Here is a link to Part One, which I highly recommend watching first: ruclips.net/video/_Bbr3LoHyf0/видео.html Also my apologies for not getting this up yesterday. Tuesdays will 'usually' be the day for new parts and stories.
And also sending children into battle to lead them that have little lightsaber training like, weren't Barriss and Ahsoka only 16 in the battle of Geonosis?
In some countries in the world it is considered normal for children to wear a uniform and carry weapons because they don't have a lot of men for the job and they in up using children on both sides they have done that for centuries every civilization has done it because they were raised to fight on the battle field and they would less likely to abandon the people who have trained them to become soldiers and because of that type system they have a loyal and professional type of soldiers who have been under the guidance of their leaders rule some times right people teaching them loyalty for their people and their communities and their country and society and their are the worst people who use their children for taking over a country and committing mass murder on the people who are against their leaders and the sad part about it is that they didn't have a choice to learn right from wrong and they didn't have any chance to grow up without fear of being killed and sometimes not being able to have a better future
I can really hear Ahsoka and barris out of thors voice with how he speaks. The difference is subtle but when you listen closely you can really hear it 👍🏼
You are insanely talented with storytelling! I could not, in a million years, come up with anything half this good! Which probably puts me neck-and-neck with the storytellers in Disney Star Wars 😂
@@GENGHISKHAN-hk3qs Solo was okay, but I'd take it more as a good example of an EotE game. Right down to the guy trying to be Solo and it not quite working while the more experienced players are doing their own things with their characters.
I'm glad to see you producing "what if" stories again. It's a welcome departure from the Disney 'politics' and I enjoy this brand of content from you the most. It's clear you put a lot of thought into these stories and they have plenty of clever twists and turns that I could see happening in canon given a few small alterations. I hope these become a regular on your channel again like they were years ago.
This kind of content was what introduced me to the channel. Thor’s “what if” scenarios are some my favorite out there. He puts so much thought and interesting lore connections in.
@@dereklopez9060 I loved the zombie take on him. I just wish we had more in film backstory and he had more screen time than he got. But I really enjoyed seeing him come back.
I'm not really a fan of TROS in general, but there is that one trailer (I think it's the d23 trailer) where you have that and I love it. Correction: it's called "official trailer 3"
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I admit I gave a little squeal when I heard you say “why are you here”. You sounded just like Sam Witwer and good job by the way with the story. This is better than the actual Clone Wars story. Great job, ever thought about writing a Star Wars book. I sure as hell would read it.
This is what your channel has been lacking lately. I’m glad that you finally got back to telling stories and what if scenarios. This is the content that drew me in to your channel. I hope it continues
I’ve normally found other channels that put out this kind of content to seem more “reaching”, while Thor’s stories are pretty well thought out, and have a lot of interesting twists and turns. He’s very good at the set-up and pay-off.
This is shaping up well and that is high praise considering the plot line you have added into was one of the strongest of the clone wars. You are doing a great job enough that i am not sure by the end of this i will favour either plot more...but i do like the maul forshadowing element not just implying he is out since his plan to double team siddious failed as first happened. The conversation between barris and ashoka was also really good and i could totally see that being the point where something in the back of her mind wants to learn why she would have turned and great that she realised that barries excuse of proving a point was rubbish by pointing out if successful she would not have gotten the point accross.
Personally, I am not sure Ashoka is really a "jedi" anymore even as a member of the order, but she is definitely no sith and I will be surprised if she accepts that. Its one of those things that you expect maul to do, but only the foolish or the obsessed would accept.
Amazing as always you truly have a talent for this sort of story telling. I'm glad you haven't sold out to the "Empire" that is disney. Keep up the good work man and may the force be with you
This is the first time I am hearing one of your what if stories, And I am hooked! Your voice as mall is absolutely perfect! This is so awesome thank you! The only problem is now I’m feeling like I missed out on another great story by listening to this, I wish there was alternate versions of the Clone wars.
