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  • Опубликовано: 3 авг 2024
  • Your mystery novel needs clues that knit your plot together, while also confusing the reader! In this video we'll talk about:
    * 5 types of clues for your mystery novel
    * my ultra-simple clue planning spreadsheet
    * how many clues your mystery novel really needs
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Комментарии • 126

  • @janekalmes
    @janekalmes  3 года назад +21

    Want a great twist for your mystery? Watch this next: ruclips.net/video/5Z8UeG7YDiQ/видео.html

    • @user-ms9cv3lo1q
      @user-ms9cv3lo1q 10 месяцев назад

      Hello, Jane. I talked to you last year...I was the one who wrote my first mystery...I spent the summer reading a lot of diffent genres and poetry...i also achieve my bucket list goal of reading war and peace, so i'm rewarding myself by reading fluff and more mystery novels until thanksgiving, which is when I'll start my second mystery project...my second " Casey Hawkes " book. I think it's gonna work out...Just want to thank you for being an inspiration 🙂

  • @waalabi
    @waalabi Год назад +49

    1- Tangible Clues: Tie 2 things together, tight 2 characters together.
    2- Emotional Clues: Emotional reactions / change in behaviour that indicate a character know something. reveals secrets.
    3- Revealing knowledge: Ties a suspect to a location or a time in place.
    4- Testimony: Alibi's, Relationships, Tensions.
    5- Artifacts: Things made by the victim / the criminal.
    6- Absent Clues: Am absence of a conection, reveals information. Disbelief suspicion. Lack of important knowledge.

  • @lesleyann5118
    @lesleyann5118 3 года назад +74

    Oh, my god! Where was this months ago when I was desperately searching for this information?! It’s all so simple, really, I just needed it spelled out in plain English. Thank you so much!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад +8

      I’m so glad you found it helpful!

  • @rohanmulgaokar5682
    @rohanmulgaokar5682 Год назад +21

    You have given something most writers could die for - a structure, a checklist and a consequence list. Thank you!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  11 месяцев назад +1

      You're so welcome!

  • @mendelgrant2129
    @mendelgrant2129 3 года назад +75

    There are a lot of great people on authortube, but you are providing the most unique, innovative, and useful content I've seen. I'm impressed with your channel, and hope you're able to continue your impressive (and arduous) work. FYI: Your epic Monk binge inspired me to watch all 12 seasons of "Murder She Wrote" lol.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад +6

      Wow, thank you so much! That comment really made my day.
      I want to dig through another show looking for good info to share, but I’m waffling between Murdoch Mysteries, Psych, and Remington Steele. There's just so MUCH of each one, I’m intimidated, lol. 😆

    • @sabershenanigans
      @sabershenanigans 2 года назад +1

      @@janekalmes Jonathan Creek (especially seasons 1-3) is quite possibly the smartest mystery series I've ever seen - if you haven't already seen it I recommend it wholeheartedly!

  • @Graid
    @Graid 2 года назад +31

    Thank you so much for this series! Other advice is so vague, you actually have gone in there and considered the common types of clues, motives, mystery types, suspects and many more in a way that really lays it all out and provides insight into how it all works as well as ideas on how to use them. I really appreciate hearing you lay out all the clue types and how to use them. Personally I often find it difficult to write investigative scenes where someone needs to find something out in an interesting fashion. Considering the varying types of clues and what's possible helps me with generating ideas.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад +1

      This is so awesome to hear, thank you!

  • @easymanga31
    @easymanga31 2 года назад +8

    This was extremely helpful! Nobody ever gets into the nitty-gritty of how to even plan clues, how many you need, etc. Thank you!

  • @KelniusTV
    @KelniusTV 2 года назад +7

    You may use a slew of clues to accuse, but if you choose to refuse, you don't lose if the sleuths can still deduce who's behind this criminal abuse...

  • @alphaomega1089
    @alphaomega1089 2 года назад +2

    'disbelief can be expressed by not wanting to know the details' -- some even scream to drown out any retelling of it. We don't act the same. Even if making us that way can benefit the larger group. Handling information your way makes you an individual.

  • @nerdyhexel307
    @nerdyhexel307 2 года назад +4

    Great info! Helped my write a murder mystery quest for my D&D game!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад +2

      Wow, that's awesome. Thanks for letting me know!

  • @Neil_09
    @Neil_09 Месяц назад

    You are a real teacher. It all just came to me.

