"How about instead of chasing an unknown intruder up the stairs to where the lights don't work, we just stay together, down here, where it's light and we can watch the only point of entry...and just call the police?" Finally, a relatable horror-movie protagonist. "No, I really want that Darwin award." ....there are two kinds of people. 😂
A rare gem in the world of horror. Very suspensful with great filming for only taking place in 3 rooms and a staircase. The monster's costume was top notch and her movements were her believable
I thought it was silly of that girl 2 just stand there, like an idiot, while light after light turned off! I would have ran out the door by the 2nd light out! Does she not have a flashlight on that cell phone of hers?? Meh!
Very nice! Considerable tension, build up, great shots, nail biting silence - enjoyed this quite a bit. Most impressive for only the second video on your channel.
One highly anticipated jumpscare and a half-baked ending jumpscare. It's a low-cost, youtube horror short film that still does a decent job for what it costs you... I can't take the guy seriously when he "falls" down the stairs nor when he's dragged back up, he slides down the stairs on his belly and then they rewind that footage for the following scene and its utterly HILARIOUS! ^-^ The script was likely taken from a child's scary stories book obtained at a school bookfair but works well enough to merit (considering most of all modern horror relies on simplicity to feel familiar to the audience and invoke the scare that it could be you next!) Feels like Crypt TV material. 10/10 for what this film tries to do.
omfg I NEVER FELT LIKE I JUMPED OUT OF MY SKIN BEFORE BUT DAMNED HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMFG!!!!!!! 1 minute an 45 seconds into the movie an I just died😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😰
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So, no lights work on the 2nd floor?.. should've called an electrician a while ago. House definitely has electrical problems. Which I assume aren't important now..
CHI Nation yep especially if you’re alone.🤦♀️ like instead of being stupid and curious about a random noise in your house alone get out or call someone
seriously believe me I am a deaf so i don't know what type of sound comes on horror movie....but when my brother was seeing this movie and suddenly he screamed loud and dropped my phone because of wearing earplugs ..... and I was laughing so hard at him..... 😂😂😂😂😂
Omg 10min of movie and i got the creeps and the chills. The music score really builds up the tension and makes u wanna look away. Seriously good job. I am wondering what u guys could do if you made a full movie...
Why don't their lights work upstairs? Call the landlord - "yeah, the upstairs lights don't work, AND there's a demon, can we get our deposit back?" The lesson is, DON'T INVESTIGATE! Leave & come back in daylight - didn't these people WATCH horror movies? This was pretty good though.
This just turned into a phone ad `` Do you see a creepy ass girl crawl up your stairs where there is no power? JUST USE YOUR NEW IPHONE7000 WITH 4567 HUNDRED GIGABITS AND A GIANT FLASHLIGHT!``
Now THIS is how you make jumpscares work..nicely done👌. The drawn out tension worked well too. It's definitely one I could watch more than once and still feel uneasy. Having the memory of a goldfish helps too😀
Ashley's husband, Patrick, posting: A good, scary film. Two thoughts that occurred to me was, who has an upstairs where the lights don't work? Second, why didn't she run out of the house screaming when Joe was pulled up the stairs. If he were unconscious, I would have agreed with his not fighting back, but man, I would have kicked, screamed, and grabbed every bannister post I could have. So that could be defined better. If he'd said, "I -- I can't move!" then we could think, she did something to him to paralyze him. His girlfriend should have run. The thing could have still caught her outside in the dark of night. Still, very scary. Well done overall. 4/5 stars.
It looks cheaply made but the building tension and the sincerely nightmarish face of the monster girl is so much better than most high budget horror films. Kudos!
Was thrilling.... but think she had time to call the police, wen she was so sure that somebody was there upstairs... anyways, enjoyed the film. Was good. 👌👌👌
Yeah I would have been flying out of that house almost as soon as I heard someone going upstairs! But it looked like the pale woman was running from something as well. If SHE was from something then I definitely don't want to meet whatever the hell she was trying to get away from!