9:57 As soon as I heard "another long neck Caminoan," I began to type "Dr Serch?" But by the time I starting typing, it was already done lol.... LONG LIVE DR SERCH, the strange Caminoan!!
Ps, I literally just yesterday was telling my buddy about your channel, and RUclips channels in general, and mentioned your fan fics, and how though your WHO IS REY (or Reys parents?) video was what blew ur channel up, if it wasn't that one, your 1st fan fic, DARK VENGEANCE, woulda done the same if u never made that Rey video. It was THAT good, and one of the best star wars fan fics I ever read/heard. Even though that is just a RUclips video, and this guy spent ¼ mil making a "movie," I'd put Dark Vengeance up against SHARDS OF THE PAST. Not brown nosing here, that fan fic is friggin incredible, and if I win the lottery, I'll finance making a movie or live action series of it.... And lemme tell ya, this one is shaping up to be epic too
Yeah, I feel the same. Nothing against Shards of the Past, and that whole project, but it seems to be mostly spectacle and the story so far has been rather weak. Thor always puts in a lot of great character development and logical progression that sets his stories apart from most other StarWars fanfic out there.
You and this video is what others, like Star Wars Theory was used to be. Now, you are the only one I am still subscribed to, because you still remain loyal to your own agendas (not meaning that in a negative way). Thank you for making great content!
You know, among the Clone Wars Era of Jedi, Ahsoka is one of the three Jedi I can think of who could work with Maul without falling to the Dark Side/get stabbed in the back to work together to bring down Sidious. I look forward to the next segment, especially if they're working together. Some of the absolute best Star Wars (Twilight of the Apprentice) happened when they worked together. You can't go wrong with those two. As a side note, I appreciate the underlying theme here; (or at least one of them anyway) about attachments. About how it's being interpreted and what it really is, from the views of those who live by the Force and those who don't. It's good storytelling.
Wouldn't be surprised to see him at some point in one of the "Filoni-Verse" shows we're getting on Disney Plus. He is a creation of Filoni after all...
interesting how by not publicizing why the medical scan was needed, fives got him to the right person that might be their best chance at preventing the disaster to come... or hasten its arrival. so long as the kaminoin doesnt let the politics of the situation go to his head, the jedi might be alerted to the danger, even have the danger reversed. Im slightly interested why the jedi master assigned to kamino did not alter her schedule with such a stange thing as an "injured" trooper being chaperoned by a clearly uncomfortable arc trooper. I realize that the jedi were blind, but even in the show she did at least appear to pick up on some of the hints that something was very wrong...
Dammit - you've convinced me to sub just to make sure I don't miss the rest ;) Some really nice 'alternate history' storytelling; I look forward to seeing how it all turns out :)
I thought it ended too soon! The counter says 19 minutes and 14 seconds, but it flew by. We need more of your story, Thor. We need more. Also, I'm going to totally lose it if the "he" Maul is talking about is Jar Jar Binks. Just sayin.
Stupendous Wave used to do stuff like this a lot and I loved those what if’s so much. He did one about if the clones didn’t execute order 66 and man that was a crazy one. I’m so glad to hear Thor my fave Star Wars RUclipsr by far start to do the same. The story makes so much sense snd the narration is so good I can visualize the story as if it was a real episode of the clone wars. It’s so good Thor keep it up.
You're good, I can imagine all those characters doing and saying those things, and the stories are great. You should be president of Lucasfilm and lead writer, no joke.
A minor plothole I noticed: Here you reference the comic Son of Dathomir, where Mother Talzin dies, and the story you are sharing takes likely takes place at the same time as the "Fives investigates" (or whatever the name is) arc. That arc comes before (both in release and in timeline) the "The Disappeared" arc, where Mother Talzin is alive. This contradicts each other, unless in your version, "The Disappeared" takes place before "Fives investigates". I loved the story, but just had to share that. XD
Dude I am loving this. I'm wondering if Maul has abandoned the ways of the Sith, but is kind of walking the line in the ways of the Force. Not as a grey Jedi, but as someone who is gradually abandoning the dark side and letting go as a Jedi does. I wouldn't see Maul becoming a member of the Jedi Order, or even referring to himself as a Jedi, but I would see him as a potential light side Force wielder
Week 2 of saying, I hope Five survives this time. And Ahsoka joins Maul, would be cool to see and if the last two part of this are anything to go by it can also be done justice here.
