To My Valentine, My Partner in Crime │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • Опубликовано: 5 сен 2024
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Комментарии • 42

  • @firstinpoetry
    @firstinpoetry 3 года назад +6

    Starbursts in the sky
    As fireworks that lights the highway
    Of mortal roads that meanders
    Through the hearts core
    If there are any;
    Its Valentine’s season again!
    ❣️❣️ Paiz this is great

    • @ElijahSwann
      @ElijahSwann 3 года назад

      Awesome poem

    • @avatar9576
      @avatar9576 3 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/z_yhDYeuG68/видео.html

  • @linneamariatheresiahansen1876
    @linneamariatheresiahansen1876 3 года назад +2

    Omg, I love this poem. It describes my feelings for the man who’s the keeper of my entire heart. My heart has been with him for 6 years and 7 months, he’s my first true love. And my heart will forever belong to him.
    Beautiful poem, Mel. As always. You’re truly amazing and gifted at what you do. Keep doing what you do, you are helping a lot of people in the world with your ability to put it all into beautiful words. Much love ♡

    • @avatar9576
      @avatar9576 3 года назад

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    • @linneamariatheresiahansen1876
      @linneamariatheresiahansen1876 3 года назад

      @@avatar9576 : What’s this? I don’t like to click on links from people I don’t really know who they are. No offense.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  3 года назад

      Awe, thank you very much for the kind words and support!!!

  • @CravingPoetry
    @CravingPoetry 3 года назад +3

    wow, enjoyed this poem

  • @raptalkpoetry
    @raptalkpoetry 3 года назад +1

    So detailed and well written...Rock On, Nice

  • @whale1275
    @whale1275 3 года назад +1

    I love this

  • @DrineThePoet
    @DrineThePoet 3 года назад

    This felt like a romantic rhyming couplet. Had all the feels and painted description of love. This makes a beautiful Valentines piece or everyday love piece. Excellent.❤👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿

    • @avatar9576
      @avatar9576 3 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/z_yhDYeuG68/видео.html

  • @sinawomagadla7451
    @sinawomagadla7451 3 года назад +13

    (Inspired by Mel♥️)
    Tittle:♥️To The One I Love💍🌹
    By:: Magadla Sinawo Siseko
    Every moment that I spend with you,
    I'm so happy to have you.
    Holding your hands while we're cuddling,
    Looking into your eyes while we're kissing.
    I never had to feel I was all alone,
    Cause I can no longer bear being on my own.
    Love have driven us together,
    Let's take this love more further.
    They say everything never last forever,
    And yet, they also say "never say never".
    Your presence always lift my spirit,
    Cause with you, I feel complete.
    As long as you're in my arms,
    It's like nothing else matters.
    You will forever remain in my heart,
    No matter how far we're apart.
    In your heart is where I wanna stay,
    Until the sky turns gray.
    With everything we've been through,
    I vow to be faithful and always true♥️.

    • @avatar9576
      @avatar9576 3 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/z_yhDYeuG68/видео.html

  • @lilmisscaity1901
    @lilmisscaity1901 3 года назад

    So beautiful!

  • @PresentMomentSpokenWord
    @PresentMomentSpokenWord 3 года назад +1

    Thanks for sharing!

  • @marciakirkbride4210
    @marciakirkbride4210 3 года назад +2

    Thank you.. I love you for all you are...you are my prize from beginning, so much emotion and and worry. I love you!❤️🌹💋💪👍🙏✝️🌟🌟

  • @theblackcatcafe9826
    @theblackcatcafe9826 3 года назад +1

    This is nice

  • @NicholasDemski
    @NicholasDemski 3 года назад +2

    I enjoyed the rhyming scheme of this one...do you often play with various rhyming schemes? What's your favorite? 😁

    • @avatar9576
      @avatar9576 3 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/z_yhDYeuG68/видео.html

  • @anitanmesomachukwupius
    @anitanmesomachukwupius 3 года назад

    Love will always be beautiful

  • @user-vw3kc7lf1k
    @user-vw3kc7lf1k 3 года назад +1

    Absolutely gorgeous wonderful voice White a beautiful words 💗💛

  • @Onlinecash77
    @Onlinecash77 3 года назад

    Beautiful

  • @queenthepenplayer1484
    @queenthepenplayer1484 3 года назад

    Serene💖

  • @watcher1245
    @watcher1245 3 года назад

    I never. . . sympathy barfed as much as i did while i listened to this.

  • @bigo718
    @bigo718 3 года назад

    Amazing 👏

  • @KaryShwas
    @KaryShwas 3 года назад

    Love is the greatest emotion of all
    Lifting our loved ones upon our shoulders
    Risking our chances of a fall
    So that they can do wonders

  • @ShawnsImagination
    @ShawnsImagination 3 года назад

    Phenomenal poetry 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

  • @jesseijvj5891
    @jesseijvj5891 3 года назад

    💚very nice

  • @PoeticMind
    @PoeticMind 3 года назад

    We should collab! I get your rhyme structure.
    (you) A
    (do) A
    (feel) B
    (real) B
    (embrace) A
    (erase) A
    (face) internal - (way) B
    (astray) B

  • @Diana-gt1rv
    @Diana-gt1rv 3 года назад

    This is so beautiful 💜

  • @irynpatience
    @irynpatience 3 года назад

    To my valentine

  • @africanqueen5292
    @africanqueen5292 3 года назад

    💙

  • @iwansangpenulis79
    @iwansangpenulis79 3 года назад

    I am here to listen. Your video is very good and I like it, friendly greetings from me, I wish you success always.

  • @rayyanerayaneee1159
    @rayyanerayaneee1159 3 года назад

    Single single single ❤❤

  • @rameshsuthar5530
    @rameshsuthar5530 3 года назад

    Hy

  • @ElijahSwann
    @ElijahSwann 3 года назад

    I enjoyed this poem as well,I love your videos,please check out my short poems if you guys have the time❤💯

  • @wahomeloice
    @wahomeloice 3 года назад

    Hi girl am a spoken words artist too from kenya. I want to open my RUclips channel could you please tell me which app you are using to make your videos? please dear