This man single-handedly developed a complete storyline that would typically require an entire film crew to realize. As a fellow concept writer, I commend you on the outstanding visual foundation you've established for an amazing film! A fitting title for this concept would be "Predator: Bloodsport," as it centers on the clash among predators themselves.
i see exactly where you are going with this. i wrote a super long comment that failed to post. this is a great idea. the toy line in the 90s had alot of cool mini comics.
Xenos found on the deathstar starlord tries to save the day. Later in a galaxy far far away Indiana Jones connects with dr doom on how to defeat the threat by using predators
Doctor Doom takes the Inglorious Bastards to Cybertron where they have to help the autobots fight the decepticons who are allied with the piglins and are all trying to capture the chaos emeralds
My man, let me tell you. I saw trh original Predator in the theater. I own the 1st 4 (story) comics,1 set mint,never even looked through, and 1 read. Your story line is absolutely dope az fhk. You should SERIOUSLY try to get this to someone in hollywood.
Great story, I loved it. The idea of a conspiracy from within the predators, would be so fun to watch. A little mystery and one of the preds trying to figure it out. All while aliens are reeking havoc throughout the planet.
I think there's definitely something here in this pitch, BUT (and I have to say it, it's a big but) it's too much for a new movie after almost 20 years since the last one. Yeah, those movies are old. We need a more simple movie, a simple set up for a simple story with simple characters. Yeah, we need humans, not just one. We need audiences to get behind the idea of 3 things: 1) it's an Alien movie, it's set in the future, it's horror, it's scary, it's gross, it's about how small we humans are to the universe. 2) it's a Predator movie, it has the best of the best put against the best hunter in the universe, it's action, it's intrigue, it's about how even our best isn't enough against the greater universe. 3) it's an AvP movie, it's a crossover, it's a rivalry, it's a mashup, it's about showing how it doesn't matter who wins, we lose. I know fans might not like it, but we need it to be like 'Aliens' and 'Predators', a group of soldiers trying to survive against xenos and yautja in the future. We can have pathogen and yautja surviving, but humans are the protagonists.
This is a worthy storyline that Predator fans would want to see. Yautja society has never been presented on screen in great detail because people make characters that people portray on film & it's too costly to create a fictitious species realistically. Actors still have roles to play & the movie industry wants to make money. It would have to be completely animated or CGI to get the true nature of aliens on screen in a satisfactory manner. It's fantasy. We can create worlds in our minds, put them on paper, animate them, but live action isn't up to par for what we really want. The chasm between reality & fantasy is vast. Not all mediums are sufficient for rending. This story has potential, but I don't think the capability to represent it adequately exists. Would be amazing if we could.
@@Cinemavigilante it’s no problem brodi, i think the best thing for any studio exec or anyone in Hollywood is to simply watch your videos especially this one because it would undoubtedly make the franchise(s) better. Keep talking your shit and telling the truth big respect for that 🫡
My idea with a Xeno war on the predators planet with humans as pets and fighters to help fight the Xenos. Red Xeno queen and Big buff King can also work for anothe movie or a T.v series.
I think this is an interesting plot but I rather have the girl character in the future and I don’t really like the xenomorphs being sidelined as just creatures or be killed. Imo an avp film is taking best of both worlds what makes a predator movie a predator movie and an alien film an alien film putting them together perfectly, the Aliens vs Predator 2010 game did this well. Fun video, u should do more man. I really like watching ur alien\predator videos keep it up!🤘🏻😎 Predator 2 is goated FTW!!!!!
I like this idea. This is a movie I would spend my money on to see. I don't think there should be dialog either, maybe enteral monolog or something with the main human character but most of the movie is body language. The way the predators move, and the subtle tone of the music score clues the audience on what is going on. Put some show in the movie and not a lot of tell.
How about.. Coloniel Marines ship gets redirected on a journey and exposes a predators game preserve. Their ship is mysteriously damaged, and smaller ships and escape pods land around the planet. They regroup and pose a serious threat to the predators and the beasts on the planet. Whilst setting up defenses, they distrub on an old set of xenomorph eggs somehow. Carnage happens, lol
I’m a Casual AVP watcher at Best but I will say this-Ur Storyline is VERY Compelling Z-man! Well thought-out with Different Ways to Go at Different Points. Hollywood-are U Watching & Listening to This Guy ? He KNOWS His Sh.t so Let’s Go ! In the Meantime Z-get some 💤s Man
They should try to make a AvP on a big spaceship like the nostromo, a group of scientists find the alien eggs and take them aboard the ship and the predators are alerted and have to take them back to contain the xenomorphs
Always wanted to see this AVP in action, just need the hunters capturing a queen and I’m 110% sold. Maybe have the super blacks trying to smuggle a queen in or out of the planet.
