PLEASE READ: Guys I want to apologize for how loud the music is. I probably had some error with the audio during the editing process. I didn't realize it was that loud on my end so that's entirely on me! I'm so sorry everyone 😭
Yeah your idea of Pokemon Journeys is way better & Making Goh a Side is better since he is boring & for the animation yeah they should saved that for the battles not dumb filler especially for the championship tournament with the finale 8 even Sun & Moon has a Better Tournament then Journeys since I always think Pokemon Journeys is non canon because of its inconsistancies but yours is the true canon in my eyes you have mad respect to the shows before it then whoever is writing pokemon journeys noice one dude oof lol XD & thx for defending Paul & Ash Grenninja's bond its good to hear that someone cares about the pokemon series then the journey writers
Your story is the best better then the dumb journey story but also it would be cool if Ash finally grows up since I am still sad that the theories of him in the coma is still real now it ended its sad Ash is truly in a Coma forever which I dont want that aka make him grow up so the coma theory isnt true & make him married to serena & also make the new oc his daughter so there is a connection so people can get to watch the new pokemon anime to make it that people move on from ash & want to see a new story blossomed & also you forgot Alain's character is destroyed lets also make him fight ash in the finale 8 tournament in the first round to show who is now stronger which this time Ash wins
I would agree with a lot of this under one circumstance: Ash is shifting his teams throughout the adventure. If this is his final adventure, he should be using all of his available Pokemon to climb the ranks to champion.
Same I feel like they should've made Journeys take place after an adventure in Galar like battle frontiers in AG. That way we'd have time to spent and get used to the pokemon and characters in Galar and there wouldn't be a need for Ash to catch any pokemon. He can just improve the ones he has.
Journeys was rushed and lacked continuity because of real-world restrictions. A lot of people got laid off at the animation studio and the directors demanded an episodic structure. Ash vs Leon was their sacrifice to stick the landing as best they could while the rest of the tournament had to cut some corners.
I completely understand that. But again, that doesn't mean we give them a pass as the animation is visibly worse. It's just the directors of the series fault. The animators are not
@@Pokiiii62 I think the fandom is also to blame too. Cause they kept harassing the animators until one of them just snapped and revealed what was going on during the Masters 8.
Goh is a perfectly fine character, the real problem is that his GOALS don't mesh with Ash's goals in any interesting way. each episode is usually one character stealing the spotlight for the entire episode, and the other being dragged along. the personality pairs well with ash okay-ish. I think that the whole lab assistant thing for ash was a HUGE mistake in the original.
It still really hurts that they removed the exclusive red ash greninja form from Journeys like that was the only form that made the huge hype for XY and they ruined bond evolution completely
I felt so underwhelmed, and kinda empty when I finished journeys, and it made my realize that the made up final movie I thought of as a kid is like 10 times better than what journeys is, this video was very well thought out, and all the points are valid
I’ve been planning an episode-by-episode Journeys rewrite outline since… god, I think since before Journeys ended, and this has given me a lot of ideas
One thing I personally would've liked was if instead of Goh, we had characters from Sword and Sheild like Hop, Bede and Marnie. I know Hop was in it but not much, they could've used his character and others to their advantag.I also didn't really like the Greeninja and Lucario thing much just felt wrong to me. I love your ideas of the series though, just feeling the nostalgia instead of all the random things they did.
Pokémon Journeys had Ash being reunited with some of his past companions which was nice. However I can’t say the same with how they treated Chloe and Goh. I wished the series would’ve expanded more on them and how they would achieve their potential if they even had any 😔
That's one of the few things Journeys has going for it, it has so much missed potential that making rewrites for it is so easy 💀 *Creators like Electro Pikachu, Zactoshi, Zanolith, KuroBlitz and even yourself have proven that with time, dedication and a few tweaks, Journeys can be one of, if not the best Pokémon Anime we've received*
@natalimoina No, it didn't. It failed on almost every aspect. These youtubers know what they are talking about to an extent. Otherwise, they wouldn't be able to talk about the dumpster fire of a series anyway. So what in the world are you talking about?
Ash's Charizard needed a proper send off. The writers did him dirty. He could have battled in the Masters 8 Tournament and even be part of the team Ash used against Leon in the final battle.
Correct me if I’m wrong, since it’s been a while since I saw it, but I feel it was a MASSIVE missed opportunity to not let Ash bring back old Pokémon for certain fights and mix and mash them with his new Pokémon.
@@veebot75how dare you, THEY DID BRING BACK HIS OLD POKÉMON!!! in like the last 12 episodes of his character where they hardly did anything at all outside of filler stuff😑 so yeah, it’s actually worse that they were wasted on Aim to be Mid
Dog I Wish They Would've Done What Best Wishes/Black And White Did And Make Filler Tournament Arcs Like The Club Xplosion And The Jr Cup And Have It To We're Ash Rotates With His Older Pokemon Per Tournament And We'd Get A Tournament Arc After Every 20 Or So Episodes So It Wouldn't Get Repetitive It Would've Been Great In My Opinion.
@@SMM5 yeah, I do remember that. It was cool in the moment, but what lasting impact is that gonna have? Would I have rather seen Ash’s Totodile help him win a masters 8 tournament match, or watch his Totodile help him with godamn fishing?
One thing I want to add is that Ash should not catch any more new Pokemon in Journeys, instead opting to use his old Pokemon which has a region of battle experience on their belt for the World Tournament. The power progression his Journeys team went through is really hard to believe since most of it happened offscreen and happened way too fast considering this is their first Journey.
Awesome video! I feel like Journeys is a series with a ton of missed potential. When I rewatch it, one thing I find myself thinking is, "This could've been their best series." A lot of people like to blame COVID for Journeys' issues, but the issues always existed before there were any lockdowns. I like how you actually use the galar characters and I like how you let Ash show his growth.
Why does the Undertale music in the background make this feel like a meme. Kinda like how Hugbee’s joke for King K Rool in his “Roasting every smash character” videi
I feel like one of the only things I would change in Journeys, (besides getting rid of Goh and Chloe), is Ash battling Raihan. It's Raihan's dream to defeat Leon, so he should have that opportunity in the Masters 8. Of course he'll lose, but- At least he would have a chance to make his dream come true. By allowing Ash to defeat him, and causing him to not be in the Masters 8, Ash took away his dream. I know we're suppose to care about Ash and his dream, but ever since Pokemon started developing other characters, I've started to care about their dreams, too. As such, we should want them to succeed, or even have a chance at them altogether.
I actually really enjoyed Sun and Moon and I think a more basic artstyle can work in the right setting. I don’t think Journey‘s problems would have been fixed by a change in animations but a better narrative could have gone a very long way. Fundamentally I just wish it all felt more cohesive and with so many possibilities to explore the filler feels like a missed opportunity almost every time. Journey‘s had a real lack of multi episode arch’s with made the whole thing feel a bit disjointed.
Journeys messed up a lot of reunion with old travelling companions especially being the last time we see Ash Ketchum like Serena (We waited for almost a decade to see them both on screen for idk probably 10sec) Greninja (Where did his form go its like the writers just forgot that it had something) Paul (I am Not interested to battle cuz its too noisy like wow such a very genuine reason) Alain (The best NPC character for entire journeys goes to Alain, like the writors just forgot that they were friends/rivals it was more like a champion to champion conversion)
Dog I'm Going To Be Deadas Right Now They Can Give Paul All The Stupid Reasons They Want I'm Just Glad He Wasn't In The Masters 8 Since The Writes Would've Made Him Get No Diffed By Leon Just Like Alain To Show How Powerful He Is As Undefeated And We Know That Paul Has The Strength To Be In The Masters 8 Since Ash Asked Him Why He Didn't Compete Or Enter The World Coronation Series.
Since Paul didn't stick around for the rest of the battles in the league after he lost, I can see that for him. He also needed to figure out his strength after the smackdown from Brandon. I think this made sense for him. Alain- well, everyone but Cynthia in the Masters' Eight- why didn't they make a few more episodes for that so he could have time with each of the other rivals, or write them in elsewhere. I would have loved an arc in Unova so we could have seen Iris v Alder and a new champion crowned. If Ash is alone, maybe Lance could have been the second hero while dealing with Rose/ The Darkest Day, like at the Lake of Rage and against Teams Aqua and Magma. Steven Stone could have been in a cave/ mine, and they talk about evolution stones and how Glaceon and Leafeon evolve differently in different regions or the Galarian fossils. Diantha is there filming a movie somewhere and they run into each other. Ash takes something to Sycamore for Magnolia and runs into Alain. There are so many different things that the anime could have done instead that it was impossible to make everyone happy, too. He needs to catch all the pokemon he should have before- No, he needs just his old team so we can see how they've evovled as characters. I'm glad he's now the world's greatest Pokemon master- No, they gave him too much plot armor; he's new to this level, he should have to work his way up the ladder again, and lost in the first round.
