Nice gimmick! But might I suggest an improvement to your video? As all good writers and story tellers know “Show, don’t tell.” 4+ minutes of talking about it before the demonstration is not super viewer friendly. A more engaging format could be: A very quick intro if you feel it’s necessary, Then straight into a demo(minimal explanation or info dumps), then a concise walkthrough of how it works while possibly going over it again explaining the features and mechanics of the gimmick as they come up in the course of the effect. Then an outro going more into detail about your deal with Penguin you quickly mention in the intro. Or something similar :)
Nice gimmick! But might I suggest an improvement to your video? As all good writers and story tellers know “Show, don’t tell.” 4+ minutes of talking about it before the demonstration is not super viewer friendly.
A more engaging format could be: A very quick intro if you feel it’s necessary, Then straight into a demo(minimal explanation or info dumps), then a concise walkthrough of how it works while possibly going over it again explaining the features and mechanics of the gimmick as they come up in the course of the effect. Then an outro going more into detail about your deal with Penguin you quickly mention in the intro.
Or something similar :)
wow, excellent!
You do amazing work. 👍🏻
Nice job!!
Good trick. Pretty unclear though. Whyd you cut the face off. Also its weird how keep clearing your mouth of all the spit. 🤷