More like when your homie steals the girl you like and then expects you to be chill about it so after failing at getting payback enough times you lose it and take things too far.
Tbh I don't feel like a monster I shouldn't of had to apologise to her considering she went accusing me of stuff on his account then tried banning me from his account and he wants me to believe she's a nice girl.
The movement and style are amazing! But my favorite part is definitely the expressions, I love that you still show things like shock, hurt, and sadness, even it’s just a frame, to really flesh out the “monster” character. It’s like he feels both a thrill from being a monster but also hates himself for it.
I mean, he probably felt pretty betrayed that his best friend was with a human, those who have oppressed him his whole life, so I feel bad. At the same time though, this boy looks really good evil
You know for a dragon like person who's killed lots of people, he did just get knocked over by a punch three times! Conclusion his friend must never skip arm day!
It's my interpretation that Luka didn't want to hurt Vayen, or he couldn't bring himself to. Because no matter how much of a monster he became, he could never hurt someone he loved and cared about.
i think vayen is also a dragon. the 2 men are dragons but one fell in love with the human girl and the other didnt like that which is why the punches were more effective
i'm torn between knowing that's kind of an overdone, pretty homophobic trope, and that being one of my favorite tropes of all time. (kinda like the whole "i hate queer-coding villainy because that links being queer to evil, degeneracy, etc" but also "i love queer characters, and evil degenerate characters, and the combination of the two is iconic" struggle)
The description explains that they're best friends, and apparently got jealous of his friends new love interest. If you're gaydar is correct, it's only a one-sided crush :(
Hey this is awesome story-boarding! I could easily tell what was going on, and you have a beautiful art style! I'm looking forward to whatever you put out next!
In the beginning part, the: "I can be rude, be in a mood, I can be rotten, I can be cruel, might act a fool, but never forgotten" part, I absolutely LOVED his expressions, cos you get that while he seems to revel in his revenge and his beastly actions, he also seems regretful or distraught about it. How there's so much story conveyed in almost everything. The transition eye part? Delicious. The part where he looks like water or a sea wave and attacks humans makes me think of the stories people must make about him and how many he must have attacked. The way he moves and acts more beastly in a fight, how towards the end when the song goes "Huwa!" And he turns his head and his face looks so inhuman is so cool omg,,. The expressions and body language, your artstyle, just HHH ITSSO GOOD. Honestly this video is so amazing. I've probably rewatched it like seven times now, with more times to come. (Also Mr monster looks really hot..👀)
Is it bad or gross I kinda wanna hug him and never let go? I mean, seriously, get real people, though it's not the best way out, logically being mistreated from a young age would teach you that's how to treat people you hate. So, when he was able to show them how he felt, what he had become, he did what they did to him. Murder, hurt, never caring for emotions, feelings, life, anything... No-one had been there to teach him not to untill it was to late. And when his only friend fell in love with a human, he stopped caring at all. To only have one friend in the wild cruel world is heartbreaking, but for them to then choose those who broke and hurt you your whole life, you would be driven over the edge to insanity... The monster character (let's call him Olvidada), is, in short, a very tragic character to me, and I only wish he could have had a better life. p.s. Olvidada is Spanish for 'forgotten'.
I thought he kinda looked like a shadow in that scene. It looked really neat to me. Also, yeah, loved that scene in the end, revealing a more animalistic face. Edit: Now that I think about it, it's probably the blood of his victims.
@@kitbear4021 I mean... It cut off before we got the full view of the blow. He could still have either survived the hit or Vayen decided last second not to kill him. There's hope.
This is so excellent. You can feel his breathing rage. You uncover an empathy, and a desire for his success. No matter how terrible, succession for him may be. I adore your style and plotting! I cannot wait for future content featuring these characters! Best of wishes :)
The expressions in this are incredible, my favorite bit is the very end where there the change in “monster” guy’s eyes back to normal after having been glowing. Maybe the other guy knew he couldn’t control the monster inside, and that’s why he looked so conflicted when fighting him. (3:53-3:54)
Omg YES! Finally a “villain” with a good backstory! Usually movies and tv shows and other animatics are just like: This person is villain, he hates main character. Why? Idk he just does ok!? Now main character wants villain dead, but that doesn’t mean main character’s evil cause he’s main character. Now no one knows much about villain other than he’s obviously evil just cause he looks like he is, and has a villain-y name. See where I’m coming from? Anyway this is really good and I’ve been watching it on replay for maybe 30 minutes now! Keep up the amazing work!
