Hello my friend, how have you been? I want to apologize for the delay, I wanted to continue publishing two fanfictions a month, but due to the latest problems this pace is getting a bit difficult for me. There seems to be a problem with my computer as well, for some strange reason I have had some rendering errors and the processing time has been longer than in the fanfiction above, but I will see how to fix it. I leave you here my Patreon, in case you want to support me with my medical expenses: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos. I really appreciate all the support you can give me... and... PLEASE* remember not to force yourself to support me financially if you cannot... Don't worry. =) I have reduced the time of this fanfiction a bit, because if I added the event that I had planned for the end, the duration of the video would have been an hour and a half, so I have saved it for the next chapter. On the other hand, what do you think of this chapter? Did you like it? Do you have any suggestions on this? n__n Regarding Amagi, I am preparing the script for her. Unfortunately, I can't give you a date yet, but I'll bring you news next week, I promise. I should also clarify about Enterprise's chapter part, I also have it in the works, so I apologize again. There is a slight delay with this month's voting, but with those two fanfictions on hold, I haven't had time to prepare the next ones, so I'm trying to finish that first. Regarding the visits with the doctor, most of the analyzes went wrong, I am not going to lie to you, but they have been mild problems in a certain way, nothing that cannot be controlled, so on some occasions I will have to disappear from here to sessions and treatments. Unfortunately there are problems that I have not yet been able to treat due to their cost (the vascular problem) although fortunately due to the medication I have not been feeling as much pain as previous months. So don't worry, the situation is not the best, but let's be positive. We are reaching the end of this message, do not forget to leave your opinion about the chapter. I know I always say this, but I like to read what you think about it, that way, knowing that you liked it, I can feel that I have done a little for the community that has been with me for so long, thank you for everything, I really appreciate it. I hope to see you in the next fanfiction and I wish you the best successes for the future =) - - - - - Special Credits: Persocom | Chuco Thanks For Your Support ! Fleet Admiral : Chuco32 - Hetierremustdedu - Ian Michaelson - Titan Sparta - Yama - Kadeji - Laken Bacon. Admiral : Corbin - Shubu - Kai Stasch - Notte - Orpheus - Warmonger1941 - Predator3435 - GrAdm Henri G - AzureKnight - KoP152 - S 討海 - KoolKat - Darknal367 - Zenith - Xevon - David wr1t0r. Commander : Seigo Nakano - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch - Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kiwi82245 - Kevin Van Erkel - Northenwolf - Vi Nguyen - Azreal. Lieutenant : Anir Banerj - Anthony D'Elia - Bankashi - Bryce Ostrem - Chach - Fed18 - Fritz Krammer - jerome292 - Kuuhaku - Len - Sikof - Dylan Boatner.
I have been fine , don't worry , also @Ryuma Brunestud , if you were to complete a single chapter , what would it be? (What I mean is like how many episodes are you doing for one chapter before you stop making it) I am just here to be honest , though my own commander is not really that good , I'm just waiting for orders on the other hand. Best regards. -YKS Battleship-01
The interactions between Friedrich and Eldridge was very cute. Also it was nice that you added some of the new ships to the story. Great chapter as always and looking forward to the next one.
The leaking electricity is an homage to Eldridge’s supposed (navy says such a project never existed) work with the Philadelphia Experiment, where they used electromagnetic experiments to make the destroyer invisible, supposedly succeeding while simultaneously making the destroyer teleport to Norfolk, VA, then back to Philadelphia where Crew members complained of severe nausea afterwards. Also, reportedly, when the ship reappeared, some sailors were embedded in the metal structures of the ship, including one sailor who ended up on a deck level below than where he began and had his hand embedded in the steel hull of the ship, as well as some sailors who went "completely bananas."
@@carlospomares3225 it is. That’s why I said “supposed”. Since the story is based on the Eldridge I can see why they made her leak electricity because of the myth.
