i'd probably make ht eorgan a bit louder in this one, I think it can be a bit more prominent without messing with the mix, and I think it would make the subsequent section where it drops out in favour of the thicker and more mellow texture of the strings + choir more satisfying of a transition. also the vibrato on the strings at 1:07 makes it sound like the players have parkinson's lol, but I don't have a solid suggestion for how to improve that while keeping the same effect you'd want for this part. i'd maybe start by trying to slow the vibrato effect so that it sounds a bit more deliberate and less robotic.. also I think the part at 1:25 would be a good opportunity to build up the strings in volume, and maybe intensify the vibrato before the loop, just before the accompaniment drops down and the solo organ comes back in. i really like the general balance of instruments here otherwise, especially the transition at 0:46
i'd probably make ht eorgan a bit louder in this one, I think it can be a bit more prominent without messing with the mix, and I think it would make the subsequent section where it drops out in favour of the thicker and more mellow texture of the strings + choir more satisfying of a transition. also the vibrato on the strings at 1:07 makes it sound like the players have parkinson's lol, but I don't have a solid suggestion for how to improve that while keeping the same effect you'd want for this part. i'd maybe start by trying to slow the vibrato effect so that it sounds a bit more deliberate and less robotic.. also I think the part at 1:25 would be a good opportunity to build up the strings in volume, and maybe intensify the vibrato before the loop, just before the accompaniment drops down and the solo organ comes back in. i really like the general balance of instruments here otherwise, especially the transition at 0:46