Probably the AI reading it that way, or possibly writing it too I think its more like Phalian or Faliah If you listen closely it sounds more like that, at least to me.
The stiry flowed well but lots wrong with timeline. Things don't just suddenly exist just because you say so. It would take time to develop which wouldn't happen without an infrastructure. The war just suddenly stopped with no ships to defend. The enemy could just wait and bomb. Doesn't make sense. The reading was good. It needs more structure details and a timeline. No defense ring could ever hold out against ships who could pick them off. And you have satellite platforms maneuver. If they could maneuver to the extent needed, they'd be ships. You aren't going to win a planetary war with a sole planet and no offense. It isn't a win but outlast If they were part of a larger galaxy community, where is it. Get rid if the climate agenda nonsense. It wouldn't happen, especially under wartime conditions.
why the hell does "Climate Change" show up as "context" a HFY story? lol
Me when seeing the thumbnail: *Jamaican accent* “I would like to pet this creature.”
"IT WOULD BE BUT A SINGLE BOOP ON ITS NOGGIN!"
Failures? As a species name? Really? Is the author prejudiced against his own creations?
Probably the AI reading it that way, or possibly writing it too
I think its more like Phalian or Faliah
If you listen closely it sounds more like that, at least to me.
@@barelyasurvivor1257 I still think it's funny as hell 😂
Great story to bad you went woke.
Excellent story. Thanks
The stiry flowed well but lots wrong with timeline. Things don't just suddenly exist just because you say so. It would take time to develop which wouldn't happen without an infrastructure. The war just suddenly stopped with no ships to defend. The enemy could just wait and bomb. Doesn't make sense. The reading was good. It needs more structure details and a timeline.
No defense ring could ever hold out against ships who could pick them off. And you have satellite platforms maneuver. If they could maneuver to the extent needed, they'd be ships.
You aren't going to win a planetary war with a sole planet and no offense. It isn't a win but outlast
If they were part of a larger galaxy community, where is it.
Get rid if the climate agenda nonsense. It wouldn't happen, especially under wartime conditions.
Failed immigrants🤨 plenty of them in the uk
Yeah you are here and i would swap you for some doctors or nurses after all you are on PIP for your bad back
lets go!
Be careful of the midges!,,,
Wokeness is increasing in these stories,not going to be long,and the reader's will do a Budlite or Disney on these,