As good as this story turned out, I have to say that the character Aurora was totally unjustified in her anger at Evan. She was the driver at fault and Evan was not by any means the cause of her terminal cancer. I'm afraid she had become bitter from her miserable life with her former husband. His behavior left her heart so scarred she saw everyone through it. And Evan had a "God" complex. He had no way to know her condition or if he would be given the ability to cure her. There are Miracles, even in this case. Aurora loved her children to death, and when she died, like a grain of wheat going into the ground, a loving family grew in her place.
Nice story BUT loop holes. The car crash was Aurora’s fault & u went on harping on guilt in Evan! Towards end u say Jack was cared for his eyes problem & Jill for her heart condition ! Completely wrong as at birth it was the opposite 🙄 it was said the girl had optic nerve problem ie eyes problem & the boy had a heart problem needing care & medication possibly for life !
😱 15:10 Here's the The revised an expanded version with details and Dialogue for a deeper emotional impact! 15:14 wow! What great attention to detail!🎉🎉🎉🎉
1st of all, the narrator transposed their illness. Jill was born first. Supposefly, Jill was born blind ? Her brother, Jack was supposed to have had the life-long heart condition. There was no mention whether, or, not Aurora was cremated or buried? Who paid for Aurora's Burial?? I am sure the story is fictional; but, there were a few unanswered questions. What happened with her deceased mother's apartment? That may have helped with the expenses.?
Great story ❤❤
Thank you for your beautiful stories, kind Evenn and Leona adopted the twin's and loving family. Thank you.
As good as this story turned out, I have to say that the character Aurora was totally unjustified in her anger at Evan. She was the driver at fault and Evan was not by any means the cause of her terminal cancer. I'm afraid she had become bitter from her miserable life with her former husband. His behavior left her heart so scarred she saw everyone through it. And Evan had a "God" complex. He had no way to know her condition or if he would be given the ability to cure her. There are Miracles, even in this case. Aurora loved her children to death, and when she died, like a grain of wheat going into the ground, a loving family grew in her place.
Beautiful Story ❤
What a wonderful story
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Beautiful story. God was watching over them!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😂
Her blaming him? Don't think so.
Wow such powerful ending and wonderful couple to take twins on 😊😊
I like your stories 😍😍😍
Kak had a heart problem and Jill had a problem with her eyes. Can't keep your story line going. Still a good story.
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Nice story BUT loop holes. The car crash was Aurora’s fault & u went on harping on guilt in Evan! Towards end u say Jack was cared for his eyes problem & Jill for her heart condition ! Completely wrong as at birth it was the opposite 🙄 it was said the girl had optic nerve problem ie eyes problem & the boy had a heart problem needing care & medication possibly for life !
😱 15:10 Here's the The revised an expanded version with details and Dialogue for a deeper emotional impact! 15:14
wow! What great attention to detail!🎉🎉🎉🎉
I’m not surprised he wanted a divorce. He showed no love. 😢
Come on…she admitted her fault at the scene of the accident. Now she says it’s ALL his fault!!! What a joke!
No driving, just because she’s pregnant? Dark ages doctor…
How many white knuckles - again and again. ? ? ?
1st of all, the narrator transposed their illness. Jill was born first. Supposefly, Jill was born blind ? Her brother, Jack was supposed to have had the life-long heart condition. There was no mention whether, or, not Aurora was cremated or buried? Who paid for Aurora's Burial?? I am sure the story is fictional; but, there were a few unanswered questions. What happened with her deceased mother's apartment? That may have helped with the expenses.?
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