I love this idea man, I really do. I don’t think that we will ever get this unfortunately. It would need a ton of people at Fox/Disney from the Predator and Alien IPs to agree, it would be a huge budget, and on top of that, they’d probably hire a director that doesn’t know what they’re doing lol. PS: they should hire you to direct lol Also, would love to see a movie about Ahab. I think a future setting is what the predator franchise needs to succeed. Hopefully Predator: Badlands is good
This is cool and creative but I don’t see predators ever taking engineers captive or stealing there ships but for a future avp movie I would lovvve to see engineers involved and I do like the idea of predators taking the pathogen to become stronger
When does this AVP come out zaffy 🔥 love the ideas! Especially the idea of showing the story's before the story that we're familiar to, and kimigo as the main character is a big plus! The higher ups in the movie industry need to pick your brain 🧠
Mabye add in, your Yowja survives by being injected with the remaining few drops of the pathoge. Enough to heal & gain increased power equal to wolf from AvP R, but not enough to mutate him into a monster. Thats how they kill 3rd act monster.
I would also like to add. This would be an example of how to use the pathogen correctly. 1, Target needs to be near death. 2, Target needs very small amounts Your 3rd act Yowja and the chick from Romulas used too much, thus a monster was created.
Nice vid, saw aliens and saw predator when I as at school and been a fan ever since, played AVP and a lot of AVP2 loved that game, read a lot of dark horse comics, an avp film should be the fight between the 3, aliens, predators and USCM, explore the Yautja home planet, maybe a planet completely over taken by aliens lots could of been done but film makers seam to have fucked up the time line with there dumb ideas, AVP pissed me off with the dumb bits in it, Re watch AVP the first Predator to die the alien had like a 20 foot tail, second predator got a head bite through his mask when he hit the floor his mask was undamaged poor editing lol. Look forward to your next vid dude :)
this would never happen unless ridley is forcefully removed from the franchise. he won’t even acknowledge the queen or the second film and unfortunately it seems like fede wants to appease him.
I’d love to see how the Blacks and the Jungle Predators got into the beefing and I’m also curious as to how the Berserker predators would fare against the Xenos
The BEST story they could ever adapt to screen will always be Avp Prey. With the right actors and the right cinematographer you’d barely have to change anything. Even if you remade it page for page from the comics people would love the hell out of it fans or newcomers.
The comics continue from that movie on that ryushi. The male protagonist gets a predator suit fights a predator forgot the ending but there story still hasn’t finished
(Paragraph aleart) The plot is good and I like what you have done with the character of Mahiko however In my opinion I would tweak the script to be more character focused because I think it would pace the movie better, I think maybe Mahiko instead of feeling guilty of her partner should could be like a leader of a group of colonial marines whom all have there own gimic like in the first predator but they are new to combat and perhaps not as experienced as she is (prone to making dumb decisions) and she’s doing her best to keep lead her group together as they get picked off by xenomorphs, perhaps the predator that teams up with her is somewhat inexperienced and a young blood whom has to push himself to his limits or he will be killed, and when Mahiko and pred meet they could have interesting chemistry as they are very different strategie and personality wise like maybe Mahiko makes emotional outbursts which pred has to stop her, maybe top knots hunting squad has a dark predator in the team whom despite the law against it goes to kill Mahiko while she is weak but top knot stops him causing fight, the dark predator outmatched physically but top knot flees to wherever the base of the dark predators are at, Top knot reports the dishonour of the dark predator starting the war between the two clans, this would them be a better reason for Mahiko to save top knot later
And today we have our first disagreement (please don't kill me). I like your idea.. but there are problems. One thing I LOVE about [almost -- and take note of this cuz we gon get back to it] all the Alien/Predator media, from the "mainstream" of the movies to the "expanded" material of videogames and comics, is that each and every entry, is never an overlap. They all take place in separate years and centuries, and all use their own characters and settings; even though they take inspiration from prior media and can take place in the same era (i.e. the 1st 2 Predator films take place in the span of 10 years and both before the 21st Century), they still kinda do their own thing, and thus all have their own place in the Grand Timeline. By introducing Machiko, Top-Knot and Ryushi to the movies in a whole other era (that's a prequel to both the Alien AND Predator films), you're not only decanonizing the original comic story that kickstarted the AVP franchise (which is a double slap to the face), but you also risk putting it in a story that may not be executed as well and ends up being WORSE than its original story, thus tarnishing the preestablished reputation and legacy of these characters and its setting. [Remember the almost?] This is a big issue that many fans already had with a certain movie that you yourself admitted may be a problem for the future of the franchise; that's right, I'm talkin bout Prey. Predator: 1718 was the original story of Raphael Adolini, and how his pistol got into the hands of the Lost Tribe from Predator 2, specifically Greyback. Despite being a short story, it was loved and praised, and despite the pistol only used once in passing and having no perceived importance until the literal END of the story, it's still remarkable and helped convey the sense of honor among the Yautja. Then, Prey came along and not only decanonized 1718, but it also relegated Adolini to a background character, and his pistol as a plot device easter egg. As you'd expect, not many really liked that, and prefer the OG story today. This script you have here -- whilst cool, and intriguing -- is a dangerous retread in that direction. The last thing you wanna do is try and reboot characters and consider that a "love letter to fans", when in reality it's far easier (and more likely) to be interpreted as a "fuck you fans" instead (a la Luke Skywalker in The Last Jedi). I recommend changing Machiko, Top-Knot, and the planet's name, and I guarantee this will definitely click a whoole lot better with the fandom. But, end of the day, the idea is ultimately yours, so the choice is up to you. And I say iss still a nice video, so it's like-worthy.