Here is a link to Part One, which I highly recommend watching first: ruclips.net/video/_Bbr3LoHyf0/видео.html Also my apologies for not getting this up yesterday. Tuesdays will 'usually' be the day for new parts and stories.
What if Jango survived Attack of the Clones and raised Boba?
I don't know if we are going to share our "what if" here but: What if Vader found out Leia is her daughter at the beginning of ANH?
This is a stretch: What if Thrawn had convinced Palpatine to replace all the TIE-Fighters with TIE-Defenders?
@@victorydessstro789 he did. In Rebels and in the second Thrawn trilogy.
Thor pin this comment so it is up top, so people can see the link. Also where is your sequel trilogy?
Ashoka: Why did you lose faith in the Jedi?
Barriss: we are literally using an army of child slaves to crush a rebellion
Barris my guy.
@@PisstachioDisguisey shut up Barriss, we have a reputation to uphold
And also sending children into battle to lead them that have little lightsaber training like, weren't Barriss and Ahsoka only 16 in the battle of Geonosis?
In some countries in the world it is considered normal for children to wear a uniform and carry weapons because they don't have a lot of men for the job and they in up using children on both sides they have done that for centuries every civilization has done it because they were raised to fight on the battle field and they would less likely to abandon the people who have trained them to become soldiers and because of that type system they have a loyal and professional type of soldiers who have been under the guidance of their leaders rule some times right people teaching them loyalty for their people and their communities and their country and society and their are the worst people who use their children for taking over a country and committing mass murder on the people who are against their leaders and the sad part about it is that they didn't have a choice to learn right from wrong and they didn't have any chance to grow up without fear of being killed and sometimes not being able to have a better future
I can really hear Ahsoka and barris out of thors voice with how he speaks. The difference is subtle but when you listen closely you can really hear it 👍🏼
Thanks for the heart 👍🏼
You're very welcome.
That makes it so much better, I’m glad I found this early on.
Also, this is what makes Thor so amazing, he goes the extra mile, doing something most people won’t even realise.
Same with Maul....though less subtly
Barriss: "The fear that is rotting them from within."
Me: "So instead you'll tear them apart."
Yes Thor, Yes, this is brilliant. I need more what-ifs
This is the best writing we have seen since the TCW season 7 finale. *giddy noises*
Thor uploading this on a Wednesday because of life reasons?! Ah, the Negotiator!
Palpatine voice: At last.
... myyy thooor....
Youuu have fulfilled every wish...
I have ever had
Inside my soul...
He also sounds a lot like Clone Wars Anakin with just his normal voice
Goood.... Gooood...
My lord, is that leeeegul?
@@ma2tw683 I will make it legal
You are insanely talented with storytelling! I could not, in a million years, come up with anything half this good!
Which probably puts me neck-and-neck with the storytellers in Disney Star Wars 😂
lollll samee😭😂
The ST, yes. But Rouge-One and Solo were very good.
@@GENGHISKHAN-hk3qs Solo was okay, but I'd take it more as a good example of an EotE game. Right down to the guy trying to be Solo and it not quite working while the more experienced players are doing their own things with their characters.
@@GENGHISKHAN-hk3qs I wouldn't go as far as to say Solo is "very good", okay at best for me, but CERTAINLY better than the sequels by far
@@jjkinsley9097 ok, we can agree on that. L3 was bad.
You bastard! Ending on a cliffhanger... lol... nice story line.
I'm glad to see you producing "what if" stories again. It's a welcome departure from the Disney 'politics' and I enjoy this brand of content from you the most. It's clear you put a lot of thought into these stories and they have plenty of clever twists and turns that I could see happening in canon given a few small alterations.
I hope these become a regular on your channel again like they were years ago.