@boghrakarthikeya9865 The reunion that Serena got with Ash is better for her character. As it shows that, either, 1, she got over her crush on Ash, or 2, her relationship with Ash was retconned into her having never been romantically interested in Ash in the first place. Heck. She even seems to have thrown away the ribbon Ash gave her. Plus, admit it. Serena having such an intense crush on Ash didn't in the slightest connect with the target audience, as they found it boring and hard to relate to.
I feel like Dawn's is the worst because she doesn't even feel like the same person. She just feels like her beginning Dawn but with less of the character.
If only the writers didn't wrote somethings mid it'd be great. Anyway, i noticed there's something front of the background is it to avoid the cough copyright? Other than that, congrats on your 20k subscribers!
I definitely think Journeys (with Goh and Chloe) could have worked if they made Cerise's lab sort of the base for Poké Jobs (that mechanic in SwSh that lets you send your Pokémon to help businesses) as well as just introduce Project Mew as a Legendary program rather than just Mew. That, plus making Chloe's arc more flushed out and also making the series more serialized and, like you said, Include more past characters in the PWC, I really think this could have been a great series
@Pokiiii62 Goh could work if we get rid of the Mew plot and replace it with him being a researcher. He's already a bit of a tech savvy guy compared to Ash and more analytical Zanolith did this in his Journeys Rewrite, and Goh's VA (In both Japanese and English) voices the PokéDex in Horizons, so it honestly has legs to stand on
All i wanted was to see all Ash’s companion and had more focus episodes, the final episode should have everyone on Ash’s journey celebrare for his victory. More salty in the ending was Ash still travel and still waiting to become a Pokémon master so win the master 8 actually didn’t matter if Ash won or not.
@Pokiiii62 Maybe, but if they did it then, the Team Rocket we know and love would have been gone a long time ago. If this is the end of Ash's Adventures, then having Team Rocket ultimately disbanded would give closure of some sort for our favorite trio too.
how i would fix it (without changing match) -the plot: >ash goes through the gyms and before almost every gym he gets a new pokemon with a new arc revolving around the pokemon (also he catches gen 8 pokemons not have a gen 1 team) whilst also having a reunion that somehow connects to that arc >goh and cloe each get similar or less screentime to the real screentime cloe got but they dont waste it and give them either a proper arc or the same arc but since its less screentime its a smaller problem >series finale is the game ending of the way eternetus and all that happen
Another change I would make is replacing Alain is masters eight with Raihan like bro had an actual purpose to enter the tournament I know that he would lose but at least he would lose to Leon but at least he would lose fair and square, unlike someone like Alain who’s initial main purpose was to do research on Mega Stones
While I agree with a few things you brought up, there are a few things I don't agree with. The points I don't agree with are cutting Goh, not doing filler episodes, and becoming a teacher. The filler one is simple. Pokemon has always been a show that has relied on filler episodes. Even XY has a had full of filler. The show needs that to last before the next game. Instead of just writing Goh out, why not just make him a better character. While I wouldn't mind using old characters, you can't expect one to just be ready to join up with Ash. It would just feel odd. As for the teacher, that's just a bad idea. It's even worse to think any of Ash's friends would tell him to just retire. That feels so disrespectful. Ash enjoys just journeying around, and battling. His ending is fine how it is. Still, that's just me.
Your story is the best better then the dumb journey story but also it would be cool if Ash finally grows up since I am still sad that the theories of him in the coma is still real now it ended its sad Ash is truly in a Coma forever which I dont want that aka make him grow up so the coma theory isnt true & make him married to serena & also make the new oc his daughter so there is a connection so people can get to watch the new pokemon anime to make it that people move on from ash & want to see a new story blossomed & also you forgot Alain's character is destroyed lets also make him fight ash in the finale 8 tournament in the first round to show who is now stronger which this time Ash wins
As far as my biggest concern is; have Goh not catch Eternatus and Suicune, but Ash, then Pokémon Journeys would be fixed. Sure, their positions would still be the same (i.e. Ash "unable to use them in battles"), but at least they would be under Ash's "rightful" ownership. Goh can still have Regieleki, but Eternatus and Suicune...hell no!
@@animedude8712 With one of GOH'S Poké Balls. And Ash's Pokédex does not include Eternatus as one of his Pokémon. And the websites clearly state it to be "Goh's Eternatus", until it officially became "Leon's Eternatus"
@@animedude8712 No, when Goh's Poké Ball turned into the "Dynamax Poké Ball", he was caught off-guard by its "added weight". Ash, quickly seeing it, kept Goh from dropping it and since they both held it, they threw the Ball together.
Reunion with Paul is also really messed up, like the reason for paul not participating in WCS was that he dint have interest to noise of the tournament that’s a really lame excuse I would say
@@Pokiiii62 Like they could have at least given a genuine reason like lets assume that he defeated Brendan and became a frontier brain so he was busy or something
Dog The Thing I Don't Like About Journeys Is How They Make Legendaries Untouchable But When Goh Needs "Character Growth" They Scale Down The Untouchable Legendaries To Make It So That Goh Can Put Up A Fight Or Catch Them Key Examples Being Zapdos And Suicune. Infernape Who's Far More Powerful Than Raboot (Since Cinderace Was A Raboot At The Time When Fighting Zapdos) Didn't Do As Well When Fighting Moltres And They Didn't Even Have Him Use His Blaze-Form Now That Is Stupid Just Like The Ash-Greninja Retcon It's So Inconsistent. Small Rage Rant Done So Other Than That I Like Your What If Pokeeee Just Like Zactoshi's It's Pretty Good. 😊😃
Poke, I am not sure if you know this but a youtuber named EliteMJ is making a fanmade series called pokemon next generations which takes place 10 years after Ash won the world coronation series
By the way, could you PLEASEEE make a video on Clemont’s backstory? No one really knows, but I believe his mother died. Since no one knows his backstory, I made up one 😂. When Clemont was a child, he wanted to become an inventor. It was his mother’s birthday, and he decided to INVENT something for her birthday. He invented a toaster, because their old one broke. Since toasters have a timer for how long the bread would be in for, young Clemont thought it was a good idea to put a rusty old clock in the toaster for the “timer.” But his mom didn’t know the clock was in it. So she turned on the toaster little Clemont gave her, but it exploded into flames. Clemont was very traumatized by this. His dad heard his ear splitting screams and rushed in the house to find him lying on the ground, inhaling a lot of smoke because he was crying. His father picked him up and rushed him to the hospital. He had really bad asthma after that, hence why he can’t run for too long and has to pant after running very slowly. Do you think my story is acceptable? Sorry for the super long comment. I hope you see this, pokeee!
I wanted Ash to reunite with primeape and have it evolve into Annihilape. To show a pokemon revealed a gen early. Maybe have Ash rebattle people he lost too in leagues. Show some elite 4 members that have not showed up in the anime.
I honestly feel like I half-agree with not having an entire main cast alongside Ash. I personally feel like it'd be best if the main cast was Ash with 1-3 older companions. Or, at least, give some of them more screen time. Like, excuse me for possibly being that one shipper, but WE NEED MORE SERENA, THEY DID HER REALLY DIRTY, I CAN'T PUT IT INTO WORDS. At the very least, give her more screen time and an arc blawg 😭
I feel like Pokémon Journeys could've been the best series in the anime if only if it wasn't for the episodic nature. Plus "To Be A Pokémon Master," the arc that is meant to conclude Ash's long running story is very underwhelming. It's literally 11 episodes of filler and nostalgia pandering when it could've been 3 episodes long.