The story, the frames, the expressions, the song choice, gonna make me cry so perfect. The transitions to and from the liquid murder is my favorite part. Oh also the fact everyone does have different faces cuz best friend has round chin while luka has pointy is nice to
Me: *sees this and clicks expecting one of the other songs called monster* Also me: welp... Im adding another monster song to my list. For clarification on the other songs ▪ Their the ones by Skillet, Meg & Dia, Eminem(ft. Rihanna), Imagine Dragons, Ruelle, Beth Crowley & Starset
I love how Monster was written next to the guy’s head at the end like he had become the monster. Not sure that was the intention but I thought it was such a cool detail.
I agree. I wanna believe that it’s from Luka’s perspective. That his best friend (if he is in fact a dragon person like him) was now with what they perceived as the enemy (humans). I assume they are both dragon people because it says in the description that Luka sought vengeance against humanity for oppressing him. So, it’s safe to say he wouldn’t make one of them his best friend. Plus, the two are shown fighting hordes of people off together before meeting that *cough* homewrecker. Therefore, in the end, his buddy became a monster in his eyes. I was actually really sad about the ending to this and had been in Luka’s corner the entire video. I get it that he was kinda going nuts and killing people, but it seems like they were doing that together in the beginning anyways. So… the other dude is just sorta contradicting himself by calling Luka a monster for continuing on with it. I think my cheese would slide off my cracker, too, if my best friend turned his back on me and left me alone like that. I really hope they make another part to this story!!
I interpreted it as the way Vayen (the guy you're talking about) now sees Luka (the dragon guy). I could actually see Vayen saying that to him in that moment.
The frame at 3.29, is just 'mwuah' I don't know why I like it so much but the pure insanity and villain characteristics shown in one facial expression. Also the idea with this dragon humanoid race thingy is super cool! On one hand this character can look very human, and on the other he can look definitely the opposite.
Woaaaahhh... Raw emotion. It sounds like he likes the power, but deep down hates who he's become. He doesn't want to be a monster, he wants power and love. Humans only ever take, take, take, so in his mind, they must be eliminated. They even took is best friend (and possible crush)! You have earned a new Subscriber, with a bell. Keep up the awesome work! I hope to see more awesome things in the future.
Me lowkey hating the "good guys" and not at all feeling bad for it because to be honest frick the girls who get in between besties: *Am I wrong by Nico plays*
I want more of this story. I honestly love Luka. One of my personal demon OC's is a lot like him and its...perfection to see that summed up so poetically.
Is it okay to say I cried? Edit: Your expressions create emotions that I cannot put into words, they change and mingle and show different thought processes that go with their body language, and honestly, this was a beautiful piece of work. Instead of fear, surprise, sadness, longing, and anger, you create terror, shock, misery, desire, and fury. Even the /smallest/ detail- Vayen has fangs too, but he only showed them when he was scared or shocked, where Luka shows them through hunger and being sadistic. It would make my day to see more. This is the first video I have ever seen of yours - I'm struck. Keep going.
I absolutely refuse to believe you have 487 subscribers, this absolute gold dude! I love your style and you animate really good, not to mention the story is hella good to jump onto! Good job, bro ^^
bro I keep coming back to this at least like three times a day (once with every meal) and I GET CHILLS EVERY TIMEEEE @Arianwen44 - tHaNk YoU for this gift.
I feel so bad for Luka this makes me want to rewrite the story for a better ending :’( I’m gonna re-write it I’ll follow what you’ve already set but I’ll make a few alterations
@@karmakitty6998 I'm still writing it life kinda got in the way for awhile but im back to working on it ^-^ I'm thinking of posting it on wattpad so it would be easier to share ^-^
I love this so much!!! The nuances is Luka's expressions are so amazingly on-point, and I love the waves mini-montage where it almost looks like he's crying. Fantastic animation!!
my question might sound stupid but does anyone know if this is actually from a book or game or movie or something? cause if it is i really wanna try it! like i know that its her own OCs and story but like if the universe(?) is from some where...? cool animations i love the expresions and the style is epic! ;)
I wanted to say, after awhile of writers block with a certain character in my story, this video has helped me give him more in his backstory! Keep up your amazing animatics and work!
Dieses "Monster" tut mir voll leid ich mein irgendwie hat sein Bruder ihn so gemacht immerhin hat sein Bruder sich fein herausgehalten das mädchen abbekommen und so weiter aber der andere Bruder musste kämpfen und wurde dann als "Monster" beschimpft dabei finde ich das der andere Bruder das wäre Monster ist
Yo dude your art is beautiful and this song is a very good song. I've never heard it before but the intensity of your art with this song... Man o wanna see this story animated. What happened to ol' buddy? Seems like he was human at one point but definitely was something else by the time of his death. Who's little red? I imagine her with red hair. And the guy she chose? The love triangle! What happened?? Gosh I loved this little animatic.
