How to Write a Good Thesis Statement

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  • Опубликовано: 16 окт 2024

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  • @MariaVargas-yk3wm
    @MariaVargas-yk3wm 4 месяца назад +2

    the way you speak is very clear and it really helped me stay focused during the video, also , the information is really easy to understand, it really helped me with my college writing class material.

  • @liontweedle
    @liontweedle 4 года назад +10

    Clear and concise, your voice holds attention. Thank you.

  • @cherylhartnett6887
    @cherylhartnett6887 4 года назад +4

    Thank you, Dr. Hamilton. Your presentations reinforce what I've said in many of my classes. I teach Composition I for freshmen and I appreciate this very much.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад

      Hi Cheryl, thanks for letting me know that you found this video to be helpful! :)

  • @natty-v5y
    @natty-v5y 7 месяцев назад

    Thank you very much. As esl student. Your videos are so helpful to me. You speak clearly, slowly. Giving examples. Explain things using simple word. Please do more videos like this. I love all your work. Thank you.

  • @alessandro3867
    @alessandro3867 4 месяца назад

    This was an excellent explanation of making a thesis statement. I'm sure that following your advice, I'm going to do great in my class. So, thanks a lot for the video!

  • @theodorewilliams2023
    @theodorewilliams2023 2 года назад +1

    A thesis has been throughly been explained to me better than ever before thank you very much

  • @IngleezyTasisMinAlsifr
    @IngleezyTasisMinAlsifr 5 лет назад +6

    Thank you, thank you, thank you. I watched tens of videos on the topic, but I seemed to understand nothing, until I found this video. Thank you ♥️.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 лет назад +2

      Hi Achuil, I'm glad you found me! Thanks for your lovely comment. :)

  • @KEVO221
    @KEVO221 3 года назад +3

    Thank you so much, is so easy to learn thanks to the flow of your voice thank you

  • @MehediHasan-ul6ov
    @MehediHasan-ul6ov 6 лет назад +19

    Thanks a lot..it has just turned all my confusions and questions to answers

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 лет назад

      শঙ্খচিল (Shonkhochil) Hello! I'm so glad you understand now! Thanks for watching. :)

  • @chenluj9894
    @chenluj9894 5 лет назад +3

    After watching so many videos about essays, only this really helps!

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 лет назад

      I am so glad you found what you needed in this video. :)

  • @andresacebedo6431
    @andresacebedo6431 3 месяца назад

    im going to be for real i didint know that a thesis stament is used on writing i never knew as a student but know it helps me to understand the importance of it. Keep up the content is very reat and specific. 👍

  • @blancalongoria7677
    @blancalongoria7677 4 года назад +3

    Hello Professor Hampton,
    I really enjoyed your video, I saw many videos but only yours was concise and to the point. Your voice is so soothing and invites the listener and viewer to stay tuned. I think Morgan Freeman should be worried..:)
    Best

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад +3

      Hi Blanca, thank you so much! I'm reading your comment at work, and I am absolutely delighted. Yes, maybe I can get some voice over work and make lots of money like Morgan Freeman. 😁😊😄

  • @watsonholmes3703
    @watsonholmes3703 6 лет назад +5

    I'm going to watch your every video. I'm starved to get my hands on this type of instruction.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 лет назад +1

      Hi there! Thank you so much for watching my videos! You will certainly learn a lot. Good luck! :)

  • @jaisonfrancisco3732
    @jaisonfrancisco3732 7 лет назад +4

    Ms Ashan, you're one of my favorite lecturers.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 лет назад +1

      Hello Jaizon. Wow, thanks so much. I hope my current students feel the same as you! :)

  • @sashannadavis4340
    @sashannadavis4340 5 лет назад +3

    THANK YOU!!! My son needs help and you helped him alot.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 лет назад

      That's so good to hear! Thanks for letting me know. 😊

  • @aliceflowers5966
    @aliceflowers5966 5 лет назад +3

    Accurate finally just the way my lecturer teaches this topic

  • @jackienuttall4107
    @jackienuttall4107 5 лет назад +4

    Thank you so much for bringing such clarity to my understanding of
    a thesis!