I haven't been able to catch up due to computer issues the entire year (can't wait until i get a new computer and I can finally catch up on journeys and horizens) but I have heard they dropped a few days and I do remember some asshole on failbook spoiled the ending up of journeys for me,cause of my stupid computer issues,computer issues are the bane of my existence
I think that the masters 8 should be rescripted because sometimes it was weird and ignoring some battles because of the side story is bad and ashs team is not bad but I would made some changes these 6 Pokémon will I add there 1 Pikachu 2 Lucario 3 Charizard 4 Sceptile 5 Swellow and 6 would be of course Greninja. At the other hand I would like to se more of important characters to be more involved and were really influential throughout the series I can imagine by the masters 8 instead Cloe cheering for Ash and I have nothing against Dawn to be there but for the love of god why at the stadium can't be for cheering for example Brock and Serena or some of the Ash rivals like Paul Gary as well it could been mor emotional and more spark in there and see all the iconic characters to return would be amazing and also can include that after Serena becomes the champion in contests etc. after the final she can come to Ash they can hug and kiss each other or I dont know and than maybe announcing something new or little series after Ash become a Pokémon master I know it is on Netflix but it could be done a lot better than it actually was
A nice interesting topic and how you fix Pokémon journeys of course you kinda keep Kharua and have Sonia as Ash’s Professor instead as for the Galar sensing your version you got rid of Goh LOL Ash could catch Grookey Kharua could have Sobble and Sonia could have Scorbunny since this is the first or should I say only Pokémon series that Ash doesn’t catch a new Starter that Ash would miss some of his old Friends and Rivals also this will be a perfect opportunity for Ash to use some of his old Pokémon again now he does use his new Teams and this has always been a tree ever since black and white with exception of the Hoenn League but since this is Ash’s finale I think we should give some too his old Pokémon as well even have some evolve that never got to like Totodile to Feraligatr Snivy to Serperior Gible to Garchomp and honestly Oshawott to Hisuian Samurott to promote Legends Arceus as well returning Pokémon that got released like Primeape but it would be cool if this was a moment where he evolved into Annihilape forshadowing Gen 9 and of course Greninja he will recaptured him and the Ash Greninja will not get recon and he would have a rematch battle against Alain’s Mega Charizard but this time Greninja will actually beat him and speaking of Alain he would fetch a new keystone for his Charizard would be a Y version since it brings back bad memories that he had the key stone that was presented by Team Flayer with the X key stone I was actually inspired by someone else that did there rework on Pokémon So I think Alain I have a new form for his Charizard put the pass behind him and move forward and for his ultimate battle against Leon honestly I think this would be more interesting if they just set up with one gimmick instead my opinion make the fight of his less jarring and controversial for me Ash’s Ultimate Pokémon to take down The undefeated Champion Leon is Pikachu Charizard Greninja Sceptile Lycanroc and Lucario Ash will use back to battle bond with his Greninja again not recon which is in an ability not a gimmick but I’m still classifying anyway and Leon will G-max his Charizard will get this crash between Ash Greninja and G-max Charizard and after Charizard reverts back to his regular size and Greninja go down then we get that fight between Pikachu and Charizard and well Charizard go for his finishing move Fire Blast Pikachu go for his finishing move which he would learn Poka Papow which is a move from let’s go Partner Pikachu signature fifth move to symbolize the bond between Ash and Pikachu to show that these two have come a long way and they will succeed and that’s the true finale of Ash vs Leon
As for Jesse and James now that you put it that way was he did encounter Cassidy and Bif to see that these two have retired so Jesse and James what’s the thing about retiring but they but they still work for the Boss anyway but wall Giovanni starts to recapping and cause chaos Jesse and James we have to rebel since they’re not really evil that they don’t want to hurt anyone so they betrayed Giovanni and help Ash and his Friends to take down Giovanni and the Team Rocket clan once and for all and once they did Jesse and James well find new jobs and live new lives maybe could marry so they will sort a Family of their own that’s how I would end Jesse and James’s closures
The animation in journeys is also really bad like they made sun and moon animation bad for at least some what okish reason, but after that they could have fixed it especially with match with Cynthia The design of Ash is also really mid like the Outfit is cool no doubt but what happened to his eyes it feels like they just used the eye design of sun and moon another cool eye was of Goh he has sharper and much better design than compared to oval circular design
@ You know what else should be a proper conclusion for Ash is make him a strong trainer and for his Pokemon to be stronger that’s difficult for anyone to beat them, get rid of Team Rocket for good because of him and friends have gotten rid of every known evil organization in the franchise, reunited with some of his Pokémon and have him captured legendary Pokémon, add something else in his life like becoming aura guardian, a Pokémon ranger, a battle frontier, and married Serena or any girls he interact the most.
journeys was so hyped up but got robbed most of the time Paul was literally an opposite version of ash as a trainer The same path but with different methods So not intrested on the noise arenas was such a dump excuse when the dude was on several tournaments before I rather don't see serena or greninja come back if it was just like that lmao dawn had several occasions by her returns but each time the writers messed up with that not a single upgrade since last time Her bw return was on another level Whats the point of mentioning how hard infernape was training all those years just to not use it afterwards same with all his old mons tbh flint was the elite four ash was close too the most from what we saw in the anime Not only they didn't battle but also they did not even interract Ash had less than 15 battles in the championship and more than half of those were offscreen against random characters when sawyer tyson clair wulfric Barry ... exists Leon should be the top trainer outside of the masters 8 ash vs cynthia as the finale The winner would face the monarch So leon would not decimate champions teams with 2 pokemon to overhype him due to being the protagonist main goal
No offense, and I really do mean none, but for a video who’s opening line is “I sat down and rewrote Pokémon Journeys” you focused… a *LOT* on the venting on how not-great Journeys was. The only things I found of substance in this video were Ash’s character arc, the Leon stuff, and the no new companions thing, the rest is just “I don’t like that Journeys did this thing, instead I’ll-” without much further elaboration to give us an insight on your true vision of this series This feels less like a rewrite and more like a talking session of what you think Journeys should’ve been. A rewrite would’ve been like what Zanioth has been doing for the past half-year if you want to check that out for notes Also, and I know you didn’t mean anything bad when saying this but I still don’t like what you said here, but that line about how Journeys didn’t treat the Steven and Cynthia’s M8 battled with respect when it comes to the animation is straight up insulting when you consider the insane production problems in the anime staff during the M8. Seriously, did the insane amount of recaps that went on during the M8 not indicate to you that maybe all’s not well with the production of that tournament? I’m just relieved we even got as good of an Ash vs Leon as we did all things considered I get wanting a better version of Pokémon Journeys and I’m more than happy to see rewrites of this series talking about what it could’ve been, I myself an working on a story in relation to do that right now. But you shouldn’t just ignore the insane problems behind the production of this series and talk like they were just nonexistent, that’s disrespectful to everyone who worked on Pokémon Journeys and tried to make it as good as it could’ve been overall all things considered
First off, I never said it was the animators fault for the production issues. The issues themselves are geared more towards the actual directors of the series, THEY are the ones mainly responsible for the issues that occurred throughout journeys. Secondly, part of the reason of a rewrite is showing how to do things differently than the original material. To further explain, I need to note down the bad and how I can turn it into good. And lastly, you mentioned how other than "the Leon stuff, ash character Arcs stuff, and the cast stuff everything else was bad" as if more than 90% of the video is legit talking about said things, almost the entire video is talking about those things. I think you got a little tilted from what I said, and btw I meant no harm if it means anything.
"Pokémon Journeys and tried to make it as good as it could’ve been overall all things considered" It's still so weak that I wish Pokemon Horizons took place in a different universe 😏
The thing i didn't like was lucario tryna be a wannabe ash greninja 💀 also goh kept catching legendaries and stole Pokemon ash would've loved to catch, so that's why i really liked the mewtwo and articuno episodes because aside from these goh catches legendaries like he has 1000 master balls 💀 and wth chloes eevee still doesn't have an explanation (gigantamax would be a great explanation) like- one of the eps i only liked was the slowpoke episodes but after that it's so mid 💀
only guess why goh was with ash is most likely olm aka people who made pokemon thought it wasn t ash least anime at time/early on and heck they were fully admitted that they had no idea do with goh character am I only guess I imagine he was supposed to be the protagonist, but do the fact of probably because of the whole national dex cut/dexit from sword and shield and the mess/horrible management, especially the later half of journeys behind the scenes olm why think issue heck just flat out ingore sword and shield story don’t blame them, and this is also why barely a lot of sword and shield Pokémon and even characters appear this all through his cameos or guest star appearances and had the only reason that I imagine also why goh was part of the cast I got more screen time was to show pretty much simply all Pokémon heck need fully embedded. That’s what to show every Pokémon as an advertisement. say applies with Team rocket this is why we don’t have a full team of Pokémon.and etc and and the horrible management was so bad that the later half they had to put Japanese clip shows episode to fill out the time
And I can tell the horizon and do it a lot better I wanna imagine the behind the scenes is probably still a mess but at least it’s not as bad as journeys and I meant to use somebody scrap ideas like two main characters that I met you were originally from journeys into horizons this is just speculation/the theorizing it has some scarlet violet bit, but other than that, it’s own thing for horizons with plot and etc
The retiring teacher idea stinks man. What a down grade predictable ending that would be. Ash peaking at the age of 10 is so sad and depressing. Ash doesn't need to retire, he just to explorethe world more, after getting a proper education.
@Pokiiii62 wrong! Just because he won one tournament doesn't make you the strongest. They literally proved Ash can lose when Misty beat him. And his goal was NEVER to be the top trainer. If you think that, you've been watching the pokemon anime wrong.
@@Taydar ,,And his goal was NEVER to be the top trainer. '' In the Pokemon I Choose You movie, Ash says that a Pokemon Master is more than just the strongest trainer.
