I tend to agree not real but had a 12 year old little person. Tge polite name for what us old folk call a dwarf beat up a 6ft 18 year old. The 18 year old picked up the dwarf and threw him across concrete. Made a huge mess of him. He got up and walked up to the older boy laughing at him. So he head butted him. Point of contact? Three guesses. An hour later still on his knees both hands cover his impact at hospital.
When I was in the army in the early 70s stationed in Hawaii. The guys told me about this big guy that decided to beat up this smaller Chinese guy. The big guy didn't recognize that the Chinese guy is the legendary Bruce Lee. Needless to say, it wasn't a fight. One Bruce Lee leg whip and the so called fight was over.
Mark: “it’s my family home”. Uh yeah it was Alex inherited it! There are too many anomalies in this story. Gang leader to Sarah should have been “Riptide is that you?”
Wow, this writing really hits the mark! It’s sharp, clear, and keeps the pace moving effortlessly. Such a huge improvement-no more word salad here! Loving how polished and to-the-point it is. What do you think?
Different stories about gang members changed lives. I like to see the change and mature on people plus the respect for the old friends.
Clever writing. Bounced along, crisp and decisive. Vastly improved, less inclined to the word salad. It is good!
But still AI baloney.
@@bulruq. Nothing is real anymore. If it ever was.
I tend to agree not real but had a 12 year old little person. Tge polite name for what us old folk call a dwarf beat up a 6ft 18 year old.
The 18 year old picked up the dwarf and threw him across concrete. Made a huge mess of him. He got up and walked up to the older boy laughing at him. So he head butted him. Point of contact? Three guesses. An hour later still on his knees both hands cover his impact at hospital.
When I was in the army in the early 70s stationed in Hawaii.
The guys told me about this big guy that decided to beat up this smaller Chinese guy.
The big guy didn't recognize that the Chinese guy is the legendary Bruce Lee.
Needless to say, it wasn't a fight.
One Bruce Lee leg whip and the so called fight was over.
I liked this story!
This story is a lot more superior than the others so far.
Mark: “it’s my family home”. Uh yeah it was Alex inherited it! There are too many anomalies in this story. Gang leader to Sarah should have been “Riptide is that you?”
Great story thank you
Wow ain't no way.. but great ending 😂
Wow, this writing really hits the mark! It’s sharp, clear, and keeps the pace moving effortlessly. Such a huge improvement-no more word salad here! Loving how polished and to-the-point it is. What do you think?
There is no excuse for this. She needs jail time for assault and be banned from teaching.
The story reminds me of beasts in the jungle the kings are fighting for supremacy with only one winner. Good story
Yet another repeat story from a few weeks ago
They should've sold the house from the getgo and split the proceeds. It wasn't fair for Mark only getting the house
Lisa & Mark were bully a-holes, they get nothing! F’em!
To long