Millions of Aliens Invade Earth But Turn Into Ashes in Seconds | Best HFY Stories

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Комментарии • 16

  • @coryshort
    @coryshort 28 дней назад +12

    i have no issues with ai writing uyour stories, but you need to read it first before you publish it as there are errors you could have easly have fixed and made this a nice story.

  • @twistedcitizen5739
    @twistedcitizen5739 Месяц назад +15

    So why didn’t hey just use the same weapon that destroyed the entire fleet? Makes no sense

    • @larrythompson8630
      @larrythompson8630 26 дней назад +1

      The story did not follow. It jumped from act 3 to act two, a few times. Did not bother to explain reasons. Your question could be answered. “For safety the nanites only scan, copy weaknesses of new races. But i need to use this machine to confirm it’s an enemy, the method to attack so it dies not destroy friendly aliens”. Then fix repeats, or have it from clearly different point of view at same time.

  • @peterhall8572
    @peterhall8572 Месяц назад +11

    I think somebody got chapters out of order

    • @sdragut
      @sdragut 28 дней назад

      i think this channel uses a dyslexic AI, the owner can't speak English, has no understanding of western culture or basic common sense. probably uses google translate

  • @DataStorm1
    @DataStorm1 Месяц назад +8

    its out of order, wrong buildup, and shit.

  • @SilverBeardGuerilla
    @SilverBeardGuerilla Месяц назад +15

    15:30 " Not even dust remained " , 17: 55 " Mark threw himself at Zorax" , FFS , ever hear of CONTINUITY , more uninspired garbage produced by soulless unimaginative AI

    • @bentonmarcum8924
      @bentonmarcum8924 26 дней назад +1

      You missed one. First said not even dust remains then said Zorax was reduced to dust.

  • @gregmcmahon8284
    @gregmcmahon8284 Месяц назад +4

    Alternate endings, just didn't pick one.

  • @MrKilroi
    @MrKilroi 15 дней назад

    No promethius is awesome.

  • @rachaelcourtnell7275
    @rachaelcourtnell7275 26 дней назад

    He can't say any thing if the nanites killed him. uurrgghh.

  • @bdtodd50todd38
    @bdtodd50todd38 26 дней назад

    Why do you repeat portions of the story?

  • @user-kd5xw8rb1n
    @user-kd5xw8rb1n 27 дней назад +3

    Man another wannabe story, using an ai will never make you a writer, just a bad copy