OUTLINING A NOVEL | Save the Cat Experiment | FUN AND GAMES

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Комментарии • 20

  • @Ingri9
    @Ingri9 5 лет назад +5

    These streams may be my favourite series right now. It's just so fun brainstorming with everyone and somehow these streams always manage to spark ideas for my own WIP, which in turn gives me so much motivation to keep writing.
    Can't wait for Midpoint next week!

    • @AuthorBrittanyWang
      @AuthorBrittanyWang  5 лет назад

      Ahh! Yes!!! This is exactly what we were hoping for Ingri!! This just made my day!! :D

  • @jasontsabunimt6680
    @jasontsabunimt6680 2 года назад

    Or the king had an advisor he kept the other Queen informed every year in secret like a bday card

  • @hjstackofbooks
    @hjstackofbooks 5 лет назад +1

    The murky middle can be so frustrating so I'm glad the addition of Weiland's pinch points has helped! :D

  • @dellieborton
    @dellieborton 5 лет назад +1

    I love the tattoo idea! Especially if each person's is unique to them, except theirs is the same because they are twins.

  • @debbierenou
    @debbierenou 5 лет назад +2

    So on Lor eavesdropping on the Adviser. She could overhear him scolding his son on not getting the job done.

  • @kelleyhendrick9058
    @kelleyhendrick9058 5 лет назад +1

    I like the idea that you receive your tattoo once you complete the ritual and the tattoo transfers from one to the other in the sacred space somehow. And maybe at the end when they both have their tattoos, that's when they realize how identical the tattoos are and that they are twins?

  • @grapefry
    @grapefry 5 лет назад +1

    for the plothole comment, you guys said in an earlier stream that lor was using her shifting power to disguise a disability (i think the original idea was loss of vision) so she's probably been using it so long that her tribe just doesn't remember what exactly her human face looks like.

  • @subhashnisarta8040
    @subhashnisarta8040 4 года назад

    Thanks so much for your guidelines about writing novel,
    So I don't interested in animals series of books but the interested in real life style no doubt I can write animal series also but never thinking about it before and now but in realistic I can do everything I mean creat lots of vision because of I have decided and done film making course, that's why I can create realistic story So I am giving you a simple example below.
    It is morning 🌟 time sharp 6:08 minutes as my daily routine I got fresh,my school time to teach at sharp 7:30 So always going to the school by with bicycle,every staff member are touching to the school in right time but I little bit late not much more different but long distance from my home, and going by bicycle that is the only reason to go later. not everyday but sometimes.
    Today is Monday,I reach at the school on right time, after general prayers of the school, my first period is P. T. Physical training on the playground So student are playing football and all the students take their 🐈 parts in playing with Keen interest my present on the ground is physically but my mind is not there and never happy with this teacher's Job my ambitious and target that I had thought was always in mind, sometimes I thought about my future, family and my carrier So all this vision I see by my unconscious mind my real vision on the spot so far from my thoughts, this is my real experience in my life
    So the Bell is ringing and one period is over all the students are in the class room, suddenly I awake and come into real vision that I feel where I myself ? I am in the play ground. So this type of senario also in films that we can create.

  • @sarahali6452
    @sarahali6452 4 года назад

    Is the book realesed ?

  • @carolsikes5069
    @carolsikes5069 5 лет назад +1

    If the advisor knows that Lor isn't from both parents - wouldn't he just announce that to the tribe / clan and get her kicked out? He wouldn't need to kill her. What if Thyra's mom had been keeping track of Lor all these years - really proud that both her girls are going to end up as the rulers. Maybe she's even planning on waiting for them to become leaders and then try to stop the revenge cycle by telling them about being sisters. And so when she finds them fighting - she knows who she is without any problem even if they're not identical (which I do like).

    • @AuthorBrittanyWang
      @AuthorBrittanyWang  5 лет назад

      Ah! I like this twist Carol! Definitely something Bethany and I will discuss!

  • @taiyej.k.ishola2061
    @taiyej.k.ishola2061 5 лет назад +1

    I think the advisor should be related to the stepmother. He's the only one who knows about the secret of the girls' birth and somehow feels threatened. In an attempt to kill the sky tribe princess the king died saving her. With the weight of that guilt, she feels the pressure to be tough as well as her plan for revenge. That way both girls team up together to bring him down.

    • @AuthorBrittanyWang
      @AuthorBrittanyWang  5 лет назад +1

      Really like these ideas Taiye! The only issues are that we think we're going to make the stepmother human which would mean that the advisor would most likely be human too. Plus, a lot of people were saying to maybe try to stay away from him being Lor's "uncle" because it feels too much like Scar from the Lion King. Plus we want his son and Lor to be love interests which would be weird as they would both think they are related (cousins) at the beginning. We'll definitely keep these in minds still though!

    • @taiyej.k.ishola2061
      @taiyej.k.ishola2061 5 лет назад

      @@AuthorBrittanyWang Ok

  • @jasontsabunimt6680
    @jasontsabunimt6680 2 года назад

    Super late but if they don’t recognize the other clan because they only meet in animal form could they have human lives like their mom befriends her because they have a love of books and go to the same used bookstore

  • @rachelbloomquist4974
    @rachelbloomquist4974 5 лет назад +1

    I'm watching the replay here. To show that they are sisters, what about a birthmark that only children from their bloodline get? And it's not is a super obvious place where anyone could see it (bottom for the foot, ribs, idk..) And maybe it's not a well-known fact. This way they can be like, oh that's odd we have the same birthmark, and kind of look alike, but I still hate her. And then (Lore?) continues to think on it and it eats away at her until she figures it out. So she might discover that they are sisters but then later find out they are not only sisters but twins?

  • @jacquelineclairereinerical4831
    @jacquelineclairereinerical4831 5 лет назад +2

    So I’m just gonna see throw a bunch of thoughts here as I’m watching the replay. I don’t know about the mirror because that seems to be a different type of magic then type are you working with at the moment but I do you like having them be able to communicate. What if because they met each other in a dream they’re able to communicate in their sleep or something? Also what if the tattoo if lor had the lion half or the eagle half I mean in theory I have a Lion have and together they form a griffen? I don’t think you want this had to do you disappear and reappear because then it will definitely give it away that something is wrong with the girls and that’s going to tip off the advisor. So far though I really like what are you guys have come up with for the middle I am only hoping my middle will go as easily.