Nonexistent Living Episode 2 - Concealed Conundrums!
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- Опубликовано: 11 сен 2024
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After a little less than 5 months of waiting...
EPISODE 2 IS HERE!
I hope you enjoyed it! I had a blast making it!!
Special thanks to my very supportive crew who helped with the episode, couldn't have done it without you!
Episode 3 coming whenever it comes outs.
![MISSING: SLIM SHADY [Expanded Mourner’s Edition Trailer]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/xh8qgHrOO1g/mqdefault.jpg)
15:46 damn Money Bag... nice kick you got there.
(This is obviously a mistake. Please ignore it thanks)
Hope you enjoyed the episode!! All constructrive criticism is very much welcome.
I'm sure Episode 3 will be sensational!
Also, credit to Ammolite for voicing a special character!!
How to be actor?
My recommend character is Racecar
Color: Blue
Limbs: Arms on doors Legs underneath
Mouth: on front
Gender: Male
Friends: Everyone
Enemies: Therometer and Twig
Eyes: on front window
Favorite: Sharpener and Note
And why are their not teams
@@AlterEgo12314 shouldn't ask him here tho
@@backpackobjectchannel7140 let him do what he want in the show
16:25
Sharpener: Well, I guess that means I'm screwed.
Note: *SAME HERE!!*
Sharpener: wha- where did you come from?
Note: *A mAgIcAl PlAcE!!!! A-*
I WAS SEARCHING FOR THIS COMMENT
My dreams be like
16:25
Sharpener:Welp,I guess that means Im screwed
Note:*SaMe HeRe!*
Sharpener:Wha-Where did you come from?
Note*:A mAgIcAl PlAcE aAaA*
*AA--*
16:29 - " were did you come from" " a magical place *AAAAAAA-* "
Edit: some make a vid of this cut scream ( btw thank people for lot of likes)
Haha lol thats funny
Note is just ßo boring and dumb.
16:31 pause
@demir niue same lol
A perfectly cut scream
16:28 my dad when I was born (sharpener)
Lol
XD
0:38 this line is from the incredibles
Xx Zizzzerz Xx lego batman too
tis a very commonly-spoken line
Episode 1 of FIDNTN (facts I didn't need to know)
So today we have this guy called... Umm... Xx Zizzzerz Xx notifying me of an everyday sentence used from Incredibles. Yeah we all know.
Xx Zizzzerz Xx Copy cat
Well looks like from almost all of you I’ve gotten
*Murdered* *by* *words*
Nobody:
That one dude at area 51: 14:18
*Naruto run intensifies*
Lol
15:44 Ruler: OH I MADE IT
*wall hits ruler*
Ruler: OW!
Edit: actually 15:43
Edit 2: Updated
Ruler: Ahhh here we go
*kick*
OW!
The heck huh?
Review
Overall: 9.8/10, this episode is probably an episode that really amazed me. I think this might be one of the best object show episodes there are. I was enjoying the episode throughout and wasn’t really annoyed with anything. Now for the actual review...
Writing: The writing in this episode was golden. It was funny, it was interesting, it wasn’t boring, it had no filler and everything had something to do with the show. Outstanding.
10/10
Animation: HOW DO YOU ANIMATE SO GOOD?! As a powerpoint animator I might not be the best reviewer of this part of the episode but I think the animation is great, the movement and the animation fits with the voice and it’s smooth as hell.
10/10
Voice Acting: The voice acting in this episode was almost perfect, which is very rare these days especially for shows that are only in their first few episodes such as this show. My only problem is that Money Bag’s voice actor can be a little monotone at times (I’m sorry globe) but still, it’s not that big of a deal!
9.5/10
Editing: Not much needs to be said here. The voices and the background music were well leveled.
10/10
Graphics: The graphics are absolutely amazing. The assets are great and the mainland backgrounds were awesome.
10/10
I guess that’s it, this episode was amazing and I hope it will stay like this for the rest of the series! Amazing work, Jordan!
Ngl bfdi is better
Im gonna be under your beds YourBoiEric...
I feel you were right on the voice acting Rulers voice annoyed and annoys me
Oh Money Bag we'll Rulers voice just irattates me
"Mug are mean"
-The Household Name
*Y O L O*
Lo you guys were the votes
LOL
*mug are mean*
LOL XDDD
16:29 makes me laugh everytime.
