Instantly added, my one nitpick is in the final chorus/verse where you sing “break of dawn” it feels like “break of day” is right there and it fits the rhyme scheme. Still, this goes right on the playlist, can’t wait to check out some of your other stuff!
@@bachirafan97 i originally went with break of day but changed it because it just didn’t feel right in the mindset i was in when i wrote it, if that makes any sense? regardless, i’m glad you liked it!!
In the cover art the singer is holding the microphone with both hands, so it would be fairly reasonable to have 6-8 fingers visible. Its good to be vigilant against AI, but humans are not perfect artists either. That being said, this song sounds great!
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Good song!
Loved the song very cool. Changijg the speed to 0.75/0.85 i think makes it more atmospheric and good. Loved it. Adding to my playlist
Instantly added, my one nitpick is in the final chorus/verse where you sing “break of dawn” it feels like “break of day” is right there and it fits the rhyme scheme. Still, this goes right on the playlist, can’t wait to check out some of your other stuff!
@@bachirafan97 i originally went with break of day but changed it because it just didn’t feel right in the mindset i was in when i wrote it, if that makes any sense? regardless, i’m glad you liked it!!
Wow this is really good!! the lyrics fit the instrument very well!! i also like how the instrument sound alot
This is pretty good, if it was on Spotify, It'd go on my playlist.
However, the cover art, the singer has six fingers.
Spooky.
haha i just now noticed that
In the cover art the singer is holding the microphone with both hands, so it would be fairly reasonable to have 6-8 fingers visible. Its good to be vigilant against AI, but humans are not perfect artists either.
That being said, this song sounds great!
This is great!
thank ya thank ya
cool song,just find out about you i'll check the rest of your music,keep on.
Not bad, but the art leaves a little to be desired.
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