Love it ! And Im glad that you explained the storry, bc moust oc animatic I saw didn't explain theirs and while some things were obvious some were just not and I didn't know what was gooing on ^^
Wow, this is incredible! And you did the boards in 2 weeks?! I could never imagine doing something like this. And the whole story going on in the background, with the cute character designs? POW! I am just blown away- this is amazing! There is so much I like about the character design but honestly, that hair style is probably my favourite, it's just so fluffy/ bouncy and just looks like something you expect to see on a prince charming! I'm in love!
The way you draw the expressions is just amazing, the time and effort put into each pictures shows just how much you really care about your OC's caracter development. 😌 Wonderful anamatic 😁👏👍
Even though this is 2 years old (which isn’t a long time I just feel old) I still come back to this with very fond memories and curiosity and a need for more backstory.
YOOO, so good! I love it, it’s so well done! I just adore your style, your expression and body movement! So very well done, I hope to see more! And you’ve definitely confirmed for me that I have a fang-fetish... I love those teef 🥺🥺
I can emphatize with Luka. Does that make his actions okay? Not really, but I understand where he's coming from. Not only did his best friend "betray" him by falling for the "enemy", Vayen /actively pushed Luka away and walked out of his life/. He chose the "enemy" over him. Of course Luka would be hurt and angry, and try to take his rage out on the person that, in his eyes, took his best friend away from him. Luka needs someone to give him a hug and tell him that it will be alright, and I volunteer as tribute. That being said, I loved this! The way you convey emotions through the eyes is amazing, overall the characters' expressions stood out to me the most with how well they show what's going through their minds. It's four minutes, yet you told an entire story even without the context in the description!
Everything about this is so cool. The fluidity and movement of everything, the expressions of the characters, the sequence of every scene, it all looks amazing.
Вау!!!!!! Я влюбилась в этот ролик! Хочется увидеть полную и законченую анимацию. Персонажи прекрасны. Идея прекрасна. Рисовка прекрасна. Сижу, пищу от счастья. Буду пересматривать снова и снова. Спасибо за это видео
-Génial !! J'adore la musique et tes dessins =D continue comme ça ^^, je me suis même inspiré de quelques détails pour un de mes romans si ça ne te dérange pas trop ^^' merci ;)
Ох, ты монстр! Я вижу правду Нет, тебе не нужно лгать мне Не забивай голову вещами и не думай, что ты свободен Я чувствую запах страха, я думаю, ты ясно дал понять (да) Я могу быть грубым, быть в настроении, я могу быть гнилым Я могу быть жестоким, могу вести себя дураком, но никогда не забываю Ползучая темнота ждет тебя Тебе не понравится то, что ты видишь Да я чувствую себя монстром И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в мечтах Я определение худшего вида Да я чувствую себя монстром И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах Я определение худшего вида Да я чувствую себя как Монстр Монстр Да я чувствую себя как Ты не можешь меня удержать Да, я иду за тобой Я обогреватель на тебя, нет Я просто говорю вам факты О, эти цепи не могут удержать меня, да Я могу быть грубым, быть в настроении, я могу быть гнилым Я могу быть жестоким, могу быть дураком, но никогда не забываю Ползучая в темноте ждет тебя Да я чувствую себя монстром И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах Я определение худшего вида Да я чувствую себя монстром И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах Я определение худшего вида Да я чувствую себя Вы не верите в монстров? Конечно, нет Я делаю Смотрите, как я превращаюсь во что-то более темное Да я чувствую себя монстром И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах Я определение худшего вида Да я чувствую себя монстром И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах Я определение худшего вида Да, я чувствую себя (ура) Монстр Монстр (ура) Монстр Да, я чувствую себя (ура) Монстр Монстр (ура) Монстр Да я чувствую себя
I feel like the "gentlefaced" blonde guy would be more incensed at seeing his girlfriend being almost fatally throttled even if it was by his former friend.
I just stumbled across this and I totally love it!!! I really support Luka, I feel like all of this could have been avoided if there'd been some actual talking between Luka and Vayen before he rocked up with a human girl. Like imho Vayen is the bad guy here for knowing his friend's trauma and deciding to date someone that would trigger him and make him feel abandoned and betrayed? It's clear he's doing this because he's lashing out and alone and then there's just this girl, and it isn't her fault she's caught up in this. Luka still doesn't seem to want to hurt Vayen badly, like he seems to be holding back, while Vayen just keeps punching him and I can't imagine how that poor dragon dude is feeling. I hope he finds someone who won't turn their back on him so easily, I know love is powerful but at the very least homeboy could have talked with his best friend before rocking up with a human girl like "anyway i am gonna ignore you now k bye bro". Anyway, I loved the characters, loved the story, loved the art and animation, and the music choice. I also like the fact that at the end the MONSTER was behind Vayen instead of Luka. Maybe I read way too much into it, I just really feel like Vayen was the bad guy in all of this.
