Great start for your channel man. But make sure to fix the clip durations and some other mistakes like characters gender. Looking forward to see more videos from you 😁😁
I love this video but friendly reminder about some of the word’s spelling (e.g. when a word ends with ‘e’ and you’re gonna add ‘ing’ to it you’re gonna delete the ‘e’ and replace it with ‘ing’ like careing❌ caring✔) and I found that there are many typos so hope you’ll check everything before you post this video,I’m not tryna be a hater, don’t forget that I really love the story
Great start for your channel man. But make sure to fix the clip durations and some other mistakes like characters gender. Looking forward to see more videos from you 😁😁
Yehhh Bro This my first Amourshipping So I know This is bad plz adjust 😊 and I also Give ideas From you brother Plz keep support 🙏
Hi para dx hello you support amour youtubers.full support to you and new youtuber.till then,bye.
Overall your video is very good. But you swap the gender of ash and serena sometimes 😅😅😅😅😅
Nonetheless your video is very much organized. 😁😁😁
Yeh Bro Thank you for advice ❤️❤️
This is my first so plz manage 🙏
@@youranimeboy9 Glad to help you dude
Ash❤Sarena
Pls start kalos high videos ❤❤
Ok ❤️
Nice start buddy
But you have used 'he' instead of 'she' so many times
So yea be careful next time 🎉
Tq Buddy ❤️🩹
@@youranimeboy9 welcome
Second part of this video
Grammar and gender.
Sry bro this was my first time so I made so many mistake
I love this video but friendly reminder about some of the word’s spelling (e.g. when a word ends with ‘e’ and you’re gonna add ‘ing’ to it you’re gonna delete the ‘e’ and replace it with ‘ing’ like careing❌ caring✔) and I found that there are many typos so hope you’ll check everything before you post this video,I’m not tryna be a hater, don’t forget that I really love the story
Thank you so much buddy I really appreciate it ❤️
nice storyline but want a little long story
I will try bro Plz support
Nice
Thank you
@jinglefan1013 hello