This one felt very much like it just, happened. Like, find old mario game, then spooky stuff happens for no real reason before it doesn't happen again. It just, comes and goes. The idea is there, but the story just asserts itself and sorts of, ends. Though if you have some sort of project you're working in, I would love to see it! Especially if that xenomorph thing is involved.
Still remember when SOG read this one. Not honestly sure what the author was going for? What did any of it even mean? It’s a lot less cliche than I remembered but it’s still just odd, at least to me.
The setup is weak, yes, and the premise is clichéd, but honestly, I would have liked it to be a full story - like, a full game, exploring just exactly what happened to the Mushroom Kingdom and following Mario on a quest for revenge. I mean, the author clearly had an idea here, but…I guess wimped out on going through with it? Maybe it wouldn't have been executed brilliantly, but I wish the author had taken the time and the risk to do it anyway - practice makes perfect, after all, and the idea was clearly there, I want to know what the idea was and see it fleshed out. Maybe, with some drafting, there could have even been a reason given for why it was happening? I mean, it doesn't NEED a reason, it's a video game creepypasta, there's some leniency here, but…just, generally, if it had just been allowed to cook a while longer, I really think this could have been some very tasty pasta, its greatest issue is that it's severely underdone, at least as far as I'm concerned.
original story: creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Super_Mario_RPG:_Legend_of_the_Seven_Screams
This one felt very much like it just, happened. Like, find old mario game, then spooky stuff happens for no real reason before it doesn't happen again. It just, comes and goes. The idea is there, but the story just asserts itself and sorts of, ends.
Though if you have some sort of project you're working in, I would love to see it! Especially if that xenomorph thing is involved.
The sad part about this is that it's of super mario rpg a game with so much potential
Still remember when SOG read this one. Not honestly sure what the author was going for? What did any of it even mean? It’s a lot less cliche than I remembered but it’s still just odd, at least to me.
That epic moment when the creepypasta is just an edgy fan fic
The setup is weak, yes, and the premise is clichéd, but honestly, I would have liked it to be a full story - like, a full game, exploring just exactly what happened to the Mushroom Kingdom and following Mario on a quest for revenge. I mean, the author clearly had an idea here, but…I guess wimped out on going through with it? Maybe it wouldn't have been executed brilliantly, but I wish the author had taken the time and the risk to do it anyway - practice makes perfect, after all, and the idea was clearly there, I want to know what the idea was and see it fleshed out. Maybe, with some drafting, there could have even been a reason given for why it was happening? I mean, it doesn't NEED a reason, it's a video game creepypasta, there's some leniency here, but…just, generally, if it had just been allowed to cook a while longer, I really think this could have been some very tasty pasta, its greatest issue is that it's severely underdone, at least as far as I'm concerned.