![HELLFIRE [ OC Animatic ]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/2U26dOHE08k/mqdefault.jpg)
![Lets redesign Marinette!! [this took 3 years to make]](/img/1.gif)
When your homie gets a girlfriend and you realize you're forever alone
I was the 1k like
Same bro
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More like when your homie steals the girl you like and then expects you to be chill about it so after failing at getting payback enough times you lose it and take things too far.
Tbh I don't feel like a monster I shouldn't of had to apologise to her considering she went accusing me of stuff on his account then tried banning me from his account and he wants me to believe she's a nice girl.
The movement and style are amazing! But my favorite part is definitely the expressions, I love that you still show things like shock, hurt, and sadness, even it’s just a frame, to really flesh out the “monster” character. It’s like he feels both a thrill from being a monster but also hates himself for it.
It's so detailed it's beautiful
Came off very "look what you made me do"
I mean, he probably felt pretty betrayed that his best friend was with a human, those who have oppressed him his whole life, so I feel bad. At the same time though, this boy looks really good evil
That is called entitlement to another person life, is not good...
You know for a dragon like person who's killed lots of people, he did just get knocked over by a punch three times! Conclusion his friend must never skip arm day!
It's my interpretation that Luka didn't want to hurt Vayen, or he couldn't bring himself to. Because no matter how much of a monster he became, he could never hurt someone he loved and cared about.
i think vayen is also a dragon. the 2 men are dragons but one fell in love with the human girl and the other didnt like that which is why the punches were more effective
@@eros7433 also im pretty sure theyre a dragon as well
his head did go bonkaroo... but yea i agree
Sorry I noticed you made a grammar mistake it’s *boyfriend* not *friend*, just wanted to let you know :D
(Btw plz don’t take this serious)
Oh no he's hot
.....shit
@@omg....5240 (...) here we go again
Sorry, my interior memer said that I HAVE to do it
video: epic and heart-wrenching and incredible
my mind the entire time: haha tiny hands
Ngl I saw that too XD
@@rsin9515 Yeah, it was pretty obvious on Luka. Kinda cute, tho.
Reminds me of Dr. Drakken from Kim Possible
I know nothing about these characters but my gaydar tells me the monster-character has a crush on the other guy
Haha same
Lol
i'm torn between knowing that's kind of an overdone, pretty homophobic trope, and that being one of my favorite tropes of all time. (kinda like the whole "i hate queer-coding villainy because that links being queer to evil, degeneracy, etc" but also "i love queer characters, and evil degenerate characters, and the combination of the two is iconic" struggle)
Really? Yikes, I thought they were brothers and he was just pissed that he chose a new girl over family...
The description explains that they're best friends, and apparently got jealous of his friends new love interest. If you're gaydar is correct, it's only a one-sided crush :(
Hey this is awesome story-boarding! I could easily tell what was going on, and you have a beautiful art style! I'm looking forward to whatever you put out next!
Plot twist: Luka was in love with Vayen
y a t h i n k
@@amandarama3314 I love how this is just half of the comments now- XD
Gosh don't make it gay Armin
Before anyone is triggered, it's just a shitty reference 🙂
Eh no
I'm not
In the beginning part, the: "I can be rude, be in a mood, I can be rotten,
I can be cruel, might act a fool, but never forgotten" part, I absolutely LOVED his expressions, cos you get that while he seems to revel in his revenge and his beastly actions, he also seems regretful or distraught about it. How there's so much story conveyed in almost everything.
The transition eye part? Delicious.
The part where he looks like water or a sea wave and attacks humans makes me think of the stories people must make about him and how many he must have attacked.
The way he moves and acts more beastly in a fight, how towards the end when the song goes "Huwa!" And he turns his head and his face looks so inhuman is so cool omg,,.
The expressions and body language, your artstyle, just HHH ITSSO GOOD.
Honestly this video is so amazing. I've probably rewatched it like seven times now, with more times to come.
(Also Mr monster looks really hot..👀)
Is it bad or gross I kinda wanna hug him and never let go?
I mean, seriously, get real people, though it's not the best way out, logically being mistreated from a young age would teach you that's how to treat people you hate. So, when he was able to show them how he felt, what he had become, he did what they did to him.
