This is a good example of how you can tell an audience what's going to happen, but use that to build tension. I liked the motif of the spider web :"Step into my parlour, said the spider to the fly...". :)
Very masterfully done. Excellent. Great build up of suspense, fantastic use of the darkness and light flashes to reveal the monster just enough to get a sense of how horrific it is. Sharing to my page for Halloween spooks.
SPOILERS Excellent photography in the house. Really added to the shocking ending. I loved the expressions of the intruder, his surprise and disorientation. This actually added a little comedy to the film. I thought that the dainty music was an excellent choice. Glad not to see another girl victimized. No wonder they don't like horror movies.
As others have already commented: the "monsters" feeling out of its apartment immediately after entering it was a tip off; the wigs and especially the dentures in the glass told me that the tables have turned. What a compliment to "30 Days of Night" type of story, well, sort of. Still, outstanding! Great job all of the way around!
@@matsyever2979 Dude earlier than that... 1:14 if that guy's girl wasn't with him he would've gotten taken home for an easy 2 for 1 for the body count.
I love films like this; which force the viewer to ask themselves, "Which one is REALLY the monster?". One slight change in an environment, can easily turn the "Predator" into the Prey.
Mr. Pervo should have really thought this through before breaking in!! I loved this short! It is going on my best of 100 in 5th place I think!! Very well done!
As soon as she flipped the main breaker, I was on the edge of my seat thinking, "Kill him, kill him, make him suffer!" Not scary really, more exciting and refreshing from all the over done cliches.
Amazing!!!! At first it had us guessing which is the monster until she switched the power off. I thought that the masked guy was a woman until I saw the beard but I think the mask looked feminine, was that deliberate?
Very original and different than conventional horrors, usually always is intruder the one who terrorize but this time he was a victim! Really unexpected and original!
Awesome! Even though t's an old premise using a vampire, it was done so well it seemed original. The way she/it attacked in a blur at the end was incredibly scary and so, so well done. BRAVO!
TO ROBIN WHITTEN and the Crew, especially the DP : The content, and compostion are absolutely fabulous. Sound FX and sound editing are perfect. Acting, A++++. Premise : A ++++. Unusual scenario. Entertainment factor : 9/10. I certainly hope to see more output from you people. Dr. H. E. Sawyer, Jr., Writer. Filmmaker. Grove, OK
Love films where creeps get theirs. I knew something was up with her when she saw the guy looking at her legs, then gave him the slow leg cross and smile, reeked of predator. This is a great short, "Billy" played a good role, loved the bug eyed look of fear on his face. Just desserts horror movies are my fav.
Well... See what SHOULD happen to perps like this guy? Well done! If only. Payback is, indeed, a motherfucker. Fine performances and production. Thanks to all!
Really creepy and intense. Interesting plot, and the acting was good. The monster that appeared at the end was pretty scary. Great twist. Keep up the great work.
This was like watching a full featured, big budget film.. I mean... Very intense...i was hooked throughout... Nice subway scene.. it was the set up for a lot of twists.
Really excellent. I really like it when tables are turned on intruders & creeps. Great reworking of what could have been a cliché - but wasn't. Good soundtrack too.
Ah, I see! Yes, that's exactly right. I wanted the title to be ambiguous enough that it would lull the audience to a false sense of security. Thanks again for watching and commenting!
The smirk she gave when she came into her home and realized someone was there was unnerving. Loved this!
This is one of the first short horrors I fell in love with years ago and I always come back to see it.
Thank-you! That really means a lot to hear you say that.
Hi, im going to watch this now .
Just because a twist is predictable doesnt mean its not good, this was well executed.
Her: * turns off all lights *
Him: *shit, this is not according to my plan*
Don't you just love when dinners delivered?
Sandra Ellis 😌
This is a good example of how you can tell an audience what's going to happen, but use that to build tension. I liked the motif of the spider web :"Step into my parlour, said the spider to the fly...". :)
Literally what Hitchcock meant when he used the word "suspense".
The oke on the train should thank his girlfriend that she arrived on time.
are you a relative of Sharon Gerhardt??? or Earnest Gerhardt?
I love it when the hunter becomes the hunted, it's always good
Finally, a short that actually showed the monster! Awesome!
There is a lot of short Filme showing the monster
Brilliant! Neat tables turned story with atmospheric camera work, solid acting and great effects! So glad I watched this!
