Hey Skopos, I just finished watching your latest video, and I have to say, I found it to be quite unsatisfactory from a storytelling standpoint. While I appreciate your effort and the production quality, the narrative felt disjointed and lacked a clear direction. It left me confused and disconnected throughout the entire video. The introduction seemed promising, but as the video progressed, it failed to deliver a cohesive storyline or a well-developed plot. It felt like a random assortment of scenes and ideas thrown together without any meaningful connection. As a viewer, I was left wanting more substance and depth to engage with. Additionally, the pacing was off, making it difficult to stay engaged. Some scenes dragged on for too long, while others were hastily rushed, leaving me feeling disoriented. The lack of a proper buildup and climax further contributed to the unsatisfactory nature of the video. I believe that with more attention to storyboarding, character development, and a clear narrative arc, your future videos could greatly improve. As a fan, I hope to see you take constructive criticism into account and continue striving for excellence in your content.
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Hey Skopos, I just finished watching your latest video, and I have to say, I found it to be quite unsatisfactory from a storytelling standpoint. While I appreciate your effort and the production quality, the narrative felt disjointed and lacked a clear direction. It left me confused and disconnected throughout the entire video.
The introduction seemed promising, but as the video progressed, it failed to deliver a cohesive storyline or a well-developed plot. It felt like a random assortment of scenes and ideas thrown together without any meaningful connection. As a viewer, I was left wanting more substance and depth to engage with.
Additionally, the pacing was off, making it difficult to stay engaged. Some scenes dragged on for too long, while others were hastily rushed, leaving me feeling disoriented. The lack of a proper buildup and climax further contributed to the unsatisfactory nature of the video.
I believe that with more attention to storyboarding, character development, and a clear narrative arc, your future videos could greatly improve. As a fan, I hope to see you take constructive criticism into account and continue striving for excellence in your content.
any%?
meaning as long as you get to the victory screen you don't have to take all 4 stocks