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Another great what if! I can’t seem to write my name into the Google doc? What should I do? I really don’t want to miss out I wrote my name on using the app, but when I checked using my browser it didn’t show up
This was also a great fanfiction. The idea of Luke and Vader ruling side by side was cool. Despite that they were both Siths that still loved each other as father and son. It bought me great joy knowing they tortured Palpatine for his transgressions and fixed Vader's cybernetics. Luke was that guy. P.S. Leia looked gorgeous in those outfits especially the one with the upgraded padme drip.
@@errebusaether it is ironic. However, you must remember that Anakin didn’t turn to the dark side because he wanted power or greed. He did it for Padmé, for his child, he did it for love. The reason he became Vader was because of love. So the two acting as father and son and having a loving relationship with each other isn’t too far fetched.
Bro this was legit the best Star Wars story I’ve heard in a long time and is clearly your best work to date. I look forward to the incredible stories in the future.
Easily the best what if Vader raised Luke I've ever seen, and the humanity mixed with sith inhumanity was genius! But how'd they die in the ending, did no one know force healing, or any other high level force techniques?
This is "impressive most impressive" The detail is beyond measure...thy dark side story of Luke Skywalker is complete. He has Become a Sith Lord like his father before him.
Dear god, old video but listening to luke absolutely dismantle the ghost crew + Ahsoka was both terrifying and horrifying at the same time. Massive props
Yes!! The dark side, per Lucas' own words, is selfishness. Not inherent evil just giving over to one's selfish desires. Anakin's driving force behind his turn was his love for Padme, so it would make sense that a Luke raised in darkness would similarly love his father. Hell, his attempt to return his father to his original potential could be seen as pride in his own bloodline, a selfish act not one borne of compassion. Yet again, great job man. Also thank you for not trying to mimic anyone's voice, I'm happy I can listen to this out loud in the living room without feeling cringe as fuck when my roommate walks in as a bad Yoda impression comes on lmao.
@@DarthVader-bz8nq No it’s still a selfish act, because it benefits him and the Skywalker family to be more powerful and have a tighter grip on the galaxy
Really well done story. Felt like a audiobook with the amount of details and quality. Love how this is a extreme version of Vader and Luke ruling the Galaxy as Dark Sith Gods. Love this and your creative use of the Force.
Probably listened to or watched this 6-7 times now at least, love to throw it on in the background. There's not enough what if stories featuring a full potential dark side Luke or anakin, and taking your time with this one did it really well! Probably my favorite Luke related what if on RUclips right now. Speaking of, I'd love to see your take on either "What if Anakin visited Mortis early?" (the fun part is depending on when you decide, the result vastly changes depending on your interpretation) or "What if plagueis killed sidious?" in which sidious tries to kill his master before he's fallen asleep, while he's less inebriated, and he turns the tables. I'm interested in this one because the two sith lords had comparable potential, but did things very differently and held unique philosophies. Their initial disagreement on the subject of anakin is a good example, I just like to imagine this would change a ton. With plagueis pulling the Strings instead, maybe the clone wars don't even happen, or maybe they're very different. Sounds fun to me!
