Everyone Abandoned The Helpless Alien Girl, Except the So Called Carnivorous Humans! | HFY Sci‐Fi St
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I've listened to dozens of these HFY stories on youtube and this one has huge gaps in it like none I have heard before. It's a shame too because there's a good plot here that could have made for a really good story. The premise of an alien girl who believes humans are monsters who is then saved by humans is the bare bones of potentially a good story.
"The young Nausican..."?!! I laughed out loud! One of the most violent, combative races in modern Star Trek used as a small race who are frightened if humans?!?
Yep, pretty dumb the Ai re-used that race.
😔 sad ! Isn't it!
🕊️🗺️🕊️💯👁️☮️🦫🇨🇦🫂
Nausican, afraid of human? Isn't that like a Klingon being afraid of a Ferengi?
How exactly do we tell or know it’s AI?
A serious question I’m not trying to argue is or is not, I want to know how to differentiate. Of course I’ve not seen the latest Star Trek so that would not help me. Is there a way to tell no matter the content???
I took would like to know
This is absolutely written by an AI.
How did it not put palpable in there?
It was going so well, as well as an ai can do, until it started confusing rebels and not rebels and switching things out in the rebel base and the nearby outpost and the forest, etc.
Didn't know they could write stories.
It's most likely someone's story that an audio a.i. is reading it, and it makes mistakes in language
That doesn't mean it's not a good story though
@@DexZabeth he was in an escape pod and lost life support and blacked out. Was in another escape pod lost life support and blacked out. Was in a small fighter lost life support and nearly blacked out. How many glints of metal in the corners of your eyes can you see in one story? The premise of this story would be good but this presentation was probably one of the worst ones I've heard on here.
Both the escape pod and their fighter ship seems to have unreliable life support systems lol.
This is the english you get when you use AI to write something in German, use Google translate to turn it into a Chinese manga, then it gets translated by a volunteer "scanalator".
It's always nice to know there is intelligent life. I am always embarrassed to see college students that do not know the basics of the world and even simple math questions
@@MarkHartman-t9ywhere do you see intelligence in any of the beings in this are you saying there's intelligent Airline beings out there you really believe in Little Green Men
I don't care about inconsistencies or holes in a plot, holes in plot leave room for imagination and interpretations,
I found it to be a very captivating, good and intriguing story and i would love to see it play out as an actual movie.
If you have not seen the movie "Enemy Mine" You should see it. It's a masterpiece of Sci-Fi film making.
@@sfrees Thank You, i will look it up and check it out :)
the author sure loves to use the word "acrid"
Wow
This was a lesson in how to allow an AI to destroy a decent story.
This is like the 4th story I watched that had this issue.
There won't be a 5th.
its very boring
You've made it through 4 of these things!? You must be a glutton for punishment. One dose of this garbage was enough for me.
Thank you for the explanation for why Mira had a father who died and another later on. An AI with a lack of continuity explains this and other problems.
And I agree, this will kill the entire genre.
Yeah. Wish I could block channels
Young girl huddled in the corner. "Play dom-jot human?", she said.
88, I love good space based sci-fi, and this fits. Thank you.
😂 I had to laugh when the creator of this channel said subscribe or I will take your dog. Which one 😂
your hot dog. he is very hungry because he has no money from these AI stories read by AI.
I guess the girl has multiple fathers. One killed on the first Noresican ship and then another father who shows up on the second? First no one in the corridor and then Olivia is in it?
Suddenly these aliens also use oxygen for breathing. And ofc he suddenly has a primitive translator 😂
Ofc he is also a hacker of alien technology terminal 😂
And yes. He can drive an alien spacecraft)))
Good story but exceptionally difficult to follow. Jumped around not flowing easily
That was my main thought.
It seemed to jump around.
"AI"
pls help the little princess tell her humans are good people
Some.
Veey nuce stiry great read thank you❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
My suspension of disbelief died when there was an actual locl with tumblers that he could pick.
ON A SPACESHIP.
Why change what works?
88 brilliant I was just about to log off and this popped up I'm now on that one story a subscriber
To start out someone might want to give a rate of 88 out 100 but this actually rates a 96 of 100....I would love to see this as a movie
Yes, with Steven Seagal as the main character.
This story has huge holes in it
Most of these stories do.
Where is his own ship. He certainly didn't swim through space to the station.
inticing story - just a few too many "...and Jack leaped..." IYKYK
Captain we found a new live form (Captain : wat is it!!?) it is Space Simp Pro Captain ! Number One: God thanks for that !!
Ah yes another long lost cousin of blue guys from the avatar movies
How did Michael get to the derelict station in the first place? Was he marooned there by simeone?
Space Uber
What a mess of a story line.
That hole can be overlooked if you take as true that he might have been stranded from his spaceship by the creature, rendering him enable to reach it without crossing the path of the creature.
But there are more obvious issues, that are not just holes but blatant contradictions: the child is first royalty and the daughter of the aliens' king - king killed during the assault on the alien rescuing ship - then she is the daughter of the commander of the alien fleet? The commander might be the mother, but damn everything points to a male commander.