Microcosm of the World Today: spoiler alert - - - - - Horrible monster drags boyfriend up stairs to disembowel and devour him - girlfriend has chance to run out door to seek safety and get help - instead...........girlfriend runs to smartphone to see if there are any incoming texts from stupid bimbo friends - girlfriend is then subsequently caught and devoured by same horrible beast - The End. We are doomed. Too stupid to live.
I’ll run to a neighbor house and knock and tell them that there was something in the house and say can I stay in your house until the cops come if I don’t feel at ease I’ll just go my parents crib and another thing in 6:57 both her hand on something else in 7:08 how tf is she holding that finger
Oh my god really good I was doing my makeup while I was watching this it was a bad idea because when she turned around and made me jump and I totally stabbed myself in the eye with my eyeliner
For as many things as I loved, I had as many critiques. It was very well done. Generally I find younger people playing adults in large home they own a bit of stretch that ruins immersion but you both did very well. The electricity not working upstairs was a bad plot device, it was immediately unbelievable and only there to give a reason for keeping the areas dark. However the tension and suspense you created upstairs was marvelous. Also finding the girl I think ruined the basis of your story which was taken from the poem. Making her a visible presence took the suspense away. Something that was always just seen out of the corner of your eye would have worked. It would have required some changes to the overall story but would have worked. Anyway, I really did enjoy. I'll check your other shorts out.
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Okay, I am never living anywhere that has more than one floor ... or a basement ... or a crawlspace ... or ... screw it, I'll just find one big room.
Same 😂
MN Irwin lol
MN Irwin I have a two story house with the attic dooR in the bathroom
Until you wake up in the middle of the night, and in the darkness see something standing in the corner across that big room.....
you are so funny lol
Me *opens the door*
*sees person*
"Excuse me"
*closes door*
YOU WOKE THE CHILDREN LADY *closes window* :question: why was i at the window dont ask
Could you please leave?
😂😹😹
Dizzy Lizzy @ 0
Dizzy Lizzy 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂I'm so dead
Let's All give a applause to the people that watched in full screen (:
Jorja Samagalski I did and now I think I sleep downstairs now
i made it halfway.......
why is that so special?
Thank u so much 😊 🙏 for appreciating me
"Look... I'm going up."
"Ok, I'll go outside."
The part with her coming down the stairs and not being able to run away…that’s right out of my nightmares.
Who just conveniently has an entire second floor with no electricity? 😒
"How about instead of chasing an unknown intruder up the stairs to where the lights don't work, we just stay together, down here, where it's light and we can watch the only point of entry...and just call the police?"
Finally, a relatable horror-movie protagonist.
"No, I really want that Darwin award."
....there are two kinds of people. 😂
Then you wouldn’t have a movie. 😂😂😂 My husband always wants to go see what sounds/looks strange. Too macho to show fear. 😂
Why do their stairs lead to the Shadow Realm😂
I find these short youtube horror movies much scarier than any mainstream horror movies. I never jump at horror movies, but I jumped in this...twice.
Watch REC.
Whoever watched it full screen I applaud you
CARO A I did and it's night too
I watched it on full screen for a minute. Regretted it soon after.
CARO A thanks
Thank u cause they s isn't scary
This isn't scary
A rare gem in the world of horror. Very suspensful with great filming for only taking place in 3 rooms and a staircase. The monster's costume was top notch and her movements were her believable
I thought it was silly of that girl 2 just stand there, like an idiot, while light after light turned off! I would have ran out the door by the 2nd light out! Does she not have a flashlight on that cell phone of hers?? Meh!
She's dumb...
Kat Alday me too 🏃♀️
She didn't even help her brother I mean she could've pulled him hard and ran with him 🤦♀️
AMAZING job drawing out the tension. Seriously-- you really know how to make silence work for you. I can't wait to see more from you guys. Make more!
