Mommy Makes a Heart Break | F4F [Married] [Angst] [Yelling] [D/S Dynamic]

[@SapphosPenGame]

Hello, writer here!
For those asking/interested, I will be writing a part 2 as I intended it to be a 3 part script.
And I would love for Vi to continue the fills if she’d be interested ❤

[@elise2105]

Thank you so much for the script, the writing was top tier 😭❤️

[@SapphosPenGame]

@@elise2105 Thank you. I’m glad so many of you are keen on it and that I was able to have someone of Vi caliber perform it 🖤

[@Gwen1001]

what an amazing script, the suspense kept me on my toes the whole time

[@morefrecklesthansense9817]

Yessss

[@sidneycrand6215]

You hurrt my heart so much. Really well done.

[@hot_soup4319]

I feel like if you're married and you come home to an upset spouse who hits you with the phrase "what day is it" you should *immediately* know exactly how you fucked up lol.

[@aliasfakename-mf2jh]

I thought it was our anniversary but missing the IVF is so much worse.

[@lilyralynxx007]

@@aliasfakename-mf2jhI was waiting on birthday or anniversary. When she said IVF...my stomach dropped and I felt more wronged than I should have considering it was an audio. Like my heart SHATTERED in my chest, and the betrayal felt way too real.

[@Tsuyuri193]

​@@lilyralynxx007😭😭 My heart i can't

[@Someone-ro8yv]

WE NEED PART 2 don't leave it unresolved please 😭

[@noonecomment7197]

Damn bro the ending scene's voice acting was top notch,especially the crying acting.

[@JakeSm4sh]

I love a Dom/Sub relationship

[@Prismust]

I hope you had tea and rest after recording this, thank you🤍🤍

[@lpl874]

Vi that was the best voice acting I heard yet. My heart broke for not just your character but the readers. This was so heartbreaking yet such a wonderful performance. 🥺❤

[@JimtheCornFarmer]

I AM INCONSOLABLE YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS

[@Lunaria_ResonantHeart]

Sometimes you just listen to an audio to cry your eyes out. Bravo 👏👏👏😭

[@CutzeSapphic]

GOD DAMIT MY MAKEUP IS RUINED

[@aliasfakename-mf2jh]

I wish I har the energy to do my makeup anymore

[@msgirl6602]

PART 2 IS A MUST HERE!! I literally cry my eyes out, what a great script

[@Prismust]

This was the saddest yet😢

[@Kris-wx8lx]

dude the ivf appointment took me off guard so bad oh my god

[@eliannasurita9338]

We have the same cats😂🎉

[@EllaEllaAudios]

I'm not equipped to listen to something like this god

[@meismi6746]

that was a heavy one, you did a super good job with it!

[@KuuraHelmi]

This was... Wow... That hurt

[@sidneycrand6215]

That was some incredible acting vi. The panic and pain in your voice break my heart every time I listen.

[@AndyKoldwell]

This is one of the times that listening to the audio made me feel seen. There have been 3 times when I’ve done big screw ups (all different, so at least I can say I learn and don’t do the same thing twice). I felt exactly like Vi each time.
I don’t know how the script will go, but for anyone reading this that did something to hurt their partner and are looking for advice: (1) know that there isn’t a quick fix, (2) learn from your mistake and plan for how to keep it from happening, (3) implement your changes and prove that it doesn’t happen again.
Even if your partner forgives or stops being as mad, it hurt their trust and the only way to rebuild that is slow and boring by being trustworthy and by showing that you will really do what you say you’ll do. Prove that that instance was an outlier.

[@godless-4034]

Wow VI, you never disappoint.
I don’t know how to explain this, but i felt this audio in my stomach…
Keep making magic 💘

[@theLadyofSpoons]

crying and shaking in fear and hurt this is the thing i am most afraid of fucking up so badly when she needs me the most and either not knowing how to or being unable to do anything to fix it please tell me it won’t happen please please i couldn’t live with myself and i just know that one day my dumbass is going to fumble into something like this and it will all be over please someone tell me it will be ok

[@pricefieldx]

"what do you do when you can't do nothing, but there's nothing you can do?"
"You do what you can"

[@bean-ir8fi]

If you're afraid of the possibility of messing up, that likely means you'll end up somewhere where you won't. You're safe, and you aren't a fuck-up

[@theLadyofSpoons]

@@bean-ir8fi 🫂💜 thank you, that’s actually very comforting and helps soothe that anxiety quite effectively

[@Synthetic94]

Just be better

[@Marsthepuppie]

Im not crying you are! 😢

[@elise2105]

Thank you Vi 😭❤️ omg the voice acting was so so good i felt like crying too 😭😭😭😭

[@Akimatu]

So happy to see scripts from GWASapphic showing up on RUclips 🎉

[@mx_danger]

Was not expecting that kinda story. Really good performance. I'm a little curious about how many takes it took. Audio quality was great, too.