Otherwise, there is a loyalist alien R&D lab hidden inside the rebels hideout, but the rebel leader can take their prototype to use against one of the main characters without question from the loyalist scientists? And the rebels attack the rebels' hideout? A portable cloaking device for one person, that can be later used on a boarding ship, can be seen through by portable detection device but keep being undetectable by the detection sensors of a warship?
The publication of each story comes shortly after the previous one, so I can somewhat understand using AI, but damn they should review the story for any inconsistencies before publishing it.
and suddenly he got a translator? :D
These stores have a lot of potential, but that could definitely use a beta reader, a proofreader and a good editor to avoid the inconsistencies, duplicated passages and names stolen from other series: vorta, bajoran, naussican, tholian, etc
I was wondering about that too
In other stories the translator is an implanted chip.
I mean in Star Trek, and in general one would assume an translator either needs to be preprogrammed with the language, or it'll need a sampling of the language. Since "Mirror"\the little girl was the only alien and she wasn't teaching him her language so much as he tried teaching her it'd make sense it didn't have enough data to begin to work with their language. However once he was brought on board and the soldiers spoke to each other that gave the translator something to work with.
I mean in real life we'd want a translator that can learn new languages; and it'll be rough goings at first. So it only being able to translate a few words makes sense. I just got to that part and I bet it gets better at translating fairly quickly suggesting that it is a smart translator.
It was a good story I enjoyed it tremendously
Eighty-eight 88...
This was rather well done. Very nice.
For me it's a good escape from nows reality of crooked politicians trying for a take over ...An 88 is worthy of this chapter of story please continue with storyline and characters .
GOOD STORY REALLY NICE TRAD THANK YOU FOR PROFF RRADING IT FIRST ❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
This Guy was Really Lucky to Stumble Upon a Ship Filled with Ancient But Still Highly Advanced Weaponry
And still working after decades ? Centuries ?
88 This could have been a great story, but it skipped over many important parts, and even seemed to just assume we knew things that were never mentioned. This was written in a very substandard way. Needs a lot of work to be considered good. Maybe have a human write stories over AI. All the best stories ever told, were NEVER done by AI.
88 I have to agree with some of the other's comments. That said I enjoyed it. I hope you will stop using A.I .
Good plot, but lots of inconsistencies.
That's "AI" for ya. You have to be the editor/proofreader since it doesn't really have intelligence, it just spits out patterns you have to parse. Meaning intelligent people get another tool for their work and dumb people will get more dumb.
Wow the Deus Ex Machina, the half brother trope, the plot holes... Either AI or kid writing this
Worse, it is usually reddit.
"Michael surged forward"? Waves surge; humans don't.
Have you ever seen NFL linemen move on the snap?
Human waves do surge ...
Fun rollercoaster of a story.
story has potential. there's only so much you can do in 40 minutes.
The story keep me listen. Enjoyed it very much. 88
This guy got some bad luck.
Honey, there is no shock wave without an atmosphere. You can't have shock waves in empty space. This is basic physics.
88 I liked this story even tho I occasionally got lost in the telling! Needs some clarifying for sure. New subscriber from Pa.
I smell a law suit 😂
I was amused by the story. "I could do better myself, but okay." was my thought. Until, Mira attacks a dozen rebels with a stolen blaster. "Please please make it stop"
Nausican ... nausea!
GOOD JOB!!!!
Rather "you only had one job ..."
Sounds like Star Wars
this is a scifi DnD game if ever i saw one
Unsatisfying ending for me but that’s subjective
I very much like the background image of this story and others in this series. Please give credit where credit is due: who / what / is /are the artists?
I like this image as well, but my guess is that it is AI-generated, there are some tell-
tail signs, like the double exposure on the thumb,
I am wondering if the story itself is AI-generated as well,
@@darkutopia0423 Definitely AI generated. Wasn't too inconsistent until the rebel base when it fell apart a lot with all kinds of scene jumping and teleporting and non-rebel outpost and nonsense about bio weapon made to kill the species that created it...bwahaha. Loved the blue vial of antidote, so handy to find one of those lying around and it being oral administered.
For an IA it's damn impressive, even if you don't understand that IA to day is like about 12 year old in brain power but like 2-3 years ago it was like 4. Just you wait an other 10 years and see. + try and read an novel from the 1970's and see if that's any better then this. I for 1 liked this.
Although it was a bit confusing at times I loved the story. It had a great ending as well. 👍👍
88
EDIT: One question: Was the child's name Mira or Mirror. 🤔
(The Closed Captioning alternated between the two.)
All the aliens kidnapped people and children and changed them into creatures.....
And at 28:00 we have Plot armor. Get your Plot Armor here.
Play Dom-Jot humaaaaaan...
But it is a very good story...
When a 10 year old uses chatGPT to write a story in another language, which is then translated back into English using Google translate.
88 Love this short story, very gripping all the way to the end.
Damn it, I'll never get back those 40 minutes wasted from my life!
Gotta listen at minimum 1.5x speed.
