The first story was just dumb. I think it was way over the top. I think it was made up either made up or they just added so many words to make it. I don’t know this wonderful great articulate story and I just couldn’t even get through it.
Im 10 mins in and lost the plot whats going on? All i hear is how her love is perfevt than terrible than lots of over explained day to day stuff on her emotions?
I think she's saying they seem like a perfect couple and at first, they were. Overtime, he became more and more controlling and she started painting? Edit: she found her inner strength through painting.
... These are not a stories for reddit .. ITs a bloody romance novel.. Please reddit .. Start a fiction group.. Give these writers a place for their drivel..... Still love your videos tho.. I just have to laugh ...
Today on Reddit I learned about the troll rage bait posts as well. They take a real post and then make up a scenario from someone else’s point of view, I guess it’s a play on that “if this was a guy posting this, people would say ____” type thing
WTF is up with those OPs writing those stories using such grandiose language? It makes them sound less genuine and more like creative writing exercises, even if meat of the story sounds fairly credible. And yeah, no revenge to be found in story 1.
in the first story when Bandon said "she wore the Trousers" as he called it in the relationship sounds like it's another manipulation tactic for her to feel sorry for him and not leave. it is most likely BS is what im saying. i have seen it way more than i would like when it comes to stories like these (but when it turns into revenge i can't get enough) lol good on her for leaving
Thought 1- Ok clearly OP of sorry 1 likes to be dramatic Thought 2- 5:50 TO GET TO A PROBLEM?! Thought 3- I should go into the comments and...oh. Ooooh nooo... everyone feels the same, and one person said there wasn't even a revenge! How long IS this? Thought 4- 17 MINUTES 44 SECONDS HELL NO, NO NO NO I'M DONE NEXT VIDEO
Thought 1- Ok clearly OP of sorry 1 likes to be dramatic Thought 2- 5:50 TO GET TO A PROBLEM?! Thought 3- I should go into the comments and...oh. Ooooh nooo... everyone feels the same, and one person said there wasn't even a revenge! How long IS this? Thought 4- 17 MINUTES 44 SECONDS HELL NO, NO NO NO I'M DONE NEXT VIDEO
Story 1 sounds like a middle school short story
Short? OP takes 3 days to tell a 2 minute story!
@@bbbeebee7176in middle school, short stories are a misnomer. Long = short
It just went on and on and on
Overly descriptive for NO REASON AT ALL
Posters talk about the word count… obviously not this poster 😂
Geez somebody please wake me up when it's over 😴
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Omg! By the end of story 1, I totally understood why the guy started to hate her haha
The first story was just dumb. I think it was way over the top. I think it was made up either made up or they just added so many words to make it. I don’t know this wonderful great articulate story and I just couldn’t even get through it.
Story 1 R/slash bad writing ✍️ & also seems like she probably wasn’t paying rent or hiding something causing a rift …
Im 10 mins in and lost the plot whats going on? All i hear is how her love is perfevt than terrible than lots of over explained day to day stuff on her emotions?
I think she's saying they seem like a perfect couple and at first, they were. Overtime, he became more and more controlling and she started painting?
Edit: she found her inner strength through painting.
Yea, I blacked out several times and got back on and still didn't hear a revenge part
the love stuff was too much i had to skip passed it 😭
... These are not a stories for reddit .. ITs a bloody romance novel.. Please reddit .. Start a fiction group.. Give these writers a place for their drivel..... Still love your videos tho.. I just have to laugh ...
Reddit does it's called fiction writers or something like that.
Today on Reddit I learned about the troll rage bait posts as well.
They take a real post and then make up a scenario from someone else’s point of view, I guess it’s a play on that “if this was a guy posting this, people would say ____” type thing
If I had been op in the last story, prison would have been the least of stepdad's worries.
WTF is up with those OPs writing those stories using such grandiose language? It makes them sound less genuine and more like creative writing exercises, even if meat of the story sounds fairly credible.
And yeah, no revenge to be found in story 1.
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Have a good afternoon Steven
1st story was sweet. I mean sickly sweet, like throwing a box of store baked goods to trash and the smell makes you vomit sweet.
Hi thank you for reading online it is so helpful I can do work and other things because of it so thanks
in the first story when Bandon said "she wore the Trousers" as he called it in the relationship sounds like it's another manipulation tactic for her to feel sorry for him and not leave. it is most likely BS is what im saying. i have seen it way more than i would like when it comes to stories like these (but when it turns into revenge i can't get enough) lol good on her for leaving
No!
I think Bill in story 2 is Bill in telltale TWD season 2 and it seems he is a pal of Epstein
side note skinny dipping with your children is f-ing weird
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Had to skip story 1, the cringe was too strong
Story 2 I don't think Siamese twins is what op thinks it is
I'm sorry but my stomach hurt from laughter when dubai and somalia were mentioned as a threat because wtf lol
Story One: Interminable and unlikely. Where is the revenge?
Does Brandon unhealthily love the number 5?
Thought 1- Ok clearly OP of sorry 1 likes to be dramatic
Thought 2- 5:50 TO GET TO A PROBLEM?!
Thought 3- I should go into the comments and...oh. Ooooh nooo... everyone feels the same, and one person said there wasn't even a revenge! How long IS this?
Thought 4- 17 MINUTES 44 SECONDS HELL NO, NO NO NO I'M DONE NEXT VIDEO
Steven, dude.. what was up with that first story? Doesn’t really fit your standard story
I wished he would proofread these before recording...
Story one is actually making me cringe with this writing its so cursed.
Thought 1- Ok clearly OP of sorry 1 likes to be dramatic
Thought 2- 5:50 TO GET TO A PROBLEM?!
Thought 3- I should go into the comments and...oh. Ooooh nooo... everyone feels the same, and one person said there wasn't even a revenge! How long IS this?
Thought 4- 17 MINUTES 44 SECONDS HELL NO, NO NO NO I'M DONE NEXT VIDEO