Yeah your idea of Pokemon Journeys is way better & Making Goh a Side is better since he is boring & for the animation yeah they should saved that for the battles not dumb filler especially for the championship tournament with the finale 8 even Sun & Moon has a Better Tournament then Journeys since I always think Pokemon Journeys is non canon because of its inconsistancies but yours is the true canon in my eyes you have mad respect to the shows before it then whoever is writing pokemon journeys noice one dude oof lol XD & thx for defending Paul & Ash Grenninja's bond its good to hear that someone cares about the pokemon series then the journey writers
ok so i had a cool idea what if leon and ash had a VERGIL AND NERO RELATIONSHIP so like he khows a lot about him but he was told by sonia how leon was super nice and chill but from ryhan we hear how he is just ruthless battle demon that relishes in the defeats of sorrow of his oponents loses but when we meet him he is both A RUTHLESS DEMON DURING COMBAT but outside of it HE IS THE SWEETING MF YOU CAN FIND that way ash tries to act like him in their warm up battle before the tournament begins but HE GETS OWNED and i mean owned owned like that time when you have full tema of 100 lvl pokemon and you accydentlly figth the trainer from route 3 you forgot about THATS HOW OWNED I WANT ASH TO GET and then on the yourney he realises why does leon act so mean in battle THRASHTALK DISTRACTS YOUR ENEMY the only time he would lose to anyone outside of leon would be when he let his emotions take a hold of him so he has to repeat what he learned with greninja and then the fun begins when it comes to battle leon vs ash they begin by both insulting eachother like leon calling ash "a dumb kid" and ash replies "atleast i am not a fossil" and over the battle leon gets more and more aducative as ash just has fun and him having fun makes him win the battle to show that what you need to do is to enjoy yourself and they you will do the best as you physyclly can
I made my own Pokemon journey series the main characters are Ash goh Chloe and Parker I ad him like max and Bonnie but it still the same him in journey
I wish that ash played more with the gimmicks that he has not just sig Pikachu z Chrystal, gigantimax gengar and mega Lucario but have him utilize z moves with his other mons so that they don't seem like "filler members" of the team it also adds to the fact that ash was meant to be the wildcard of the masters 8 so have him do like z move dracovish or dynamax sirfetchd that was was i disliked most about the masters 8 that even though ash had 3 different gimmicks he only used them in the same way
I would have to catch more pokemon if this Hurrah, then when do you want to catch more Pokémon?Even the ones you always warn him to catch I'll be honest here.I'm just doing it so He could catch the Pokémon.He never got a Chance to catch What pokemon are those You decide , but we own on basically to talk about But we all know His companion's pokemon like Start you start me Onyx geo dude And he honestly should have got a chest bin I was always a mover fan of him.Captain of water starters more than a fire starters Granted act isn't picky so he could catch Any pokemon he wants That's just a loan of weighing, not an apple story thing.But if you want to make it an actual story point , go ahead
Eh, didn't mind Goh and Chloe. Not the best, not the worst. They're somewhere between B-Tier and A-Tier. Atleast they are not the Unova Companions. I have nothing against gay People. And Goh's Cinderace sounds the most like a Human compared to other Pokemon. Maybe I take a Look at the Gen 8 Anime.
things i would channge,Well wishful thinking but Aging Ash up to 18,having him use his older Pokemon why not have him go all out in his final season I didn't hear a rule forbidding people to rotating their Pokemon if they had backup pokemon,sorry that's it
He has too many non-galar Pokémon on his team, imo it should be Pikachu Galar far fetched (evolves to sirfecthed) Dracovish Clobbopus (does not evolve) Impidimp (evolves into grimmsnarl) Stonejourner
@@terrabits5962 its a world travelling series so his team is fine if you want to make that argument then give him 3 galar mons. But it's not a SWSH/Galar Series, I honestly dont think his team was bad just executed horribly
@@plapis good point, but I just don’t like how they gave him popular Pokémon for the 5 year olds to lick their iPads like a lickitung all over, Like why did he have a lucario? And instead of a gengar why didn’t his haunter from kanto return, and why have a dragonite?
Pokeeee: What did you like about Journeys? Me: Almost NOTHING. Sorry, but most of the highlights weren't one and the script for the series (especially the last battles) were not okay and also not logical in my opinion. This was not the sent-off Ash deserved. I'm done with the "bare minimum" Pokemon serves us nowadays. They can do better and they already did. I'm really happy Horizon does a better job, but it still feels like Ash got left out. I may be happy he became a Pokemon-Master, but the way it happend (and the "journey" in the series until then) missed the depth of what made Ash into the Ash, we used to grow up with. Just my humble (unsatisfied) opinion.
@@spinotikus1518 Yeah, I know what you mean. It's like passing a test, knowing all the answers beforehand. I wish we could have seen what Ash is TRULY capable of ...
Journeys was just full of filler episodes. You remember that episode with galarian Slowking?💀 Ash's sentoff could have been waaaaay better and I think at the end they should have shown his father. Yeah no need to talk about that the art style was *trash* compared to XY. Also many characters such as Paul, Clemont and Bonnie, Serena, Alain and many others had a underwhelming return imo.
I literally hates that they just end the jouney like this I mean there are lots of things to do like even I have a better story than this piece of shit I mean they literally removed ash greninja like wtf why!! and moreover imagine you are battling a champion and yr all companions and even parents watching only on tv
PLEASE READ: Guys I want to apologize for how loud the music is. I probably had some error with the audio during the editing process. I didn't realize it was that loud on my end so that's entirely on me!
I'm so sorry everyone 😭
I was actually just about to comment it when i reached 2 minutes in😭
It’s very loud
Yeah your idea of Pokemon Journeys is way better & Making Goh a Side is better since he is boring & for the animation yeah they should saved that for the battles not dumb filler especially for the championship tournament with the finale 8 even Sun & Moon has a Better Tournament then Journeys since I always think Pokemon Journeys is non canon because of its inconsistancies but yours is the true canon in my eyes you have mad respect to the shows before it then whoever is writing pokemon journeys noice one dude oof lol XD & thx for defending Paul & Ash Grenninja's bond its good to hear that someone cares about the pokemon series then the journey writers
Yeah I had to turn on subtitles to fully understand what you're saying. 😭
its fine =)
Your story is the best better then the dumb journey story but also it would be cool if Ash finally grows up since I am still sad that the theories of him in the coma is still real now it ended its sad Ash is truly in a Coma forever which I dont want that aka make him grow up so the coma theory isnt true & make him married to serena & also make the new oc his daughter so there is a connection so people can get to watch the new pokemon anime to make it that people move on from ash & want to see a new story blossomed & also you forgot Alain's character is destroyed lets also make him fight ash in the finale 8 tournament in the first round to show who is now stronger which this time Ash wins
I would agree with a lot of this under one circumstance:
Ash is shifting his teams throughout the adventure. If this is his final adventure, he should be using all of his available Pokemon to climb the ranks to champion.
Same I feel like they should've made Journeys take place after an adventure in Galar like battle frontiers in AG. That way we'd have time to spent and get used to the pokemon and characters in Galar and there wouldn't be a need for Ash to catch any pokemon. He can just improve the ones he has.
Journeys was rushed and lacked continuity because of real-world restrictions. A lot of people got laid off at the animation studio and the directors demanded an episodic structure. Ash vs Leon was their sacrifice to stick the landing as best they could while the rest of the tournament had to cut some corners.
I completely understand that. But again, that doesn't mean we give them a pass as the animation is visibly worse. It's just the directors of the series fault. The animators are not
@@Pokiiii62 I think the fandom is also to blame too. Cause they kept harassing the animators until one of them just snapped and revealed what was going on during the Masters 8.
This is incorrect
Goh is a perfectly fine character, the real problem is that his GOALS don't mesh with Ash's goals in any interesting way. each episode is usually one character stealing the spotlight for the entire episode, and the other being dragged along. the personality pairs well with ash okay-ish. I think that the whole lab assistant thing for ash was a HUGE mistake in the original.
It still really hurts that they removed the exclusive red ash greninja form from Journeys like that was the only form that made the huge hype for XY and they ruined bond evolution completely
Ash-Greninja was always garbage. Given that it only gave Ash specialness points.
And I Think That Infernape's Blaze-Form Was Also Retconed Like Battle-Bond Unfortunately. 😢
@@LittleAl016 Be silent. Keep your forked tongue behind your teeth
@@LittleAl016 What did u say to our Xyz Duo
Yeah when they ruined the Bond Phenomenon of Ash Greninja I was pissed right off the back
I felt so underwhelmed, and kinda empty when I finished journeys, and it made my realize that the made up final movie I thought of as a kid is like 10 times better than what journeys is, this video was very well thought out, and all the points are valid
Because you were never into pokemon, you were just into this immature version of pokemon you conjured up in your head
I’ve been planning an episode-by-episode Journeys rewrite outline since… god, I think since before Journeys ended, and this has given me a lot of ideas
One thing I personally would've liked was if instead of Goh, we had characters from Sword and Sheild like Hop, Bede and Marnie. I know Hop was in it but not much, they could've used his character and others to their advantag.I also didn't really like the Greeninja and Lucario thing much just felt wrong to me. I love your ideas of the series though, just feeling the nostalgia instead of all the random things they did.
Would make for a horrid story
@@natalimoina huh?