Very masterfully done. Excellent. Great build up of suspense, fantastic use of the darkness and light flashes to reveal the monster just enough to get a sense of how horrific it is. Sharing to my page for Halloween spooks.
Brilliant, thanks Joshua!
SPOILERS Excellent photography in the house. Really added to the shocking ending. I loved the expressions of the intruder, his surprise and disorientation. This actually added a little comedy to the film. I thought that the dainty music was an excellent choice. Glad not to see another girl victimized. No wonder they don't like horror movies.
Ohhh, this was delightful. Been waiting to see something with this kind of twist show up. Very well done.
As others have already commented: the "monsters" feeling out of its apartment immediately after entering it was a tip off; the wigs and especially the dentures in the glass told me that the tables have turned. What a compliment to "30 Days of Night" type of story, well, sort of. Still, outstanding! Great job all of the way around!
This was DOPE! The CAT and Mouse game in reverse!
That was terrific! Loved the originality!
Great atmosphere, GREAT plot twist!
Thanks bunches for sharing!
Lol he messed with the wrong chick.
Now that's what I call ''Home Security'' ! ; )
The intruder got what he deserved.He was so excited about harming the female he thought inhabited the home. I appreciated this twist.
nice! I knew she was the bad guy as soon as she turned off the lights.
Even earlier... When at 4.30 she shows that subtle wicked smile
@@matsyever2979 Dude earlier than that... 1:14 if that guy's girl wasn't with him he would've gotten taken home for an easy 2 for 1 for the body count.
They were both 'the bad guy.'
Wow!! Just wow. Best short I've seen in a while. Great atmosphere, nice photis and 👍🏾 acting. 👌🏿🤩
Love the plot twist, very impressive 🔥
Just desserts! Love it when the creeps get theirs.
Oh yeah. Sweet video. Awesome monster makeup.
Plus, I love it when the wolf becomes the sheep.
I love films like this; which force the viewer to ask themselves, "Which one is REALLY the monster?". One slight change in an environment, can easily turn the "Predator" into the Prey.
Raymond Weston really glad you liked it and thanks for commenting!
Mr. Pervo should have really thought this through before breaking in!! I loved this short! It is going on my best of 100 in 5th place I think!! Very well done!
clever, good acting, brilliant that it was him been played, loved it. Also found myself wanting to see more stories on her!
Amazing! I rate this SHF 4.5 out of 5! Such an unexpected twist! Amazing job!
The hunter became the hunted. Fantastic! Another good one. Am I the only one binge watching Screamfest and it led here? LOL!
As soon as she flipped the main breaker, I was on the edge of my seat thinking, "Kill him, kill him, make him suffer!" Not scary really, more exciting and refreshing from all the over done cliches.
I love how when she flicked the lights, it made for a switch in perspective as well; you went from fearing for her to fearing her.
Holy shyt!!! Now THAT was scary and unique. Loved it! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
I'm hiding in the comments again!... Anyone who wants to join me can. I'll bring chips & dip... 😋
Rachael Ward I've got brownies!
I'll bring drinks!!
I'll bring the weed..
I'll bring the beer
I’ll get lollipops and chips
Finally the bad guy gets what he deserves! 👍
I love it when the predator becomes the prey. Loved it.
Amazing!!!! At first it had us guessing which is the monster until she switched the power off. I thought that the masked guy was a woman until I saw the beard but I think the mask looked feminine, was that deliberate?
Very original and different than conventional horrors, usually always is intruder the one who terrorize but this time he was a victim! Really unexpected and original!
Awesome! Even though t's an old premise using a vampire, it was done so well it seemed original. The way she/it attacked in a blur at the end was incredibly scary and so, so well done. BRAVO!
Predator becoming prey. Excellent!
One of the best horrors I have seen in a while. Well done to you and your team!
MotionBoatFilms Thanks very much man! Really happy you liked it.
This was great! One of the best short films I've seen on youtube. Great Plot twist!
Thanks very much Edward, glad you enjoyed it.
That mask made me think of "Les Yieux Sans Visage". I've always enjoyed movies featuring female monsters. Thanks for this.
Never seen a better loss of power!!! 5mins in and its ON! Great film. Thanks!
One of the better shorts I've seen....well done!
TO ROBIN WHITTEN and the Crew, especially the DP : The content, and compostion are absolutely fabulous. Sound FX and sound editing are perfect. Acting, A++++. Premise : A ++++. Unusual scenario. Entertainment factor : 9/10. I certainly hope to see more output from you people.
