to follow or not it's all up to u )me and my friends watching ff from past 4 yrs and here is one that the style of font like you should cover full space not two line like in a one slide you should fill the one slide with 4 to 5 lines and time gap should between switching slides more than 10secs bcz my friends and many other readers do not read even good stories due to this bcz they get annoyed so that's why I suggest you write in this way but it's all upto u ,I love ur stories otherwise
I'm really sorry, I don't really get what you mean.
Do you mean the gap between one line and the other is too short and fast?
I'm sorry my English isn't good
Mind-blowing fantastic
Thank youu
ITS SO GOOD
Beautiful cute funny awesome❤
Thank youuu
2nd ❤
It was amazing 😍😍
Yeayy thanks
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