I really like this story a lot it was very well thought out. I also like how Naruto personality was done. I really can’t wait for the next part of this story and I hope it comes out soon. 0:02
I kind of like this and I kind of don't because you're turning Iruka into an enemy when you already had Mizuki. There was no need to do that. Mizuki was bad enough. And another thing were they kind of mess with Hinata's relationship with Naruto. So many of these fan fictions do it. I'm about burned out on Naruto fan fictions and I absolutely love them. I don't know what people's problem is. For the sweet and innocent and truthfully loyal Hinata Turn away from Naruto or he'll turn her away. He gets the chance to have multiple wives and everybody s***Cans the Hinata x Naruto relationship? It's become a cliche at this point.
Part2❤😍😍👍
Part 2 please
Hopefully to see the next part
Love the video need part 2 please 💚💚💚
Please make a part 2
I really like this story a lot it was very well thought out. I also like how Naruto personality was done. I really can’t wait for the next part of this story and I hope it comes out soon. 0:02
Part 2 please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Great author please put number two out there if there is one is a great story
Part 2
What is the story fanfic name?
The Crimson King on FanFiction, written by myself, Midnight Lost
Why did you begin the story from chapter 2
I kind of like this and I kind of don't because you're turning Iruka into an enemy when you already had Mizuki. There was no need to do that. Mizuki was bad enough. And another thing were they kind of mess with Hinata's relationship with Naruto. So many of these fan fictions do it. I'm about burned out on Naruto fan fictions and I absolutely love them. I don't know what people's problem is. For the sweet and innocent and truthfully loyal Hinata Turn away from Naruto or he'll turn her away. He gets the chance to have multiple wives and everybody s***Cans the Hinata x Naruto relationship? It's become a cliche at this point.
Hinata will be part of the line up later on, I just wanted to approach it differently for this story.
Big pothole, why is Kakashi trying to kill is sensi's son? There's no sense in that and no explanation.
Why iruka whyyyyyyyyyy
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