@@LibraKai im open to changing the time period and making it true to the source material, i just really wanted to explore the rivalry between the superblacks and the jungle tribe and connect it all but, maybe that could be a separate movie in of itself or a machiko plotline could include the colonial marines cross over that alot of fans want and have commented. Thanks for the feedback
@@Cinemavigilante Oh by all means this is a good step in the right direction; it's very true to form of both Alien and Predators, and the rivalry between the Super Blacks and Jungle Hunter clans is a worthy exploration. That said, many expanded comics which are canon to the Predators story, highly implies that they've been using the Game Preserve Planet since at least the 80s via Noland, and the Hunting Grounds game does confirm that the movie took place in 2010, since Isabelle managed to return to Earth sometime after The Predator in 2018, but well before 2025, where the game takes place. That would mean for this Game Preserve Planet "1.0" to work, we'd have to set this sometime in the 1970s because let's face it, Noland likely would not survive on a Xenomorph-infested planet, regardless of the tech and weaponry he may have salvaged from the Predators. (Speaking of, I like how your story would also imply that Machiko didn't have much a chance with the tools she had until AFTER Top-Knot gave her some of his own; really brings out that connection between the 1st and 2nd films [including Romulus] that future high military grade weaponry are the best chance against Xenos, instead of civilian grade shotguns and modern weaponry like they did with AVPR.) The idea of Machiko and Marines was done before in Three World War, but that still would be an interesting inclusion. I'd personally put a potential new Machiko plotline around the 2160s since that was notably when the Marines were at their peak of manpower, and say Machiko went on to work with them around this time, becoming a valuable asset due to her vast experience against both the Xenomorphs and the Yautja. These are just how I'd approach it, though. You definitely put a lot more brainstorming into it so I'd like to see your thoughts.
Beautiful design but God the FX budget and the creative design team for all the creatures would be so exhausted from all the extra hours at work but it would look beautiful, but then again with most good movies those shit on it in the next one😂😂
Nah it's very beautifully id love to see it the thing that conserns me is the time line, it's gonna be a very long movie, let me know if anyone agrees?
Colonial marines figniting Aliens on a hot planet... The Predators show up because there sensors have picked up explosions and gunfire (war) from afar. That's what I heard, sound good to me. 😏
I do like your pitch for an AVP film. I had a idea for an alien series it would take place in between Alien 3 and Alien Resurrection we focus on a group of Colonial Marines answering a hail from a top secret Weyland Yutani research planet more so a research facility above the planet and for 4 seasons our group is trapped on the planet after being attacked by both Xenomorphs and WY Special Forces learning the dark secrets of what WY is up to which includes Bioaugmentations trying to create there own Super soldier with Xenomorphs and human DNA mixing and we would get Red Vs Black Xenomorphs we would get a predator in season 3 on a redemption hunt since he brought dishonor to his clan for killing both an unarmed civilian and one who was pregnant so he's here to bring a xenomorph queen skull to the elder to redeem himself. throughout the 4 seasons the planet we find out originally was a research planet but was left abandoned by the engineers with a crashed ship carrying xenomorph eggs later WY would discover it and begin to do biological weapons tests and experiments giving us 3 queens only outside of different hosts one of them escaped and hid within the depths of the planet evolving into a more monsterous queen mother or empress who would be able to for go the egg laying stage and reproduce drones, One would be the typical Queen Xenomorph and the other would be the Red Queen xenomorph with WY locking up the Red Xenomorphs and there queen in Containment since it would reveal they're more aggressive and dangerous then the standard. I try to add lore to the universe while showing things fans want and its similar to Halo CE but its not the only difference is we would get potentially the war between the colonial Marines and WY leading into the creation of USM-(United Systems Military)
I knew it was gonna lead into the female human pred (which is canon) Add some engineer ending suprise at the end with some unexplored lore then you got a great film
I agree with everything, except the pathogen. Please let that thing die the sorry death it deserves. It was nice and dandy as a standalone movie / idea / concept. As a part of the alien universe it just makes everything more ridiculous (seems like it's something out of dead space rather than alien) . I love the Xeno variation. Not sure if they can do it (the more they do, the more expensive it gets for them - but as long as it fits storywise, I love it )
U should sell your ideas to Hollywood yourself. I know easier said than done but it would suck for someone who has those connections watches your videos and steals your ideas and profits off of them. I can tell you have the passion and talent to come up with good scripts
I like this concept but a lot of this stuff is filled in already by the comics and other loar but would be cool besides the fact that ur making my boi mr black look like a wimp😂
Id watch this. And its not most of us hate action women. We dislike it whens its just a combo of every male action hero just in a 110 lb girl skin. They never amplify the feminity they just make them dudes with unearned skill. "Oh my dad was a marine so im basically super marine because he told me war stories"
Ah such great ideas. I like the original two. I just felt the meeting of the aliens and predators were lackluster. It didn't make much sense to me and contradicts the black goo later introduced. It should have been their first time meeting each other,not this weird lore of trials. To me it was poorly done. My personal opinion. Probably why theyre not considered canon.
