Wow! they really are the best of the best. Ready to deploy that very evening. no intel needed, they don't need to know the layout of the palace or how it is defended, will their quarry be there when they get there or out of town.no strategy meetings, no practicing on models of the palace for weeks until they all know their role and where to go and in time. no advanced scouting. that is impressive.
@@warhawkbm what's funny is that there wouldn't be blood, it would burn off or cauterize the wound immediately! 🤣🤣🤣 Media has destroyed people's minds with false physics!
@@warhawkbm there wouldn't even be blood on it, it'd burn off, ya think maybe Hollywood might be responsible for the lack of understanding physics maybe!? 🤔
The descriptive section of this narrative told me this wasn't written in a first person perspective. The narration is from outside either the protagonists or antagonists view. Everything is too general. You are not going to hold more experienced audiences with this tale. Instead of telling a story lasting more than a dozen videos and chapters, you got a summary.
Yes, that was the most obvious plot hole. This voice has more character than some, the accent even covered up the usual AI inability to distinguish hole, hull and whole, for example. That's a plus, and I'm happy that nobody is trying to use my own native NE accent, that would be very irritating, especially the East Boston version.
@@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ I mean yeah, but still, a tac operation with minimal ordinance and the city ended distroyed? Makes me think this was written by AI
Idk about choosing to fight with a blade. But I don't know any CQB fighters that would not have some blade on them. Somewhere in the chest rigging so that if an enemy gets control of your barrel, you have options to end that struggle faster. But idk, man. I doubt blades will go anywhere as far as war is concerned. They don't need reloading
Pretty bad galaxy spanning military if killing the king and his advisors would put an end to their empire, don't they have a chain of command and others who can inherit the throne?
You are conflating AI with a simple text to speech program. A lot of them suck at pronunciation and get stuck on acronyms especially those that are capitalized you know like AI
They are not all TTS narrated. Agro squirrel narrates, Amie’s Literary Empire, netnarrator and, diamondwillow are all human narrated. The ones that are TTS narrated generally either narrate stories from Reddit without crediting the author or just copy/paste whatever ChatGPT spits out. They’re nothing more than content farms, sucking down as much ad revenue as they can.
Hey mate, can you add a link to the written story on hfy or wherever you post in your stories, please ? Sometimes i prefer to read them . Ty in advance 🤠
I can't help but stare at the flag on the human arm. It looks like the US did the bulk of the work in the war as usual. Great, now I have to start measuring things in 13ths instead of 12ths. First, we have to add the two World War wins, then the intergalactic war lol
May want to try a different AI reader, this one seems to not know how to keep up with the feel of what its reading. Spaces where none should be, sped up where it should slow down. Small things but they distract from the story a bit. Otherwise, enjoyable short story.
I have wondered why not just read it , a human into a microphone. If it's somebody who isn't able to speak English then hire a reader . Shouldn't cost to much for a half hours reading
Yes. There are explosives in the military arsenal today that are considered somewhat silent. Those are small shaped charges that are designed to explode the lock of a door or the hinges. They are usually small enough that there is no big explosion and thus no big noise. Or to be exact the sound as well as the explosive force is directed in one specific direction and does not wander to the sides much. One of these explosives is thermite. It is hot as all hell, burns slowly and can't be extinguished very well. But it emits no explosion sound. Just a sound of welding and the sound the liquified metal makes that it is attached to. The story is obviously set in the future. Humanity is united, they have plasma weaponry, ... It is not unlikely that at that point they have found an explosive substance or procedure to make the sound even quieter.
Nope. Sounds dumb. Why would future soldiers on an advanced ailien planet battle with swords. They wouldn't, for the same reason that we don't still do that here on Earth. Also, people are moving and events are hapening without any descriptive text saying that it happened. Too stupid.
Everyone knows that the earthling soldiers would have taken the king’s sword as a souvenir, but you failed to tell us.
And crown, if only as proof of job completion.
@@McKavianwith the head attached.