'Looks at Ash's design' Look at how they massacre my boi
Ye his eyes are literally just cut-copy pasted from Alola
It's an improvement, just a downgrade from SM
Pokémon Journeys had Ash being reunited with some of his past companions which was nice. However I can’t say the same with how they treated Chloe and Goh. I wished the series would’ve expanded more on them and how they would achieve their potential if they even had any 😔
You didn't watch any episode then
God I remember when everyone was pissed when the goh catching suicune episode aired 😭😭😭
Bro how does that make sense for goh to catch a suicune 💀
@ first attempt aswell💀
@@Pokiiii62I mean, the thing _was_ barely clinging on to life, so…
Yep, pokemon fans have no limit to their immaturity
@@natalimoinabro's going to every comment defending his mid show💀
0:42 a bad joke followed by a death wish always GETS ME
*I’m so going to hell for laughing at these.*
Congrats to 20k! Very well deserved
Thanks very much friend 💙
That's one of the few things Journeys has going for it, it has so much missed potential that making rewrites for it is so easy 💀
*Creators like Electro Pikachu, Zactoshi, Zanolith, KuroBlitz and even yourself have proven that with time, dedication and a few tweaks, Journeys can be one of, if not the best Pokémon Anime we've received*
Exactly Apart Of Me Feels Like It's Cause Journeys Was Episodic Which Equals Rushed Writing Cause Journeys Start Was Promising. 😢
Journeys nailed everything, these ytubers are sensationalists who never knew a single thing about the anime
@natalimoina No, it didn't. It failed on almost every aspect. These youtubers know what they are talking about to an extent. Otherwise, they wouldn't be able to talk about the dumpster fire of a series anyway. So what in the world are you talking about?
Ash's Charizard needed a proper send off. The writers did him dirty.
He could have battled in the Masters 8 Tournament and even be part of the team Ash used against Leon in the final battle.
Correct me if I’m wrong, since it’s been a while since I saw it, but I feel it was a MASSIVE missed opportunity to not let Ash bring back old Pokémon for certain fights and mix and mash them with his new Pokémon.
@@veebot75how dare you, THEY DID BRING BACK HIS OLD POKÉMON!!!
in like the last 12 episodes of his character where they hardly did anything at all outside of filler stuff😑 so yeah, it’s actually worse that they were wasted on Aim to be Mid
Dog I Wish They Would've Done What Best Wishes/Black And White Did And Make Filler Tournament Arcs Like The Club Xplosion And The Jr Cup And Have It To We're Ash Rotates With His Older Pokemon Per Tournament And We'd Get A Tournament Arc After Every 20 Or So Episodes So It Wouldn't Get Repetitive It Would've Been Great In My Opinion.
@@SMM5 yeah, I do remember that. It was cool in the moment, but what lasting impact is that gonna have? Would I have rather seen Ash’s Totodile help him win a masters 8 tournament match, or watch his Totodile help him with godamn fishing?
IKR! Like, we could’ve had him fight against Alain and his Mega Charizard, showing he doesn’t need to Mega Evolve to be the strongest
Always valid, glaze this man for eternity
PLEASE, PLEASE MORE CURSE OF HOOPA
One thing I want to add is that Ash should not catch any more new Pokemon in Journeys, instead opting to use his old Pokemon which has a region of battle experience on their belt for the World Tournament. The power progression his Journeys team went through is really hard to believe since most of it happened offscreen and happened way too fast considering this is their first Journey.
I really want that ash uses more his older pokémons like he did in sinnoh
A whole entire episode about ash Greninja, and how they would bring him back to the team along with some of his old Pokémon for the final battle
Awesome video! I feel like Journeys is a series with a ton of missed potential. When I rewatch it, one thing I find myself thinking is, "This could've been their best series." A lot of people like to blame COVID for Journeys' issues, but the issues always existed before there were any lockdowns. I like how you actually use the galar characters and I like how you let Ash show his growth.
Immature
Great Vid Pokeee! keep up the good work!!!
Thank you friend!
Why does the Undertale music in the background make this feel like a meme.
Kinda like how Hugbee’s joke for King K Rool in his “Roasting every smash character” videi
I feel like one of the only things I would change in Journeys, (besides getting rid of Goh and Chloe), is Ash battling Raihan. It's Raihan's dream to defeat Leon, so he should have that opportunity in the Masters 8. Of course he'll lose, but- At least he would have a chance to make his dream come true.
By allowing Ash to defeat him, and causing him to not be in the Masters 8, Ash took away his dream.
I know we're suppose to care about Ash and his dream, but ever since Pokemon started developing other characters, I've started to care about their dreams, too. As such, we should want them to succeed, or even have a chance at them altogether.
That's actually dope
Did you not watch the episode??
I actually really enjoyed Sun and Moon and I think a more basic artstyle can work in the right setting. I don’t think Journey‘s problems would have been fixed by a change in animations but a better narrative could have gone a very long way. Fundamentally I just wish it all felt more cohesive and with so many possibilities to explore the filler feels like a missed opportunity almost every time. Journey‘s had a real lack of multi episode arch’s with made the whole thing feel a bit disjointed.
There's no filler, the narrative is perfect and so is the visuals. SM and Journeys make previous pokemon series look like Garbo in comparison
Journeys messed up a lot of reunion with old travelling companions especially being the last time we see Ash Ketchum like
Serena (We waited for almost a decade to see them both on screen for idk probably 10sec)
Greninja (Where did his form go its like the writers just forgot that it had something)
Paul (I am Not interested to battle cuz its too noisy like wow such a very genuine reason)
Alain (The best NPC character for entire journeys goes to Alain, like the writors just forgot that they were friends/rivals it was more like a champion to champion conversion)
Dog I'm Going To Be Deadas Right Now They Can Give Paul All The Stupid Reasons They Want I'm Just Glad He Wasn't In The Masters 8 Since The Writes Would've Made Him Get No Diffed By Leon Just Like Alain To Show How Powerful He Is As Undefeated
And We Know That Paul Has The Strength To Be In The Masters 8 Since Ash Asked Him Why He Didn't Compete Or Enter The World Coronation Series.
Since Paul didn't stick around for the rest of the battles in the league after he lost, I can see that for him. He also needed to figure out his strength after the smackdown from Brandon. I think this made sense for him.
Alain- well, everyone but Cynthia in the Masters' Eight- why didn't they make a few more episodes for that so he could have time with each of the other rivals, or write them in elsewhere. I would have loved an arc in Unova so we could have seen Iris v Alder and a new champion crowned. If Ash is alone, maybe Lance could have been the second hero while dealing with Rose/ The Darkest Day, like at the Lake of Rage and against Teams Aqua and Magma. Steven Stone could have been in a cave/ mine, and they talk about evolution stones and how Glaceon and Leafeon evolve differently in different regions or the Galarian fossils. Diantha is there filming a movie somewhere and they run into each other. Ash takes something to Sycamore for Magnolia and runs into Alain.
There are so many different things that the anime could have done instead that it was impossible to make everyone happy, too. He needs to catch all the pokemon he should have before- No, he needs just his old team so we can see how they've evovled as characters. I'm glad he's now the world's greatest Pokemon master- No, they gave him too much plot armor; he's new to this level, he should have to work his way up the ladder again, and lost in the first round.
@boghrakarthikeya9865 The reunion that Serena got with Ash is better for her character. As it shows that, either, 1, she got over her crush on Ash, or 2, her relationship with Ash was retconned into her having never been romantically interested in Ash in the first place. Heck. She even seems to have thrown away the ribbon Ash gave her. Plus, admit it. Serena having such an intense crush on Ash didn't in the slightest connect with the target audience, as they found it boring and hard to relate to.
Just completely inaccurate
I feel like Dawn's is the worst because she doesn't even feel like the same person. She just feels like her beginning Dawn but with less of the character.
I really wished that Gary would have been the companion for 'JOURNEYS', just think of the things that they can talk about.
1:09 right before the quote I got a Pokémon TCG ad lol
Funny lol
Journeys had a few problems but anytime there’s problems in media it’s up to the fans to fix it
If only the writers didn't wrote somethings mid it'd be great. Anyway, i noticed there's something front of the background is it to avoid the cough copyright? Other than that, congrats on your 20k subscribers!
What I really wanted was for Ash to have a proper reunion with Serena for obvious reasons and I was so upset we didn’t get that.
I definitely think Journeys (with Goh and Chloe) could have worked if they made Cerise's lab sort of the base for Poké Jobs (that mechanic in SwSh that lets you send your Pokémon to help businesses) as well as just introduce Project Mew as a Legendary program rather than just Mew. That, plus making Chloe's arc more flushed out and also making the series more serialized and, like you said, Include more past characters in the PWC, I really think this could have been a great series
Same i genuinely think so as well, but I just can't see Goh working out imo, chloe feels way more promising
@Pokiiii62 Goh could work if we get rid of the Mew plot and replace it with him being a researcher. He's already a bit of a tech savvy guy compared to Ash and more analytical
Zanolith did this in his Journeys Rewrite, and Goh's VA (In both Japanese and English) voices the PokéDex in Horizons, so it honestly has legs to stand on
All i wanted was to see all Ash’s companion and had more focus episodes, the final episode should have everyone on Ash’s journey celebrare for his victory. More salty in the ending was Ash still travel and still waiting to become a Pokémon master so win the master 8 actually didn’t matter if Ash won or not.
