Critique of the Week | November 29, 2024

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  • Опубликовано: 14 дек 2024

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  • @HappiPoems
    @HappiPoems 13 дней назад

    Excellent critique. You pointed out excellent points. I learned a lot. As you mentioned troubles, I wrote a sentence to follow that fits well and gives the poem a betterflow and information. Thank you very much.

  • @HappiPoems
    @HappiPoems 13 дней назад

    You are very correct about punctuation as well.