So her dad died then later he came for michael...oooooook
This story had potential but fell far short. One sentence your running for safety to board a starship, the next your running through the jungle to escape the bad guys. You then come across a giant snake which you go around and never hear about again. you then find a hidden bunker that for no reason opens for you. These gaps and jumps, along with others make no sense and ruin the whole story.
There are so many breaks in this story...
VERY GOOD STORY , THANK YOU , so the Red Cross on Her Blue Cheek was a Singe ! of Her Rank OR Important ' s with in the Royal Family ! ?
88 thank u for a great story
Human proofreader would help, anyone saying proofread, why don't you volunteer to proofread and make sure the story is fluid...this is great concept but a bit of fixing up can bring it to the next level.
The story had plot holes. What happened to Olivia Tompson. And the Norsican doctor. There were also continuity issues.
That was... intersesting. Disjointed holes in the storyline, but to what purpose? Confusing jumble of coincidences and... luck?
I've never knowingly read an AI story but this must be one. There are so many plot holes. Things conveniently appear from nowhere starting with the protagonist himself. How did he arrive at the station?
Uh huh. Robot retread. AI regurge.
88 great story...
I liked it, so screw yall trash talkers lol. Jkjk it was a bit hard to follow but the idea was definitely there. Good job, just work of making the stories make a little more sense and tie in better with each other.
This is fantastic- very good AI - the best I’ve heard
i like it
There were too many unexplained gaps, a discontinued flow of events. Needs desperate cleansing.
yep, they went from getting onto the ship to planting explosives. When did they get those? I too, feel a lot of the story is missing.
It's still better than what the average human is capable of. lol
This makes no sense. The small weak aliens fled the station in fear because of pirates and left Mira because she was useless. One human is sent to salvage the "derelict" station, which now also has a huge carnivorous monster on, left by the aliens so they can kidnap her? Now, suddenly, the small weak aliens who think humans are a vicious barbarian and fear them are now big act like vicious barbarians who kill humans on sight. Then the father was dead, then alive. I'm confused and give up trying to make sense of this nonsense.
Well that was a nice story sure there was a lot of brutal deaths on each side but still that was kind of heartwarming he really cared for that little girl
It was more an obsession. Could turn unsavoury.
Don't understand all the hate in the comments. It's a story about a man saving a child alien girl. Not hard to follow. People need to use their imaginations.
It's because it's an ai generated story, which honestly isn't that bad tbh considering how easy it is to give a cool "script" to an ai and it'll give you a full on story that's fairly well written, so tbh at least some of the hate probably comes from people who are losing their jobs to robots and ai, and another large part are probably the people that think terminator is an accurate demonstration of modern day ai
88. Whether written by AI, or human, still a good read, and I don't particularly like sci-fi
This story was good, but it could have been great. There were huge jumps in the story, like whole chapters were thrown out. I wonder if it was AI written. 88
There is a glaring continuity gap @ about 32:00 minutes in.
A 15 minute story stretched to 40 minutes by the sheer number of unnecessary words
87.99 😂
It started out good, but later on turned odd and even later, it sounded like an roleplaying story, why bring a little child to confront a rebel leader for? The very same rebels that want her dead in order to overthrow her people and governments?
Again, it started out good, then just went weird, it was a decent AI story though.
88 :P
Is the girl's name Mirror or Mira?
Not bad considering that I hate AI's88😂😂😂😂l🖖 Live long an prosper
its a story, this is a computer, you know with a screen, not a gramaphone! I'd rather see it than hear about it!
Dang
If you are going to just read me a story, I'll meet you at the library. RUclips is a video website.
No agenda here nope.
Too many superlatives.
Ai authors use far too many adverbs and adjectives.
This has more holes than Swiss cheese, which also has its merits.
I think this is fun.
A good story.
Not a bad effort, the story line was good, the action ok, but there was no conclusion to the story, it just stopped in mid flow with the shortest possible " the end".
How the hell did get translator. N know where bridge was
In other stories the translator is an implanted chip.
As a salvager of space stations he must have gotten some experience how foreign technology works.
Just trying to get some logic into this story ...
Miss teen Orion secter
You have got to stop saying
You have reached the end of the story
End the story whit sorting that actually have meaning and nor just a cop-out of maybe this ore that
MAKE A ENDING THAT ACTUALLY WORKS AND MEAN SOMETHING
Then we will happily listen and go along with what you want and think about this
But an ending like WHAT IF ORE SOMETHING
Ain't what we want
Get it together and you will have a massive impact and audience
Just saying 🇧🇻
?what?
@@KOS762 my point exactly you don't get it and so do everyone else also
@@yvindwestersund9720 Yep, I also agree... Giant parts of the story are missing, leading us to wonder, WTF are they talking about. The story went from a space pod with no life support, to planting explosives. ?What?
Next time, proofread this before posting it.
Why? It's all about the views and getting people to comment.
This is definitely ai
Nice story. Keep up the good work.
I can't seem to finish these maybe because it is written by an AI or a bad author but just so much suspension of belief and poor connectivity between sections
The story was very inconsistent.
The story has potential. To rushed
Would you accept a short story written by a human?