Bass is way too over-powering. Try bringing the mid up and dropping the bass, I think that will help balance the sound out much better. In terms of how it sounds musically, I'd give it a 6/10. Relatively average sounding electronic music, with some slightly interesting aspects. I'd watch for the dissonance of chords in some spots unless that was your intention, although I find them to be without purpose or utility.
just needs the mix improved and maybe some ear candy/ambience to keep it interesting?
Not bad
Needs them chords, great track! I can definitely see the potential!
Bass is way too over-powering.
Try bringing the mid up and dropping the bass, I think that will help balance the sound out much better.
In terms of how it sounds musically, I'd give it a 6/10. Relatively average sounding electronic music, with some slightly interesting aspects.
I'd watch for the dissonance of chords in some spots unless that was your intention, although I find them to be without purpose or utility.
6.5/10
improve mixing