This kind of content was what introduced me to the channel. Thor’s “what if” scenarios are some my favorite out there. He puts so much thought and interesting lore connections in.
Ahsoka's not gonna take Maul's BS, but she _will_ eventually get him to stop playing the pronoun game.
Long have I waited... (insert Zombie Palpatine Voice)
I like that line
@@dereklopez9060 he also gives us an “At Last” when Ren finds him
@@starwarsfiction I like that part too, Palpatine was pretty spooky in TROS.
@@dereklopez9060 I loved the zombie take on him. I just wish we had more in film backstory and he had more screen time than he got. But I really enjoyed seeing him come back.
I'm not really a fan of TROS in general, but there is that one trailer (I think it's the d23 trailer) where you have that and I love it.
Correction: it's called "official trailer 3"
I admit I gave a little squeal when I heard you say “why are you here”. You sounded just like Sam Witwer and good job by the way with the story. This is better than the actual Clone Wars story. Great job, ever thought about writing a Star Wars book. I sure as hell would read it.
This is what your channel has been lacking lately. I’m glad that you finally got back to telling stories and what if scenarios. This is the content that drew me in to your channel. I hope it continues
The accents add a nice level to this vid. Great job!
I'm *really* enjoying this. Maul is certainly good at coaxing conflicted young Jedi, isn't he? 🙂 Can't wait for part 3!
“I’ve been looking forward to this.”
This iteration of the “what if’s” is my favorite so far, absolutely brilliant!
"... and her last attack falls short. And she crumbles to the ground."
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OMG... the cliffhanger! I'm loving this tale. You could turn it into an audiobook😁
I'm very impressed at how much like Star Wars this sounds. I've heard other sorts of stories like these, but this one just makes sense.
I’ve normally found other channels that put out this kind of content to seem more “reaching”, while Thor’s stories are pretty well thought out, and have a lot of interesting twists and turns. He’s very good at the set-up and pay-off.
You’ve put a lot of effort in to make this a good listen and it definitely payed off. This is a great ‘what if’ type story, congrats to you man👏🏼
Fantastic echo of the Siege of Mandalore right at the end there.
I really like this type of video. Please keep making more. Part one was great!
Just went back and rewatched ep1. I absolutely love this series so far!!😁
You are bringing balance to the Force... Please! Pleeease!!! Don't stop, don't leave us in the darkness
Thor is such a great writer. The part with the Kaminoan doctor was just brilliant and so enjoyable! :)
“And that is where this part ends” are the worst words in RUclips audio book fan fiction history!
These videos are amazing. Can't wait for part 3
so good to here your original
storytelling again.. have been missed as of late
I like how you got one of my favorite screens in Star Wars kinda sorta playing out.
This is brilliant!!!!
Thank You Thor for posting this.
So happy you've gotten back to the what if stories . I hope this one ends up being one of the long ones
Awesome part 2, the cliffhangers are perfect! Can't wait for more.
This is shaping up well and that is high praise considering the plot line you have added into was one of the strongest of the clone wars.
You are doing a great job enough that i am not sure by the end of this i will favour either plot more...but i do like the maul forshadowing element not just implying he is out since his plan to double team siddious failed as first happened.
The conversation between barris and ashoka was also really good and i could totally see that being the point where something in the back of her mind wants to learn why she would have turned and great that she realised that barries excuse of proving a point was rubbish by pointing out if successful she would not have gotten the point accross.
Glad ur doing the reimagined stories again . They are creative and wonderful, you are very talented writer . Thanks
What if Idea: What if Jango Fett killed Mace Windu in their duel?
This was awesome !.. Specially Maul asking Ahsoka to join him. I can't wait for the next episode.
Personally, I am not sure Ashoka is really a "jedi" anymore even as a member of the order, but she is definitely no sith and I will be surprised if she accepts that. Its one of those things that you expect maul to do, but only the foolish or the obsessed would accept.
Amazing as always you truly have a talent for this sort of story telling. I'm glad you haven't sold out to the "Empire" that is disney. Keep up the good work man and may the force be with you
Awesome work, Thor!!! 😃
Looking forward to part 3!