Dear Ryuma, Yes! Its me, again! I know, two day and two different fanfictions binged in order to be up to date. This fanfiction was extraordinarily enjoyable but it leaves you with a lot of cliffhangers and twists and turns. To site examples, Peter Strasser has just completly vanished and we saw Bismarcks reaction to what happened between F.D.G. and Peter Strasser but we dont actually get to know what happened or personally just anything to do with the relationship between F.D.G. and the Commander would usually cut off just as i thought we would get to start with the development, such as the Commander and Z46 going into the haunted house together instead of Him and F.D.G. or Him just falling asleep while F.D.G. was making moves to build something with him or, to be fully honest, anything to do with this interraction blockade known as the aura of warships. That whole aura thing really is a roadblock towards charachter interaction and it sucks as it prevents charachters from making charachter developing decisions such as the Commander trying to take a stand between Bismarck and F.D.G. but not being able to because of this aura. But then again, do not take my complaints here harshly as i do believe that you just want to wait longer for the payoffs and thats fine with me. For example, im sure seeing the Commander gain the strength to overcome the aura of F.D.G. in order to just be able to talk with her openly and without boundries wil be a great pay off, but this is just speculation. At this point, all i can say is that im happy. The story is definetly more open ended with a lot more set ups being created then payed off but that will become a non problem over time. And really anything in regards to the charachters is just lovely and i cant wait to see all the upcoming interactions and developments between them. If i could personally wish for something it would be for a more dedicated focus on the development and relationship or charachter building between F.D.G. and the Commander but other then that, i guess, its all alright. So yeah, enough rambling from me. I do hope your health situation is steadily getting better and more sustainable and i really am supporting you to be able to go and get through this. But yeah, until the next time Ryuma, enjoy yourself.
The return of the flagship that is not only a mother, but is a true goddess who loves others as her own... Oh how I wish she could be real and be able to love her directly... But also to have her for myself, as sadly I am still.working on her... I can only hope it will be soon. Not only for that, but her to get the love and adoration she deserves, wether ot be merchandise or art, or even the community... All I simply ask and request for you is to please, never forget that she loves you deeply, and to love her back as well. She is the best of all of us... My sweet mother FDG. . .
awww I was getting excited what I though commander had been upgraded from "my child" to "my dear child". thank you for the update and for letting her have a child looking battleship (Eldridge) not being afraid of her. As much as I like a fast update, please take your time and update at your leisure instead so put yourself 1st ❤
Keep up the good storymaking Ryuma Brunestud. I'm very excited for the next chapter of FDG's story. I love the part where Eldridge and FDG gets along so well, considering that only a handful of shipfus can keep their composure on them. Oh I just keep getting excited what's coming up. I hope FDG's next chapter would be published soon, same with Shinano and Enterprise's story. 💕
Great video, watched the whole series! Would love to see more of the longer/chapter type of your fanfictions of more shipgirls. Although the continuation of Friedrich's story would also be great!
@@TheBizzareBirb tis comfy but scary because it happend to me once whi.e i was there... she never let me leave her side when she saw my broken arm from a operation... but i was there at the base because of the broken arm and all other bases i had worked at execpt that one were out of medical supplys Sorry if the message is late but this video shows you why already
@@hans3519 It shows that she cares about you and making sure you don’t injure yourself again. But yes, her affection can be overwhelming at times that it puts you into a paralyzing state.
@@TheBizzareBirb i do know that and fyi on why the message is late i had a broken spine from her hugs because she was a bit over caring and i am now stuck here with her for 3 months please send help.
Me seeing iron blood clan fan base: *wait it must be an evil group* 11:53 Me *carefully read the caption and their personality* Oh so they weren't bad guys they are just having a soft side 😐
Honestly Eldridge is too precious for this world in this story. Protect at all costs. I can also imagine New Jersey speaking in sort of an Italian American dialect. New York and New Jersey is full of that type so i can picture it.
This is a very great chapter, didn't know Ägir would be here and New Jersey as well... but something tells me that Friedrich and New Jersey will not be great friends... And remember don't overwork yourself okay? Don't do that or you'll be like the stubborn Enterprise herself. :)
Great video keep up the good work can't wait for the next part, now seeing Ägir i now what a fanfic about her i just love the ironblood girls all hail IronBlood
Why don’t you make a part where the commander while he is doing word he begans to have a heart attack and when he wakes he’s in his mind where the people he knows hate him or just his worst nightmare and like his family or parents ( if he has any)
@@irfanshafri9574 Akagi would just join in on the fun, sadly. In fact, both Taihou, Atago, Junyou, and Roon would do the same. So the Commander is doomed unless someone like Enterprise intervenes.