Hopefully no Dante in any of the predator movies. I absolutely do not like football players retiring to join basically the MIB to hunt down Yautja with Bazookas
No mutant please, it’s been done so many times… I would rather see the promethian survive its wounds and try and access a ship only to get face hugged and top knot and machiko while in space stumble apon the ultra morph
95% sure bad bloods hold no honor, reason y they dont like eachother super preds are pretty much the same advanced biologically its considered unhonorable. Also predators camt see features like us remember in predator when he took his mask off to fight Arnold even before that with mask hes unable to see details like that, sorry for the knit picks cool story tho keep it up
Great script, but Disney wants to be woke disguised as 'diversity' and 'inclusion', while they want to focus on gender-neutral protagonists, they could do the basics as in Alien Romulos showed us
AVP 4 shall have Colonial Marines vs the predators and aliens
We need it,its destined
wait 4?
Damn someone hand this man his flowers in ny life of thinking up AVP movies l have never imagined something so interesting and amazing
@@BillHendrick-v6u thanks man
@@onIy1pizza 4th after this one i just made in my head
@@Cinemavigilante oh
This man single-handedly developed a complete storyline that would typically require an entire film crew to realize. As a fellow concept writer, I commend you on the outstanding visual foundation you've established for an amazing film! A fitting title for this concept would be "Predator: Bloodsport," as it centers on the clash among predators themselves.
I like the first AVP film, it just needed more fight scenes between the iconic monster and cool video .
@@jermainehaslam5634 thanks man
Sir, this is peak.
This is an awesome idea
@@Soundwave_Superior_45 thanks man
@@Cinemavigilante No problem, mate
i see exactly where you are going with this. i wrote a super long comment that failed to post. this is a great idea. the toy line in the 90s had alot of cool mini comics.
Had some dope books too
Xenos found on the deathstar starlord tries to save the day. Later in a galaxy far far away Indiana Jones connects with dr doom on how to defeat the threat by using predators
@@Infoulnessyeshallknowthem based
Sounds very. I'm in.
Have molds, will travel.
Doctor Doom takes the Inglorious Bastards to Cybertron where they have to help the autobots fight the decepticons who are allied with the piglins and are all trying to capture the chaos emeralds
Stop.... my body can only take so much of this!
Throw riddick in there.
Riddick vs Predator
They need to make a movie where it all comes together, the aliens, predators and engineers with humans using the predator killer suit💯
Bro unironically created a movie that would leave me in tears of joy 🗿.
My man, let me tell you. I saw trh original Predator in the theater. I own the 1st 4 (story) comics,1 set mint,never even looked through, and 1 read.
Your story line is absolutely dope az fhk. You should SERIOUSLY try to get this to someone in hollywood.
@@PeloquiNB thanks man
Absolutely love your content! I only wish it was longer than 20 minutes. Im completely hooked
@@saeedn3502 thanks man!!!
Get this man to make an AVP movie right now!!!!!
Wizard Magazine had the script in one of their issues that Capcom based their video game off of.
That's the AVP Movie I've been hoping for.
Love the ideas and the cherry on top is delivering all these in a Slade outfit 🗿
@@R3ALDUBB3DD3R3K my man
Great story, I loved it. The idea of a conspiracy from within the predators, would be so fun to watch. A little mystery and one of the preds trying to figure it out. All while aliens are reeking havoc throughout the planet.
You had me at Machiko Noguchi and everything else just reinforced to me that you knew what you were doing when you cooked up this master peice.
