I'm not sure where you got your transcription but I believe there are quite a few mistakes (just an example: bar 8,10,16...). I have the original 'Lyric Moments' book and also all the internet versions I've seen until now do match it. That said, if you're willing to accept some criticism, technical execution is ok but I would pay more attention to dynamics.☺
Hey, thanks for the criticism. I will pay more attention to dynamics. I'm self taught so I really learnt everything haphazardly and I only improve thanks to comments on my channel like yours, so thanks 😁. I will remake the video with the proper dynamics I won't delete this one though but I'll add the other one to my playlists. Thanks once again 😁👍.
Beautiful
Thanks for listening 😁
Слушаю Вас и вспоминаю музыкальную школу. У меня был замечательный педагог по фортепиано. Спасибо за ностальгию . 🙏
Это здорово, я бы сказал то же самое, но я в основном самоучка.
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@@Ирина-с4х3шThanks 😁
I'm not sure where you got your transcription but I believe there are quite a few mistakes (just an example: bar 8,10,16...). I have the original 'Lyric Moments' book and also all the internet versions I've seen until now do match it. That said, if you're willing to accept some criticism, technical execution is ok but I would pay more attention to dynamics.☺
Hey, thanks for the criticism. I will pay more attention to dynamics. I'm self taught so I really learnt everything haphazardly and I only improve thanks to comments on my channel like yours, so thanks 😁.
I will remake the video with the proper dynamics I won't delete this one though but I'll add the other one to my playlists. Thanks once again 😁👍.