Maybe add a final Battle with Giovanni that Ash wins, leading to Team Rocket ultimately being disbanded and Giovanni finally being arrested?
I feel like that should've been the case for a previous season... like johto journeys. But even then it feels a bit odd ya know?
@Pokiiii62 Maybe, but if they did it then, the Team Rocket we know and love would have been gone a long time ago. If this is the end of Ash's Adventures, then having Team Rocket ultimately disbanded would give closure of some sort for our favorite trio too.
how i would fix it (without changing match)
-the plot:
>ash goes through the gyms and before almost every gym he gets a new pokemon with a new arc revolving around the pokemon (also he catches gen 8 pokemons not have a gen 1 team) whilst also having a reunion that somehow connects to that arc
>goh and cloe each get similar or less screentime to the real screentime cloe got but they dont waste it and give them either a proper arc or the same arc but since its less screentime its a smaller problem
>series finale is the game ending of the way eternetus and all that happen
Wow, that would stink
@@natalimoina true
Another change I would make is replacing Alain is masters eight with Raihan like bro had an actual purpose to enter the tournament I know that he would lose but at least he would lose to Leon but at least he would lose fair and square, unlike someone like Alain who’s initial main purpose was to do research on Mega Stones
The paul hate was wild pokee i thought the anime was supposed to be described as kid friendly you say oter wise😂😂
Oh I love Paul as a character, they did a great job at making you hate him
Nice Vid my guy. However your background music is a little too loud. At certain points in the video I can barely hear you talk.
Oh my gosh i just realized this, this is entirely my fault. I apologize 😭
The whole pokemon anime needs a rewrite if I'm being honest
IDEA. What if you fix the episodes of pokemon journeys. that would not be that bad!
I guess I would still keep Goh & Chole. Just age them to the same age as Max & Bonnie and then act as the next generation!
I’d rather they still be Ash’s age. Just make them better characters.
HES THE MESSIAH!! HE KNOWS OUR NEED!!!
While I agree with a few things you brought up, there are a few things I don't agree with. The points I don't agree with are cutting Goh, not doing filler episodes, and becoming a teacher.
The filler one is simple. Pokemon has always been a show that has relied on filler episodes. Even XY has a had full of filler. The show needs that to last before the next game. Instead of just writing Goh out, why not just make him a better character. While I wouldn't mind using old characters, you can't expect one to just be ready to join up with Ash. It would just feel odd. As for the teacher, that's just a bad idea. It's even worse to think any of Ash's friends would tell him to just retire. That feels so disrespectful. Ash enjoys just journeying around, and battling. His ending is fine how it is.
Still, that's just me.
Fix Green Phantom, queens blossom verse original trilogy while you’re at it The infamous Pokémon infinity train crossover
Your story is the best better then the dumb journey story but also it would be cool if Ash finally grows up since I am still sad that the theories of him in the coma is still real now it ended its sad Ash is truly in a Coma forever which I dont want that aka make him grow up so the coma theory isnt true & make him married to serena & also make the new oc his daughter so there is a connection so people can get to watch the new pokemon anime to make it that people move on from ash & want to see a new story blossomed & also you forgot Alain's character is destroyed lets also make him fight ash in the finale 8 tournament in the first round to show who is now stronger which this time Ash wins
Childish
As far as my biggest concern is; have Goh not catch Eternatus and Suicune, but Ash, then Pokémon Journeys would be fixed. Sure, their positions would still be the same (i.e. Ash "unable to use them in battles"), but at least they would be under Ash's "rightful" ownership. Goh can still have Regieleki, but Eternatus and Suicune...hell no!
To be fair Ash and Goh caught Eternatus.
@@animedude8712 With one of GOH'S Poké Balls. And Ash's Pokédex does not include Eternatus as one of his Pokémon. And the websites clearly state it to be "Goh's Eternatus", until it officially became "Leon's Eternatus"
@@timothylynch6621 Thought they both owned it as the threw the ball together.
@@animedude8712 No, when Goh's Poké Ball turned into the "Dynamax Poké Ball", he was caught off-guard by its "added weight". Ash, quickly seeing it, kept Goh from dropping it and since they both held it, they threw the Ball together.
You don't get ash
Reunion with Paul is also really messed up, like the reason for paul not participating in WCS was that he dint have interest to noise of the tournament that’s a really lame excuse I would say
Absolutely, that was not a paul reunion at all
@@Pokiiii62 Like they could have at least given a genuine reason like lets assume that he defeated Brendan and became a frontier brain so he was busy or something
i honestly like your ideas here but one thing i would change is age ash up slightly
Dog The Thing I Don't Like About Journeys Is How They Make Legendaries Untouchable But When Goh Needs "Character Growth" They Scale Down The Untouchable Legendaries To Make It So That Goh Can Put Up A Fight Or Catch Them Key Examples Being Zapdos And Suicune.
Infernape Who's Far More Powerful Than Raboot (Since Cinderace Was A Raboot At The Time When Fighting Zapdos) Didn't Do As Well When Fighting Moltres And They Didn't Even Have Him Use His Blaze-Form Now That Is Stupid Just Like The Ash-Greninja Retcon It's So Inconsistent.
Small Rage Rant Done So Other Than That I Like Your What If Pokeeee Just Like Zactoshi's It's Pretty Good. 😊😃
Thanks friend but I definitely agree with u there
@@Pokiiii62Ya Np Journeys Was Just So Much Missed Opportunity And Potential For Both Returning Characters And Pokemon That It's Sad.
@inktirrell5016 This happened in Horizons as well. They scaled down the legendaries.
@@adventuresofavalon2477-_- 😑 Dog If There Going To Make Legendaries Untouchably Strong Then It Needs To Be Consistent.
Poke, I am not sure if you know this but a youtuber named EliteMJ is making a fanmade series called pokemon next generations which takes place 10 years after Ash won the world coronation series
One piece remake=Pokemon remake Ash luffy son
By the way, could you PLEASEEE make a video on Clemont’s backstory? No one really knows, but I believe his mother died. Since no one knows his backstory, I made up one 😂. When Clemont was a child, he wanted to become an inventor. It was his mother’s birthday, and he decided to INVENT something for her birthday. He invented a toaster, because their old one broke. Since toasters have a timer for how long the bread would be in for, young Clemont thought it was a good idea to put a rusty old clock in the toaster for the “timer.” But his mom didn’t know the clock was in it. So she turned on the toaster little Clemont gave her, but it exploded into flames. Clemont was very traumatized by this. His dad heard his ear splitting screams and rushed in the house to find him lying on the ground, inhaling a lot of smoke because he was crying. His father picked him up and rushed him to the hospital. He had really bad asthma after that, hence why he can’t run for too long and has to pant after running very slowly. Do you think my story is acceptable? Sorry for the super long comment. I hope you see this, pokeee!
I wanted Ash to reunite with primeape and have it evolve into Annihilape. To show a pokemon revealed a gen early. Maybe have Ash rebattle people he lost too in leagues. Show some elite 4 members that have not showed up in the anime.
I honestly feel like I half-agree with not having an entire main cast alongside Ash. I personally feel like it'd be best if the main cast was Ash with 1-3 older companions. Or, at least, give some of them more screen time. Like, excuse me for possibly being that one shipper, but WE NEED MORE SERENA, THEY DID HER REALLY DIRTY, I CAN'T PUT IT INTO WORDS. At the very least, give her more screen time and an arc blawg 😭
Also yayyyy we hit 20k! :D
Yep indeed we did
I think there was three battles that needed to take place before ash became champion.
1. Richie
2.paul
3. Alan
Also Gary, Lance, and of course, Giovanni.
@javierxuluc5159 oh yeah I definitely forgot Gary and Lance and definitely Giovanni they only met once in the entire show
@@mrkwillz17 Twice*
@@javierxuluc5159 twice really what was the other time I don't remember
@@mrkwillz17 Mewtwo returns
I feel like Pokémon Journeys could've been the best series in the anime if only if it wasn't for the episodic nature. Plus "To Be A Pokémon Master," the arc that is meant to conclude Ash's long running story is very underwhelming. It's literally 11 episodes of filler and nostalgia pandering when it could've been 3 episodes long.
