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Totally agree. And she would be dead to me as well. By her actions she is choosing Jake the backstabbing cheater. That was a mean manipulation on his mother's part
Dude all these stories are so brutal. The huge amount of useless details, the use of words like “tears” and “ dread”( nobody talks like that), the constant reminders of how they are feeling. It’s hard to keep focus or interest. I know they are fake but, damn at least the people who write these should make it bearable.
That is super betrayal she could have broken up with him and this guy could have moved on with his life! Instead they traumatized this man you can never love again and his family's gone not physically but emotionally
No excuse for cheating. NO One deserves this. If my brother did that to me, he would be figuratively DEAD to me. If my mom took his side, she would also be DEAD to me. Thankfully I was blessed with a very loyal and moral family and spouse.
There is a moment I understand, when you have been traumatized and your life feels like everything and everyone is leaving you behind. But I think he wallowed too much. Also annoying is the narrator’s voice, boring, and monotone. Also a lot missing, how does he go from fixing surprises in his apartment to his brother telling him he was married to his fiancée? Bizarre! And what was the cause of the fallout with mother and when did it happen? Even the confrontation at the cheaters’ house was bluh! The whole thing is surface, and the Leah was just saccharine and felt really artificial.
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There is no way for three years those cheaters would have try to make their broken marriage work. They would have started cheating on each other. I believe Jake has down syndrome, his stepbrother told him to quit hitting on his wife when he showed Jake the pictures, and his wife is just being nice to him, and has playing along promising to marry jake, but shit got out of hand.
I would not given them the satisfaction of talking to them about the past.When people do you wrong they have to live with the guilt. How can you sleep with your brother finance and think you are going to live a happy life.The brother and the finance are nasty.
My god. You DO NOT have to describe EVERY movement or ascribe emotions to EVERY sentence. This story should have been 10min tops. Please start writing stories where the OP has a spine and is not constantly wallowing over past issues. Give us a story where the cheater is caught and punished swiftly by a chad OP.
What a stupid story. Three years of suffering and suddenly he feel bad because Their having troubles. I call bull. Yeah, I would have cheated on the SIMP too.
This story really makes zero sense. His fiancée was married to his brother? Just like that? This character has too much feminine energy and female traits.
As much as I dislike cheaters...Jake still disgusts me way more then anyone else involved...he's weak and pathetic and brings stuff on his own...he needs to find a spine , grow a pair and maybe most of all ...get out of his own head...not everything has to fit or make sense...let it go. .dont ever give ANYONE a chance to hurt you a second time
Why would he sit and listen ??...why would/should he care ??...damn I see why she cheated and left his lame ass...weak , weak weak...should have just ignored his mother or told her. So , I dont care what their going through , don't ever speak of them to me again IF we ever speak again...anyone who caves as quickly as him deserves all the betrayals he goes through...and from what I get from him...he will go through it from any girl he gets with...no sympathy and less respect so far at 16:00 mark
Simi lan chiaw story!!! Pukimak bugimak!!! Kanina,story does not make any sense,how he face emily,how he face work,how this bugimak lost hope!!!! pukimak!!!!
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After the ops mom told him they were struggling he should of laughed and went back to what he was doing. People like that don't deserve forgiveness.
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Totally agree. And she would be dead to me as well. By her actions she is choosing Jake the backstabbing cheater. That was a mean manipulation on his mother's part
Jeez what a whiny wimpy guy.
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he causes more shinkage than a swim in ice water
This writer won't use 1 word when 26 will do.
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EXACTLY!!!
How does someone run off and marry their fiancé’s sibling with the sibling/former fiancé still not knowing about it 3 years later?!
he needs to move VERY far away THAT way he will not have to see them every day what happened to them is KARMA plain & simple
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This story could be told in 10 minutes, it would have been 10 times better, got the points out faster and told the same story.
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Agreed
Dude all these stories are so brutal. The huge amount of useless details, the use of words like “tears” and “ dread”( nobody talks like that), the constant reminders of how they are feeling. It’s hard to keep focus or interest. I know they are fake but, damn at least the people who write these should make it bearable.
only college soyboys talk like this..the kind who have spent their childhoods in therapy..
That't not true, ai and shitty red pill story writers do
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@@rogerruhland8897 red pill loser over here, we found a red pill loser!
That is super betrayal she could have broken up with him and this guy could have moved on with his life! Instead they traumatized this man you can never love again and his family's gone not physically but emotionally
you described it very well.
I hate cheaters. With that said, by mid-point of the story, id have cheated on him too
I just started the video and I'm seriously waiting on the part you are talking about lmao
You are right 😂😂
That says more about you
No excuse for cheating. NO One deserves this. If my brother did that to me, he would be figuratively DEAD to me. If my mom took his side, she would also be DEAD to me. Thankfully I was blessed with a very loyal and moral family and spouse.