I think there's definitely something here in this pitch, BUT (and I have to say it, it's a big but) it's too much for a new movie after almost 20 years since the last one. Yeah, those movies are old.
We need a more simple movie, a simple set up for a simple story with simple characters. Yeah, we need humans, not just one. We need audiences to get behind the idea of 3 things: 1) it's an Alien movie, it's set in the future, it's horror, it's scary, it's gross, it's about how small we humans are to the universe. 2) it's a Predator movie, it has the best of the best put against the best hunter in the universe, it's action, it's intrigue, it's about how even our best isn't enough against the greater universe. 3) it's an AvP movie, it's a crossover, it's a rivalry, it's a mashup, it's about showing how it doesn't matter who wins, we lose.
I know fans might not like it, but we need it to be like 'Aliens' and 'Predators', a group of soldiers trying to survive against xenos and yautja in the future. We can have pathogen and yautja surviving, but humans are the protagonists.
very nice !
would love this concept
Just subscribed
May guy should be the director of the next avp movie, cuz of how creative this was.
This is a worthy storyline that Predator fans would want to see. Yautja society has never been presented on screen in great detail because people make characters that people portray on film & it's too costly to create a fictitious species realistically. Actors still have roles to play & the movie industry wants to make money. It would have to be completely animated or CGI to get the true nature of aliens on screen in a satisfactory manner.
It's fantasy. We can create worlds in our minds, put them on paper, animate them, but live action isn't up to par for what we really want. The chasm between reality & fantasy is vast. Not all mediums are sufficient for rending. This story has potential, but I don't think the capability to represent it adequately exists. Would be amazing if we could.
That was good.
This was nice.
You get 1 banana sticker 😌 and I don't hand those out lightly
ZafDad with another video that I agree with and had the same thought process on. Bangers never stop
@@Celebgrity thanks bro
@@Cinemavigilante it’s no problem brodi, i think the best thing for any studio exec or anyone in Hollywood is to simply watch your videos especially this one because it would undoubtedly make the franchise(s) better. Keep talking your shit and telling the truth big respect for that 🫡
@@Celebgrity i appreciate you man
My idea with a Xeno war on the predators planet with humans as pets and fighters to help fight the Xenos.
Red Xeno queen and Big buff King can also work for anothe movie or a T.v series.
Cooked with this one 😮💨😮💨
Actually your story and it's premises are not bad! It's god because not only are you making this story, but you also leave hints for a later sequel!😂
I think this is an interesting plot but I rather have the girl character in the future and I don’t really like the xenomorphs being sidelined as just creatures or be killed. Imo an avp film is taking best of both worlds what makes a predator movie a predator movie and an alien film an alien film putting them together perfectly, the Aliens vs Predator 2010 game did this well. Fun video, u should do more man. I really like watching ur alien\predator videos keep it up!🤘🏻😎 Predator 2 is goated FTW!!!!!
@@SlasherJyy lets goooo
@The__Furry_One avp 2010 underrated as fuck bro
The world needs an avp 3 its been 20 years since the first movie. Its time
So many good ideas for this! 👌🏻
I like this idea. This is a movie I would spend my money on to see. I don't think there should be dialog either, maybe enteral monolog or something with the main human character but most of the movie is body language. The way the predators move, and the subtle tone of the music score clues the audience on what is going on. Put some show in the movie and not a lot of tell.
How about..
Coloniel Marines ship gets redirected on a journey and exposes a predators game preserve. Their ship is mysteriously damaged, and smaller ships and escape pods land around the planet.
They regroup and pose a serious threat to the predators and the beasts on the planet.
Whilst setting up defenses, they distrub on an old set of xenomorph eggs somehow.
Carnage happens, lol
This needs creativity meaning same concepts but new weapons and more intensity when it comes to the presence of a Predator and an alien
I’m a Casual AVP watcher at Best but I will say this-Ur Storyline is VERY Compelling Z-man! Well thought-out with Different Ways to Go at Different Points. Hollywood-are U Watching & Listening to This Guy ? He KNOWS His Sh.t so Let’s Go ! In the Meantime Z-get some 💤s Man
This needs to be made in to a film copyright this idea it sounds amazing
18:15 I smell a cop show, but in space. 🚔🛸
And I thought I was the biggest fan. 45 hours!
Love this video bro!
@@Ninetailedfox5 thanks man!!
Sounds like a very good start to a great AvP movie
They should try to make a AvP on a big spaceship like the nostromo, a group of scientists find the alien eggs and take them aboard the ship and the predators are alerted and have to take them back to contain the xenomorphs
Well done bro I think tht would work out fine
@@shanequeen5003 thanks man
@Cinemavigilante no problem u took the lore from everywhere and done Disneys work for them
Always wanted to see this AVP in action, just need the hunters capturing a queen and I’m 110% sold. Maybe have the super blacks trying to smuggle a queen in or out of the planet.
the whole final girl teaming up with the predator was something I never really saw before. It would be neat if they brought her back for something.