You're not a pokemon fan
I still think Ash should’ve battled Red for an epic final showdown… 😤😤😤
I haven't been able to catch up due to computer issues the entire year (can't wait until i get a new computer and I can finally catch up on journeys and horizens) but I have heard they dropped a few days and I do remember some asshole on failbook spoiled the ending up of journeys for me,cause of my stupid computer issues,computer issues are the bane of my existence
I wish they actually took time with ash’s former companions. *ahem* (serena)
I think that the masters 8 should be rescripted because sometimes it was weird and ignoring some battles because of the side story is bad and ashs team is not bad but I would made some changes these 6 Pokémon will I add there 1 Pikachu 2 Lucario 3 Charizard 4 Sceptile 5 Swellow and 6 would be of course Greninja. At the other hand I would like to se more of important characters to be more involved and were really influential throughout the series I can imagine by the masters 8 instead Cloe cheering for Ash and I have nothing against Dawn to be there but for the love of god why at the stadium can't be for cheering for example Brock and Serena or some of the Ash rivals like Paul Gary as well it could been mor emotional and more spark in there and see all the iconic characters to return would be amazing and also can include that after Serena becomes the champion in contests etc. after the final she can come to Ash they can hug and kiss each other or I dont know and than maybe announcing something new or little series after Ash become a Pokémon master I know it is on Netflix but it could be done a lot better than it actually was
Journeys should of been him traveling and evolving all his pokelon
My opinion on journeys was and probably always will be a bad journey with a good ending.
To me, Journeys is the textbook definition of wasted potential. Your version of this season is so much better.
A nice interesting topic and how you fix Pokémon journeys of course you kinda keep Kharua and have Sonia as Ash’s Professor instead as for the Galar sensing your version you got rid of Goh LOL Ash could catch Grookey Kharua could have Sobble and Sonia could have Scorbunny since this is the first or should I say only Pokémon series that Ash doesn’t catch a new Starter that Ash would miss some of his old Friends and Rivals also this will be a perfect opportunity for Ash to use some of his old Pokémon again now he does use his new Teams and this has always been a tree ever since black and white with exception of the Hoenn League but since this is Ash’s finale I think we should give some too his old Pokémon as well even have some evolve that never got to like Totodile to Feraligatr Snivy to Serperior Gible to Garchomp and honestly Oshawott to Hisuian Samurott to promote Legends Arceus as well returning Pokémon that got released like Primeape but it would be cool if this was a moment where he evolved into Annihilape forshadowing Gen 9 and of course Greninja he will recaptured him and the Ash Greninja will not get recon and he would have a rematch battle against Alain’s Mega Charizard but this time Greninja will actually beat him and speaking of Alain he would fetch a new keystone for his Charizard would be a Y version since it brings back bad memories that he had the key stone that was presented by Team Flayer with the X key stone I was actually inspired by someone else that did there rework on Pokémon
So I think Alain I have a new form for his Charizard put the pass behind him and move forward and for his ultimate battle against Leon honestly I think this would be more interesting if they just set up with one gimmick instead my opinion make the fight of his less jarring and controversial for me Ash’s Ultimate Pokémon to take down The undefeated Champion Leon is
Pikachu Charizard Greninja Sceptile Lycanroc and Lucario Ash will use back to battle bond with his Greninja again not recon which is in an ability not a gimmick but I’m still classifying anyway and Leon will G-max his Charizard will get this crash between Ash Greninja and G-max Charizard and after Charizard reverts back to his regular size and Greninja go down then we get that fight between Pikachu and Charizard and well Charizard go for his finishing move Fire Blast Pikachu go for his finishing move which he would learn Poka Papow which is a move from let’s go Partner Pikachu signature fifth move to symbolize the bond between Ash and Pikachu to show that these two have come a long way and they will succeed and that’s the true finale of Ash vs Leon
What will happened to team Rocket?
As for Jesse and James now that you put it that way was he did encounter Cassidy and Bif to see that these two have retired so Jesse and James what’s the thing about retiring but they but they still work for the Boss anyway but wall Giovanni starts to recapping and cause chaos Jesse and James we have to rebel since they’re not really evil that they don’t want to hurt anyone so they betrayed Giovanni and help Ash and his Friends to take down Giovanni and the Team Rocket clan once and for all and once they did Jesse and James well find new jobs and live new lives maybe could marry so they will sort a Family of their own that’s how I would end Jesse and James’s closures
The animation in journeys is also really bad like they made sun and moon animation bad for at least some what okish reason, but after that they could have fixed it especially with match with Cynthia
The design of Ash is also really mid like the Outfit is cool no doubt but what happened to his eyes it feels like they just used the eye design of sun and moon another cool eye was of Goh he has sharper and much better design than compared to oval circular design
Honestly, anyone can do a better job of coming up a story then the people who work in the company.
Honestly fair 😭
@ You know what else should be a proper conclusion for Ash is make him a strong trainer and for his Pokemon to be stronger that’s difficult for anyone to beat them, get rid of Team Rocket for good because of him and friends have gotten rid of every known evil organization in the franchise, reunited with some of his Pokémon and have him captured legendary Pokémon, add something else in his life like becoming aura guardian, a Pokémon ranger, a battle frontier, and married Serena or any girls he interact the most.
journeys was so hyped up but got robbed most of the time
Paul was literally an opposite version of ash as a trainer
The same path but with different methods
So not intrested on the noise arenas was such a dump excuse when the dude was on several tournaments before
I rather don't see serena or greninja come back if it was just like that lmao
dawn had several occasions by her returns but each time the writers messed up with that not a single upgrade since last time
Her bw return was on another level
Whats the point of mentioning how hard infernape was training all those years just to not use it afterwards same with all his old mons tbh
flint was the elite four ash was close too the most from what we saw in the anime
Not only they didn't battle but also they did not even interract
Ash had less than 15 battles in the championship and more than half of those were offscreen against random characters when sawyer tyson clair wulfric Barry ... exists
Leon should be the top trainer outside of the masters 8
ash vs cynthia as the finale
The winner would face the monarch
So leon would not decimate champions teams with 2 pokemon to overhype him due to being the protagonist main goal
I understand the not likinging thr filler characters
But rinto was peak for to reason whatsoever
No such thing
I think for the series, the gym leaders should have been milestones instead of the pokeball crap
FRRRR
No offense, and I really do mean none, but for a video who’s opening line is “I sat down and rewrote Pokémon Journeys” you focused… a *LOT* on the venting on how not-great Journeys was. The only things I found of substance in this video were Ash’s character arc, the Leon stuff, and the no new companions thing, the rest is just “I don’t like that Journeys did this thing, instead I’ll-” without much further elaboration to give us an insight on your true vision of this series
This feels less like a rewrite and more like a talking session of what you think Journeys should’ve been. A rewrite would’ve been like what Zanioth has been doing for the past half-year if you want to check that out for notes
Also, and I know you didn’t mean anything bad when saying this but I still don’t like what you said here, but that line about how Journeys didn’t treat the Steven and Cynthia’s M8 battled with respect when it comes to the animation is straight up insulting when you consider the insane production problems in the anime staff during the M8. Seriously, did the insane amount of recaps that went on during the M8 not indicate to you that maybe all’s not well with the production of that tournament? I’m just relieved we even got as good of an Ash vs Leon as we did all things considered
I get wanting a better version of Pokémon Journeys and I’m more than happy to see rewrites of this series talking about what it could’ve been, I myself an working on a story in relation to do that right now. But you shouldn’t just ignore the insane problems behind the production of this series and talk like they were just nonexistent, that’s disrespectful to everyone who worked on Pokémon Journeys and tried to make it as good as it could’ve been overall all things considered
First off, I never said it was the animators fault for the production issues. The issues themselves are geared more towards the actual directors of the series, THEY are the ones mainly responsible for the issues that occurred throughout journeys.
Secondly, part of the reason of a rewrite is showing how to do things differently than the original material. To further explain, I need to note down the bad and how I can turn it into good.
And lastly, you mentioned how other than "the Leon stuff, ash character Arcs stuff, and the cast stuff everything else was bad" as if more than 90% of the video is legit talking about said things, almost the entire video is talking about those things. I think you got a little tilted from what I said, and btw I meant no harm if it means anything.
"Pokémon Journeys and tried to make it as good as it could’ve been overall all things considered" It's still so weak that I wish Pokemon Horizons took place in a different universe 😏
Pokemon Journeys was peak, pokemon fans should not be allowed to make rewrites because every single one makes me want to claw my eyes out
It is insulting to make Leon world champion just to promote the eighth generation 🙄
The thing i didn't like was lucario tryna be a wannabe ash greninja 💀 also goh kept catching legendaries and stole Pokemon ash would've loved to catch, so that's why i really liked the mewtwo and articuno episodes because aside from these goh catches legendaries like he has 1000 master balls 💀 and wth chloes eevee still doesn't have an explanation (gigantamax would be a great explanation) like- one of the eps i only liked was the slowpoke episodes but after that it's so mid 💀
Not having sawyer feels like a violation😢
FRRR
0:12 I thought it was the definition of garbage and wasted potential but that just me
Yeah fair
The only thing I would live to change is that ash should have fought alan!!!