S a m e
Welp note now my new favorite character in this show it use to be toilet paper now it note.
A magical place A-
13:44- Me when my bully asks for help during a test
0:38 Incredibles Movie Reference!
LE GASP
Review time woowoowowowo:
Script: The script was pretty good tbh. Kinda had a panic attack because I thought Smartie was going to be eliminated with the whole Picture Frame & Thing commotion (since Smartie is my fav character). I also like the idea of showing the reasons why everyone voted for the contestants in that one scene-
8/10
Voice Acting: Its pretty decent I guess. Most lines everyone did were actually understandable and didn't sound like they were reading something, which is good. Some others, though, do the exact opposite of what I just said.
7/10
Animation: The animation is amazing as always. Not to mention how beautiful the graphics are! Sometimes, it's a little repetitive, but there's not that much stuff that is bad about the animation (Or I'm just blind and can't see things that were mistakes-)
9/10
Overall: 24/30 (which is about 8/10)
This episode was another good episode, I'd say better than Episode 1. Keep up the great work!
I don't think so
This was legitimately amazing!! All the small issues from episode 1 were completely fixed!! I just love this so much!! I'll definitely miss voicing thing haha
17:42 is me after rock climbing LOL
I think 17:43 is better
This is the best episode yet! The animation and writing is the best part. Animation is very smooth and the writing is interesting. The voice acting is very expressive (I will try to make my lines better next episode)! I’m also glad that audio editing has gotten better, volume is consistent
1:55 Awww twig looks like he has feeling for toilet paper >:D and I ships :>
I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought! A few things here and there that I wasn’t a fan of. Either than that, very well done! I’m liking these mysteries and the plot of Thing helping Frame. Excited for episode 3!
HELLO!!!!
I'm a fan of PPT2
I'm a fan of PPT2
I am your friend
I'm your friend Yellowangiru
the fact that the contestants read the vote reasons makes me want to vote so they can make fun of me
alexlion0511 backlash huh? Irony! And your version better not meet WuggleJack's version of Stop Sign otherwise..Interdimensional Destabilization.
This show has a certain feel to it that makes me just want to keep looking at it. Lol.
Sensationalism
@@JordanThe1ne what happens to ruler
ImDomYouFool hey can you do more obgect show reaction I love your obgect lockdown but the series is over can you do others like olo when it comes out
@@srdoc9873
Yeah.... What happened.
Creative girl 101 yeh
"So, medal, is it?"
"Obviously"
Speech 100
7:53 m u g a r e m e a n
What if you
Wanted to go to heaven
But god said
7:53
“Gotta keep my cool” while thermometer’s temperature went down is literally the best pun ever.
7:35 how could you smell an character in an animation? 😂
Ryzen Animation He might smelled smarties in real life
that and it's a joke.
Well I mean, Smartie was right
The dude's probably an idiot
or maybe spartan smelled smarties VA (Voice Actor) IRL
SpaceApp11 XD TRUE
12:54 Looks like Ruler is going through puberty!
"I don't know if Î can trust anyone anymore!"
I really liked this episode. The way elimination works in this show is a great twist on the usual format, and the ending was an interesting cliffhanger. The only thing I didn’t enjoy was Ruler’s dialogue, as it felt forced. Otherwise, incredible improvement over the already amazing episode 1, and I’ll definitely watch episode 3 when it releases.
Heyo!! My comment made it into the video [I was the Candle voter]!!! That really brightened up my day to see it there, thank you so much Jordan.
The episode itself was really good! The crew did an a-MAZE-ing job!
Me before The Episode: aww, thing is such a cool thing
Me After The Episode: *Is- Is thing corrupt? not cool.*
You saw the ending?
Edit: basically i think I know the next challenge :c
19:28 let's share the memories of ruler 📏😢😢😢😢😭😭😭😭 SO SAD😭😭😭😭😭
I mean, looking at the past intros...
I’vE GoNe InSaNe AfTEr ThAt pArT (somehow)
Ruler:I don’t even now what my vote means?