I love this idea man, I really do. I don’t think that we will ever get this unfortunately. It would need a ton of people at Fox/Disney from the Predator and Alien IPs to agree, it would be a huge budget, and on top of that, they’d probably hire a director that doesn’t know what they’re doing lol.
PS: they should hire you to direct lol
Also, would love to see a movie about Ahab. I think a future setting is what the predator franchise needs to succeed. Hopefully Predator: Badlands is good
@@dom2flyy314 thanks man!!
This is cool and creative but I don’t see predators ever taking
engineers captive or stealing there ships but for a future avp movie I would lovvve to see engineers involved and I do like the idea of predators taking the pathogen to become stronger
When does this AVP come out zaffy 🔥 love the ideas! Especially the idea of showing the story's before the story that we're familiar to, and kimigo as the main character is a big plus! The higher ups in the movie industry need to pick your brain 🧠
Mabye add in, your Yowja survives by being injected with the remaining few drops of the pathoge. Enough to heal & gain increased power equal to wolf from AvP R, but not enough to mutate him into a monster.
Thats how they kill 3rd act monster.
I would also like to add.
This would be an example of how to use the pathogen correctly.
1, Target needs to be near death.
2, Target needs very small amounts
Your 3rd act Yowja and the chick from Romulas used too much, thus a monster was created.
Yes. Hell yes
Nice vid, saw aliens and saw predator when I as at school and been a fan ever since, played AVP and a lot of AVP2 loved that game, read a lot of dark horse comics, an avp film should be the fight between the 3, aliens, predators and USCM, explore the Yautja home planet, maybe a planet completely over taken by aliens lots could of been done but film makers seam to have fucked up the time line with there dumb ideas, AVP pissed me off with the dumb bits in it, Re watch AVP the first Predator to die the alien had like a 20 foot tail, second predator got a head bite through his mask when he hit the floor his mask was undamaged poor editing lol. Look forward to your next vid dude :)
@@Matttough333 thanks man
Growing fan of Predators
It sounds fun as hell to watch and ties everything together in a chaotic way!!!
this would never happen unless ridley is forcefully removed from the franchise. he won’t even acknowledge the queen or the second film and unfortunately it seems like fede wants to appease him.
LET HE COOK! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼🚬🚬🚬🩷
I would definitely pick that girl from the boys or the main girl from Shogun on Hulu.
How about making a Bollywood style musical love story between a Predator and a Xenomorph? Disney would love this idea😂
I’d love to see how the Blacks and the Jungle Predators got into the beefing and I’m also curious as to how the Berserker predators would fare against the Xenos
45 hours on one gatorade are u sure about that 😂👌 vid tho
The BEST story they could ever adapt to screen will always be Avp Prey. With the right actors and the right cinematographer you’d barely have to change anything. Even if you remade it page for page from the comics people would love the hell out of it fans or newcomers.
This is cool man!
The comics continue from that movie on that ryushi. The male protagonist gets a predator suit fights a predator forgot the ending but there story still hasn’t finished
I’d like to see a new predator or AVP movie where the predator SURVIVES!
@lycansoldier9512 Yaa but that will never happen the predator and xeno are basically horror Syfi movie monsters that have to die
This is a winner!
(Paragraph aleart) The plot is good and I like what you have done with the character of Mahiko however In my opinion I would tweak the script to be more character focused because I think it would pace the movie better, I think maybe Mahiko instead of feeling guilty of her partner should could be like a leader of a group of colonial marines whom all have there own gimic like in the first predator but they are new to combat and perhaps not as experienced as she is (prone to making dumb decisions) and she’s doing her best to keep lead her group together as they get picked off by xenomorphs, perhaps the predator that teams up with her is somewhat inexperienced and a young blood whom has to push himself to his limits or he will be killed, and when Mahiko and pred meet they could have interesting chemistry as they are very different strategie and personality wise like maybe Mahiko makes emotional outbursts which pred has to stop her, maybe top knots hunting squad has a dark predator in the team whom despite the law against it goes to kill Mahiko while she is weak but top knot stops him causing fight, the dark predator outmatched physically but top knot flees to wherever the base of the dark predators are at, Top knot reports the dishonour of the dark predator starting the war between the two clans, this would them be a better reason for Mahiko to save top knot later
@@antstudios167 adding the colonial marines would probably make alot of fans happy too. Good ideas
kenner comics and dark horse were the best story lines
small knife . . . YES !!!
Let this man cook!
I’ll have the alien vs. predator platter with a side of colonial marines please! And a glass of your finest game over man game over
ok man a buy the dvd 💋
And today we have our first disagreement (please don't kill me). I like your idea.. but there are problems.
