Great video! Great Essay! Thank you creating videos and offering such sage advice. These tips can be applied in all kinds of writings not just college essays.
Thank you so much for making these videos! They’ve helped me immensely throughout the admissions process. I used to be extremely intimidated when it came to approaching essays, but after watching your videos they became much more approachable. You’re truly a lifesaver 😭❤️
I was starting on a this is me essay but stopped halfway because I didn’t like how it was going, but you’ve helped me get motivated and I think I’m going to start it back up!
Can you make a video on kind of like the timeline of how we should take on the essays if we want to be finished by school starting or at least the end of first quarter (~October)?
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. We have a few options for getting 1:1 college essay support: 1.) If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and our team will be in touch with you soon to share more details about our 1:1 support and how to schedule a call to learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching 2.) If our packages are out of range, we are offering asynchronous reviews of college essays/applications with our Complete Application Review service, which you can learn more about and sign up for here: students.collegeessayguy.com/complete-application-review Lastly, we always have free and pay-what-you-can courses. We recommend starting with our two signature essay courses here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses Happy writing, CEG Team
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. Unfortunately, no. Super busy this time of year so I'm unavailable for one-time essay revisions. There are a few options for you though! 1. Submit your essay for review at Prompt: prompt.com/ceg/ 2. Submit your essay for a review from my team at College Vine: www.collegevine.com/essays/review/expert/o/3 Hope this helps! I'm sure you're doing great!
omg, I need help... I am writing an essay about languages/nationalities bc I am a language student. when I was trying to look for some good tips, I saw this video and here, you shared a very similar essay just like mine. what should I do? :(((
I am preuvian Today my wallet was stolen. I like to eat ceviche y chaufa. And just some seconds ago my bad was stolen. This is mi XD Okno I really like the essaaay I am so interested in the five sense tech. Thanks a bunch. Greetings from Perú
Hey, thank you so much for your video! Do you think a common app essay can be controversial as well? Or rather: HOW controversial can a common app essay be? Thank you!
I would say 3/10 controversial might be OK. Don't just be controversial for controversy's sake, though. A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
Hey, College Essay Guy! I want to write my essay about the best hamburger I've ever eaten in my life, but as a metaphor of life because it had amazing parts, but some that disappointed. I ate it during an exchange, also one of the best things that ever happened to me. I wanted to write it without saying it's a hamburger, but say it only in the end. Do you think that would be a bad/weird essay?
Interesting! Essays with extended metaphors like these are fairly common and can be often difficult to pull off, but if done well, could be cool. I'd recommend writing a first draft and having a trusted teacher/mentor/friend read it to share feedback.
Hmm...I don't think that would be up to you. Not every high school teacher is equipped to do the same job as a counselor. If your school has a counseling or college & career center, I recommend starting there. If not, try getting in touch with someone at your school who knows more about the resources available to you.
The personal statement doesn't necessarily need to include a connection to your major. Plenty of schools ask for additional supplemental essay prompts--with a "Why major?" prompt being one of the most common.
Hi there! You should probably develop your own style/format/structure for your college essays. Simply copying the essay example and replacing keywords or phrases is plagiarizing. Hope this helps.
Like I am hesitant about writing in the personal common app essay about " the blessing of being extrovert " or how eachHarry Potter character represent me.I love both topics and I can write both freely which one you think is the best to stand out?
Either one could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Will this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?" If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
How am I gonna get into my dream uni when such Shakespeares are writing the essays?
Ha! You got this. :)
RIGHT!???
Exactly
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Great video! Great Essay! Thank you creating videos and offering such sage advice. These tips can be applied in all kinds of writings not just college essays.
You're so welcome! Thanks for watching.
Great video thank you so much. The video has helped me a lot
Awesome. Thanks for watching!
Bruh, they’re are allowed to make structures? My collage just says, “copy and paste the words into this box” 😂
LOL
Ethan is it true that you need to be reincarnated as a 17th century English writer to get in ?
Evidence suggests YES! (joking)
This is me... That essay is still blowing my mind ♥
Glad you liked it!
Thank you so much for making these videos! They’ve helped me immensely throughout the admissions process. I used to be extremely intimidated when it came to approaching essays, but after watching your videos they became much more approachable. You’re truly a lifesaver 😭❤️
I'm so glad! Thanks for being here. :)
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I visualize things but I don't know how to make others visualize what I say. That's what my problem is. But I'm gonna work on it from now. Thank you 😊
You can do it!
@@Collegeessayguy You encourage me a lot. I'm so grateful to you.
thanks for the effort you make for these vids!
You're welcome. :) Glad you like them!
I was starting on a this is me essay but stopped halfway because I didn’t like how it was going, but you’ve helped me get motivated and I think I’m going to start it back up!
Awesome! Happy I could help.
This man is well spoken and straightforward!!!!
Like .. THANK U SO MUCH!
And the essay is just a WHOLE vibe ✨ I wonder who wrote it
Most essay examples in my videos are from past students who worked with us at College Essay Guy. :)
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Can you make a video on kind of like the timeline of how we should take on the essays if we want to be finished by school starting or at least the end of first quarter (~October)?
Noted! Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Ethan! I always learn something from you.
Thanks for saying so! :)
tearing up at the example essay. it was lovely.
Agreed. Thanks for watching!
this is actually extremely helpful. but the values link isnt working please help..
Weird! Here is the direct link (just checked to make sure it's working): www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/the-values-exercise
My God this was so helpful. Thank you very much.
Glad it was helpful! Thanks for watching.
This is me , is what essay prompt om the common app.
Please can i send in my essay for review
Hi there! Thanks for writing in.