Murder, hurt, never caring for emotions, feelings, life, anything...
No-one had been there to teach him not to untill it was to late.
And when his only friend fell in love with a human, he stopped caring at all. To only have one friend in the wild cruel world is heartbreaking, but for them to then choose those who broke and hurt you your whole life, you would be driven over the edge to insanity...
The monster character (let's call him Olvidada), is, in short, a very tragic character to me, and I only wish he could have had a better life.
p.s. Olvidada is Spanish for 'forgotten'.
@@thebigbrotherwolf8617 that's really nice!! The "Monster" character is named Luka Umbra by the way.
@@kysim ooh, good name! It sounds kinda feral
@@thebigbrotherwolf8617 yeah!!
I thought he kinda looked like a shadow in that scene. It looked really neat to me. Also, yeah, loved that scene in the end, revealing a more animalistic face.
Edit: Now that I think about it, it's probably the blood of his victims.
My guy just like: "huh? Oh." *full on musical starts*
Why am I already attached to Luka after a single video?
:(
IKR, I’m like ‘aw fuck he’s dead dead..’ :(
Because he's just so incredible
@@kitbear4021 I can't argue with that logic •́ ‿ ,•̀
@@kitbear4021 I mean... It cut off before we got the full view of the blow. He could still have either survived the hit or Vayen decided last second not to kill him. There's hope.
Oops, meant to tag lem_ahn. Srry
I know nothing but my gaydar is going off
Mine too-
Same
Does Luka die?
I- Please tell me he escapes or something
@MADELYN HART He probably be just fine. I mean, he's a DRAGON. If we didn't already know this, dragons are tough as hell to kill.
@@myoung3411 when they’re in dragon form yes, but he looks like he is in some kind of human form in this. Besides, most dragons have a soft underbelly
@@ashidraws2621 how tf you know that
@@rahhh5808 I... I'm kinda a little tiny bit of a dragon nerd
This is so excellent. You can feel his breathing rage. You uncover an empathy, and a desire for his success. No matter how terrible, succession for him may be. I adore your style and plotting! I cannot wait for future content featuring these characters! Best of wishes :)
I can't wait to see more animatics!!! Your art style and storytelling is so engaging.
I like Luka.............
Is that a bad thing?
And he's 'evil side' is awesome :)
Evil ocs rock
@@Anonymous-gk7fo always
Is it bad that i kinda wanna be like Luka's Harley Quinn
@@vespa4462 probably but same so no judgment here
I mean . . . Same
The expressions in this are incredible, my favorite bit is the very end where there the change in “monster” guy’s eyes back to normal after having been glowing. Maybe the other guy knew he couldn’t control the monster inside, and that’s why he looked so conflicted when fighting him. (3:53-3:54)
Find me over here frantically searching for more while screeching "WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!"
I need more too
lol same XD
Luka fuckin dies lol
This legend dropped a fire animatic and disappeared
Omg YES! Finally a “villain” with a good backstory! Usually movies and tv shows and other animatics are just like:
This person is villain, he hates main character. Why? Idk he just does ok!? Now main character wants villain dead, but that doesn’t mean main character’s evil cause he’s main character. Now no one knows much about villain other than he’s obviously evil just cause he looks like he is, and has a villain-y name.
See where I’m coming from? Anyway this is really good and I’ve been watching it on replay for maybe 30 minutes now! Keep up the amazing work!
It's sad that Luka dont really hurt Vayen at all but Vayen go againts him with a sword and his punchs :(
Luka frickin strangled his girl and attacked Vayen several times out of jealousy. I'd say he deserved it
luka’s cute no cap
I know. No loyalty.
Why dose no one talk about how successful of a artist you are going to be if you keep making animations I think you should make a camp camp animation
WOW. This is EPIC.
Please don't tell me Luka died
What- what was the last frame? Did he die?
Yes yes he did die
The story, the frames, the expressions, the song choice, gonna make me cry so perfect.
The transitions to and from the liquid murder is my favorite part.
Oh also the fact everyone does have different faces cuz best friend has round chin while luka has pointy is nice to
but like.. part 2?
Woahh, amazing visual storytelling!! This deserves way more attention!! Keep it up man, you’re doing great!!
Me: *sees this and clicks expecting one of the other songs called monster*
Also me: welp... Im adding another monster song to my list.
