Having been using this story as back round noise while I write. I just wanted to let you know that I very Much enjoyed it, and its incredible to see your growth, Keep up the good work mate!
After relistening, i get goosebumps during ash and the fourth frontier brain's clash. I feel like you had a lot of fun writing that battle, as the writing was phenomenal.
Although I would say this what if is not on the level of some of your other stories, it was still an enjoyable watch. I would say that the biggest weakness of this what if was not having a clear direction in mind, as seen with Chimchar plot line which felt out of place here(but I still praise your attempt at trying to close that plot point and not just ignoring it). I feel like it would have been better if some of the last team members, like Electrode and Darmanitan, somehow joined the team before, this way their strength and wins would have felt more justified and we would have been more attached to them. However, I still liked how you used the characters, I like the main trio of Barry, Caitlin and Ash a lot, truly an innovative choice and I really liked the battles, especially the last one between Ash and Brandon, that was truly the cherry on the top. Overall not your greatest story, but still very entertaining.
@@I_am_Areeba24x7 (Attention Defcit hyperactivity disorder) it’s when you can’t focus on one thing and the inability to stay still like fidgeting, looking around, and having the inability to just sit still in one place
@KingChris-l2i well to make a video you need several pieces of software, you need an image editor like paint 3d or photoshop, an audio recorder and editor like audacity and a video editor like capcut, filmora, premiere etc
The best way to get a series to come back is to rewatch it and share it with friends, since I use video performance to determine if or when a series will return
Watched the whole thing 1 thing bothered me though and thats the fact it took so long for any of ashes pokemon to evolve all but his gabite took till 4 hours in to evolve
Having been using this story as back round noise while I write. I just wanted to let you know that I very Much enjoyed it, and its incredible to see your growth, Keep up the good work mate!
After relistening, i get goosebumps during ash and the fourth frontier brain's clash. I feel like you had a lot of fun writing that battle, as the writing was phenomenal.
Although I would say this what if is not on the level of some of your other stories, it was still an enjoyable watch. I would say that the biggest weakness of this what if was not having a clear direction in mind, as seen with Chimchar plot line which felt out of place here(but I still praise your attempt at trying to close that plot point and not just ignoring it). I feel like it would have been better if some of the last team members, like Electrode and Darmanitan, somehow joined the team before, this way their strength and wins would have felt more justified and we would have been more attached to them. However, I still liked how you used the characters, I like the main trio of Barry, Caitlin and Ash a lot, truly an innovative choice and I really liked the battles, especially the last one between Ash and Brandon, that was truly the cherry on the top. Overall not your greatest story, but still very entertaining.
I dont know if my adhd will ever let me watch all of that but i downloaded so it counts 😂
Well, either way, it's still a good story. I'm willing to watch it all.
I just listen to the video while gaming
What is an adhd? Can somebody explain me that damn thing.
@@I_am_Areeba24x7 it's when you're gen Z
@@I_am_Areeba24x7 (Attention Defcit hyperactivity disorder) it’s when you can’t focus on one thing and the inability to stay still like fidgeting, looking around, and having the inability to just sit still in one place
Thanks for the video. I like to listen to it while I'm on long drives.
This story is truly special to me. Your words gift us beautiful memories. Thank you so much pickle 🥒 :)
I’ve seen it in parts, glad to have it in story form
Damn the first story of yours Ive ever watched is finished it's been a long road
I like how his clothes look like it all just came from one large roll of cloth
That zoroark absolutly desamated that cresselia.
It is truly an amazing story.
I remember when I first started watching this 2 years ago. I ended up not continuing the series but I guess I'm restarting the series. :)
Watched all 5 hours and it was peak fiction at its finest
One of my fav stories!
Hey I wanted to ask how you do these types of videos I want to do a similar type but I unfortunately have no idea what I’m doing 😅
Do you mean what software do I use or what the process is of making a what if?
@@Pickled_Dill the software would help a lot
@@Pickled_Dill the process to i mean I find what ifs an amazing but I have absolutely no idea what I’m doing
@KingChris-l2i well to make a video you need several pieces of software, you need an image editor like paint 3d or photoshop, an audio recorder and editor like audacity and a video editor like capcut, filmora, premiere etc
@@Pickled_Dill okay thanks a lot I’ll see if I can make something half decent I’ll tag you in the video so lmk what you think
When do you plan to continue red trained ash
The best way to get a series to come back is to rewatch it and share it with friends, since I use video performance to determine if or when a series will return
Watched the whole thing 1 thing bothered me though and thats the fact it took so long for any of ashes pokemon to evolve all but his gabite took till 4 hours in to evolve
What if ash started with tai lung
Like a full series not a short
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*NOOO*
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Caitlin it’s not that deep 💀