  • @catherinebinayan8563
    @catherinebinayan8563 4 года назад +1

    The best explanation so far specially for younger writers.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад

      Thanks, I appreciate that!

    • @catherinebinayan8563
      @catherinebinayan8563 4 года назад

      @@profarhampton Ma'am, how about a video of how to write a research essay introduction of an opinion essay for any controversial topic today? Most instructuonal vidoes just talk theoretucally without showing how it is actually done

  • @warfme2567
    @warfme2567 4 года назад +2

    this was SUCH a good video. Im in high school and I got a 100% on my thesis thanks to you. You are my FAVORITE RUclips ever!! I am going into the army national guard so the thesis might not help that much but thanks anyway! :P Keep up the good work. lol I'm using my little bros account.

    • @warfme2567
      @warfme2567 4 года назад

      btw I would just like to hope you comment

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад

      Sorry, I'm just seeing this comment, but I'm glad you found this video helpful. :)

  • @philippebeaulieu851
    @philippebeaulieu851 4 года назад +2

    This video is really good and very clear

  • @leannestauss2955
    @leannestauss2955 4 года назад +1

    Excellent! Thorough and succinct at the same time. Very clear explanation.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад

      I am honored by your comment. Thanks!

  • @sulaymanlecturerdarboe472
    @sulaymanlecturerdarboe472 3 года назад +1

    Thank you for this powerful and helpful guide.

  • @ilianadiaz9977
    @ilianadiaz9977 Месяц назад

    What a great video!!

  • @nwenwekhin1932
    @nwenwekhin1932 5 лет назад +2

    Thanks a lot. It is very clear and helpful.

  • @조권준-z7d
    @조권준-z7d 2 года назад +1

    omg! you are very helpful
    my sir`s homework is too hard

  • @jenniebaez6947
    @jenniebaez6947 4 года назад +3

    Will this work for a GED extended response? I am trying to learn how to write a response for my test. I need to learn how to start the topic and body of the essay for an argumentative response.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад

      Jennie, so sorry that I'm just seeing this, but my videos on the writing process and on the argument/persuasive essay show you how to get started.

  • @profarhampton
    @profarhampton  8 лет назад +3

    Hi there! Try this video on academic writing: ruclips.net/video/gKo9DaoEt5I/видео.html. Also visit our website for our new grammar book and editing services: www.easyedits.net. Thanks for watching! :)

  • @SuperDj2000
    @SuperDj2000 Год назад +1

    Thank you so much! 🙏🏽

  • @aharafHossain
    @aharafHossain 7 лет назад +5

    more of these videos please .....subscribed . 👍

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 лет назад

      Yes, I will do that, and thanks for watching! :)

  • @MsHantubelau
    @MsHantubelau 3 года назад +1

    Oh I love her voice

  • @isabelsakura2420
    @isabelsakura2420 2 года назад +1

    Thank you.🌹🙏

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  2 года назад

      You're welcome. Thanks for watching!

  • @manelkhelfaoui5719
    @manelkhelfaoui5719 4 года назад +1

    Ommg i wish my teacher explaned the lesson like you thanks a lot for this amazing explanation it really helped me i'm looking forward for another lesson see u :)

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад

      Thank you so much for your kind words!

  • @DDavis-mi2cg
    @DDavis-mi2cg 6 лет назад +6

    Love your voice and guidance. Thanks!

  • @yasmensafi2260
    @yasmensafi2260 6 лет назад +3

    Hi please can you help me ? I have to analyze and write an essay the poem (On being brought from Africa to America) can you give me a good thesis statement to this poem?? and I’m sorry if I have mistakes ☺️

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 лет назад

      Hi Yasmen, first you need to decide what theme you will examine in your essay. I believe this poem is by Phyllis Wheatley. An example might be, "In the poem, "On being brought from Africa to America," Phyllis Wheatley expresses feelings of emotional and physical loss of self and culture." Hope that helps!

