This was a really solid video! I do have to agree with the other comment that the title seems a bit like the classic "spammy/clickbaity" "DO THIS TO BLOW UP YOUR RUclips CHANNEL", which throws me off a little bit.
I really appreciate the collaboration and feedback! Such a tough balance to create enough intrigue for a click, while also not being overly sensational. Might try something like…. “RUclipsrs Who IGNORE This Will End Up Quitting. (Sara Dietschy)”
@@samdezao yeah honestly that seems like a clear title! Im a creator myself and I know how much of a struggle making a title and thumbnail can be haha (although your thumbnail is pretty good but maybe I'd make the left top background of your thumbnail a little bit darker to add a bit more contrast between the fore and background (the white cloud and bright shining gold are blending quite a bit atm)
@@soggycerealz also very good points. I’ll have to adjust that. Crazy how when you look at a thumbnail for so long you don’t see those obvious things that need tweaked
This is a good video! Maybe rethink the title to get people to view it? Thumbnail is quite good at least. I hopped in bc of Sara's name, the rest wasn't really clear to me. Just as something for you to work with 😊
Agreed, title is far too ambiguous and gives me the negative connotation of spam advertisements. It’s certainly an interesting concept for a video and well executed, but the title threw me off.
This was a really solid video! I do have to agree with the other comment that the title seems a bit like the classic "spammy/clickbaity" "DO THIS TO BLOW UP YOUR RUclips CHANNEL", which throws me off a little bit.
I really appreciate the collaboration and feedback!
Such a tough balance to create enough intrigue for a click, while also not being overly sensational. Might try something like…. “RUclipsrs Who IGNORE This Will End Up Quitting. (Sara Dietschy)”
@@samdezao yeah honestly that seems like a clear title! Im a creator myself and I know how much of a struggle making a title and thumbnail can be haha (although your thumbnail is pretty good but maybe I'd make the left top background of your thumbnail a little bit darker to add a bit more contrast between the fore and background (the white cloud and bright shining gold are blending quite a bit atm)
@@soggycerealz also very good points. I’ll have to adjust that. Crazy how when you look at a thumbnail for so long you don’t see those obvious things that need tweaked
My favorite book ever read it like 3 times
I’m great at starting books! But not finishing them. And this one I finished no problem! So good’
This is a good video! Maybe rethink the title to get people to view it? Thumbnail is quite good at least. I hopped in bc of Sara's name, the rest wasn't really clear to me. Just as something for you to work with 😊
Agreed, title is far too ambiguous and gives me the negative connotation of spam advertisements. It’s certainly an interesting concept for a video and well executed, but the title threw me off.
This is great feedback! Thanks friends!
Powerful video overall
Thanks for watching!