The way you tell star wars stories is amazing 🔥👌
Dang man, that maul impression is great!
Awesome, you nailed Darth Maul (and the other chars, too ofc).
Can't wait for part 3.
You're a marvelous story teller, can't wait for the next part... Well done.
This is the first time I am hearing one of your what if stories, And I am hooked! Your voice as mall is absolutely perfect! This is so awesome thank you! The only problem is now I’m feeling like I missed out on another great story by listening to this, I wish there was alternate versions of the Clone wars.
You should watch his other prequel fan-fiction KOTFO. It's in his playlists.
Please never stop doing this format it kicks ass
Dude. Ending it like that was just cruel. Still loved it!
This is great man! I love this sort of stuff because there are so many ways to go and there is always something new to explore with Star Wars
Great story! Can't wait for the next part.
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As soon as I heard "another long neck Caminoan," I began to type "Dr Serch?" But by the time I starting typing, it was already done lol.... LONG LIVE DR SERCH, the strange Caminoan!!
Ps, I literally just yesterday was telling my buddy about your channel, and RUclips channels in general, and mentioned your fan fics, and how though your WHO IS REY (or Reys parents?) video was what blew ur channel up, if it wasn't that one, your 1st fan fic, DARK VENGEANCE, woulda done the same if u never made that Rey video.
It was THAT good, and one of the best star wars fan fics I ever read/heard.
Even though that is just a RUclips video, and this guy spent ¼ mil making a "movie," I'd put Dark Vengeance up against SHARDS OF THE PAST.
Not brown nosing here, that fan fic is friggin incredible, and if I win the lottery, I'll finance making a movie or live action series of it....
And lemme tell ya, this one is shaping up to be epic too
Yeah, I feel the same. Nothing against Shards of the Past, and that whole project, but it seems to be mostly spectacle and the story so far has been rather weak. Thor always puts in a lot of great character development and logical progression that sets his stories apart from most other StarWars fanfic out there.
You nailed Maul's speech patterns.
Great story telling and you have a great voice for telling it! Bravo 👏
You and this video is what others, like Star Wars Theory was used to be. Now, you are the only one I am still subscribed to, because you still remain loyal to your own agendas (not meaning that in a negative way). Thank you for making great content!
BEAUTIFUL. This is amazing. I am looking forward to the next one! If you had the voice actors... this would be a masterpiece.
You know, among the Clone Wars Era of Jedi, Ahsoka is one of the three Jedi I can think of who could work with Maul without falling to the Dark Side/get stabbed in the back to work together to bring down Sidious.
I look forward to the next segment, especially if they're working together. Some of the absolute best Star Wars (Twilight of the Apprentice) happened when they worked together. You can't go wrong with those two.
As a side note, I appreciate the underlying theme here; (or at least one of them anyway) about attachments. About how it's being interpreted and what it really is, from the views of those who live by the Force and those who don't.
It's good storytelling.
Amazing as expected from you my friend
Palpatine and Vader in their heads: The time has come the end of the war is near.
Random question: how likely is it that we’ll get to see hybrids like Jacen Syndulla, in live-action?
Wouldn't be surprised to see him at some point in one of the "Filoni-Verse" shows we're getting on Disney Plus. He is a creation of Filoni after all...
@@thorskywalker right
I thought he should've been in Episode 9 honestly
@@macwelch8599 we might see cuts children in TBB
Great story so far! Keep it up!!!
Really enjoyed these 2 episodes. Using dialog between the characters really helps bring the story to life rather than just narrating it.
interesting how by not publicizing why the medical scan was needed, fives got him to the right person that might be their best chance at preventing the disaster to come... or hasten its arrival. so long as the kaminoin doesnt let the politics of the situation go to his head, the jedi might be alerted to the danger, even have the danger reversed. Im slightly interested why the jedi master assigned to kamino did not alter her schedule with such a stange thing as an "injured" trooper being chaperoned by a clearly uncomfortable arc trooper. I realize that the jedi were blind, but even in the show she did at least appear to pick up on some of the hints that something was very wrong...