For clarification on the other songs
▪ Their the ones by Skillet, Meg & Dia, Eminem(ft. Rihanna), Imagine Dragons, Ruelle, Beth Crowley & Starset
And all of them are to amazing in each their own right
@@rorycaleb2661 yep! they each have a different feel to them and that's why i love them all :3
Well, I was expecting the one from the Broadway musical of Frozen xd
@@almosthuman2398 there's a song called monster from a boardway musical?
@@dull_demon4717 and let me tell you, for a Disney Broadway song IT'S FREAKING METAL!
I love how Monster was written next to the guy’s head at the end like he had become the monster. Not sure that was the intention but I thought it was such a cool detail.
I agree. I wanna believe that it’s from Luka’s perspective. That his best friend (if he is in fact a dragon person like him) was now with what they perceived as the enemy (humans). I assume they are both dragon people because it says in the description that Luka sought vengeance against humanity for oppressing him.
So, it’s safe to say he wouldn’t make one of them his best friend. Plus, the two are shown fighting hordes of people off together before meeting that *cough* homewrecker.
Therefore, in the end, his buddy became a monster in his eyes.
I was actually really sad about the ending to this and had been in Luka’s corner the entire video. I get it that he was kinda going nuts and killing people, but it seems like they were doing that together in the beginning anyways. So… the other dude is just sorta contradicting himself by calling Luka a monster for continuing on with it.
I think my cheese would slide off my cracker, too, if my best friend turned his back on me and left me alone like that. I really hope they make another part to this story!!
I interpreted it as the way Vayen (the guy you're talking about) now sees Luka (the dragon guy). I could actually see Vayen saying that to him in that moment.
I accidentally unliked it cause I tried to like it twice so I ended up liking it thrice XD
The frame at 3.29, is just 'mwuah' I don't know why I like it so much but the pure insanity and villain characteristics shown in one facial expression. Also the idea with this dragon humanoid race thingy is super cool! On one hand this character can look very human, and on the other he can look definitely the opposite.
Woaaaahhh... Raw emotion. It sounds like he likes the power, but deep down hates who he's become. He doesn't want to be a monster, he wants power and love. Humans only ever take, take, take, so in his mind, they must be eliminated. They even took is best friend (and possible crush)!
You have earned a new Subscriber, with a bell. Keep up the awesome work! I hope to see more awesome things in the future.
This would fit Azula from Avatar so damn well.
Me lowkey hating the "good guys" and not at all feeling bad for it because to be honest frick the girls who get in between besties: *Am I wrong by Nico plays*
Okay, this feels like it’d make for a pretty cool backstory for a dnd character.
I want more of this story. I honestly love Luka. One of my personal demon OC's is a lot like him and its...perfection to see that summed up so poetically.
I was rooting for the monster
I’d like to know who wasn’t. *pulls out crowbar*
@@RiasatAmin what?
THE STORY AND EXPRESSIONS... GAH ITS GORGEOUS
Is it okay to say I cried?
Edit: Your expressions create emotions that I cannot put into words, they change and mingle and show different thought processes that go with their body language, and honestly, this was a beautiful piece of work. Instead of fear, surprise, sadness, longing, and anger, you create terror, shock, misery, desire, and fury. Even the /smallest/ detail- Vayen has fangs too, but he only showed them when he was scared or shocked, where Luka shows them through hunger and being sadistic. It would make my day to see more. This is the first video I have ever seen of yours - I'm struck. Keep going.
This video is too underrated! You are awesome, I love it!
I absolutely refuse to believe you have 487 subscribers, this absolute gold dude! I love your style and you animate really good, not to mention the story is hella good to jump onto! Good job, bro ^^
3 seconds after the video starts: *badass music starts*
Me: *smash the like button*
This is SO GOOD, you are so talented and very creative!! I am in love with this, omg.
This is crazy good, I hope to see more of your stuff in the future!
bro I keep coming back to this at least like three times a day (once with every meal) and I GET CHILLS EVERY TIMEEEE @Arianwen44 - tHaNk YoU for this gift.
Still coming back here every time this randomly crosses my head
Oh my goodness! This is amazing!! Your art style is
Omg this is so good. When the doors opened I literally got chills like, hello?? I know nothing about you and I love you
This is what happens when you've got PTSD and are a plutonic yandere for your best friend
Does anybody else just want to flip their hair over their shoulders in slow motion when that beat drops?
HOLY FLIPPING CRAP THIS ANIMATION IS GORGEOUS. WATCHING IT AT NIGHT AND THEM EYES BE HAUNTING MAN.
Honestly I never thought someone could tell an amazing story in two or three minutes. Then I watched this animatic. This is great. I love it.
This animatic told a story in just over four minutes better than most Hollywood blockbusters do in hours.
1:59 sir that is an illegal amount of badass hotness.
