@@sszerotosixty a bit. I'll let the writer know lol. Some of the Cuts don't help. There's one bit of dialogue in particular that bugs me. Where it jumps to me saying "Sean, it's been like 19 years etc". Really wish they didn't use that take. Makes me look bad. Oh well 🤷. I appreciate the feedback!
Just some constructive criticism, there were a lot of unnecessary cuts, the dialogue was contrived at times and that one scene were it went in and out of focus was strange (though I see what the intention was). The story itself is hilarious and the ending is amazing. It keeps me questioning what comes next!
Spectacular
@@General-laundrybasket501st thanks!
I'm extremely surprised this has 500 views. Y'all are gonna blow up and soon. Such high quality
@@Inspector.me.422 I appreciate that!
Excellent I was very surprised by how good this was the fighting part was very well done
@@bobatea6901 appreciate it. Thank you!
Not bad 👍 pleasantly nice to see
@@Bedogg25 thank you!
That was great!
@@metoonunyabidness1391 thanks for watching!
Yeah first guys commenting was right, this was really good. Like really really good
@@bobjim8754 appreciate it!
I want to like it. Camera work seems ok. Dialogue is contrived.
@@sszerotosixty a bit. I'll let the writer know lol. Some of the Cuts don't help. There's one bit of dialogue in particular that bugs me. Where it jumps to me saying "Sean, it's been like 19 years etc". Really wish they didn't use that take. Makes me look bad. Oh well 🤷. I appreciate the feedback!
Just some constructive criticism, there were a lot of unnecessary cuts, the dialogue was contrived at times and that one scene were it went in and out of focus was strange (though I see what the intention was). The story itself is hilarious and the ending is amazing. It keeps me questioning what comes next!
so early it's 360p
@@phitsf5475 I lost my copy of this and had to download it off of website and my only option was 360p 🤦
801 views 3 Days ago
@@zinzincoetzee1934 🤞you never know with these things. Hopefully one of these pops off. I'm going to start posting more of my short films.