They will never know we are not the same😎
My thoughts exactly! I expected someone to say "Dibs on the sword" after he pulled it out.
And virginity jail house style. 😂
I love the fact, that in the bubblefirst century we do not use Coms but Calms to Calmuincate with each other 🤣
It's less stressful that way. :)
Also raise the Earth.
Wow! they really are the best of the best. Ready to deploy that very evening. no intel needed, they don't need to know the layout of the palace or how it is defended, will their quarry be there when they get there or out of town.no strategy meetings, no practicing on models of the palace for weeks until they all know their role and where to go and in time. no advanced scouting. that is impressive.
Your sarcasm is impressive as well !! 😂😊👍
Yeah I was saying the same damn thing. I play chess.I love it, but you can't rush into it. You need to strategize.
Look up the way the foreign legion works.
Intell is nice, not 100%necessary
Humans , prepare for a decapitation strike ? 😅
When has that ever happened. /s
Wiped the blood from his (PLASMA) blade...?
Ouch.
Humans are immune to fire in the future! 😂😂😂
@@CriminalonCrime Plasma even
@@warhawkbm what's funny is that there wouldn't be blood, it would burn off or cauterize the wound immediately! 🤣🤣🤣
Media has destroyed people's minds with false physics!
@@warhawkbm there wouldn't even be blood on it, it'd burn off, ya think maybe Hollywood might be responsible for the lack of understanding physics maybe!? 🤔
@@warhawkbm lol they mad and deleting my post because they've made people dumb about physics! 😂😂😂
The descriptive section of this narrative told me this wasn't written in a first person perspective. The narration is from outside either the protagonists or antagonists view. Everything is too general. You are not going to hold more experienced audiences with this tale. Instead of telling a story lasting more than a dozen videos and chapters, you got a summary.
plus where are the sarah chens?
@eddieisfiction442 😂everytime I hear that name I click off
You mean like star wars?
Maybe it’s meant to just have you make your own decisions on the story
Write your story. Create an audio book. Upload and see how it does.
Other than that, you're just running your mouth.
Lol! Love the Star Wars Empire ships in the background. 😂😂😂
*DOOM music intensifies* aliens: oh shi
How did the council lay dying behind him when they just entered room?
Yes, that was the most obvious plot hole. This voice has more character than some, the accent even covered up the usual AI inability to distinguish hole, hull and whole, for example. That's a plus, and I'm happy that nobody is trying to use my own native NE accent, that would be very irritating, especially the East Boston version.
Death Field, his back was facing the door, everything just ended as they entered?
You are too smart for this story. You have to be willing to drink it all in without questionn
Its ai
Why does the imperial atat look like it's a mix between an oil rig, an atat, and a tie fighter? The tie fighters look right at least
One thing, why is the capital city un ruins? The team was a small tactical team with the mission of killing that king, why did the city get destroyed?
Cause we're THAT fking good
They blew up the door
@@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ I mean yeah, but still, a tac operation with minimal ordinance and the city ended distroyed? Makes me think this was written by AI
Who fights with blades in the 21st Century????? Former Paratrooper commenting
Don't bring a knife to a gunfight.
Ghurkali.
Idk about choosing to fight with a blade. But I don't know any CQB fighters that would not have some blade on them. Somewhere in the chest rigging so that if an enemy gets control of your barrel, you have options to end that struggle faster. But idk, man.
I doubt blades will go anywhere as far as war is concerned. They don't need reloading
A fictional society
Tomahawks are very popular in many experienced troops.🤔
At least there was no one named Chen.
It would have ended quicker had Chen and Rodriguez been there.
@@timtheconjurer I watched one the other evening that had nothing but Chens and chitinous mandibles clacking with grim resolve.
@patrickdurham8393 i bet they underestimated human adaptability as well.
😂😂😂@@timtheconjurer
Hacked into a computer system of an alien civilization. None of squad Alpha got even a scratch.
Pretty bad galaxy spanning military if killing the king and his advisors would put an end to their empire, don't they have a chain of command and others who can inherit the throne?