Hello my friend, how have you been? I want to apologize for the delay, I wanted to continue publishing two fanfictions a month, but due to the latest problems this pace is getting a bit difficult for me.
There seems to be a problem with my computer as well, for some strange reason I have had some rendering errors and the processing time has been longer than in the fanfiction above, but I will see how to fix it.
I leave you here my Patreon, in case you want to support me with my medical expenses:
www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud
If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos.
I really appreciate all the support you can give me... and... PLEASE* remember not to force yourself to support me financially if you cannot... Don't worry. =)
I have reduced the time of this fanfiction a bit, because if I added the event that I had planned for the end, the duration of the video would have been an hour and a half, so I have saved it for the next chapter.
On the other hand, what do you think of this chapter? Did you like it? Do you have any suggestions on this? n__n
Regarding Amagi, I am preparing the script for her. Unfortunately, I can't give you a date yet, but I'll bring you news next week, I promise. I should also clarify about Enterprise's chapter part, I also have it in the works, so I apologize again.
There is a slight delay with this month's voting, but with those two fanfictions on hold, I haven't had time to prepare the next ones, so I'm trying to finish that first.
Regarding the visits with the doctor, most of the analyzes went wrong, I am not going to lie to you, but they have been mild problems in a certain way, nothing that cannot be controlled, so on some occasions I will have to disappear from here to sessions and treatments. Unfortunately there are problems that I have not yet been able to treat due to their cost (the vascular problem) although fortunately due to the medication I have not been feeling as much pain as previous months. So don't worry, the situation is not the best, but let's be positive.
We are reaching the end of this message, do not forget to leave your opinion about the chapter. I know I always say this, but I like to read what you think about it, that way, knowing that you liked it, I can feel that I have done a little for the community that has been with me for so long, thank you for everything, I really appreciate it.
I hope to see you in the next fanfiction and I wish you the best successes for the future =)
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Admiral : Corbin - Shubu - Kai Stasch - Notte - Orpheus - Warmonger1941 - Predator3435 - GrAdm Henri G - AzureKnight - KoP152 - S 討海 - KoolKat - Darknal367 - Zenith - Xevon - David wr1t0r.
Commander : Seigo Nakano - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch - Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kiwi82245 - Kevin Van Erkel - Northenwolf - Vi Nguyen - Azreal.
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@@RyumaBrunestud What is your thoughts on the new skins that coming out?
@@RyumaBrunestud What is the last chapter for mama Friedrich?
@@novaspacewalker2.024 Unfortunately I have not had time to check them, some friends have shown me, but I have not seen them all yet. :(
I have been fine , don't worry , also @Ryuma Brunestud , if you were to complete a single chapter , what would it be?
(What I mean is like how many episodes are you doing for one chapter before you stop making it)
I am just here to be honest , though my own commander is not really that good , I'm just waiting for orders on the other hand.
Best regards.
-YKS Battleship-01
FDG is very sweet, I am feeling bad for her; OMG New Jersey shows herself!
Well well, seems FDG got back at Eugen for those wallets.
Yea, but that's who Eugen is. Don't punish her for it
The interactions between Friedrich and Eldridge was very cute. Also it was nice that you added some of the new ships to the story. Great chapter as always and looking forward to the next one.
Whoever designed eldridge must have been having a horrible day, to make it that she constantly leaked electricity
The leaking electricity is an homage to Eldridge’s supposed (navy says such a project never existed) work with the Philadelphia Experiment, where they used electromagnetic experiments to make the destroyer invisible, supposedly succeeding while simultaneously making the destroyer teleport to Norfolk, VA, then back to Philadelphia where Crew members complained of severe nausea afterwards. Also, reportedly, when the ship reappeared, some sailors were embedded in the metal structures of the ship, including one sailor who ended up on a deck level below than where he began and had his hand embedded in the steel hull of the ship, as well as some sailors who went "completely bananas."
She was installed magnetic field to prevent explosive mines from contact
@@pinnedthrottle7690 sounds more like an urban legend than history.
@@carlospomares3225 it is. That’s why I said “supposed”. Since the story is based on the Eldridge I can see why they made her leak electricity because of the myth.
@@Floofrer That's also a great way to prevent shipgirls like Ark Royal
Dear Ryuma,
Yes! Its me, again!