We have a few options for getting 1:1 college essay support:
1.) If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and our team will be in touch with you soon to share more details about our 1:1 support and how to schedule a call to learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching
2.) If our packages are out of range, we are offering asynchronous reviews of college essays/applications with our Complete Application Review service, which you can learn more about and sign up for here: students.collegeessayguy.com/complete-application-review
Lastly, we always have free and pay-what-you-can courses. We recommend starting with our two signature essay courses here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
Happy writing,
CEG Team
Bravo, great advice. Do you review essays?
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. Unfortunately, no. Super busy this time of year so I'm unavailable for one-time essay revisions. There are a few options for you though!
1. Submit your essay for review at Prompt: prompt.com/ceg/
2. Submit your essay for a review from my team at College Vine: www.collegevine.com/essays/review/expert/o/3
Hope this helps! I'm sure you're doing great!
@@Collegeessayguy I filled in a form on college vine and I haven't gotten a response
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Make a video about how to stand out in the extracurricular activities section
Noted!
@Omar Adel can you be a little respectful? At least say please, can you... BASIC HUMAN DECENCY!!
omg, I need help... I am writing an essay about languages/nationalities bc I am a language student. when I was trying to look for some good tips, I saw this video and here, you shared a very similar essay just like mine. what should I do? :(((
Hmmm, maybe you should apply these tips to your own essay! More resources on my website: www.collegeessayguy.com/
Thanks for watching!
What prompt would this go along with? Love your videos!
I'm mostly speaking to the Prompt 7 - "Topic of your choice" option. :)
@@Collegeessayguy could it work for prompt one?
@@chloehouwman1490 I feel the same
@@madhushriiyengar7156which uni are you applying to?
This was incredibly well explained
I am preuvian
Today my wallet was stolen. I like to eat ceviche y chaufa. And just some seconds ago my bad was stolen.
This is mi XD
Okno
I really like the essaaay I am so interested in the five sense tech. Thanks a bunch. Greetings from Perú
Oh no! Sorry about your wallet. Thanks for being here.
@@Collegeessayguy it was a joke jajajaj I was trying to copy the essay method jajaa in a funny way . Thanks for the videos
Hey, thank you so much for your video! Do you think a common app essay can be controversial as well? Or rather: HOW controversial can a common app essay be?
Thank you!
I would say 3/10 controversial might be OK. Don't just be controversial for controversy's sake, though. A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
Hey, College Essay Guy! I want to write my essay about the best hamburger I've ever eaten in my life, but as a metaphor of life because it had amazing parts, but some that disappointed. I ate it during an exchange, also one of the best things that ever happened to me. I wanted to write it without saying it's a hamburger, but say it only in the end. Do you think that would be a bad/weird essay?
Interesting! Essays with extended metaphors like these are fairly common and can be often difficult to pull off, but if done well, could be cool. I'd recommend writing a first draft and having a trusted teacher/mentor/friend read it to share feedback.
This is super lit. Thanks for the videos🔥🔥
More to come!
You are awesome and very inspiring
Thanks for being here.
what was the essay topic for the first essay?
The first essay is an "identity" essay. :)
What about people who can’t get in based on demographic?
Thanks for writing in! I'm not sure I understand your question. Can you be more specific?
Really helpful! Thanks so much!!
Is the essay different from "personal statement? "
Nope! I'm using Common App essay and Personal Statement interchangeably.
Can i make highschool teacher a couselor?
Hmm...I don't think that would be up to you. Not every high school teacher is equipped to do the same job as a counselor. If your school has a counseling or college & career center, I recommend starting there. If not, try getting in touch with someone at your school who knows more about the resources available to you.
The essay is well-written,but the first question that comes to my mind is : where is the growth? where is the connection to his major?
The personal statement doesn't necessarily need to include a connection to your major. Plenty of schools ask for additional supplemental essay prompts--with a "Why major?" prompt being one of the most common.
Thank you, College cute guy! It helped alot! ♥
Glad it helped!
this is amazingggg
Thanks for watching!
But why did his essay make me cry
:) Thanks for watching
Love that essay!
Awesome. Thanks for watching!
Thanks you sir
You're welcome!
Can I use the layout of this personal essay in writing my own?
Hm, no. Please format your personal statement uniquely. Copying a structure or a format too closely is still considered plagiarism.
is it okay to use this structure? I mean, Changing the keywords and rewriting the essay(3 days till due)?!
Hi there! You should probably develop your own style/format/structure for your college essays. Simply copying the essay example and replacing keywords or phrases is plagiarizing. Hope this helps.
thanks a lot!
You're welcome!
This is me... 😍
Thanks for watching!
@@Collegeessayguy thank YOU for the incredible lessons.
Kindly help me out on how appropriately I can choose a theme to write about for I see a lot of things in my life. Thank you
Keep brainstorming! Go to my channel and go through the Brainstorming playlist. You should be able to find your "theme" after doing the exercises. :)
5 traits.
Thanks for watching!
so helpful!!! Thank you!!!
Glad it was helpful!
"Diversity" gimmick and low key America and Christian bashing on that example essay. College admins will love that. No shade. Just sayin'.
Thanks for chiming in.
Did write an essay for students
Hi there. Could you clarify your question? :)
Thank you very much
You are welcome!
Thank you !!
You're welcome!
Like I am hesitant about writing in the personal common app essay about " the blessing of being extrovert " or how eachHarry Potter character represent me.I love both topics and I can write both freely which one you think is the best to stand out?
Either one could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Will this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
Thank you so much!!
Welcome!
You're so good its insane!!
Thanks for watching!
Thank you sir
You're welcome :)
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