I feel so bad for Luka this makes me want to rewrite the story for a better ending :’( I’m gonna re-write it I’ll follow what you’ve already set but I’ll make a few alterations
Yo can I find it once you do like I wanna see both this continued and ur interpretation of it
@@rorycaleb2661 alright sure ^-^
@@CherryHop969 where is it?
@@karmakitty6998 I'm still writing it life kinda got in the way for awhile but im back to working on it ^-^ I'm thinking of posting it on wattpad so it would be easier to share ^-^
@@CherryHop969 awesome decently tell me when you make it please I look forward to it if you continue to make it❤️
Okay, but that ink scene was magnificent. Goodness gracious. I love the story you've created here!
I love this so much!!! The nuances is Luka's expressions are so amazingly on-point, and I love the waves mini-montage where it almost looks like he's crying. Fantastic animation!!
I wish I weren't human so I could show Luka love. I always want to get together with those kind of characters, cuz they need love so badly.
This is amazing ! :D Love the story and the art style (and the music :D)
Did Vayen kill Luka at the end ?
This is waaay to underrated! what an amazing animatic, I couldn't take my eyes off my screen!
my question might sound stupid but does anyone know if this is actually from a book or game or movie or something?
cause if it is i really wanna try it!
like i know that its her own OCs and story but like if the universe(?) is from some where...?
cool animations i love the expresions and the style is epic! ;)
Give one a crown the other a mask and its dream and techno. This is epic i love it. I just got this in my recommended its amazing.
the transition at 1:58 gave me *goosebumps* good job
This is absolutely amazing ! Great job
Man this is so cool I need to know the full story!
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holy SMOKES this is absolutely GORGEOUS and i am in love!!!!! hugely inspiring!!
I wanted to say, after awhile of writers block with a certain character in my story, this video has helped me give him more in his backstory! Keep up your amazing animatics and work!
There are like 8 pop songs called "monster" and until you click an animatic you never know which one you're gonna get.
Dude this is so amazing!!!!!!!! I'm *SO* glad this popped up on my recommended your art style is INCREDIBLE!!
ok, i might be the only one that thought of this but if any of you have red red queen and the rest of the series this reminds me of it 😍
I really love this. I've rewatched it multiple times and I just can't get over how good it is. You did an amazing job on this, really. 💖💖💖💕
Dieses "Monster" tut mir voll leid ich mein irgendwie hat sein Bruder ihn so gemacht immerhin hat sein Bruder sich fein herausgehalten das mädchen abbekommen und so weiter aber der andere Bruder musste kämpfen und wurde dann als "Monster" beschimpft dabei finde ich das der andere Bruder das wäre Monster ist
Yo dude your art is beautiful and this song is a very good song. I've never heard it before but the intensity of your art with this song... Man o wanna see this story animated. What happened to ol' buddy? Seems like he was human at one point but definitely was something else by the time of his death. Who's little red? I imagine her with red hair. And the guy she chose? The love triangle! What happened??
Gosh I loved this little animatic.
This is incredible!
Love it ! And Im glad that you explained the storry, bc moust oc animatic I saw didn't explain theirs and while some things were obvious some were just not and I didn't know what was gooing on ^^
It's ironic to give such a light name to a dark character. But I really like it
This video introduced me to a song that I grew to really like. Thank you for that!
3:53
"this is the part where Luka knew he screwed up..."
Wow, this is incredible! And you did the boards in 2 weeks?! I could never imagine doing something like this. And the whole story going on in the background, with the cute character designs? POW! I am just blown away- this is amazing! There is so much I like about the character design but honestly, that hair style is probably my favourite, it's just so fluffy/ bouncy and just looks like something you expect to see on a prince charming! I'm in love!
The way you draw the expressions is just amazing, the time and effort put into each pictures shows just how much you really care about your OC's caracter development. 😌
Wonderful anamatic 😁👏👍
Even though this is 2 years old (which isn’t a long time I just feel old) I still come back to this with very fond memories and curiosity and a need for more backstory.
YOOO, so good! I love it, it’s so well done! I just adore your style, your expression and body movement! So very well done, I hope to see more!
And you’ve definitely confirmed for me that I have a fang-fetish... I love those teef 🥺🥺
Why do I get Dorian vs. Chaol vibes from Throne of Glass. :000000 THIS IS AWESOME YOU ARE INCREDIBLY TALENTED!!
Omg i like it, it's reminds me at Maven, a characeter of Red Queen(it is a book)
I can emphatize with Luka. Does that make his actions okay? Not really, but I understand where he's coming from. Not only did his best friend "betray" him by falling for the "enemy", Vayen /actively pushed Luka away and walked out of his life/. He chose the "enemy" over him. Of course Luka would be hurt and angry, and try to take his rage out on the person that, in his eyes, took his best friend away from him.