That was actually an incredible story. But I feel like Vader at the ending would have used force speed to go between the two blades of his children and die in their place, as both Anakin and Vader. I feel like his death would have been enough for luke to go to the light side more and since leia had used the dark side, she would understand that Vader, or her father was not evil, but it was his choices, that put him in that suit and his choices that made luke a sith, and his choices is what lead to the death of so many others. and in the moment in which they saw their fathers body drop to the floor. Luke, the perfect Sith, with his eyes piercing yellow eyes reflected a blue color. As he looked into his fathers eyes, which were no longer their sith yellow. Luke held his Father in his arms, not as Vader or Anakin, but as his father. Leia realizing what they had just done she felt conflicted and saddened by her fathers death, both Light and Dark Side filling her. She looked up at luke and could feel the pain and sadness emanating from him. As not the dark side or the light, but just the force filled his almost crazed screams for his father. Leia feeling her brothers pain from the death of their father placed her hand on lukes shoulder. That's when Luke's blood raged sith's eyes met with her's and they understood. That rather than let them hurt each other, their father, the dark lord of the sith. The man who had raised luke in the dark side, would understand that it was his choice to love them more than anything, and that he would do anything for them. And in that moment of clarity they both feel a presence moving something out of the fallen dark lord's robe. It was a holo disc with a message from their father on it. They both looked at each other then luke grabbed the disc and played the holo projector. It was their father speaking to them now. A man who was well versed in both the light and the dark side of the force. But the words he spoke were that of just a man to his two children. In the message Anakin/Vader described in many ways how he was proud of luke and what he accomplished, of what he would become. And in this holo message Vader also said things about leia. But leia thought, "how could this be possible if vader had not known of leia until now." But in the hologram Vader told them that he had known about leia for sometime now and that he could feel her power in the force as she grew stronger. He said that before luke had healed him fully, he had a vision of leia. A power which he thought he had lost due to the events on mustafar. But he was having visions of a young girl who was strong in the light side in the force. But also something about her was really familiar. And as his powers grew stronger his visions and connection to the girl grew immensely. Vader searched deep within the force and found out that leia was his daughter, and he knew that they would be reunited one day. As they listened to the holocron both of their force powers were settling and becoming more and more stable. And then Vader/Anakin told luke and leia that he had one final mission for them. They both looked confused as they think. "Together?". Vader/Anakin then tells them that he wants them to go to the coordinates that he left in this message. Saying that it was of extreme importance. And that they should stop the holo projector right there and when they get to the coordinates, and only then should they play the rest of this message. Luke and leia both look at each other extremely confused, but also resolute, as it was their father's last wish. Luke picks up Vader in his arms while leia carries both Obi wan and yoda's lifeless bodies with the force, and with absolute faith, love, and respect for their father climb in a shuttle and head off toward the coordinates their father left for them. As they arrive on Naboo, they feel a feeling of nostalgia wash over them, as if they had been here their whole life, like it was home, but neither had stepped foot on the planet before. They land the shuttle to the coordinates their father provided. Luke, still holding Vader/Anakin in his arms carried him out of the shuttle with leia behind him. They arrived in a eerie place, where a mausoleum/tomb was built reading padme amidala, both stunned and confused but walked towards the tomb. Opening it up they see coffin that lay inside, with a carving of a beautiful women in stone placed over the coffin. For some reason Vader's/Anakin's lifeless body had motion again and took the holo projector from Luke's chest. Luke exclaimed "Father!" Leia shocked at hearing luke's yell, as she her father's hand motion and use the force to place the projector on top of the grave in front of them. As the projector starts up the voice of anakin/vader could be heard through out the walls of the mausoleum. "This is your mother." The two's Face in utter shock as they couldn't believe that after all these years that they could finally meet their mother. The light of the hologram fades out they both use the force to push the top off their mother's grave, revealing a pristine Padme Amidala, their mother. Tears swelled in their eyes and ran down their face as they began to cry. Almost as if they could feel her soul and feel how much she cared for them and their father and the happiness they could have had if she lived. Luke lifted the now renewed anakin as leia gently shifted mother as Luke lowered anakin into her grave both of them, finally at rest, finally with each other. As on could not live without the other, now too in death they shall be together. Face to face their bodies laid, Luke gently adjusts anakins hands with the force as leia gracefully adjusted her mother's hand to fit in their fathers. *Flashback* while at the tomb at the end of the hologram, they get a picture of when their parents were married. *back to present* Luke and leia set their hands and bodies in the exact position they were married on naboo all those years ago. luke and leia lift the stone slab with the force to put it back over their grave, when they look down and see both their mother, and their father smiling.
