Yeah for structure! Would be good to somehow post your lyrics; there is a lot going on in your songs and I can't always make out the words. From what I could hear there is an interesting line of thought on display here.
The wife of future times Will be a witness For to say The ending sorta makes it Bleeding on and on And fishermen cast their rod with a vengeance Market fight Freeform flight Girl, what are you in fact doing tonight? Purpose makes my head explode In a marching-band-rhythm of the saints No complaints from this here side How are you across the fence Saying that I make no sense Have you heard yourself? You blurted "why does that birdie sit on the bookshelf?" He ain't causin' no harm She offered me an infected tattoo on my arm I said, "Take a hike Or ride that bike you bought but never can use - you can point its relief else____where I try not to swear I mean I will not swear -cause it might put my heart in disrepair But I'm quitting cigarettes Right now so gimme some kind of break Not on the neck this time
Yeah for structure! Would be good to somehow post your lyrics; there is a lot going on in your songs and I can't always make out the words. From what I could hear there is an interesting line of thought on display here.
Thanks man! Appreciate it a lot I will comment the lyrics in a minute
The wife of future times
Will be a witness
For to say
The ending sorta makes it
Bleeding on and on
And fishermen cast their rod with a vengeance
Market fight
Freeform flight
Girl, what are you in fact doing tonight?
Purpose makes my head explode
In a marching-band-rhythm of the saints
No complaints from this here side
How are you across the fence
Saying that I make no sense
Have you heard yourself?
You blurted "why does that birdie sit on the bookshelf?"
He ain't causin' no harm
She offered me an infected tattoo on my arm
I said, "Take a hike
Or ride that bike you bought but never can use - you can point its relief else____where
I try not to swear
I mean I will not swear
-cause it might put my heart in disrepair
But I'm quitting cigarettes
Right now so gimme some kind of break
Not on the neck this time