The musical Cacophony at the beginning was an fantastic intro, made me feel unsafe from minute one 😂
Something that I want to tell to that girl after the boy pulled by the ghost : "Are you stupid or something? Get the hell out of there!"
I was forcing myself to watch it full screen but I had to keep pausing it to prepare myself😂😂
Xochitl Gonzalez 😂😂😂 me too
anybody else notice the movie they were watching was the trailer for the original Night of the Living Dead?
why would they go up stairs in the first place knowing that someone or perhaps something was upstairs
rule of horror number one... people are suicidaly stupid
Anita Harrell exactly. I like the girl in this...she's smart...just call the cops
Anita Harrell probably because the director told him too.
I dont think they were stupid if someone enter your home and if its a doubt you will definitely chk first then call the cops
That's rule of so called horror stories
Very nice! Considerable tension, build up, great shots, nail biting silence - enjoyed this quite a bit. Most impressive for only the second video on your channel.
Nice. The "thing" should have her own RUclips makeup channel lol
Head phones on, full volume, im going full screen! Wish me luck....
One highly anticipated jumpscare and a half-baked ending jumpscare. It's a low-cost, youtube horror short film that still does a decent job for what it costs you... I can't take the guy seriously when he "falls" down the stairs nor when he's dragged back up, he slides down the stairs on his belly and then they rewind that footage for the following scene and its utterly HILARIOUS! ^-^
The script was likely taken from a child's scary stories book obtained at a school bookfair but works well enough to merit (considering most of all modern horror relies on simplicity to feel familiar to the audience and invoke the scare that it could be you next!)
Feels like Crypt TV material.
10/10 for what this film tries to do.
They reactions was wayyy unrealistic
That was a real jump scare..I laugh on horror movies but this jump scare really got me.
omfg I NEVER FELT LIKE I JUMPED OUT OF MY SKIN BEFORE BUT DAMNED HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMFG!!!!!!! 1 minute an 45 seconds into the movie an I just died😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😰
Wooh! ! you died😂😂😂
hahaha ya watch the the visit short story lol
Wtf why would u give me a heart attack😭😭😂😂😂
This is why I have a metal bat in my room (and car).
The movie could have just ended at 1:45 because it was just that freaky.
Is there no front exit door in these homes? Leave the house. Why remain??Gheeze!
Rate this short film on IMDB: www.imdb.com/title/tt13075618/?ref_=nm_flmg_dr_8
And check out the other shorts on my channel: ruclips.net/channel/UCj--t05mOLl5lFa1A1n_DSQvideos
So, no lights work on the 2nd floor?.. should've called an electrician a while ago. House definitely has electrical problems. Which I assume aren't important now..
"Aayyyeee! There's a ghosty beasty up the stairs...I'm gonna touch it!", Steve Irwin Aussie Voice.
OKay, ya freakin scared me! Are you happy now?! That was fun! Nice job!
These kids must be thugs bc they don't act like it's scary to have a pale stranger in the house. Way too calm for me.
Sunny !! Exactly 😂😂 too calm I would’ve left a hole in the front door
Life718 lol
Although the quality isn't so good and the acting is amateur, I AM STILL IMPRESSED!
I love it when the girl's eyes keep shifting to the stairs. That's one fine acting!