I just feel like since anakin/vader could never get over his attachments, that, that was where his true power lied. In the attachment. So to Anakin/Vader, family and freedom were everything. So in the moment instead of choosing to let them kill each other, or let one kill the other, as they both went for the killing blow, anakin/vader in this moment, had reached his potential and had finally reached a state where he could use not just bits and pieces of the either side of the force, but chose just the force itself. As he was the chosen one, and it was his choices that defined what he became and what his children would or could become. So as he became one with the force he moved at speed faster than light. Almost if time had stood still for him. In this moment he felt every decision he ever made. From becoming a jedi and leaving his mom to turning to the dark side and becoming Vader. The power of the force coursing through his veins like lightning with the power of a supernova. I feel like having anakin/vader die is a must for this, because he loves his family more than anything else.
i loved this story i just didnt wish anakins children didnt die because i loved anakin and seeing him in pain once more even after getting his body back is heart breaking but im glad vaders old master paid the price for toying with the skywalkers 😭😭😭
Damn, even just over the last few months you've gotten so much better at the writing and presentation. You sound a lot more confident, and you should be. Congrats on 10k!
i like this. even tho luke is the most evil person there he still wont kill his father he has some people he cares about and thats a good villain also luke thinking that the jedi are weak because of their love for their companions kinda backfires because he would do the same if it was his father he needed to help
This is a story told, That!..rivals some of the top Star Wars author's! I only wish Lucas made your story into a Blockbuster!! Absolutely fantastic!! 👏👏👏👏👏
I was kind of sad that you hadn’t posted any videos lately. But this was DEFINITELY worth the wait! Your ‘what if’ videos are the best ones I’ve seen man 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Amazing story I loved the evolution of Darkside Luke and Lightside Leia. That was shocking deaths of both Luke and Leia. Thank you and congratulations on over 10k subscribers.
This is so amazing, I’m not even through the whole thing yet but has almost brought me to tears *spoiler* when the ghost crew as well as Ashoka was killed. Was heart wrenching.
What if Anakin became Yaddle's apprentice? What if Anakin was Yarael Poof's apprentice? What if Jedi Coleman Trebor killed Dooku in Attack of the Clones?
Dooku could have thought jango would handle it but jango was focused on the design of the droids thinking could my clones handle this and dooku doesn’t know so he dies
@@averagelegomanfilms5799 I only recognize a couple of those names. Oh, wait, Yaddle is that Yoda-looking dude in one of the Prequels, right? So that's three.
I draw and sell anime stickers and I listen to your videos and literally just spent 1 hour and 40 minutes drawing and painting a maid from overlord and it felt like nothing thanks for helping pass the time and reading me a good bedtime story lol just subscribed and loving the stories they are definitely better than the movies that are currently out
Awesome. But not what I hopped for also. I can say it's always that way though,-- as life may not be what you hopped would happen for you or others. I'm always for the fall guy at time it seems,-- ... and even though many may say Vader wasn't the fall guy I believe he was very much so. But the story was very good indeed and one that kept me coming back to see the end at last. Well done my man.
thank you Star Wars Pente patrol like you put so much effort into every single video for us so I and I think a lot of other people thank you for that so yeah thank you
Damn this was a 10k special that’s crazy to think this channel in the span of a year is now almost at 75K well on the road to 100k well played PPSW Well done it’s greatly deserved stuff like this hasn’t been seen since Theory’s older videos in 2016-2017. The Roman earth in Star Wars series is probably my personal favourite. Keep it up can’t wait for the moment you reach 100K
Nice to see your channel is growing so fast! I subscribed not very long ago when if I recall you had around 4k subs. You deserve it man, and great work on the fan fic as always!
Luke and Mara probably became a thing much earlier in this than the Prime Timeline or personally, I think Sith Luke and Juno Eclipse would make a good pair.
This was fantastic! You should consider making two alternate endings. One where Luke Anakin and leia return of the Jedi. And then one where Luke either kills or Aniken hast to choose which kid he has to kill to save the other
Bro that was honestly some super fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 way better then those last three movies, you deserve an Oscar for that amazing writing. I felt like I was watching as you were reading 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
I feel like Luke would eventually find dathomir and pull out its secrets. If he could find Darth Zana's holocron and learn her sith sorcery he would be even more powerful
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Not gonna lie i cant figure out how to open that document fml
This was an amazing story.