That one person:
*YOLO*
Aw hell yeah! This was amazing! I can’t wait for the next episode!
A kid on a paper of my school wrote “whispering men’s to be Cuiet Victor” then after he wrote that I wrote “that’s not true Juan” I’m done with him
you tell them buzz
@@JordanThe1ne what the meat does that mean!?
*Mug are mean*
*She smells like old raisins and toothpaste*
*YOLO*
*lmao*
Idk
toast voted for ruler
I think why I know why thing trying to help picture frame win because he doesn’t really have any friends so he want to help picture frame win the show so she can become his only new friend
Incredible episode Jordan, can't wait for the next episode. ;)
...
If you want a cliff hanger that is scary...
Go to 18:20 and watch till the end of the video, ruler had a bad time...
Gonster28 so sad :c
7:17 Gee, I wonder who wrote that... :3
Anyways, great episode mate, can't wait for the next.
Jacob you wrote you Idiot
Esther Coker... r/wooosh
It was You. You stupid
Oh yeah I recommended green screen
Gender: Male
Limbs: all
Personally: he's nice,also likes to play games,and adventurers
Strengths: camouflage
GREEN SREEN MAAAN
minty mint DOAS WHaTEVER A GR33N SCREEN CAN
I feel like I have a spiritual connection
@@Awtismcentral yes you do
17:22. What does a Note say to the vacuum?
Note: This "Sucks." 😂😂
Oh and in the description it says
Episode 3 coming when ever it comes *outs*
So
Mom: Caleb What Was Your Dream Called
Me: 16:30
Thing needs love lots of loveeeeeee
Also I love the idea of the eliminated contestants of them being like invisible to the others while the eliminated contestant can see them but don’t know there invisible to others also the fact only thing and magic wand can see her and thing can also talk to her, the title of this show matches perfectly for it and that’s why I have already fallen in love with this show OwO it’s creative
And holy moly metal lost XD
Recommend: Sapphire
Limbs: All
Gender: Female
Personnality: Kindhearted, always Joyful.
Edit: it's basically Ruby (from BFB) but blue.
iWolfioPlays so she is like ruby from bfb bfdi and diamond from oso
This would be a good recommended character :3
thanks
After watching the first episode I thought this would be a normal object show but it proved to be so much more I love the way the eliminations work and what happens to the eliminated contestants I like how the end of the episode brings a cliffhanger and the animation is pretty good with a couple of errors of course but that’s ok and I still have many more questions about the show but I’ll just have to wait...
19:33 idk what or where it is but this kind of gave me chills somewhere though. Either it feels real to me or this part is too good.
Medal: *HAVE FUN LOOSING*
5 seconds later
*medal has lost the challenge*
WHAT AAAAA THIS IS JUST SO GOOOD
That scene after the voting screen made my hype meter go into overdrive.
Amazing fucking background. However I feel like there is too much movement, and its unrealistic :p nice job
Yo the animation and backgrounds are outstanding! Keep up with the great my friend 👌
Omg I love thing :( he’s like toilet in II 2
me too!
True
Lol toilet is evil get it
nvm
I was honestly shocked when Mug got eliminated. I personally love her as a character, I like some of the rude and sarcastic ones, and Mug was one of them to me. I do also like how Ruler got a bit of development here. The good nerdy boi needs love. Smartie was great in this too, her nightmare scene actually put me on edge a bit, I got a bit scared. Overall, this episode was phenomenal
Edit: Jokes are great too.
Sharpener: "Well, I guess that means I'm screwed.
Note: "Same here!"
"Wha- where did you come from?!"
"A magical place!"
*"AAA-"*
Edit numero dos (i'll probably have a lot of edits):
*when the state you live in has the 2nd most amount of confirmed cases of coronavirus:* 6:42
Just got here, I’m gonna review this after watching!
Omg this is such amazing animation! You are super underrated!
Thing is literally my favorite character even though he literally helps the worst character.
Same.
16:30 ah yes, earrape
10:05 R.I.P Painting
:(
I just realized that smarties dream was a warning of what happens to ruler
Ruler is A trustworthy person but that all changed went Sharpener ditch him.
The others I respect. The Sharpener is just like Mug. Sharpener needs to drop out of the living. Get it? Because It’s nonexistent living and no one’s that are eliminated are nonexistent and living?.... i’m terrible at making jokes.