One thing I LOVE about [almost -- and take note of this cuz we gon get back to it] all the Alien/Predator media, from the "mainstream" of the movies to the "expanded" material of videogames and comics, is that each and every entry, is never an overlap. They all take place in separate years and centuries, and all use their own characters and settings; even though they take inspiration from prior media and can take place in the same era (i.e. the 1st 2 Predator films take place in the span of 10 years and both before the 21st Century), they still kinda do their own thing, and thus all have their own place in the Grand Timeline. By introducing Machiko, Top-Knot and Ryushi to the movies in a whole other era (that's a prequel to both the Alien AND Predator films), you're not only decanonizing the original comic story that kickstarted the AVP franchise (which is a double slap to the face), but you also risk putting it in a story that may not be executed as well and ends up being WORSE than its original story, thus tarnishing the preestablished reputation and legacy of these characters and its setting.
[Remember the almost?] This is a big issue that many fans already had with a certain movie that you yourself admitted may be a problem for the future of the franchise; that's right, I'm talkin bout Prey. Predator: 1718 was the original story of Raphael Adolini, and how his pistol got into the hands of the Lost Tribe from Predator 2, specifically Greyback. Despite being a short story, it was loved and praised, and despite the pistol only used once in passing and having no perceived importance until the literal END of the story, it's still remarkable and helped convey the sense of honor among the Yautja. Then, Prey came along and not only decanonized 1718, but it also relegated Adolini to a background character, and his pistol as a plot device easter egg. As you'd expect, not many really liked that, and prefer the OG story today.
This script you have here -- whilst cool, and intriguing -- is a dangerous retread in that direction. The last thing you wanna do is try and reboot characters and consider that a "love letter to fans", when in reality it's far easier (and more likely) to be interpreted as a "fuck you fans" instead (a la Luke Skywalker in The Last Jedi). I recommend changing Machiko, Top-Knot, and the planet's name, and I guarantee this will definitely click a whoole lot better with the fandom. But, end of the day, the idea is ultimately yours, so the choice is up to you. And I say iss still a nice video, so it's like-worthy.
@@LibraKai im open to changing the time period and making it true to the source material, i just really wanted to explore the rivalry between the superblacks and the jungle tribe and connect it all but, maybe that could be a separate movie in of itself or a machiko plotline could include the colonial marines cross over that alot of fans want and have commented.
Thanks for the feedback
@@Cinemavigilante Oh by all means this is a good step in the right direction; it's very true to form of both Alien and Predators, and the rivalry between the Super Blacks and Jungle Hunter clans is a worthy exploration. That said, many expanded comics which are canon to the Predators story, highly implies that they've been using the Game Preserve Planet since at least the 80s via Noland, and the Hunting Grounds game does confirm that the movie took place in 2010, since Isabelle managed to return to Earth sometime after The Predator in 2018, but well before 2025, where the game takes place. That would mean for this Game Preserve Planet "1.0" to work, we'd have to set this sometime in the 1970s because let's face it, Noland likely would not survive on a Xenomorph-infested planet, regardless of the tech and weaponry he may have salvaged from the Predators. (Speaking of, I like how your story would also imply that Machiko didn't have much a chance with the tools she had until AFTER Top-Knot gave her some of his own; really brings out that connection between the 1st and 2nd films [including Romulus] that future high military grade weaponry are the best chance against Xenos, instead of civilian grade shotguns and modern weaponry like they did with AVPR.)
The idea of Machiko and Marines was done before in Three World War, but that still would be an interesting inclusion. I'd personally put a potential new Machiko plotline around the 2160s since that was notably when the Marines were at their peak of manpower, and say Machiko went on to work with them around this time, becoming a valuable asset due to her vast experience against both the Xenomorphs and the Yautja.
These are just how I'd approach it, though. You definitely put a lot more brainstorming into it so I'd like to see your thoughts.
I really want a new AVP
Beautiful design but God the FX budget and the creative design team for all the creatures would be so exhausted from all the extra hours at work but it would look beautiful, but then again with most good movies those shit on it in the next one😂😂
Question is this the Question if they make avp 3 cannon, where the movie time-line should be base around?
You ever play Avp evolution?
I'd switch out Top knot for Wolf, im a wolf fan boy 😂
@@jamesw5713 ive made a whole vid on him
Nah it's very beautifully id love to see it the thing that conserns me is the time line, it's gonna be a very long movie, let me know if anyone agrees?
He even uses the computer with the mask on😂
Colonial marines figniting Aliens on a hot planet... The Predators show up because there sensors have picked up explosions and gunfire (war) from afar. That's what I heard, sound good to me. 😏
I agree with most of what you said, but it's Machiko tho
I do like your pitch for an AVP film.