This is the best Star Wars video I’ve ever seen
Keep it up!😀
Another great what if!
I can’t seem to write my name into the Google doc? What should I do? I really don’t want to miss out
I wrote my name on using the app, but when I checked using my browser it didn’t show up
The amount of pain Kenobi would’ve felt seeing the homestead crushed would’ve been devastating
This was also a great fanfiction. The idea of Luke and Vader ruling side by side was cool. Despite that they were both Siths that still loved each other as father and son. It bought me great joy knowing they tortured Palpatine for his transgressions and fixed Vader's cybernetics. Luke was that guy.
P.S. Leia looked gorgeous in those outfits especially the one with the upgraded padme drip.
Thank you so much!
Yeah Anakin and Luke both still have that small fragment of light side even when they have become sith lords. 😇
@@errebusaether it is ironic. However, you must remember that Anakin didn’t turn to the dark side because he wanted power or greed. He did it for Padmé, for his child, he did it for love. The reason he became Vader was because of love. So the two acting as father and son and having a loving relationship with each other isn’t too far fetched.
Bro this was legit the best Star Wars story I’ve heard in a long time and is clearly your best work to date. I look forward to the incredible stories in the future.
Thank you so much!
This should be adopted as a Alternate timeline by Star Wars lol
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This is probably one of the best star wars stories I've heard in a long time, I look forward for more great stories
Thank you so much!
Better story than the movie's
When Luke killed the ghost crew I legit got shivers, really thought they would get away 😪
Nah they became ghosts Fr
@@icepop_ytl1421 Lol
Disney should do a “what if” starwars series with little hour long episodes like this and have this guy write them. Love all your vids man
:))) Thank you so much!
That’s what I was thinking too
Disney isn't capable of making good star wars decisions anymore so it wouldn't happen
Star Wars should be taken away from Disney.
Disney would just ruin it.
Easily the best what if Vader raised Luke I've ever seen, and the humanity mixed with sith inhumanity was genius! But how'd they die in the ending, did no one know force healing, or any other high level force techniques?
Thank you so much, and I see force heal as a light side ability and not something an evil Anakin could do
@@PentePatrolStarWars That, makes sense actually, what about Dark essence though?
@@fatefulbrawl5838 I think maybe he wasn't taught it or learned the technique but idk it's his story
I like how you gave Luke the serial killer trait of collecting trophies. It gives an extra layer of creepiness to his character
This is "impressive most impressive"
The detail is beyond measure...thy dark side story of Luke Skywalker is complete. He has Become a Sith Lord like his father before him.
Thank you so much!
That do be true tho
Dear god, old video but listening to luke absolutely dismantle the ghost crew + Ahsoka was both terrifying and horrifying at the same time. Massive props
I deeply enjoyed this, I like seeing Sith having a dark side relationship yet not entirely wicked and meant to end in betrayal
Yes!! The dark side, per Lucas' own words, is selfishness. Not inherent evil just giving over to one's selfish desires. Anakin's driving force behind his turn was his love for Padme, so it would make sense that a Luke raised in darkness would similarly love his father. Hell, his attempt to return his father to his original potential could be seen as pride in his own bloodline, a selfish act not one borne of compassion. Yet again, great job man. Also thank you for not trying to mimic anyone's voice, I'm happy I can listen to this out loud in the living room without feeling cringe as fuck when my roommate walks in as a bad Yoda impression comes on lmao.
It was a selfless act
@@DarthVader-bz8nq No it’s still a selfish act, because it benefits him and the Skywalker family to be more powerful and have a tighter grip on the galaxy
@@enriqueperezarce5485 yea but selfish is just for yourself it might be a bit selfish but also a bit selfless
This is my second favorite what if from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Really well done story. Felt like a audiobook with the amount of details and quality. Love how this is a extreme version of Vader and Luke ruling the Galaxy as Dark Sith Gods. Love this and your creative use of the Force.
Probably listened to or watched this 6-7 times now at least, love to throw it on in the background.