That was brilliant! :D Keep up the good work! ;)
I voted for Sharpener btw.
Oh, and tbh I kinda feel bad about Ruler turning into a statue after seeing the statue of this "Anonymous" object person thingy at the end... So sad... 😭
#PrayforRuler
I vote Toilet Paper
Recommended : Lego
Gender : Male
Limbs : Legs
I vote Ruler.
Becus i love him
Everyone vote Ruler
What color lego
@@BrimmySP cyan
Recommend Character: Crystal
Limbs: all
Gender: female
Personality: stuck up always posh but still has a laugh and is a great competition
15:46 Yep, Jordan. That Was A Glitch On That Part
This is pretty good.
1. Did not take long.
2. Graphics are the 2nd best I've seen.
3. The voice actors are really good.
...However one thing that I found bad was that the scripting for the elimination was pretty predictable. People thinking they are safe, and suddenly becoming eliminated, and the guy who thinks their votes were wrong
But this epic. 8/10
is twig gay?
Why does Smartie’s voice remind me of Microphone from Inanimate Insanity?
superstar64 Possibly because Timenzing voices her now.
superstar64 but it is kind of better and in the first 2 episodes dose not screem 10 times not that I don’t like microphone
7:35 Look at his name! It's that guy who makes Sparta Remixes!
Spartan Dash
And Smartie called Spartan Dash an idiot!
No it’s the guy who makes object explosion
@@ertyboi944 And makes Sparta Remixes. ruclips.net/video/zNVzD9TuDj8/видео.html
Just in case anyone is wondering, the into music is the instrumental version of The Spectre by Alan Walker
7:02 Thing are you okay?
I reccomend Scepter
Gender: Female
Description: resembles the scepter of light
Personality: mostly kind, caring and gives advice to others. Her gem also decides her personality
Red: passionate, Fire form
Orange:vigorous, Earth form
Yellow:joyful, Space form
Green:resourceful, Grass form
Blue:calm, Ice form
Indigo:loyal, Water form
Violet:magical, Air form
Black: rude, evil, Dark form
Rainbow mount and Pale blue gem: wisdom, All power form
Abilities:Flight, levitation, invi-sight,and a special glow given which makes the cruel kinder and passes her powers to another, transmited when her face touches another one's face
Friends: twig, thing, smartie, money bag, ruler, thermometer and candle
Enemies: magic wand
Love interest: twig or candle
My friend said you are bad at animating
He is digging his grave now
shut up kid
Sunny DayDay no u
no u kid
Sunny DayDay no u XD
*Maybe BOTH 4 shut the heck up?!*
So sad that this show is cancel. It’s one of my favorite object show! And I really loved Medal and Twig rivalry and Picture Frames/Things story as well as the amazing animation!
When I saw mug’s name In the Intro I misspelled it as
*Nug*
n u g GET
NUG get it ?
AND NUG IS *E L I M I N A T E D*
I honestly love the Animation and Character Design, I would love to see awesome Character Development later on in the Season.
If a second contestant is eliminated, will they remember the first?
Nope. thing will blank their memories
Nope. They will forget about them. They will never be remembered, while the eliminated contestants are slowly suffering while seeing their friends slowly drift away from them abandoning them just leaving them with no friends.
haha they do
I am still glad that i am going to watch Nonisistent Living
Hello Jordan!
I recommend Enye.
Color: Cyan(hair, body, and hat)
Limbs: Both
Gender: Male
He is a nice person
Smartie screams during at the elimination area pretty loud
Recommended character: Icicle
Gender: female
Personality:peaceful
Has arms and legs
Traits: doesn’t like to get on anyone’s bad side but towards the end of the season she will get a lot more competitive
*OH MY GOD I DO REALLY ADORE THIS AAAAAAA*
10 ways you are you!
1. You are smart!
2. You can do anything you put your mind to
3. You are very funny
4. You are loving
5. You make me smile!
6. You are caring
7. You make everyone smile
8. You make everyone laugh!
9. You are brave
10. You are the most happiest person on this planet ❤️
Pencil sharpener isn’t honest, that makes me vote him.