Dr. H. E. Sawyer, Jr., Writer. Filmmaker.
Grove, OK
Just Glorious! Woohoo!
Oh I loved this! Love how she got em first! Awesome job guys!!
SUCH AN AMAZING PLOT TWIST!!!😱😱😱
Yes! The irony was priceless.
Love films where creeps get theirs. I knew something was up with her when she saw the guy looking at her legs, then gave him the slow leg cross and smile, reeked of predator. This is a great short, "Billy" played a good role, loved the bug eyed look of fear on his face. Just desserts horror movies are my fav.
Well... See what SHOULD happen to perps like this guy? Well done! If only. Payback is, indeed, a motherfucker. Fine performances and production. Thanks to all!
This is my house if an intruder ever dares....
Big thumbs up. I saw the twist coming but I still loved it. Definitely worth a watch.
This is GOOD! Great job telling a horror story. 👍👍👍
An excellent horror short! Good use of suspense/shock.
Wonderful in every way! I LOVE the twist! Truly unexpected and edge-of-my-seat scary!
Who's been watching horror films for years and still looks at the comment section hoping they'll not find a spoiler? I do
Wow! Such an excelent film should have more views! Congrats! ^^
Thank-you! Please share it with anyone who might like it.
Really creepy and intense. Interesting plot, and the acting was good. The monster that appeared at the end was pretty scary. Great twist. Keep up the great work.
Thanks Mislav, glad you enjoyed it!
Well, That was intense!!! Loved it! Well done!🤗🤗
Dude, this is amazing. Really creepy and well shot! Loved every second of it. :D
Thanks man!
Who else was scared but so interested in watching it
Wow! Extremely well done. Great film
Now that's a great short horror movie.
The big strong male Hunter thinking he's got an easy prey.
Love this karma, basicalien!
Bravo👏👏👏
He wanted to eat her at dinner, but she ate him at lunch ... LOL
I loved this! I always love short horror movies!
Perves be hors d'oeuvres ;-)
Very good. I guess I started guessing when the mains were switched off.
This was like watching a full featured, big budget film.. I mean... Very intense...i was hooked throughout... Nice subway scene.. it was the set up for a lot of twists.
..and,oh, I forgot to say: Excellent! Bravissimo!!!
Nicely done ! Love the plot twists !
Great!! LOVE the twist. Excellent.
Really excellent. I really like it when tables are turned on intruders & creeps. Great reworking of what could have been a cliché - but wasn't. Good soundtrack too.
Quite fond of this film. It is done really well.
Very nice!! Enjoyed that! What was it filmed on?
Thanks very much! It was shot on an A7S.
I shot my newest short horror film on the Sony A5100. Cool little camera for the price! I'd like to have a go of the A7S! 🙂
I wish it was longer
👾And the tables have turned... 😏
That's a great production!
The twist is great =) Thank you!
The moment you realize you broke into the wrong house!!! When the lights go out.....
Awesome. Thank you! O_o
He made a mistake
That's what he gets for being evil and having evil thoughts met your match.
Another good one. Where have you folks been?
AWAAA..MAN , now that’s different!🎃🎃
Love the twist. Well done!
The build-up and intense anticipation is almost tangible in this short film. Practically popping out of my seat over here.
He's the victim in the end scary love it thanks for great story😀
4:40 when you know you done F...ed up!😂
Oh man. Helpless young women are just not what they used to be.
Well that's what makes for a good story!
just goes to show you don.t know who you are messing with that was brilliant
Thanks Dawn! Glad you liked it.
Excellent! I loved the set up and twist. Who is the actual "Monster" on the prowl?
Thanks Roy, glad you liked it. Do you mean who is the actress or are you after a bit of backstory?
I meant that the story sets you up believing one character is the "Monster" but twists. So you don't know "Who is the actual "Monster" on the prowl.
Ah, I see! Yes, that's exactly right. I wanted the title to be ambiguous enough that it would lull the audience to a false sense of security. Thanks again for watching and commenting!
Well crafted. Highly original!
Simply Brilliant!
Meanwhile ladki if you're bad , i am your dad
Awesome! Loved it thank you :D
Thank-you!
one of the best ones I've seen😱😱👍👍👍
Awesome! Loved how the tables turned on him.
Why you always want to war
when winning is just not far ?
The devil remains my target ..
Undertakings are in their pockets !