I know, two day and two different fanfictions binged in order to be up to date.
This fanfiction was extraordinarily enjoyable but it leaves you with a lot of cliffhangers and twists and turns.
To site examples, Peter Strasser has just completly vanished and we saw Bismarcks reaction to what happened between F.D.G. and Peter Strasser but we dont actually get to know what happened or personally just anything to do with the relationship between F.D.G. and the Commander would usually cut off just as i thought we would get to start with the development, such as the Commander and Z46 going into the haunted house together instead of Him and F.D.G. or Him just falling asleep while F.D.G. was making moves to build something with him or, to be fully honest, anything to do with this interraction blockade known as the aura of warships.
That whole aura thing really is a roadblock towards charachter interaction and it sucks as it prevents charachters from making charachter developing decisions such as the Commander trying to take a stand between Bismarck and F.D.G. but not being able to because of this aura.
But then again, do not take my complaints here harshly as i do believe that you just want to wait longer for the payoffs and thats fine with me.
For example, im sure seeing the Commander gain the strength to overcome the aura of F.D.G. in order to just be able to talk with her openly and without boundries wil be a great pay off, but this is just speculation.
At this point, all i can say is that im happy.
The story is definetly more open ended with a lot more set ups being created then payed off but that will become a non problem over time.
And really anything in regards to the charachters is just lovely and i cant wait to see all the upcoming interactions and developments between them.
If i could personally wish for something it would be for a more dedicated focus on the development and relationship or charachter building between F.D.G. and the Commander but other then that, i guess, its all alright.
So yeah, enough rambling from me.
I do hope your health situation is steadily getting better and more sustainable and i really am supporting you to be able to go and get through this.
But yeah, until the next time Ryuma, enjoy yourself.
i expecting no less from the king of the ocean, is that a sabaton joke?
woo!
The return of the flagship that is not only a mother, but is a true goddess who loves others as her own...
Oh how I wish she could be real and be able to love her directly...
But also to have her for myself, as sadly I am still.working on her...
I can only hope it will be soon. Not only for that, but her to get the love and adoration she deserves, wether ot be merchandise or art, or even the community...
All I simply ask and request for you is to please, never forget that she loves you deeply, and to love her back as well. She is the best of all of us...
My sweet mother FDG. . .
Mothers are the best!
Not gonna lie dude…. With the appearance of New Jersey and Ägir, I really do want you to do stories with them now.
new jersey got her story.
@@dorkfish1275 dude... This comment was made well before that happened
@@spartastic4 Ik, just figured I'd tell ya so you could be happy to know your wish was granted
Really puts FDG in a new light for me, she is a kind and caring person i look forward to the next chapter.
I can finally enjoy reading again for this chapter for mama Friedrich.
awww I was getting excited what I though commander had been upgraded from "my child" to "my dear child".
thank you for the update and for letting her have a child looking battleship (Eldridge) not being afraid of her.
As much as I like a fast update, please take your time and update at your leisure instead so put yourself 1st ❤
Never too much of mama Große. 🥰
21:59 Eldritch impersonating buccarati
Keep up the good storymaking Ryuma Brunestud. I'm very excited for the next chapter of FDG's story.
I love the part where Eldridge and FDG gets along so well, considering that only a handful of shipfus can keep their composure on them. Oh I just keep getting excited what's coming up.
I hope FDG's next chapter would be published soon, same with Shinano and Enterprise's story. 💕
18 minutes ago? Sweet. :)
I am starting to feel bad for FDG, she is sweet.
Great video, watched the whole series! Would love to see more of the longer/chapter type of your fanfictions of more shipgirls. Although the continuation of Friedrich's story would also be great!
It's so sweet to see Mommy again
This video is probably the only good thing I've got on my birthday
another chapter on German mama, yes!☺️
_"Ara, ara"_
Can someone tell me how a ships "aura" can affect you? I simply cannot understand this thing and why the Commander just turns into butter every time.
It's call fear.
Me: A mother's sweet embrace we have
Axel: Indeed
Sora: Yes
Riku: Agreed
Mother’s love is warm and comfortable…
@@TheBizzareBirb tis comfy but scary because it happend to me once whi.e i was there... she never let me leave her side when she saw my broken arm from a operation... but i was there at the base because of the broken arm and all other bases i had worked at execpt that one were out of medical supplys
Sorry if the message is late but this video shows you why already
@@hans3519 It shows that she cares about you and making sure you don’t injure yourself again. But yes, her affection can be overwhelming at times that it puts you into a paralyzing state.
