I loved this story; had several twists to it, how a mother and abandon her toddlers for a man, the ungratefulness and selfishness of the twins, and their evil intentions, all amazing. Adelia was a comfort to her stepdad and was rewarded for her good spirit. Lovely ending. Thanks.
It is very disappointing how the twins turned out. Maybe because their father had to work so hard and leaving them with a nanny he didn't have enough time for their up bringing. These children are ruthless. They never cares about their father. He sacrifice so much of his personal life put on hold for them, but his daughter all cares about was her fathers wealth. She probably planned his death too. Wise father make a Will and include his step daughter who was more to him than his own. Very interesting plot.
There father should have make his twin children behave with respects he should not spoil them. When you spoil children they behave badly and entitles. He should not have give them money he should have make them earn. When they were young. Then they would have grow up to respectful.
It's not useful to children when they're already grown up as they rarely change. Maybe if Renata had talked to them while they were still growing, they could reflect on the father's words.
Children are not solely born a blank slate or at the mercy of their filial genetics. The children are a mix of both genetics and the influences from life, parents, relatives and friends. We as parents can have a greater influence upon our children than the others. However it's up to us as parents to make sure that influence is of a more positive and less of the negative.
Story was good and believable. Not the case of most of u tube stories. But could you do better research on the English language? If it hadn't been for the audio narrative i would have just given up and turned your story off. There are ( way) too many typos and flatly misused, misspelled and mangled sounding like but in error descriptive words used. It makes the story nonsensical if you didn't hear the audio and could only read your story. Success depends just as much on accuracy as to content. Please proof read more carefully in future, as any good editor would. Other than that...not bad at all.
The so called good step father was just as bad as the children's mom, he never did anything to help them, had the nerve to bring home a wife and her child without any prior knowledge of their existence?? He was trash and had the nerve to look down on his ex and his children. That's not my idea of a good man and father. 😒
A beautiful story, with a great twist of events and a surprised ending. The daughter deserved her faith. Well written please keep them coming.❤
Amazing story. That was greed what is not yours don't fight for it disonesty
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I love the story ❤
Thank you what a brilliant story. I was hooked as soon as it started. 😊
this is a great story, thank you so much
Very good story.... good narrator
Thanks for the beautiful story ❤
I loved this story; had several twists to it, how a mother and abandon her toddlers for a man, the ungratefulness and selfishness of the twins,
and their evil intentions, all amazing. Adelia was a comfort to her stepdad and was rewarded for her good spirit. Lovely ending. Thanks.
Thanks for the great story ❤❤❤❤
It is very disappointing how the twins turned out. Maybe because their father had to work so hard and leaving them with a nanny he didn't have enough time for their up bringing. These children are ruthless. They never cares about their father. He sacrifice so much of his personal life put on hold for them, but his daughter all cares about was her fathers wealth. She probably planned his death too. Wise father make a Will and include his step daughter who was more to him than his own. Very interesting plot.
This is just a beautiful story and a happy ending❤😮😊
Very nice I love it
Great story
Thanks again for the good stories I can't stop reading your pleasant relaxing nights
Good and interesting story. Love it , thanks
Good story , I really enjoyed it.
TWINS WERE. BITTER FROM LISTENING TO THEIR MOTHERS LAST WORDS ! REPLAYED OVER AND OVER. THROUGHOUT THEIR ENTIRE LIVES
Yes a beautiful story that I enjoy listening to what a happy ending 💓
There father should have make his twin children behave with respects he should not spoil them. When you spoil children they behave badly and entitles. He should not have give them money he should have make them earn. When they were young. Then they would have grow up to respectful.
AFTER SUFFERING &. WATCHING THEM HUNGRY ! SPENT LIFE TRYING TO COMPENSATE FOR BROKE //. HUNGRY DAYS
IF SHE WAS A REAL WOMAN ////. MOTHER ? THE BEAUTIFUL TWINS WOULD HAVE MADE HER EXTREMELY HAPPY ! EVEN WITH BEING BROKE
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A good story indeed. Glad the poor step sister won
It's not useful to children when they're already grown up as they rarely change. Maybe if Renata had talked to them while they were still growing, they could reflect on the father's words.
Well said!
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Wonderful story, but this girl Ramona is truly evil. 👿 How could she kill her own brother for money?
"The heart of man is desperately wicked"
Children are not solely born a blank slate or at the mercy of their filial genetics. The children are a mix of both genetics and the influences from life, parents, relatives and friends. We as parents can have a greater influence upon our children than the others. However it's up to us as parents to make sure that influence is of a more positive and less of the negative.
Amen Amen Amen
He should talk to his lawyer before it’s too late.
Children you raised & give them all turn out so ruthless..so glad Adelia was free
Ditch the AI.
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Narrator needs to learn how to pronounce Beatrice.
Or any of the misused words in the story. Right?! Audio and word script didn't match at times. Very distracting.
Too many ads
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Pronunciation is terrible
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Story was good and believable. Not the case of most of u tube stories. But could you do better research on the English language? If it hadn't been for the audio narrative i would have just given up and turned your story off. There are ( way) too many typos and flatly misused, misspelled and mangled sounding like but in error descriptive words used. It makes the story nonsensical if you didn't hear the audio and could only read your story. Success depends just as much on accuracy as to content. Please proof read more carefully in future, as any good editor would. Other than that...not bad at all.
The so called good step father was just as bad as the children's mom, he never did anything to help them, had the nerve to bring home a wife and her child without any prior knowledge of their existence?? He was trash and had the nerve to look down on his ex and his children. That's not my idea of a good man and father. 😒