There's not enough what if stories featuring a full potential dark side Luke or anakin, and taking your time with this one did it really well! Probably my favorite Luke related what if on RUclips right now. Speaking of, I'd love to see your take on either
"What if Anakin visited Mortis early?" (the fun part is depending on when you decide, the result vastly changes depending on your interpretation) or
"What if plagueis killed sidious?" in which sidious tries to kill his master before he's fallen asleep, while he's less inebriated, and he turns the tables.
I'm interested in this one because the two sith lords had comparable potential, but did things very differently and held unique philosophies. Their initial disagreement on the subject of anakin is a good example, I just like to imagine this would change a ton. With plagueis pulling the Strings instead, maybe the clone wars don't even happen, or maybe they're very different. Sounds fun to me!
Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it! And those would both respectfully be a lot of fun to do!
I think the most satisfying part of this story is all the times Sideous was helpless against Luke.
That was actually an incredible story. But I feel like Vader at the ending would have used force speed to go between the two blades of his children and die in their place, as both Anakin and Vader. I feel like his death would have been enough for luke to go to the light side more and since leia had used the dark side, she would understand that Vader, or her father was not evil, but it was his choices, that put him in that suit and his choices that made luke a sith, and his choices is what lead to the death of so many others. and in the moment in which they saw their fathers body drop to the floor. Luke, the perfect Sith, with his eyes piercing yellow eyes reflected a blue color. As he looked into his fathers eyes, which were no longer their sith yellow. Luke held his Father in his arms, not as Vader or Anakin, but as his father. Leia realizing what they had just done she felt conflicted and saddened by her fathers death, both Light and Dark Side filling her. She looked up at luke and could feel the pain and sadness emanating from him. As not the dark side or the light, but just the force filled his almost crazed screams for his father. Leia feeling her brothers pain from the death of their father placed her hand on lukes shoulder. That's when Luke's blood raged sith's eyes met with her's and they understood. That rather than let them hurt each other, their father, the dark lord of the sith. The man who had raised luke in the dark side, would understand that it was his choice to love them more than anything, and that he would do anything for them. And in that moment of clarity they both feel a presence moving something out of the fallen dark lord's robe. It was a holo disc with a message from their father on it. They both looked at each other then luke grabbed the disc and played the holo projector. It was their father speaking to them now. A man who was well versed in both the light and the dark side of the force. But the words he spoke were that of just a man to his two children. In the message Anakin/Vader described in many ways how he was proud of luke and what he accomplished, of what he would become. And in this holo message Vader also said things about leia. But leia thought, "how could this be possible if vader had not known of leia until now." But in the hologram Vader told them that he had known about leia for sometime now and that he could feel her power in the force as she grew stronger. He said that before luke had healed him fully, he had a vision of leia. A power which he thought he had lost due to the events on mustafar. But he was having visions of a young girl who was strong in the light side in the force. But also something about her was really familiar. And as his powers grew stronger his visions and connection to the girl grew immensely. Vader searched deep within the force and found out that leia was his daughter, and he knew that they would be reunited one day. As they listened to the holocron both of their force powers were settling and becoming more and more stable. And then Vader/Anakin told luke and leia that he had one final mission for them. They both looked confused as they think. "Together?". Vader/Anakin then tells them that he wants them to go to the coordinates that he left in this message. Saying that it was of extreme importance. And that they should stop the holo projector right there and when they get to the coordinates, and only then should they play the rest of this message. Luke and leia both look at each other extremely confused, but also resolute, as it was their father's last wish. Luke picks up Vader in his arms while leia carries both Obi wan and yoda's lifeless bodies with the force, and with absolute faith, love, and respect for their father climb in a shuttle and head off toward the coordinates their father left for them. As they arrive on Naboo, they feel a feeling of nostalgia wash over them, as if they had been here their whole