  • @leoexgb3219
    @leoexgb3219 2 года назад +3

    THIS. WAS. FANTASTIC! Man I've been looking all over for tips on YT and this was exactly what I needed! Thank you thank you thank you!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад

      Great to hear! You're welcome!

  • @marienbad2
    @marienbad2 3 месяца назад

    God you're good! It's a good job you're a writer and not a criminal cause you'd probably be a pretty good one!

  • @timflatus
    @timflatus 6 месяцев назад

    Much as I find your presentation style and obvious pleasure in people's misfortune most unappealing, I shall continue to watch as you clearly know how to write a crime drama and could be a useful model for one of my villains.

  • @Xandycane
    @Xandycane Год назад +2

    Thank you! My fantasy has a huge mystery that kicks off the rest of the bigger plot. When I sat down to figure it out, I got very stuck. Lots of things needed to be known without a clue how to go about it. This was just what needed

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  Год назад

      Awesome! I always love it when people working in other genres find their way here!

  • @ScullyPopASMR
    @ScullyPopASMR 3 года назад +9

    I'm loving this writing content. Great lesson today 😃

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад +2

      I'm so glad you liked it, Scully!

  • @foggyfiction9917
    @foggyfiction9917 2 года назад +2

    I absolutely love that you use the Clue movie for examples.

  • @robertbrumbaugh4634
    @robertbrumbaugh4634 2 года назад +2

    I really like how you logically work out the plot items. You seem well versed in mysteries. I'm going to check out your book.

  • @billybennett1253
    @billybennett1253 Месяц назад

    Very helpful. Thank you!

  • @tammycullers2849
    @tammycullers2849 2 года назад +8

    I really appreciate the quality information you offer for free! Your tips are wonderful, and I'm sharing some with my 7th grade English class (they are doing NaNoWriMo for the first time) :) Thank you so much for taking the time to share practical, actionable information for writers of all ages!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад

      Wow, Tammy, I'm blown away by this compliment, thank you! I really hope your students find it helpful!

  • @siriuslyunsirius
    @siriuslyunsirius 2 месяца назад

    This is so helpful!! I’ve got most of my book figured out but it’s the organizing/pacing that I need work on and this is exactly what I needed

  • @abywabyontop
    @abywabyontop 5 месяцев назад

    THANK YOU SO MUCH

  • @lovvxo9997
    @lovvxo9997 6 месяцев назад

    you just saved my book!! thank you so much!!!

  • @user-fm4sp8rx8n
    @user-fm4sp8rx8n 9 месяцев назад +1

    Your videos are just- SOO helpful. I was getting stressed out because I wasn’t really seeing the shape of my story and how the clues worked, this video, (Especially that spreadsheet) REALLY helped me see the shape of my story and help me think up of senes. I am have only just realised how HARD it is to write a story but I think mine is getting better - all thanks to you! 😊

  • @user-tm6ui1os4h
    @user-tm6ui1os4h 7 месяцев назад

    I definitely need to save some of these videos, helped soooo much more than the other 10 videos I've seen so far on RUclips.. I think I'm going to stick with your videos and re-watch a few times until my brain clicks and I'm able to co-operate some mystery with clues into my fantasy novel :) Thank you!

  • @csillakun2517
    @csillakun2517 2 года назад +5

    I love your videos. So many useful tips. Thanks for the work you put into these videos.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад

      I’m so glad they’re helpful to you!

  • @sahilpatel3304
    @sahilpatel3304 Год назад +2

    I am having a hard time figuring out how to present certain clues to the readers, Thank you for the insight. Loving your content.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  Год назад +1

      I am working on some material about exactly how to hide clues in plain sight, but it’s taking me a while to come up with all the examples I need to explain my ideas. But I'll get something up for you eventually! Thanks for the kind words!

  • @sophiahoma4285
    @sophiahoma4285 Год назад

    The clue planning spreadsheet is such a good idea!

  • @cloverfield911
    @cloverfield911 2 года назад +2

    MIDSOMER MURDERS I love finding the suttle clues when you watch an episode back over

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад

      Somehow this is one of the mystery shows I have just never seen much of. I may have to correct that.

    • @cloverfield911
      @cloverfield911 2 года назад

      @@janekalmes Have you watched any episodes from it?
      I recomend starting with "The Killings at Badger's Drift", and "Strangler's Wood".

  • @KPJPflorida
    @KPJPflorida 3 года назад +3

    Hey there, well done you, love the style of your video, the pop ups are great, and your video presence is perfect

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад

      Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying them!