    • @yasmensafi2260
      @yasmensafi2260 6 лет назад +1

      Ashan R. Hampton really thank you so much .

  • @sadiobayne1642
    @sadiobayne1642 6 лет назад +4

    This was very helpful. Thank you.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 лет назад

      Good deal! I'm glad the video helped. :)

  • @jadarig2542
    @jadarig2542 6 лет назад +3

    this is so good keep doing what you do

  • @rubabbaloch5759
    @rubabbaloch5759 5 лет назад +1

    Thanks a lot mam... It's really helpful for me...

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 лет назад +2

      Awesome, thanks for watching! 😊

    • @rubabbaloch5759
      @rubabbaloch5759 5 лет назад +1

      And keep doing such work for the benefit of beginners.

  • @moes.d6548
    @moes.d6548 4 года назад +1

    Thank you this is great explanation

  • @nx97i17
    @nx97i17 3 года назад +1

    Hi, I have a question does the thesis statement come before or after the topic sentence?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  3 года назад +1

      Hi there, a topic sentence is the first line of a paragraph. A thesis is usually the last line of the introduction for a full student essay.

    • @nx97i17
      @nx97i17 3 года назад

      @@profarhampton oh I get it now, thank you so much for your quick respond 🥺💗💗

  • @toasterstrudelx2687
    @toasterstrudelx2687 4 года назад +1

    Thanks this video helped

  • @kennedyoloo7370
    @kennedyoloo7370 7 лет назад +1

    Hi Ms Ashan, my lecturer asks me to write an essay on the pros and cons of hybrid cars, which theis will be good for my paper

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 лет назад +1

      Hi Kennedy, Use the 3 point thesis statement. You need to come up with three areas that you can compare both cars on such as gas mileage, affordability...and think of one more! Watch my video on comparison/contrast essays. Good luck! :)

  • @melaniefuifui1802
    @melaniefuifui1802 6 лет назад +2

    How can you write a thesis statement for a self introduction speech?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 лет назад +2

      Hi Melanie, a thesis is for essays and research reports. Speeches are different. Speeches usually begin with a thought provoking question or quote. You should choose one of those openings that is meaningful to you and fits your personality. Hope that helps. Good luck!

    • @melaniefuifui1802
      @melaniefuifui1802 6 лет назад +1

      Ashan R. Hampton thanks so much

  • @watsonholmes3703
    @watsonholmes3703 6 лет назад +2

    I just subscribed to your channel I'm looking for help. I was wondering if I may submit a question privately related to education and professors.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 года назад

      Hi Waston, I am so sorry that I'm just seeing this comment. Hopefully your situation was resolved. Thanks for watching!

  • @chantellstallworth4637
    @chantellstallworth4637 6 лет назад +2

    Hi i need all the help i can get on how to do a thesis statement

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 лет назад

      Hi Chantell Stallworth, did the video help? Do you have specific questions the video didn't cover? Let me know.

    • @Nadeen76
      @Nadeen76 6 лет назад +1

      Do we put an opposite view in thesis statement ?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 лет назад +3

      Hello Nanoosh, no, do not include an opposite view in the thesis. The thesis should prepare the reader for the subject and points of your essay. Your essay should focus on one point of view. You would only mention an opposing viewpoint in the concluding paragraphs of an argument essay. Thanks for your question!

  • @dheverma
    @dheverma 7 лет назад +1

    its really Helpful.

  • @dooshimagbahabo2533
    @dooshimagbahabo2533 4 года назад +1

    Thanks, apt

  • @lydiabrown3723
    @lydiabrown3723 5 лет назад +1

    HELLO, good video!

  • @shinaayomiawolola8773
    @shinaayomiawolola8773 5 лет назад

    Thanks