@@TheBizzareBirb i do know that and fyi on why the message is late i had a broken spine from her hugs because she was a bit over caring and i am now stuck here with her for 3 months please send help.
@@hans3519 Sadly, I can’t do much to help since I’m busy with my own port. But I wish you the best for your recovery, fellow Commander.
16:44 because as we all know, all germans have a honed, inner instinct to seek out beer
Damn. Now you've convinced me to build FDG now
First hehe, also take care of yourself don't force yourself too much ❤️
Me seeing iron blood clan fan base: *wait it must be an evil group*
11:53 Me *carefully read the caption and their personality*
Oh so they weren't bad guys they are just having a soft side 😐
Don't underestimate our hospitality
@@Floofrer my leader. I didn't underestimate our hospitality its just my first time to seeing this new experience
15:27 KING OF THE OCEAN
SHE WAS MADE TO RULE THE WAVES OF THE SEVEN SEAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-Sabaton noise
I'm surprise that Prinz Eugen did not died
Did friedrich really beat up eugen? Or just she had eyebags cause tired?
@@irfanshafri9574oh Eugen opened up a very large can of whoop-ass in the form of Freidrich.😅
Pp got bitten?
I’m guessing she bite his lips, as in making out with him.
Nice to see New Jersey in this series. Hopefully more will come:)
Zamn, this is good.
Can you slow the text speed it was often too fast to read all the text would appreciate it.
I'll see to change the pace in the next, I apologize about it.
Mama FDG returned!!!
Yay!!!
Honestly Eldridge is too precious for this world in this story. Protect at all costs.
I can also imagine New Jersey speaking in sort of an Italian American dialect. New York and New Jersey is full of that type so i can picture it.
I am hooking for a part 5!!! I hope that Ägir will have a NOICE talk with him... If you know what I mean...
This is a very great chapter, didn't know Ägir would be here and New Jersey as well... but something tells me that Friedrich and New Jersey will not be great friends...
And remember don't overwork yourself okay? Don't do that or you'll be like the stubborn Enterprise herself. :)
Amogus!
@@itsmelia1829 yes. sus.
@@bruhh2995 SUSSY Baka hahahah!
@@itsmelia1829 b-baka~!
perfect
I wonder if its canon in azur lane that eldridge can supposedly teleport from one place to another?
32:33
Can you please put this at the end of the video. I keep going to the next because I keep thinking this is the fucking end...
mommy~
I don't know who's more underrated vestal or Yorktown
This does make me ask why there are no FDG fan fictions besides this
I swear i thought shikikunt got raped like in the akagi storyline lol
Just my opinion
Since the story parts come so seperate, I barely remember the story
12:46 安息[Ansoku] it's mean (Rest, repose, relaxation) Tip: 安(yasui) relax; 息(iki) breath
19:00 謹ー蟷[Kin-Kama]: it's mean "Thank you"
Aaaaayyyyy my states ship nj
*KMS FINEST MOMMA*
Great video keep up the good work can't wait for the next part, now seeing Ägir i now what a fanfic about her i just love the ironblood girls all hail IronBlood
Why don’t you make a part where the commander while he is doing word he begans to have a heart attack and when he wakes he’s in his mind where the people he knows hate him or just his worst nightmare and like his family or parents ( if he has any)
Eldridge isn’t afraid of friedrich cause she knows she can zap the shit outta her if she wants to
yeahhh
nice!
i really enjoyed this chapter. Ägir, yay!
If she was real I would marry her
40:53 Thirsty Friedrich was something I didn’t expect, but also pretty terrified of.
Akagi help me:(
@@irfanshafri9574 Akagi would just join in on the fun, sadly. In fact, both Taihou, Atago, Junyou, and Roon would do the same. So the Commander is doomed unless someone like Enterprise intervenes.
@@TheBizzareBirb kawakaze help me pls:(
make kitakaze dialogue please?
My mind has completely changed about Freidrich
How so?
In a good way
I was wondering what you thought of her before and after
I open youtube and this is the first video the showed up on my screen and I knew the things were about to go down