[@Joys2cool4u]

I haven’t heard Vi curse so much in an audio, making me giggle and everything 😂

[@theyluvvrosee]

aww vi this was a sad audio but at the same time it was well scripted ❤️!

[@sapphicscarakomi]

I NEED A SEQUEL I AM SOBBING SO HARDDDDD

[@lilyralynxx007]

Was waiting for birthday or anniversary or something.........this was much, much worse. We are BEGGING for a part two to heal our hearts.

[@mitchellhouser1572]

Damn this was emotional 🥺

[@romaramirez5578]

Well that was intense 😢

[@SapphosPenGame]

Thanks again for the fill Vi. I knew you would be exceptional for this and take care with it ❤ Thank you

[@Prismust]

Thank you vi❤ I'm addicted

[@pricefieldx]

.....damn that went from overreaction to completely understandable real quick

[@aarrington4589]

Part 2 plssssss it can’t end like thiss 😢😢

[@Kay_md]

PART TWOOOOOO😭😭😭😭😭😭❤️

[@izzyjenniferariel3608]

😢🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 as soon as you started crying I felt guilty for saying all that stuff

[@winter_queen1818]

I really liked it :3 would be nice to hear more

[@RebleGreyWarden]

My heart 🥺

[@MrSHADOWANGEL999]

My poor poor heart😢

[@Blueberry_Koi]

:( Please no sad end

[@jo-elle_lee]

Is there going to be a part 2❤

[@butterntoast1249]

WHERES THE PART TWO SAPPHIC WERE SUFFERING

[@ho1n]

Shit …please don’t cry i forgive you

[@eliannasurita9338]

I don’t think I could ever have a argument with you because you yelling at me is hot 😅

[@Tsuyuri193]

😏 Ooh

[@DeliriousComfort]

😮 ow no 😢

[@aliasfakename-mf2jh]

OH I thought it was our anniversary. That’s…so much worse.

[@ixchelle2232]

Pt 2 🙌✨️

[@aliasfakename-mf2jh]

I NEED THE PART 2

[@naturesuniverse1]

i’m crying

[@austinsmom20021]

Not isabella from tpn😭

[@isarnl]

Pt 2 🙏🏻

[@hotshot104]

“What day is it”
Well I’m starting to feel like it’s my death day

[@cecilia_sorceress]

I'm gonna watch this, and if there's a break up I'm gonna cry.
Update: my hesrt cant take this😢

[@Sh_xd]

😭😭

[@lilyralynxx007]

I think I would have preferred a breakup...This hurt too much.

[@Raewrlddd._]

PART 222

[@clar4baby]

Up

[@nurazizahptk2331]

Part 2 please

[@annecharizzjane]

Part 2 plsss

[@annecharizzjane]

Part 2❤❤❤

[@laughingstock411]

Part 2 please 🙏😭🤍

[@Emily_North]

Comment For Engaygement🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍🌈

[@theyluvvrosee]

💕💕💕

[@theLadyofSpoons]

🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍⚧️💛🤍💜🖤

[@jo-elle_lee]

🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍⚧️🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍⚧️

[@moraruh8977]

I love the vid Vi. It's my birthday today and I'd love for you to reply

[@theyluvvrosee]

happy birthday!! 💕🎂🍰

[@bukichi]

yoo happy birthday! 🙌🎉

[@clar4baby]

Happy birthday 💐💐

[@KhalidJones-s8f]

why did she forget

[@Women114]

Kms I thought this was going a completely different direction at the beginning I thought like she forgot a anniversary or birthday or something but IVF appointment that’s even worse. I really love the storyline, but the only thing that I would change is the fact that she calls herself mommy like multiple times like you’re gonna have a child please don’t refer to yourself as mommy I don’t know it might just be my ik but other than that, I really loved the storyline.

[@gh0stfacebaby572]

Its hot asf that she calls herself mommy tf are u on?