The story had great potential, But then it flaked out and ended with an ending that wasn't an ending. It wasn't even worth the time invested I actually skipped back 20 minutes and replayed it again because I thought I had dozed off and missed something critical was a waste of time.
This is incomprehensible, this is not how to end a story. We needed, well, I needed to hear their reaction when they were confronted with the evidence. Please reload the story with a proper ending.
Rafael and Felicia are busted, the truth must comes out. Carmelita narrowly escaped the plot of her husband and Stepmom, she was born under a lucky Star. Very interesting story, well plotted.
Is that it?? That's the second time that has happened in the past few stories. Why on earth don't you know how to finish a story properly. Sorry but I will give your stories a miss in future, they start great then leave people hanging, not good at all! 🤬
Whoever wrote this story stubbed his toe on the ending of this story. NO ending at all. Terrible!!
The story had great potential, But then it flaked out and ended with an ending that wasn't an ending. It wasn't even worth the time invested I actually skipped back 20 minutes and replayed it again because I thought I had dozed off and missed something critical was a waste of time.
yeah, I am glad I skipped all the way through this story. One of the worst really.
Where is the ending to the story. Can't believe how it just ended with no ending to it. Need answers.
This is incomprehensible, this is not how to end a story. We needed, well, I needed to hear their reaction when they were confronted with the evidence. Please reload the story with a proper ending.
That is no way to end a story. There could have been a much better ending.😢
True the ending was losey
50 minutes for advertisement .. . . .??????
Good story ..bad ending ..it just cut off, not a good finish
What an absolutely woeful ending 😡😡
What's with ENDING!! Listen to a great story & it just stopped, never listen to another one of your stories again.🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
This is bot first time spiritual stories have been cut short.
Thank you for the interesting story, I will definitely listen to the end today
Like the story.
Is there a part two because part one has no ending, so there must be a part two.😮
Really stupid ending, very disappointed
I agree the ending was a cliffhanger
What kind if ending is this? Thought my mobile went dead!
Very bad ending Why write a story with such an ending If you were my student I'd mark you incomplete or fail you.
😂😂 it could be worse. Sometimes the story ended without any reason. This end is not that bed. But it is anoying I agree.🤗
Dad means father - Dead means not alive.
Stupid ending you couldn't find the time and a couple more words to end your story properly..such a anticlimactic story..
The ending is bad. The story was cut short. If a story can't be finished..no need to tell it! Horrible!
NO ENDING! Unacceptable for a story teller!
Waste of
time, stupid ending.
I think that it was too lengthy and the end did not fit in as the tape ended before the end
Rafael and Felicia are busted, the truth must comes out. Carmelita narrowly escaped the plot of her husband and Stepmom, she was born under a lucky Star. Very interesting story, well plotted.
Great story.. fortunately the conspirators were found out in the end.
Its a stupid ending. Stop wasting people’s time
Good story but very bad ending.I had to to go back to the end twice.
This a repeated story!
dad no dead
Nice
Is that it?? That's the second time that has happened in the past few stories. Why on earth don't you know how to finish a story properly. Sorry but I will give your stories a miss in future, they start great then leave people hanging, not good at all! 🤬
Stupid ending
serrano not serrato
Sorry i dont like this end
Ending horrible. Add a better ending.
I agree didn't even get to see what the 2 cheaters got in end 😞 another useless ending can't give it a like thumbs 👎🏻 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
luz or luce