life, like it was home, but neither had stepped foot on the planet before. They land the shuttle to the coordinates their father provided. Luke, still holding Vader/Anakin in his arms carried him out of the shuttle with leia behind him. They arrived in a eerie place, where a mausoleum/tomb was built reading padme amidala, both stunned and confused but walked towards the tomb. Opening it up they see coffin that lay inside, with a carving of a beautiful women in stone placed over the coffin. For some reason Vader's/Anakin's lifeless body had motion again and took the holo projector from Luke's chest. Luke exclaimed "Father!" Leia shocked at hearing luke's yell, as she her father's hand motion and use the force to place the projector on top of the grave in front of them. As the projector starts up the voice of anakin/vader could be heard through out the walls of the mausoleum. "This is your mother." The two's Face in utter shock as they couldn't believe that after all these years that they could finally meet their mother. The light of the hologram fades out they both use the force to push the top off their mother's grave, revealing a pristine Padme Amidala, their mother. Tears swelled in their eyes and ran down their face as they began to cry. Almost as if they could feel her soul and feel how much she cared for them and their father and the happiness they could have had if she lived. Luke lifted the now renewed anakin as leia gently shifted mother as Luke lowered anakin into her grave both of them, finally at rest, finally with each other. As on could not live without the other, now too in death they shall be together. Face to face their bodies laid, Luke gently adjusts anakins hands with the force as leia gracefully adjusted her mother's hand to fit in their fathers. *Flashback* while at the tomb at the end of the hologram, they get a picture of when their parents were married. *back to present* Luke and leia set their hands and bodies in the exact position they were married on naboo all those years ago. luke and leia lift the stone slab with the force to put it back over their grave, when they look down and see both their mother, and their father smiling.
I just feel like since anakin/vader could never get over his attachments, that, that was where his true power lied. In the attachment. So to Anakin/Vader, family and freedom were everything. So in the moment instead of choosing to let them kill each other, or let one kill the other, as they both went for the killing blow, anakin/vader in this moment, had reached his potential and had finally reached a state where he could use not just bits and pieces of the either side of the force, but chose just the force itself. As he was the chosen one, and it was his choices that defined what he became and what his children would or could become. So as he became one with the force he moved at speed faster than light. Almost if time had stood still for him. In this moment he felt every decision he ever made. From becoming a jedi and leaving his mom to turning to the dark side and becoming Vader. The power of the force coursing through his veins like lightning with the power of a supernova. I feel like having anakin/vader die is a must for this, because he loves his family more than anything else.
this is extremely underated comment, this would be perfect happy ending
@@benuherka8709 thanks man, I have other Ideas about other stuff too, I was thinking of starting a channel making fan fictions. Should I?
@@medicinerf9514 With ideas like these? Yea go for it, I will give you a sub in advance
This needs a “ too long didnt read” legit
I personally think this is one of your best stories, I enjoyed the bitter-sweet ending, and the pacing was great
Absolutely incredible fan fiction! And congrats on 10k!!! You 100% deserve it!👍👍
Thank you so much!
@@PentePatrolStarWars hi again
@@PentePatrolStarWars you deserve that 10k
The was the best alternate/reimagined star wars story I have heard/watch keep up the great work.
A dark yet beautiful story.
Thank you so much!
Luke: Dad, I have a girlfriend!
Vader: Who?
Luke: Mara Jade!
Vader: ...
Luke: Dad?
Vader: "YOU ARE GETTING WITH HOT WOMEN TOO! THAT'S MY BOY!
Lol 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Lol
LOL that so funny 🤣 oh my god I kinda wish that happened in what if
i loved this story i just didnt wish anakins children didnt die because i loved anakin and seeing him in pain once more even after getting his body back is heart breaking but im glad vaders old master paid the price for toying with the skywalkers 😭😭😭
Thank you so much! And yes the tragedy of Anakin 😭
This really went a direction I never expected, but in the best way!!! You did such a good job!
I appreciate all the work it takes to put out quality stories like these. Thanks
Thank you so much!
The death of the specters was heartbreaking. You're a masterful writer
Truly and thank you so much!
Damn, even just over the last few months you've gotten so much better at the writing and presentation. You sound a lot more confident, and you should be. Congrats on 10k!
Thank you so much!