There is a moment I understand, when you have been traumatized and your life feels like everything and everyone is leaving you behind. But I think he wallowed too much. Also annoying is the narrator’s voice, boring, and monotone.
Also a lot missing, how does he go from fixing surprises in his apartment to his brother telling him he was married to his fiancée? Bizarre! And what was the cause of the fallout with mother and when did it happen? Even the confrontation at the cheaters’ house was bluh! The whole thing is surface, and the Leah was just saccharine and felt really artificial.
Stories like this is the reason why the idea drunk driving seem appealing some people...
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A cheater and back stabing brother's marriage isn't working? Surprise Surprise 😒
Right? It's not exactly shocking given the circumstances. Thanks for your insight.
Find your backbone and dignity before you find your self purpose!
You are right, many times we have to value ourselves more.
@@BgNarration seriously, right?...some guys forget that they actually have a CHOICE in the relationship too....
I can't continued after 7:30 to many BS... To Wimpie to call as a MAN... Sound like story of teenager puppy love story
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There is no way for three years those cheaters would have try to make their broken marriage work. They would have started cheating on each other.
I believe Jake has down syndrome, his stepbrother told him to quit hitting on his wife when he showed Jake the pictures, and his wife is just being nice to him, and has playing along promising to marry jake, but shit got out of hand.
😂😂
Story number 1 is clearly fake... a wannabe writer wrote it... it feels so impersonal... he's so worried about sounding poetic that it's laughable...
seriousness of betrayal and frankly it makes it hard to empathize with the characters involved.
I would not given them the satisfaction of talking to them about the past.When people do you wrong they have to live with the guilt. How can you sleep with your brother finance and think you are going to live a happy life.The brother and the finance are nasty.
You are right! 😀
My god. You DO NOT have to describe EVERY movement or ascribe emotions to EVERY sentence. This story should have been 10min tops. Please start writing stories where the OP has a spine and is not constantly wallowing over past issues. Give us a story where the cheater is caught and punished swiftly by a chad OP.
I’ll definitely work on pacing and character strength in future stories. A swift and satisfying resolution sounds great!
What a stupid story. Three years of suffering and suddenly he feel bad because Their having troubles. I call bull. Yeah, I would have cheated on the SIMP too.
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A 10 min story dragged out to 30 min. It's like the gif of the truck that never crashes. This story never gets to the point.
It's utterly sickening! Even at double speed 😡
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He will be back here with Lea
I don't think so anymore.
If it’s real. What a loser. I hate him. No wonder his girl cheated
You're right.
His step brother and x fiancee 😅😅😅😅their relationships not good imagine that
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You can go and help then
This story really makes zero sense. His fiancée was married to his brother? Just like that? This character has too much feminine energy and female traits.
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Did a women write this?
Yes, I’m a woman. 😅
I could tell by the way you wrote this story. Most men do not respond like you portrayed
The victim of this store.
@@ryanduvall6011 I will try to be more neutral in the next videos 😅
Simp king
😅
As much as I dislike cheaters...Jake still disgusts me way more then anyone else involved...he's weak and pathetic and brings stuff on his own...he needs to find a spine , grow a pair and maybe most of all ...get out of his own head...not everything has to fit or make sense...let it go. .dont ever give ANYONE a chance to hurt you a second time
Simp!!!!
Just 1 awful story! Everyone's a victim! There's no joy or happiness in the whole thing!
I think this a story written by AI
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Such a disappointing story.
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Obviously fake
It's a story, my friend.
@BgNarration Then let people know it's just a fake story and not real
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To many words, thin story.
Stop these bad AI stories.
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Very bad AI story. Don’t waste your time
about halfway i wanted to offer him my side arm, god 3 years, fark man
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Why would he sit and listen ??...why would/should he care ??...damn I see why she cheated and left his lame ass...weak , weak weak...should have just ignored his mother or told her. So , I dont care what their going through , don't ever speak of them to me again IF we ever speak again...anyone who caves as quickly as him deserves all the betrayals he goes through...and from what I get from him...he will go through it from any girl he gets with...no sympathy and less respect so far at 16:00 mark
There is nothing wrong with using proper grammar and punctuation. Elementary school classes learn it, give it a go.
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I'd of just said GOOD. I have NO brother and I am glad I didn't marry a cheating whore.
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Simi lan chiaw story!!! Pukimak bugimak!!! Kanina,story does not make any sense,how he face emily,how he face work,how this bugimak lost hope!!!! pukimak!!!!