Just Persia with Darius III versus Alexander revisited in a slightly different stage...
I wanted to like this one. I really did. But I quit at 9:45. The narration was oddly awkward.
Love the tie fighters and the walkers in the picture
Not AI generated? Very good story! Just wish I could turn off the subtitles. And the pictures match the narration.
If there is an atmosphere, blasts cannot be silent.
Imagine if this was the Imperium of Man that this species threatened...😅😅😅😅
Why are all these HFY channels AI narrated. It's f*king ANNOYING.
You are conflating AI with a simple text to speech program. A lot of them suck at pronunciation and get stuck on acronyms especially those that are capitalized you know like AI
Cost
Laziness
They are not all TTS narrated. Agro squirrel narrates, Amie’s Literary Empire, netnarrator and, diamondwillow are all human narrated.
The ones that are TTS narrated generally either narrate stories from Reddit without crediting the author or just copy/paste whatever ChatGPT spits out. They’re nothing more than content farms, sucking down as much ad revenue as they can.
I recommend this channel: www.youtube.com/@StarboundHFY The narrators are all human, and show themselves on camera at the beginning as proof.
As sonne by Rammstein plays in the background
Sounds like a Halo/Bad Batch Mashup...not bad
Hey mate, can you add a link to the written story on hfy or wherever you post in your stories, please ? Sometimes i prefer to read them . Ty in advance 🤠
I can't help but stare at the flag on the human arm. It looks like the US did the bulk of the work in the war as usual. Great, now I have to start measuring things in 13ths instead of 12ths. First, we have to add the two World War wins, then the intergalactic war lol
He wiped blood from his Plasma blade😮
Humans don't fight fare!
Why should we?
May want to try a different AI reader, this one seems to not know how to keep up with the feel of what its reading. Spaces where none should be, sped up where it should slow down. Small things but they distract from the story a bit. Otherwise, enjoyable short story.
I have wondered why not just read it , a human into a microphone. If it's somebody who isn't able to speak English then hire a reader . Shouldn't cost to much for a half hours reading
Do you plug in a command telling the AI that you need at least 10,000 useless words added to the "script"..?
IS this one of those AI stories i hear about? Or was this a first draft?
Quick and silent blast?
Yes.
There are explosives in the military arsenal today that are considered somewhat silent.
Those are small shaped charges that are designed to explode the lock of a door or the hinges.
They are usually small enough that there is no big explosion and thus no big noise. Or to be exact the sound as well as the explosive force is directed in one specific direction and does not wander to the sides much.
One of these explosives is thermite. It is hot as all hell, burns slowly and can't be extinguished very well. But it emits no explosion sound. Just a sound of welding and the sound the liquified metal makes that it is attached to.
The story is obviously set in the future.
Humanity is united, they have plasma weaponry, ...
It is not unlikely that at that point they have found an explosive substance or procedure to make the sound even quieter.
@@Brown_Buffalo SBD is a known tactic.😂
@@OldNavajoTricks I know my wife uses quite often especially after eating ice cream ( she’s lactose intolerant).
This is the bad batch
Nice rough draft
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He wiped blood off his plasma blade?
let's see that it's written in the authorized King James! pride comes before a massive great fall! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Is AI reading this?
So they really left their enemy alive? Not very smart
Same old, same old.
Sounds insane.....😑
He he sa tutong mundo e nang yayari
Nope. Sounds dumb. Why would future soldiers on an advanced ailien planet battle with swords. They wouldn't, for the same reason that we don't still do that here on Earth. Also, people are moving and events are hapening without any descriptive text saying that it happened. Too stupid.
Gettin real tired of military stories written by things that never served and dont understand that culture.
Dumb story, poorly narrated.
I feel like they write it like a power fantasy. It's unfortunate.
The story is good. How come there's only 1 picture throughout?
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Pretty mediocre for a junior highschooler.
😢
Its not good
Got to be one of the worst stories that ever listen to, so full holes
boring nonsence
That’s interesting! Shall we be friends?