Over 16k now, and it’s only been a month!
This is honestly one of the best what ifs you've ever done
So many truly epic stories from this channel. What if Plagueis lived a rlly long time and has plots playing out over centuries?
Thank you so much!
I’ve been listen to your videos all deployment and I haven’t been disappointed, great job on reaching 10k
I'm glad they've been able to give you entertainment! Thank you for your service!
You managed to draw a scary dark side to Luke what could’ve easily been had things happened differently.
By far the best Star Wars fan-fic creator right now love the effort you put into these stories unlike any other keep up the good work
So, in the end, there was balance. A very good story. I haven't the words to express my awe and admiration. So, I will simply say "thank you".
This is my absolute favorite version of Luke the way he hoed the emperor felt so Good
The fact that we have SOMEHOW let this man have ONLY 50,000 subs is nothing short of an actual felony.
In the words of Kylo Ren
"MORE!"
I love that as soon as the fight between Obi-Wan and Anakin starts, Duel of the fates starts to play in the background
Ong, this was legit. This was the Star Wars story we deserved
I've got a new what if idea. What if Pong Krell killed Rex and became Dooku's assasin? Republic could start losing and Anakin would want revenge?
When I sent you this idea, I hadn't expected you to go this route, but I'm not complaining. This was awesome, good work.
:) Thank you so much!
i like this. even tho luke is the most evil person there he still wont kill his father he has some people he cares about and thats a good villain also luke thinking that the jedi are weak because of their love for their companions kinda backfires because he would do the same if it was his father he needed to help
This is a story told, That!..rivals some of the top Star Wars author's! I only wish Lucas made your story into a Blockbuster!! Absolutely fantastic!! 👏👏👏👏👏
Thank you so much!
Actually one of the best Star Wars stories I’ve every heard. I hope this can be adapted into a movie.
I’ve watched quite a few of your fan fics in the past week or so, and this is by far my favourite.
Thank you so much!
Anakin was the fishlord who destroyed Sleemo. Kenobi, later Palpatine, pampered a sandbox ruggarized Octopus.
I was kind of sad that you hadn’t posted any videos lately. But this was DEFINITELY worth the wait! Your ‘what if’ videos are the best ones I’ve seen man 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed!
To be honest this is quite accurate, if this actually happened it would probably play out something like this
This was so good! Love the content can’t wait for the next theory! Keep up the great work!
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I ❤️ to see this turned into a movie. Great job you deserve a break.
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Amazing story I loved the evolution of Darkside Luke and Lightside Leia. That was shocking deaths of both Luke and Leia. Thank you and congratulations on over 10k subscribers.
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This is so amazing, I’m not even through the whole thing yet but has almost brought me to tears *spoiler* when the ghost crew as well as Ashoka was killed. Was heart wrenching.
I'm glad you enjoyed :))
What if Anakin became Yaddle's apprentice? What if Anakin was Yarael Poof's apprentice? What if Jedi Coleman Trebor killed Dooku in Attack of the Clones?
Dooku could have thought jango would handle it but jango was focused on the design of the droids thinking could my clones handle this and dooku doesn’t know so he dies
Who??
@@ElveeKaye who what ?
@@averagelegomanfilms5799 I only recognize a couple of those names. Oh, wait, Yaddle is that Yoda-looking dude in one of the Prequels, right? So that's three.
@@ElveeKaye yes grogu yoda addle but you forgot the fourth in rise of skywalker
This was one the best what ifs about Star Wars I’ve ever heard
This is perfect for my work day. Thanks for the effort you put in these videos. Your powers are doubling with unlimited powerahhhh!!!
I'm glad you get to enjoy them!
Best Star Wars story I’ve heard thank you for sharing
Death squad 13 slaughtered: Me: Nah you guys are just killing our favourite death trooper squad.
What if Lord Momins Mask was found and put on by a Clone Trooper?. Now there is a "What if?"...
Channel deserves more views awesome story
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The fact this got posted on my birthday
It’s awesome to see yourself grow as well as your channel. Awesome job
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That was great man. Thank you.