Hands down the best SW fan fiction writer on RUclips. Oh how i missed these
Ah, the return of Dr. Serch. Will Rigamonti make a cameo?
There's a really good chance of that...
That ought to be pretty wizard.
Your writing skills Thor are most admirable! 👍👍
Dammit - you've convinced me to sub just to make sure I don't miss the rest ;) Some really nice 'alternate history' storytelling; I look forward to seeing how it all turns out :)
This is soooooooooo well done Brovo!!!!
This is some damn fantastic writing.
Like how you redeem the Kaminoans overall and it was a few bad eggs who worked with Palpatine
I like it when aliens usually perceived as bad natured are shown that other individuals are just as capable of being good.
@@GreaterGrievobeast55 yup, far more realistic writing
Would you ever consider doing a what if adding galen marek as an inquisitor? Doesn't have to be focused on him but have him added in some way
That could certainly be part of a story sometime.
What if the vong invaded during the prequels?
Wow, that would have been crazy. Good idea, wish we had got to see that in Clone Wars.
Love these videos! Keep up the great work, Thor. I think Ahsoka and Maul will fight next.
I thought it ended too soon! The counter says 19 minutes and 14 seconds, but it flew by. We need more of your story, Thor. We need more.
Also, I'm going to totally lose it if the "he" Maul is talking about is Jar Jar Binks. Just sayin.
Stupendous Wave used to do stuff like this a lot and I loved those what if’s so much. He did one about if the clones didn’t execute order 66 and man that was a crazy one. I’m so glad to hear Thor my fave Star Wars RUclipsr by far start to do the same. The story makes so much sense snd the narration is so good I can visualize the story as if it was a real episode of the clone wars. It’s so good Thor keep it up.
You're good, I can imagine all those characters doing and saying those things, and the stories are great. You should be president of Lucasfilm and lead writer, no joke.
Awesome story thor
This is perfection! With your skill of writing you could work at Lucasfilm and should make your own star wars series! Thank you for this series :)
So.......... I guess we're just going to pretend that whole rock thing never happened. 🤔
*"NUFF SAID"™*
5:44 ahsoka puts her *EAR*
A minor plothole I noticed: Here you reference the comic Son of Dathomir, where Mother Talzin dies, and the story you are sharing takes likely takes place at the same time as the "Fives investigates" (or whatever the name is) arc. That arc comes before (both in release and in timeline) the "The Disappeared" arc, where Mother Talzin is alive. This contradicts each other, unless in your version, "The Disappeared" takes place before "Fives investigates".
I loved the story, but just had to share that. XD
You're right. So let's just say there is slightly different timing in this reality...
Dr. Serch is AMAZING.
This is the content i subscribed for
Nice Thumbnail!
I wonder who made it???
Damn cliffhangers lol! Whens the next part coming?
He did say next Tuesday (if all goes well).
Ending on bigger cliffhangers than WandaVision did 😂
"Please Stand By"
This would’ve made an amazing 13 episode arc
this is good. This is really GOOD
what a cliffhanger !
That order 101 was dope
I've missed these videos!
You need to make a video about KK being at Lucasfilm for years to come according to Chapek, and about ROCK
Babe wake up! Thor Skywalker posted!
Dude I am loving this. I'm wondering if Maul has abandoned the ways of the Sith, but is kind of walking the line in the ways of the Force. Not as a grey Jedi, but as someone who is gradually abandoning the dark side and letting go as a Jedi does. I wouldn't see Maul becoming a member of the Jedi Order, or even referring to himself as a Jedi, but I would see him as a potential light side Force wielder
Excellent, my friend....
Loving both parts especially Maul almost revealing everything that guy is a bit insane isn't he.
Well done
I supported your channel thor
This is going great!
Week 2 of saying, I hope Five survives this time.
And Ahsoka joins Maul, would be cool to see and if the last two part of this are anything to go by it can also be done justice here.
Great job.
Amazing video