Luka needs someone to give him a hug and tell him that it will be alright, and I volunteer as tribute.
That being said, I loved this! The way you convey emotions through the eyes is amazing, overall the characters' expressions stood out to me the most with how well they show what's going through their minds. It's four minutes, yet you told an entire story even without the context in the description!
alguien que me pasó del name de la canción y te quedó perfecto espero nuevos videos próximamente por favor
Everything about this is so cool. The fluidity and movement of everything, the expressions of the characters, the sequence of every scene, it all looks amazing.
Вау!!!!!! Я влюбилась в этот ролик! Хочется увидеть полную и законченую анимацию. Персонажи прекрасны. Идея прекрасна. Рисовка прекрасна. Сижу, пищу от счастья. Буду пересматривать снова и снова. Спасибо за это видео
Imagine if this was actually animated... the power this would have.
This was Awesome! It was beautiful, sad, and heart crushing.
I love expressions in this, animation really well done (and i would watch many more videos of Luka)
Hope I'm not the only one who was really hoping for Luke to win that fight
-Génial !! J'adore la musique et tes dessins =D continue comme ça ^^, je me suis même inspiré de quelques détails pour un de mes romans si ça ne te dérange pas trop ^^' merci ;)
this just pooped up in my recommended and IM SO GLAD ITS AMAZING
Ох, ты монстр!
Я вижу правду
Нет, тебе не нужно лгать мне
Не забивай голову вещами и не думай, что ты свободен
Я чувствую запах страха, я думаю, ты ясно дал понять (да)
Я могу быть грубым, быть в настроении, я могу быть гнилым
Я могу быть жестоким, могу вести себя дураком, но никогда не забываю
Ползучая темнота ждет тебя
Тебе не понравится то, что ты видишь
Да я чувствую себя монстром
И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя
Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в мечтах
Я определение худшего вида
Да я чувствую себя монстром
И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя
Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах
Я определение худшего вида
Да я чувствую себя как
Монстр
Монстр
Да я чувствую себя как
Ты не можешь меня удержать
Да, я иду за тобой
Я обогреватель на тебя, нет
Я просто говорю вам факты
О, эти цепи не могут удержать меня, да
Я могу быть грубым, быть в настроении, я могу быть гнилым
Я могу быть жестоким, могу быть дураком, но никогда не забываю
Ползучая в темноте ждет тебя
Да я чувствую себя монстром
И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя
Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах
Я определение худшего вида
Да я чувствую себя монстром
И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя
Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах
Я определение худшего вида
Да я чувствую себя
Вы не верите в монстров?
Конечно, нет
Я делаю
Смотрите, как я превращаюсь во что-то более темное
Да я чувствую себя монстром
И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя
Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах
Я определение худшего вида
Да я чувствую себя монстром
И я здесь, чтобы преследовать тебя
Я становлюсь твоим кошмаром в твоих мечтах
Я определение худшего вида
Да, я чувствую себя (ура)
Монстр
Монстр (ура)
Монстр
Да, я чувствую себя (ура)
Монстр
Монстр (ура)
Монстр
Да я чувствую себя
I feel like the "gentlefaced" blonde guy would be more incensed at seeing his girlfriend being almost fatally throttled even if it was by his former friend.
I just stumbled across this and I totally love it!!! I really support Luka, I feel like all of this could have been avoided if there'd been some actual talking between Luka and Vayen before he rocked up with a human girl. Like imho Vayen is the bad guy here for knowing his friend's trauma and deciding to date someone that would trigger him and make him feel abandoned and betrayed? It's clear he's doing this because he's lashing out and alone and then there's just this girl, and it isn't her fault she's caught up in this. Luka still doesn't seem to want to hurt Vayen badly, like he seems to be holding back, while Vayen just keeps punching him and I can't imagine how that poor dragon dude is feeling. I hope he finds someone who won't turn their back on him so easily, I know love is powerful but at the very least homeboy could have talked with his best friend before rocking up with a human girl like "anyway i am gonna ignore you now k bye bro". Anyway, I loved the characters, loved the story, loved the art and animation, and the music choice. I also like the fact that at the end the MONSTER was behind Vayen instead of Luka. Maybe I read way too much into it, I just really feel like Vayen was the bad guy in all of this.
Finally. I feel the same way. He shouldn't, if he did kill him at the end. He should've just left him.
This is absolutely beautiful, every frame is so polished this is amazing!