First line is "wot"
This is authentic UK
The girl was literally waiting for the lights to turn off😂😂
This was the first time I watched something scary and covered my eyes
Moral of the story: if you see or hear something in the house get out & call the police
CHI Nation yep especially if you’re alone.🤦♀️
like instead of being stupid and curious about a random noise in your house alone get out or call someone
OMG THAT WAS SO GREAT!THE SOUNDBOARD AND THE MUSIC FITS SO MUCH WITH THE FILM!and good job for scaring me a couple times XD
Ehm... I have stairs in my house and I was already scared of them... Thanks for adding to the fear :/
Sarah: the lights don't work up there
Me: why the hell not
Sarah: I paid only half my light bill
Australian and I didn't realise how aussie I sounded till I saw this 😂
Yup..same😆👌🏻. Except my Aussie twang includes a lot more cursing...I'm not very ladylike 😏
My god I was watching this with headphone with full volume I just nearly got an heart attack
seriously believe me I am a deaf so i don't know what type of sound comes on horror movie....but when my brother was seeing this movie and suddenly he screamed loud and dropped my phone because of wearing earplugs ..... and I was laughing so hard at him..... 😂😂😂😂😂
Omg 10min of movie and i got the creeps and the chills. The music score really builds up the tension and makes u wanna look away. Seriously good job. I am wondering what u guys could do if you made a full movie...
that jumpscare scared me! and i hardly get scared! wtf
he should close the door and run back on seeing the thing.instead he continued looking at her.such heroism shoukd be avoided.
when the doors opened and after 10 secs of silence i got my kydney in heart and heart in brain
Yoooooo I was trying 2 prepare my self but I stilled jumped🤣🤣🤣🤣
Why don't their lights work upstairs? Call the landlord - "yeah, the upstairs lights don't work, AND there's a demon, can we get our deposit back?" The lesson is, DON'T INVESTIGATE! Leave & come back in daylight - didn't these people WATCH horror movies? This was pretty good though.
This just turned into a phone ad `` Do you see a creepy ass girl crawl up your stairs where there is no power? JUST USE YOUR NEW IPHONE7000 WITH 4567 HUNDRED GIGABITS AND A GIANT FLASHLIGHT!``
Sir Gothic 😂😂😂lol
“I saw a man upon the stair, I looked again he wasn’t there.” Sounds like my dad, S.O.B left to get cigarettes and that was 25 years ago!
*has a straight face* "I'm scared"
Damn near soiled myself on the jumpscares💩😂😂
i hate when there is no sound then they just blast it...
Now THIS is how you make jumpscares work..nicely done👌. The drawn out tension worked well too. It's definitely one I could watch more than once and still feel uneasy. Having the memory of a goldfish helps too😀
- 5:50 ggrrrr uuuuUuuUuh..
- Samara!! :D how are you?
Girl: "I'm getting the creeps standing here"
Me: hmmmmm I wonder why🤔🤔🤔😑
"I saw a man upon the stair
I looked again he wasn't there
He wasn't there again today
I wish the man would go away"
FUCK, MAN THESE CHILLS.
**sees thing run up stairs**
**stands up, opens front door, leaves**
The End.
I jumped a couple times. If I were to give it a star rating, I'd give it 4 and a half stars
The cords that hold my heart in place collapsed cause it was beating to rapidly
i don.t jump easily but god i nearly jumped out of my skin
if you jumped to this then im afraid you do do jump easily hahahaha
Dawn Finch Me too
i freaking jumped out of my seat, holy crap . amazing job
CONGRATS THE FIRST TIME I GOT SCARED BUT WITHOUT SCREAMING
you literally stand there seeing something that looks like a monster?? joe you got what you deserve. somehow i still like this video.
I jumped bro and screamed and through my phone!
Something tells me you watched the Grudge.
Like Vac said put olive oil on the steps so than the demon would fall down and hit the door, and crack its head open hehe
For a second I thought the title said," THE THING FROM MARS." LOL XD
If I saw something run up the stairs I would've been out of there with cellphone in hand calling the bishop and my mom.
Ashley's husband, Patrick, posting: A good, scary film. Two thoughts that occurred to me was, who has an upstairs where the lights don't work? Second, why didn't she run out of the house screaming when Joe was pulled up the stairs. If he were unconscious, I would have agreed with his not fighting back, but man, I would have kicked, screamed, and grabbed every bannister post I could have. So that could be defined better. If he'd said, "I -- I can't move!" then we could think, she did something to him to paralyze him. His girlfriend should have run. The thing could have still caught her outside in the dark of night. Still, very scary. Well done overall. 4/5 stars.