Use the link in the description not comments
It’s just sharpener
Agreed
15:32 that ........ actually makes sense
7:47 YOLO!!!!!
That’s my channel name
Why you didnt put the reason boi?
Aliff Danial I didn’t vote
........
sure you didn't
S STEVENS I didn’t
I recommend Plug and charger
Both Male
Limbs- Plug only legs
Limbs- Cable only hands
Personality- Work together
Theyre nice to people sometimes fight with each other.
LETS DO THIS BOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Sharpener:ruler?
Ruler:......?
Note,Pitcture,Smartie,Lamp shade:hey!
Medal and Toilet paper:grrrrrr!
Money bag,Candle,Twig,Thermomether:??
Picture frame:???????????
Magic wand,Thing:?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
16:28 where did you come from "a magical place AAAAAAA"
Let's Have A Animation Host Battle, It Includes: Magic Wand, Button, Fire Exit Sign, And The TV Box Host Whatever It's Name's Is.
I thought COPPA Hit this
Mug: no one cares
Me: I don't care that no one remembers you
Mug: ; -;
Me:pssssh cliche lol
this whole "everyone forgets the eliminated contestant" thing would ACTUALLY work if the contestants didn't hate everyone
I recommend Brownie
Gender: Male
Limbs: all
Personally : Helpful to other's and loves to encourage others .
5:31 YES YEEEEEES this is what you get for being rude to note 6:53 wow some elimination Device I'm being sarcastic
19:27 no not ruler
I swear if Picture frame she keeps cheating, keeps staying safe from elimination, keeps getting help from thing and makes it to the final episode!!! I WILL UNSUBSCRIBE YOU JORDAN YOU HEAR ME UN SUB SCRIBE!!!!!
Jaeda Parker Chill out. He has more subs than you.
Jaeda Parker you think your better than Jordan? Then prove it by animating something better than him. If you can't then your a bragger.
@@ronniedionisio6179 shut the hell up I'LL SHOW YOU ALL
3 votes: medal toilet paper
7 votes: speech bubble
15 votes: smartie
26 votes: note
1,839 votes: sharpener
eliminated: sharpener
sharpener 2nd: he a jerk to note in intro and the challenge
Mepaid: a record high truly unprecedented also how do you know the results
mephone 4: I have to do that because I want people to be eliminated
3:14 did he just say "503 farts" ??
🤣 farts
It was votes in British
Oh I see Thermometer is the second Trophy.
I think this show has some great potential to truly stand out. With that being said, I wanted to leave you with some pointers to help you improve in future installments.
I think for the most part, the script was fine, but I felt like you could have done more with some scenes. For example, I thought Mug's reaction to being eliminated felt very unrealistic. You mean to tell me that all of their memories being wiped from everyone else, as well as their vision for everyone else being nonexistent , doesn't have an effect of them? I get that this just happened, but you couldn't have put a subtle sign from Mug or anything? Not even a change of thought after what Thing said? I just find that dilemma being difficult for anyone to accept, even the meanest of people. In real life, people are layered with varying traits of personality, and I think this is something you should consider with the characters moving forward. Hopefully you've planned this for the future. Some interactions didn't feel very believable to me as well, such as Note suddenly dropping their act of being random to give Smartie actual advice. Maybe this was intentional, but it rubbed me the wrong way regardless. I'm also concerned with how you plan to handle the plot with Frame and Thing, while having this show be a viewer vote at the same time. You can't keep Frame safe for very long until people start to point out your favoritism. This also applies to other characters you're planning on giving arcs to. I hope you have plans for all of these in the future.
I'd also heavily advise to start looking for a voice director, or even become one yourself. Some of your voice actors rarely portray any emotion, and speak in the same tone throughout all of their lines. It's even worse when the characters are the main spotlight of the scene (Lamp Shade, Note, Speech Bubble, etc.) Try to consider how the characters would act if this was happening in real life. How loud would they be speaking? Would they really be talking to themselves? How would they raise their voice around others? Just think of small things like that, and apply that to your scenes.
Anyway, I hope this wasn't too harsh for you. I truly think that this show is going in the right direction, and I only hope that it gets better. Best of luck man!
whats the music at 16:55 ?