I had a idea for an alien series it would take place in between Alien 3 and Alien Resurrection we focus on a group of Colonial Marines answering a hail from a top secret Weyland Yutani research planet more so a research facility above the planet and for 4 seasons our group is trapped on the planet after being attacked by both Xenomorphs and WY Special Forces learning the dark secrets of what WY is up to which includes Bioaugmentations trying to create there own Super soldier with Xenomorphs and human DNA mixing and we would get Red Vs Black Xenomorphs we would get a predator in season 3 on a redemption hunt since he brought dishonor to his clan for killing both an unarmed civilian and one who was pregnant so he's here to bring a xenomorph queen skull to the elder to redeem himself. throughout the 4 seasons the planet we find out originally was a research planet but was left abandoned by the engineers with a crashed ship carrying xenomorph eggs later WY would discover it and begin to do biological weapons tests and experiments giving us 3 queens only outside of different hosts one of them escaped and hid within the depths of the planet evolving into a more monsterous queen mother or empress who would be able to for go the egg laying stage and reproduce drones, One would be the typical Queen Xenomorph and the other would be the Red Queen xenomorph with WY locking up the Red Xenomorphs and there queen in Containment since it would reveal they're more aggressive and dangerous then the standard.
I try to add lore to the universe while showing things fans want and its similar to Halo CE but its not the only difference is we would get potentially the war between the colonial Marines and WY leading into the creation of USM-(United Systems Military)
@@MatthewSP117 interesting story idea bro
@@Cinemavigilante
Thanks though the funny thing is the predator would be from the same clan as wolf
I knew it was gonna lead into the female human pred (which is canon)
Add some engineer ending suprise at the end with some unexplored lore then you got a great film
Agreed
I agree with everything, except the pathogen. Please let that thing die the sorry death it deserves.
It was nice and dandy as a standalone movie / idea / concept. As a part of the alien universe it just makes everything more ridiculous (seems like it's something out of dead space rather than alien) .
I love the Xeno variation. Not sure if they can do it (the more they do, the more expensive it gets for them - but as long as it fits storywise, I love it )
Bros stepping up to be the better nerdotic
Take my money, good sir
U should sell your ideas to Hollywood yourself. I know easier said than done but it would suck for someone who has those connections watches your videos and steals your ideas and profits off of them. I can tell you have the passion and talent to come up with good scripts
@@este3625 thanks bro, i wish i had some of those connections lol. Lets see
Should you sign with a Major, keep acilliary rights, as John Carpenter has done...each time a remake appears, you get paid again.
Such a blade thing to say, he probably could have played a decent blade, better than sticky fingaz.
This can work as an AvP Predators prequel. So will you add a male human Laurence Fishburne? What he did on that planet before.
@@nickducharme5104 interesting thought
GIMMIE THE TRIALS OF RYUSHI WITH BROKEN TUSK AND NOGUCHI.
I like this concept but a lot of this stuff is filled in already by the comics and other loar but would be cool besides the fact that ur making my boi mr black look like a wimp😂
They should do the books as very good
Like the Rage war etc
why is there not an alien/predator anime?
Id watch this. And its not most of us hate action women. We dislike it whens its just a combo of every male action hero just in a 110 lb girl skin. They never amplify the feminity they just make them dudes with unearned skill. "Oh my dad was a marine so im basically super marine because he told me war stories"
I'd watch that movie! Unfortunately we will get Disney nonsense.
Pass
Ah such great ideas. I like the original two. I just felt the meeting of the aliens and predators were lackluster. It didn't make much sense to me and contradicts the black goo later introduced. It should have been their first time meeting each other,not this weird lore of trials. To me it was poorly done. My personal opinion. Probably why theyre not considered canon.
Hopefully no Dante in any of the predator movies. I absolutely do not like football players retiring to join basically the MIB to hunt down Yautja with Bazookas
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I wanna know what you look like underneath that mask and at the same time I don’t want you to ever take it off on camera lol
Better make the pred ahab
No mutant please, it’s been done so many times… I would rather see the promethian survive its wounds and try and access a ship only to get face hugged and top knot and machiko while in space stumble apon the ultra morph
I thought it was pretty good.
95% sure bad bloods hold no honor, reason y they dont like eachother super preds are pretty much the same advanced biologically its considered unhonorable. Also predators camt see features like us remember in predator when he took his mask off to fight Arnold even before that with mask hes unable to see details like that, sorry for the knit picks cool story tho keep it up
I’d watch that, do need to move on with these aliens movies and get deeper lore
Great script, but Disney wants to be woke disguised as 'diversity' and 'inclusion', while they want to focus on gender-neutral protagonists, they could do the basics as in Alien Romulos showed us