  • @sslimeman
    @sslimeman Год назад

    this is so helpful, its giving me a lot of courage that my plot will turn out well.

  • @user-ms9cv3lo1q
    @user-ms9cv3lo1q 10 месяцев назад

    Hello, Jane. I talked to you last year...I was the one who wrote my first mystery...I spent the summer reading a lot of diffent genres and poetry...i also achieve my bucket list goal of reading war and peace, so i'm rewarding myself by reading fluff and more mystery novels until thanksgiving, which is when I'll start my second mystery project...my second " Casey Hawkes " book. I think it's gonna work out...Just want to thank you for being an inspiration 🙂

  • @Paul12345671
    @Paul12345671 10 месяцев назад

    A list of clues and information contributed is a very good idea.

  • @bostonhayworth1264
    @bostonhayworth1264 2 года назад +1

    I just LOVE YOU. You are so much fun,your enthusiasm inspiring. Pure Joy.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад

      Wow, what a lovely compliment! Thank you!

  • @hibabenhaida2323
    @hibabenhaida2323 3 года назад +1

    Amazing! Always looking forward to your videos 🙌🏽😻

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад +1

      That’s so wonderful to hear, Hiba, thank you!

  • @JillMaurer
    @JillMaurer 3 года назад +2

    Another great video Jane! Very practical advice!! xoxo

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад

      So glad you liked it, Jill!

  • @annavernick1490
    @annavernick1490 3 года назад +2

    you bring so much fun to seemingly complicated issues!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад

      What a lovely compliment, Anna! Thank you!

  • @SybilWard
    @SybilWard 3 года назад +1

    Bravo. Stellar, as always!

  • @BodyTrust
    @BodyTrust 7 месяцев назад

    Great stuff.

  • @linetteholm7127
    @linetteholm7127 3 года назад +2

    Great info and great video!!! ..Tysm!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад

      You’re so welcome, Linette!

  • @berserkerx7
    @berserkerx7 2 года назад +1

    Thank you so much. This is very helpful.

  • @TheBuddyShowWorldwide
    @TheBuddyShowWorldwide Год назад

    Glad I came upon your videos. I'm a pantser but you gave me many things to think about.

  • @tillypendrick9414
    @tillypendrick9414 Год назад

    This was incredibly helpful and clear. Thanks a lot!

  • @ig7002
    @ig7002 2 года назад +1

    Your channel is a wealth of knowledge! Thank you!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад

      My pleasure! Glad you are enjoying!

  • @trembyle
    @trembyle 3 года назад +2

    superbly useful as always

  • @hiimjai6064
    @hiimjai6064 9 месяцев назад

    I know this video is 2 years old, but I’m writing a murder mystery script for a film and this is such a great reference! Very simple and easy to understand. Thank you for this video. I just subscribed!

  • @writenowdream3882
    @writenowdream3882 3 года назад +2

    Just found your channel today! Subscribed! Thanks for this great, informative content.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад

      Welcome aboard! if you enjoyed the clues video, you might also like this one: ruclips.net/video/5Z8UeG7YDiQ/видео.html

  • @lessellhammock7281
    @lessellhammock7281 2 года назад +1

    This is amazing, I just watched the movie Saw and I seen so much of what your speaking on

  • @brrryan2908
    @brrryan2908 Год назад

    Your tips are stellar and inspiring! :)

  • @wellwell7429
    @wellwell7429 3 года назад +3

    Yay! I'm plotting a fantasy novel, there is a crime so there have to be these clues

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад +1

      Great! In that case, you might also enjoy this video on Red Herrings (distractions from the solution to your mystery): ruclips.net/video/Jm7UIJF9wp0/видео.html

  • @ulyx9804
    @ulyx9804 Год назад

    I am putting a special thank you tribute to you in my comic book Jane. Your videos have been invaluable to helping me set up my thriller series. The script for the first issue is already done, and it's all down to editing and illustration now. You and Abbie Emmons have done more to improve my storycrafting than anyone else has in my 30 years. Thank you so much.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  Год назад +1

      Wow, that is amazing! Congrats on getting the first issue scripted! Please let me know when it’s available!

  • @literallyjane
    @literallyjane 2 года назад +2

    You are truly a treasure! Thanks so much for your videos. Keep up the great work! (Also, your name is really cool. ;) )

  • @doaa8242
    @doaa8242 3 года назад +1

    you are pure gold 👌❤️

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 года назад

      Wow, I am so touched! Thank you!

