Biggest Mistakes New Fantasy Authors Make...Terrible Writing Advice

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  • Опубликовано: 31 окт 2024

Комментарии • 19

  • @zekethefreakmashingupgeek
    @zekethefreakmashingupgeek 7 месяцев назад +9

    This video had me laughing out loud often. Not many RUclips videos do that to me intentionally. Thank you for that.

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  6 месяцев назад +2

      Thank you for the kind words, @zekethefreakmashingupgeek. Honestly, it means a lot. (Though it does make me feel about guilty about constantly leaving negative, hateful comments on almost every single video I watch on RUclips.)

  • @futurestoryteller
    @futurestoryteller 6 месяцев назад +1

    You forgot "having a female protagonist who is as boring and overpowered as a typical male protagonist"

  • @lainiwakura3741
    @lainiwakura3741 3 месяца назад

    Maybe I'm part of the problem, but the last one doesn't need to be a bad thing. Mushoku Tensei feels a bit like that but it's still pretty great. It's definitely way better than something like Wheel of Time where the first book (it's the only one I read and only half way through) constantly feels like the real story will start over there, but right now we need to edge the reader for like another 400 pages. Then again, I would never recommend Mushoku Tensei to a normal person, they'd probably never talk to me again if I did..

  • @dusktheowlgryphon
    @dusktheowlgryphon 7 месяцев назад +1

    My fantasy story Entropy is basically a cosmic/psychological/eldritch horror story tied with M theory and various fantasy and horror elements. I'm a big fan of horror and it shows.

    • @JeetKunDrawYT
      @JeetKunDrawYT 7 месяцев назад

      hey, have you mentioned entropy at TimeTinkerer's?

    • @dusktheowlgryphon
      @dusktheowlgryphon 7 месяцев назад

      @@JeetKunDrawYT I don't remember that

    • @JeetKunDrawYT
      @JeetKunDrawYT 7 месяцев назад

      @@dusktheowlgryphon what about localscript man💀

    • @dusktheowlgryphon
      @dusktheowlgryphon 7 месяцев назад

      Never heard of that

    • @JeetKunDrawYT
      @JeetKunDrawYT 7 месяцев назад

      @@dusktheowlgryphon dang
      but I'm sure I've read about entropy in a comment somewhere

  • @angreagach
    @angreagach 7 месяцев назад +1

    "Tarraing mo liathróidí" means "pull my balls" in Irish, as if you didn't know. (The kind I think you mean are "magairlí," not "liathróidí." "My balls" would be "mo mhagairlí," since the beginnings as well as the endings of Irish words are often subject to change.)

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  6 месяцев назад +2

      The real comment's always in the comments. Learn something new every day. At least now I won't make a fool of myself the next time I'm with an Irish prostitute. Thanks for watching, @angreagach.

  • @myboatforacar
    @myboatforacar 7 месяцев назад +2

    Wait... are you... THAT John Lazarus?

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  7 месяцев назад +10

      The serial killer who had sex with all those dead bodies? No, that's not me, though I think he might be a distant cousin. Thanks for watching, @myboatforacar.

  • @JeetKunDrawYT
    @JeetKunDrawYT 7 месяцев назад

    I'm working on doing my lore/worldbuilding exposition only when it matter to a character
    e.g. I make exposition about how humans subjugate them other fantasy species by having an elf use it to convince bounty hunters that her bounty is basically just racism, and not because she actually did anything wrong

  • @judycyg6912
    @judycyg6912 6 месяцев назад

    Laugh out loud funny as it informs. Well done!

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  6 месяцев назад

      Thanks for the kind words, @judycyg6912.