Ashley Potter maybe they just stopped working sometime earlier in the day and a repairman is coming the following morning
I have to admit that really scared me, good job you guys!
What this girl was waiting with the cell and the door next ,maybe the Ghost said Peek a boo,😮,love from Puerto Rico 💋💋💋💋
Ive never been so freaked out in my life excellent video😱😱😱
thats one hot ghost :O
I had to keep pausing the video to prevent me having a scared to death stroke
You can't win a stairing contest against a ghost.
It looks cheaply made but the building tension and the sincerely nightmarish face of the monster girl is so much better than most high budget horror films. Kudos!
Was thrilling.... but think she had time to call the police, wen she was so sure that somebody was there upstairs... anyways, enjoyed the film. Was good. 👌👌👌
l watched it in full screen, the ghost makeup wasn't scary, but the jump scares were frightening.
made my heart jump in my throat!! 😲🙁😯
Yeah I would have been flying out of that house almost as soon as I heard someone going upstairs! But it looked like the pale woman was running from something as well. If SHE was from something then I definitely don't want to meet whatever the hell she was trying to get away from!
Jennifer Martinez 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Jennifer Martinez 👉👌
lil boy deserved it she warned him like 30 times. (Good job btw)
Vanessa Mosad but she didn't deserve that. Poor that Asian lady
Spook at 6:54 “relax, my bare feet are cold, I only want your shoes” 😂🤣🤪
Microcosm of the World Today:
spoiler alert - - - - -
Horrible monster drags boyfriend up stairs to disembowel and devour him - girlfriend has chance to run out door to seek safety and get help - instead...........girlfriend runs to smartphone to see if there are any incoming texts from stupid bimbo friends - girlfriend is then subsequently caught and devoured by same horrible beast - The End.
We are doomed. Too stupid to live.
Good job dude! i love the video very much! I can just tell because I just jumped out of my seat when the ghost came after the boy XD
I’ll run to a neighbor house and knock and tell them that there was something in the house and say can I stay in your house until the cops come if I don’t feel at ease I’ll just go my parents crib and another thing in 6:57 both her hand on something else in 7:08 how tf is she holding that finger
I saw this film two years ago and it scared the hell out of me . Very good horror film indeed .
Thanks , love from me to . From Karina . Xx
Who thinks that Indian door knobs are far good ?
Stupid people live in horror films. "I will just go up and check out that freaky little monster that was watching us".
Oh my god really good I was doing my makeup while I was watching this it was a bad idea because when she turned around and made me jump and I totally stabbed myself in the eye with my eyeliner
For as many things as I loved, I had as many critiques. It was very well done. Generally I find younger people playing adults in large home they own a bit of stretch that ruins immersion but you both did very well. The electricity not working upstairs was a bad plot device, it was immediately unbelievable and only there to give a reason for keeping the areas dark. However the tension and suspense you created upstairs was marvelous.
Also finding the girl I think ruined the basis of your story which was taken from the poem. Making her a visible presence took the suspense away. Something that was always just seen out of the corner of your eye would have worked. It would have required some changes to the overall story but would have worked.
Anyway, I really did enjoy. I'll check your other shorts out.
Falling down from the stairs seems to be more fun than water slides in amusement parks.
Excellent! Kept nice and simple, which added to the effectiveness (imo).
It's night and I have to go to sleep soon..the stairs that go to my upstairs to my bedroom are always dark..help 😰😱😰😨😱😰😰 overall I LOVE THIS MOVIE
But why don’t these people just turn on the lights?
I was using headphones and it scared the fuck outta me
this scared the hell out of me. My mom literally came in a said stop screaming :/ and she should've helped her boyfriend :(
Wow!! That is really scary.......acting!!! 😬
Also, why do I always watch these as I'm laying in bed and about to go to sleep? 🤦