Luke: *casually dicing up rebels*
WOW THIS IS AMAZING FOR ONCE VADER IS BEING A GREAT DAD
We love it
I draw and sell anime stickers and I listen to your videos and literally just spent 1 hour and 40 minutes drawing and painting a maid from overlord and it felt like nothing thanks for helping pass the time and reading me a good bedtime story lol just subscribed and loving the stories they are definitely better than the movies that are currently out
If you keep the content up like you have and the fast release dates, you will grow exponentially. Congrats.
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16:18 (turn on captions) I had a heart attack for a second there I thought you had made it that Rex had joined the empire and he was dead
Each and every one of your what ifs are amazing truly love it keep it up man
Your videos are amazing keep up the great work bro
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Aloha!
Great "what if"!
Sooo Starwars'esk!! So much hope followed with so much tragedy. Shakespeare bra. Well done. I loved it♡
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Awesome. But not what I hopped for also. I can say it's always that way though,-- as life may not be what you hopped would happen for you or others. I'm always for the fall guy at time it seems,-- ... and even though many may say Vader wasn't the fall guy I believe he was very much so. But the story was very good indeed and one that kept me coming back to see the end at last. Well done my man.
thank you Star Wars Pente patrol like you put so much effort into every single video for us so I and I think a lot of other people thank you for that so yeah thank you
Another great what if would be what if Anakin fell in love with Dutchess Satine or her sister
That sounds nice
The spear and wall gag was great.
Damn this was a 10k special that’s crazy to think this channel in the span of a year is now almost at 75K well on the road to 100k well played PPSW Well done it’s greatly deserved stuff like this hasn’t been seen since Theory’s older videos in 2016-2017. The Roman earth in Star Wars series is probably my personal favourite.
Keep it up can’t wait for the moment you reach 100K
Man, the wait was so well worth it
Good! :)
This was an amazing story, I look forward to listening to the rest.
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Your star wars nerd card has been revoked for killing ahsoka
This story was genuinely beautiful!
Really F**king enjoying these . Nicely done \m/
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Nice to see your channel is growing so fast! I subscribed not very long ago when if I recall you had around 4k subs. You deserve it man, and great work on the fan fic as always!
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this is one of the best fanfics I have ever seen
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Luke and Mara probably became a thing much earlier in this than the Prime Timeline or personally, I think Sith Luke and Juno Eclipse would make a good pair.
That was incredible dude, brovo
The best RUclips channel ever u deserve way more than 10 k man ur the best
Thank you so much
Darth Zoon would've been a better name because Zoon is Son in Dutch and Vader is Father in Dutch. More fitting imo
We need a full length movie of this
Although the story is great, luke taking on the name of vader but backwards is so silly. If anybody noticed, wouldn't that be so suspicious?
God for taking 6 days you wrote a damn good story.
Bro did not have to do ahsoka like that😭😭
And that was a really good story I really enjoyed it big big ups and kudos to you... 🤘🏽🤘🏽😎
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incredible story !! some of your best work. love it and excited for the next fan fic
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WOW!!! Amazing work and one of the greatest stories I have heard. U are an amazing writer and story teller. Keep up the great work can’t wait for more
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I liked it You blew my mind never thought of it that way
This was fantastic! You should consider making two alternate endings. One where Luke Anakin and leia return of the Jedi. And then one where Luke either kills or Aniken hast to choose which kid he has to kill to save the other
Bro that was honestly some super fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 way better then those last three movies, you deserve an Oscar for that amazing writing. I felt like I was watching as you were reading 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Congrats on hitting 10K bro
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I feel like Luke would eventually find dathomir and pull out its secrets. If he could find Darth Zana's holocron and learn her sith sorcery he would be even more powerful
me think to myself " oh, cool. boba Fett isn't sarlacc chow." " Vader and Luke got rid of the Hutt clan." Me- "oh....oh no....."
This was truly heartbreaking.
I love your videos! These are better than most fanfics other youtubers make about star wars and I love it! Keep it up!
Thank you so much!