  • @rodgerfields9406
    @rodgerfields9406 2 года назад +1

    Excellent presentation!

  • @w.l.davisjr.1
    @w.l.davisjr.1 Год назад

    How wonderful is this!!

  • @kathyf3656
    @kathyf3656 2 года назад +6

    Could an emotional clue be a change of habit, like changing their route to work to avoid a person or place, or just changing where they get their morning coffee?

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад +2

      Absolutely! Great thinking!

  • @Zr0din
    @Zr0din 2 года назад +1

    There is something wrong with the algorithm because you should have WAY more subs that- especially compared to other channels that do the same type of work but don't have visuals.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 года назад

      Thanks, that’s so kind! Glad you are liking the videos!

  • @joshhall3040
    @joshhall3040 Год назад

    This is also great for table top gaming!!! Thanks for making this.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  Год назад +1

      I get comments like this more than you might think, and they always make me so happy!

  • @Johnnysega
    @Johnnysega 2 года назад +1

    Just came across your channel. Awesome videos

  • @victorcobane6644
    @victorcobane6644 Год назад

    Useful video! I have a ton of information that the audience needs to lean for things to make sense in a paranormal mystery I have been writing in my free time (maybe it'll be made into something one day 🥰) and, although I feel embarrassed to admit this, making a spreadsheet of all the information I want to dole out and marking off how I will dole it out as I figure it out never occurred to me before. I think it will certainly help though!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  Год назад +1

      Awesome, so glad to hear it!

  • @kikky050
    @kikky050 5 дней назад

    Thank you for your video, I was planning to create a messy crime story, now it looks easier on me at least.
    I just wanted to share with you that english is not my mother language and every time you said 'sleuht' in the beginning I was confused why you say "sl*t"especially with a weird accent. 😂

  • @cateanddog
    @cateanddog 11 месяцев назад

    Great video 😊

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  11 месяцев назад

      Thanks for watching!

  • @Paul12345671
    @Paul12345671 10 месяцев назад

    I'm running a game where there are a lot of suspects who have a motive to commit the murder. I have to think of clues that will exonerate some of the suspects.

  • @F2t0ny
    @F2t0ny Год назад

    Great video

  • @basicfrogginhuman6023
    @basicfrogginhuman6023 Год назад

    you deserve more subs!

  • @FrtntLkyu
    @FrtntLkyu 7 месяцев назад

    im writing my own book but it probably wont be published until im OLDER

  • @BrianThomas
    @BrianThomas 11 месяцев назад

    0:11 Zoinks! Did you have to say dead?

  • @timbuktu8069
    @timbuktu8069 8 месяцев назад

    I would advise not to make the clues too obscure.
    I am currently watching the Ellery Queen TV show. Some of the clues are so off-the-wall that there is no way the audience will pick up on it. (Why of course she grabbed her bracelet with her dying breath clearly indicating the murderer was...Ruby.)
    This might work well with die hard Agatha Christie fans, but it might not play well with a more casual reader.
    Know your audience.

  • @legendbob6404
    @legendbob6404 Год назад +1

    may I bless you?

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  Год назад +1

      Of course you can, and thank you! Thats so kind!

  • @terranman4702
    @terranman4702 Год назад

    You need one clue these days ....... DNA!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  Год назад

      That’s why I like writing historicals!

    • @terranman4702
      @terranman4702 Год назад

      @@janekalmes :D Crime will get more boring over the years. If you actually have a mystery your investigators will sit on the computer the whole novel :D

  • @ashwiniupadhye2431
    @ashwiniupadhye2431 6 месяцев назад

    Please, anybody can translate in hindi and write ahead when she is telling each and every matter. Most people will watch it. Please, Please......🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @ghostchick5275
    @ghostchick5275 4 месяца назад

    I always think it is a somewhat pitiful "clue" in murder documentaries when police try to say someone is guilty because they didn't react the way they think they should have reacted to hearing someone is dead. That is highly subjective and there is no accounting for a person's reaction to such news.
    Jane, much as I love your channel, this video could have done without your political commentary and casting unnecessary aspersions about the OJ Simpson trial.

  • @trevor7861
    @trevor7861 3 месяца назад

    Idk why putting your lipstick on someone’s collar is a thing. Just dirtied up the shirt, thanks for the extra dry cleaning #nothot

  • @youarecringeifyoulikecringe
    @youarecringeifyoulikecringe 3 месяца назад

    This helps so much for my birthday tysm

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  3 месяца назад

      Awesome! Great to hear!