I wish so too 😭
only guess why goh was with ash is most likely olm aka people who made pokemon thought it wasn t ash least anime at time/early on and heck they were fully admitted that they had no idea do with goh character am I only guess I imagine he was supposed to be the protagonist, but do the fact of probably because of the whole national dex cut/dexit from sword and shield and the mess/horrible management, especially the later half of journeys behind the scenes olm why think issue heck just flat out ingore sword and shield story don’t blame them, and this is also why barely a lot of sword and shield Pokémon and even characters appear this all through his cameos or guest star appearances and had the only reason that I imagine also why goh was part of the cast I got more screen time was to show pretty much simply all Pokémon heck need fully embedded. That’s what to show every Pokémon as an advertisement. say applies with Team rocket this is why we don’t have a full team of Pokémon.and etc and and the horrible management was so bad that the later half they had to put Japanese clip shows episode to fill out the time
And I can tell the horizon and do it a lot better I wanna imagine the behind the scenes is probably still a mess but at least it’s not as bad as journeys and I meant to use somebody scrap ideas like two main characters that I met you were originally from journeys into horizons this is just speculation/the theorizing it has some scarlet violet bit, but other than that, it’s own thing for horizons with plot and etc
The retiring teacher idea stinks man. What a down grade predictable ending that would be. Ash peaking at the age of 10 is so sad and depressing. Ash doesn't need to retire, he just to explorethe world more, after getting a proper education.
Exploring more...? For what? He's the best like no one ever was. He is the strongest, has a legion of Pokémon. No one is close to him
@Pokiiii62 wrong! Just because he won one tournament doesn't make you the strongest. They literally proved Ash can lose when Misty beat him. And his goal was NEVER to be the top trainer. If you think that, you've been watching the pokemon anime wrong.
@@Taydar ,,And his goal was NEVER to be the top trainer. '' In the Pokemon I Choose You movie, Ash says that a Pokemon Master is more than just the strongest trainer.
@@spinotikus1518 that is correct
Agreed, the whole teaching thing seems off, and not something Ash would do. Besides, no other trainer needs a teacher. Just seems odd.
Yeah your idea of Pokemon Journeys is way better & Making Goh a Side is better since he is boring & for the animation yeah they should saved that for the battles not dumb filler especially for the championship tournament with the finale 8 even Sun & Moon has a Better Tournament then Journeys since I always think Pokemon Journeys is non canon because of its inconsistancies but yours is the true canon in my eyes you have mad respect to the shows before it then whoever is writing pokemon journeys noice one dude oof lol XD & thx for defending Paul & Ash Grenninja's bond its good to hear that someone cares about the pokemon series then the journey writers
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ok so i had a cool idea what if leon and ash had a VERGIL AND NERO RELATIONSHIP
so like he khows a lot about him but he was told by sonia how leon was super nice and chill but from ryhan we hear how he is just ruthless battle demon that relishes in the defeats of sorrow of his oponents loses but when we meet him he is both A RUTHLESS DEMON DURING COMBAT but outside of it HE IS THE SWEETING MF YOU CAN FIND
that way ash tries to act like him in their warm up battle before the tournament begins but HE GETS OWNED and i mean owned owned
like that time when you have full tema of 100 lvl pokemon and you accydentlly figth the trainer from route 3 you forgot about THATS HOW OWNED I WANT ASH TO GET
and then on the yourney he realises why does leon act so mean in battle THRASHTALK DISTRACTS YOUR ENEMY
the only time he would lose to anyone outside of leon would be when he let his emotions take a hold of him so he has to repeat what he learned with greninja
and then the fun begins when it comes to battle leon vs ash they begin by both insulting eachother like leon calling ash "a dumb kid" and ash replies "atleast i am not a fossil"
and over the battle leon gets more and more aducative as ash just has fun and him having fun makes him win the battle to show that what you need to do is to enjoy yourself and they you will do the best as you physyclly can
I made my own Pokemon journey series the main characters are Ash goh Chloe and Parker I ad him like max and Bonnie but it still the same him in journey
I wish that ash played more with the gimmicks that he has not just sig Pikachu z Chrystal, gigantimax gengar and mega Lucario but have him utilize z moves with his other mons so that they don't seem like "filler members" of the team it also adds to the fact that ash was meant to be the wildcard of the masters 8 so have him do like z move dracovish or dynamax sirfetchd that was was i disliked most about the masters 8 that even though ash had 3 different gimmicks he only used them in the same way
Bro they should have made you write journeys on god
And replace one of the best written series with a pile of trash found on the street??
@natalimoina what you smoking cus whatever it is i don't want any
0:41 nice joke man lmao
I try
Can you connect this to Horizons
How? Horizons has nothing to do with Ash and journeys in general
I would have to catch more pokemon if this Hurrah, then when do you want to catch more Pokémon?Even the ones you always warn him to catch I'll be honest here.I'm just doing it so He could catch the Pokémon.He never got a Chance to catch What pokemon are those You decide , but we own on basically to talk about But we all know His companion's pokemon like Start you start me Onyx geo dude And he honestly should have got a chest bin I was always a mover fan of him.Captain of water starters more than a fire starters Granted act isn't picky so he could catch Any pokemon he wants That's just a loan of weighing, not an apple story thing.But if you want to make it an actual story point , go ahead
would have helped if they gave him better clothes too
Honestly, I wish you could rewrite BW anime too. Especially giving ash's unova pokemon evolutions.
The only thing about BW that needs rewriting is Decalore Adventures.
@@LittleAl016 Glaze
@christ5431 It's not "glaze".
@@LittleAl016 unova was utter trash
@christ5431 No it wasn't. It's better than AG, DP, and XY.
Eh, didn't mind Goh and Chloe.
Not the best, not the worst.
They're somewhere between B-Tier and A-Tier.
Atleast they are not the Unova Companions.
I have nothing against gay People.
And Goh's Cinderace sounds the most like a Human compared to other Pokemon.
Maybe I take a Look at the Gen 8 Anime.
I think Pokémon journeys was so bad I think ash should have got grookey and caught more and used more Pokémon that where galar
Check rewrite of Zanolith, he has few of them😊
YES PLEASE.
Stupid joke I know, but the worst pat about journeys is I have to use Netflix, which is trash.
things i would channge,Well wishful thinking but Aging Ash up to 18,having him use his older Pokemon why not have him go all out in his final season I didn't hear a rule forbidding people to rotating their Pokemon if they had backup pokemon,sorry that's it
When you fixed pokemon journey's What pokemon does ash use in the PWC ?
You could’ve rewrote their characters
music is too loud can’t hear you
Yep, there were errors in editing, I completely didn't notice it, completely my fault
What would his team be?
Honestly it can be the same! I didn't mind it
@@Pokiiii62 ok
He has too many non-galar Pokémon on his team, imo it should be
Pikachu
Galar far fetched (evolves to sirfecthed)
Dracovish
Clobbopus (does not evolve)
Impidimp (evolves into grimmsnarl)
Stonejourner
@@terrabits5962 its a world travelling series so his team is fine if you want to make that argument then give him 3 galar mons. But it's not a SWSH/Galar Series, I honestly dont think his team was bad just executed horribly
@@plapis good point, but I just don’t like how they gave him popular Pokémon for the 5 year olds to lick their iPads like a lickitung all over,
Like why did he have a lucario? And instead of a gengar why didn’t his haunter from kanto return, and why have a dragonite?
Pokeeee: What did you like about Journeys?
Me: Almost NOTHING. Sorry, but most of the highlights weren't one and the script for the series (especially the last battles) were not okay and also not logical in my opinion. This was not the sent-off Ash deserved. I'm done with the "bare minimum" Pokemon serves us nowadays. They can do better and they already did. I'm really happy Horizon does a better job, but it still feels like Ash got left out. I may be happy he became a Pokemon-Master, but the way it happend (and the "journey" in the series until then) missed the depth of what made Ash into the Ash, we used to grow up with. Just my humble (unsatisfied) opinion.
It doesn't feel like he did though which is why I was so sad the way it ended. But maybe we get to see ash again in hopefully a better setting.
"I may be happy he became a Pokemon-Master" Ash didn't become a Pokemon Master 🙄
@@Pokiiii62 I hope so too ...
@@spinotikus1518 Yeah, I know what you mean. It's like passing a test, knowing all the answers beforehand. I wish we could have seen what Ash is TRULY capable of ...
Journeys was just full of filler episodes. You remember that episode with galarian Slowking?💀
Ash's sentoff could have been waaaaay better and I think at the end they should have shown his father. Yeah no need to talk about that the art style was *trash* compared to XY. Also many characters such as Paul, Clemont and Bonnie, Serena, Alain and many others had a underwhelming return imo.
REAL BRO those fillers were terrible 💀
Your videos are peak
Thank you friend!
I literally hates that they just end the jouney like this I mean there are lots of things to do like even I have a better story than this piece of shit
I mean they literally removed ash greninja like wtf why!! and moreover imagine you are battling a champion and yr all companions and even parents watching only on tv