Just found you the other day. Catching up. This one was real. Keep going man. Will keep listening. Literally started thinking of everything I have to contribute in this situation.
Imagine writing a story about a town that you love only to have AI mispronounce it every single time. It's ROSE-burg, I live a couple of hours away from it. I really wanted to listen to this but I'm cringing every time it says Ross-burg.
Sorry about the pronunciation of Roseburg, By the time everything was edited and uploaded, I just rolled with it, after all, it's just a zombie story, Thanks for listening.
Thank you for your feed back, I appreciate it. Most people around the world dont know what it means. Thanks for listening. I can improve moving forward
Thank for listening, how much ammo can one hold on oneself, once you run out of ammo, your gun is worthless. But I appreciate the feedback and will add guns in the stories with the right characters. 👍
@storystream10009 not that they have to be carrying them constantly running and gunning it's just hard to parse out an off the beat town having 0 gun ownership. Imo the mountain man book series touched on a good balance of that if you want see what imo was a stellar balance of horror and humanity
This had the potential to be a really good story but it just sucks. Mispronounced names, dumb ass moves and a story that jumps around from building to street to building. Just sucked.
Made it about a minute in. How you are incapable of correcting the pronounciation of Roseburg (it's LITERALLY in the name- ROSE burg) as "rozburg" was ridiculous. Then you've got a dude buying sheets of plywood for a deck build. Common sense ain't that common, i guess. But seriously. Roseburg.
Well, we didn't explain the deck style in the story, it was a two-story deck and the customer was installing the plywood underneath the deck to create a covered area under the deck. As for the Roseburg pronunciation, most viewers don't live there, so they wouldn't know the difference. But I hope you feel better about yourself for putting someone down and have a good day.
@@storystream10009 it's about artistic integrity. If I set a story in the Outer Hebrides or Azores, if I named a character Siobhan, I'd be certain I could pronounce it. Then the deck build... two story deck? A deck with what? Plywood skirting around the deck? In Oregon? It's just basic research. Had the egregious errors taken a few minutes into the story to start stacking up instead of right out the gate, the story may have been good. But you have, on average, five minutes to get a listener/reader hooked in. By failing to build a basic premise, you lose people immediately. So my apologies if my criticism came across as "putting down" your art. I genuinely would love to find some fresh quality material, but I'll never know if the world building, storyline, or character arcs were of any quality because the first thirty seconds were so awkward in pronunciation and content.
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The best part about a zombie outbreak, is the beginning. This was dope, i subbed. I love zombie stories for bed. Keep them coming please sir 🙏
Thanks for the sub!
Just found you the other day. Catching up. This one was real. Keep going man. Will keep listening. Literally started thinking of everything I have to contribute in this situation.
Thank you for the positive feedback, I appreciate it. Thanks again for listening.
When did we get a missile silo? Great story!!!
Imagine writing a story about a town that you love only to have AI mispronounce it every single time. It's ROSE-burg, I live a couple of hours away from it. I really wanted to listen to this but I'm cringing every time it says Ross-burg.
Sorry about the pronunciation of Roseburg, By the time everything was edited and uploaded, I just rolled with it, after all, it's just a zombie story, Thanks for listening.
I’m going to write a story about Ypsilanti, Michigan. That should be fun! 🤣
@@eleanornelson5810 hope you share your story, we love all zombie movies and story’s. Thanks for listening
Imagine being this upset about it 😂
@@memo2933 Very upsetti spaghetti.
Whoop Whoop homies Smokem if you gottem 🧖🏼♂️ 😶🌫️ 🙏🏻
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dead sound; well worth listening to. to be recommended.
ah cool, i can listen an enjoy.
Roseburg. Not Rozzburg. If it's Roseburg Oregon that is.
It's 🌹 ROSEBERG.
NOT Roz burg
do DALLAS TX but DONT use COWBOYS in it UNLESS referring to FOOTBALL players D Town is a CITY and all the cowboys are in FORTWORTH 😂😂😂
He keeps saying the name of the town wrong it's ROSE( LIKE THE FLOWER) ROSEBURG
Sorry for the error, It was an error on my side and the narrator just followed, by the time i caught it, it was to late. Lesson learned on my part.
It is "Rose Burg" Not Rozberg.
Lol
1:05:00 once again stupidity rains Supreme 😒 hard pass.
@@lorddemonoss3945 thanks for the feed back, but it’s a free zombie story, relax a bit
Ai doesnt know what marshall law is lol
Thank you for your feed back, I appreciate it. Most people around the world dont know what it means. Thanks for listening. I can improve moving forward
Martial law is known around the world, and has been declared in many countries throughout history.
@storystream10009 its more that the ai kept letting the people go out and do things even tho marshall law was declared.
private?
Was trying to make a correction to the audio file to fix the pronunciation of RoseBurg. Then decided to just leave it
The narrator is generally okay but the inflections used for dialogue are sometimes bizarre.
"Call 911!" Is exclaimed like a positive advertisement.
Zombie stories that ignore gun ownership in america are just dull makes it hard to listen
Thank for listening, how much ammo can one hold on oneself, once you run out of ammo, your gun is worthless. But I appreciate the feedback and will add guns in the stories with the right characters. 👍
@storystream10009 not that they have to be carrying them constantly running and gunning it's just hard to parse out an off the beat town having 0 gun ownership. Imo the mountain man book series touched on a good balance of that if you want see what imo was a stellar balance of horror and humanity
It's not the lack of use of guns it's the lack of their overall presence
This had the potential to be a really good story but it just sucks. Mispronounced names, dumb ass moves and a story that jumps around from building to street to building.
Just sucked.
Thanks for the feedback, I aprreciate it
Made it about a minute in. How you are incapable of correcting the pronounciation of Roseburg (it's LITERALLY in the name- ROSE burg) as "rozburg" was ridiculous. Then you've got a dude buying sheets of plywood for a deck build.
Common sense ain't that common, i guess.
But seriously. Roseburg.
Well, we didn't explain the deck style in the story, it was a two-story deck and the customer was installing the plywood underneath the deck to create a covered area under the deck. As for the Roseburg pronunciation, most viewers don't live there, so they wouldn't know the difference. But I hope you feel better about yourself for putting someone down and have a good day.
@@storystream10009 it's about artistic integrity. If I set a story in the Outer Hebrides or Azores, if I named a character Siobhan, I'd be certain I could pronounce it.
Then the deck build... two story deck? A deck with what? Plywood skirting around the deck? In Oregon? It's just basic research.
Had the egregious errors taken a few minutes into the story to start stacking up instead of right out the gate, the story may have been good. But you have, on average, five minutes to get a listener/reader hooked in. By failing to build a basic premise, you lose people immediately. So my apologies if my criticism came across as "putting down" your art. I genuinely would love to find some fresh quality material, but I'll never know if the world building, storyline, or character arcs were of any quality because the first thirty seconds were so awkward in pronunciation and content.
@@habeebideemashayish2750 thank you for your feed back, I can only improve moving forward.
It’s an AI generated story. What do you expect?
@@habeebideemashayish2750that's quite the high horse you're sitting on
Small American town with no guns in the story. Very unrealistic.
@@captainamerica6525 thanks for the feedback, this just one guys story of survival, thanks for listening
So this is ai not even you reading it?..