To the boy I never loved - Spoken Word Poetry (Original Poem)
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- Опубликовано: 18 сен 2024
- If you love them, let them go. Have you ever fallen in love with someone really close to you before?
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Hello. As a writer, it’s hard for me to feel comfortable sharing my work. But someone told me that we should especially post the things that are cringe. Because there might be someone out there who likes cringe... so I hope it’s you :,)
I like everything that u upload 😁
now I can't stop thinking who that person is
I really needed to hear this, I have been too scared to turn in my creative writing assignments, because I feel my poems are cringe and weird...
I really like your poems ..!
I play them on repeat^.^
There are many out there who find peace in your poems♡. Keep writing!
Awww I’m so glad ❤️
I never loved you
Because you called me your
best friend.
But somewhere in between the late nights,
the city lights
the songs in the car we blasted
I fell for your soul
as a friend.
And I never loved you
But we shared each other's dreams,
aspirations,
and just about everything else in between.
You made me laugh so hard I cried;
my smile
classically conditioned to the sound of your name;
only you have that power.
But I never loved you
And wow maybe I'm to blame
Then again,
you never asked me out on a date
And yeah,
I guess 2am coffee counts
but I didn't realize you didn't need caffeine
for my presence to make your heart beat faster
because,
well, you never told me that it did.
And I never loved you,
but your presence was the only thing I wanted
You were my favorite anecdote
You always had me on my toes
never knowing what to expect next.
And that was great for a while
until you unexpectedly disappeared.
Our text messages got shorter,
our phone calls went extinct,
and your voice became a memory.
Now you're less than an acquaintance,
let alone a friend.
A stranger
who knows precisely how to make me laugh,
how to make me feel safe,
and frankly how to tick me off too.
Word on the street says you did it because
you thought I would never be open to the possibility of
you and me.
In actuality, you disappeared faster
than I could tell you the truth.
But months have gone by
and I guess it's too late.
I guess you'll never know
that somehow we managed to
friendzone each other.
And maybe if I had known then what I know now
maybe I could've done something different
But then again
maybe you held back because
you saw a future problem that I didn't.
So I guess this is
goodbye, friend.
This isn't what I wanted
but this is what you wanted,
so I let you go
Because I never loved you
Wait,
how does that saying go again?
I went through the same issue, thanks for sharing
Good thing you never married your best friend before its too late when he meets his soulmate ...
"my smile is classically conditioned to the sound of your name" is GENIUS. as a psych major and writer, combining the two is insanely satisfying
Too much, too much thinking right there..
expression of true feelings
i wasnt expecting to get slapped in the face by emotions today
Oh man! Here’s a virtual hug!
@@lunapoems thanks I needed that
I wish there was a world where your poems played like melodies and i would have been lost in an open maze 😭❤
Wow what a description! Thank you for your support!
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true her voice is so soothing ..
SAMEEEEE 😭😍!
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Choose not to love anyone might be because you never knew what love is and are too scared to find out. It could also be that you know too damn well what it means to be in love with someone.
I tell myself that I never loved her, but I knew the day I met her is the day I learned what it means to love someone.
Hey friend....
"Even if we can't be together in the end, I'm glad that you were a part of my life."
Her voice... I miss her so much, her laughing always made me smile, slowly it's past month I never again her his voice, and out text message become look like a stranger meet for the first time... I don't know about this but still, I'm always be the person when she need the most, when she have problem, and I'm always support her no matter what happen even we cant even through this boundaries, and for her thanks already loving me....
I just can feel that feeling 😔💕
Another master piece 💯
This somehow made me miss someone but its weird i dont know whom ....another master piece and your no.1 fan here 🙆😊
Awww 🥰
@@lunapoems a big fan. Don't want to fight for who's more of a fan.
How can you be this relateable? The story of lost friendship. The story of shorter texts and the tale of disappearance. Your voice resonates with the poem and the situation. The shiver makes it better. ❤❤❤❤ Brilliant Poetry ❤❤
Thank you Kumar!!!
They say your lover should be your best friend. But, what if sometimes, *it's the friendship that gets in the way?*
Then it’s fixable! We all strive for balance and relationships are the same. Sounds like a small problem for a great reward. Communication and understanding, patience and honesty.
@@shinelovebrightlynlaughhar1529 lol
@@edith324 unless your husband turns out to be a closet case who doesn’t love himself like mine! Wait for the novel… it’s coming. Anonymously. He might be a real dick right now, but I’ll always see that incredible man I used to know. And for that I’ll always be grateful.
Honesty these are just so calming
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All hail the greatest writer on RUclips.
It just gets better and better 😭🔥🔥❤️
I really admire your spoken poetry luna! I love the moon and as much your poems too be it if you love me, don't , sleep wars, or this and many more to go ! ♡You go girl!!!
Thank you!!
WOAAAHH I lovee how authentic it issss
Your poems are probably the highlights of my days.
I feel honored to be the first one to see this. Great job.
Thank you!
This is so beautiful omg **intense screaming***😭❤️
Hmm another heart wrenching poem. It did touch my soul. I lost mine due to "career is important as of now", "let me slog my ass and work to make our future better". I thought that was the way I could make the ones I love more happy in the future forgetting how I could have been in the moment and loved. I am sorry to myself and my "alone"-ness not loneliness. I was dumb. As you said, they got to know the future which wouldn't workout between. This poem made me cry shit loads, yet giving me a life lesson of "how I shouldn't be". I can't say sorry to the person 'cause it's like hurting them twice, but through this comment, I say SORRY for being shit in your life. If possible forgive me. Luna, you my friend, thank you for being my therapist from god knows which place. As always, thanks for existing ❤️.
Love from India.
Thanks for listening, Abhishek! Praying for you! ❤️
It just gets better and better with every poem❤️✨
Thanks Zachary!
it’s so beautiful 🥰
I nearly cried reading the poem. I could relate on so many points. There but not quite there. 🖤🖤
Its beautiful Luna ! ❤️🌺
I keep coming back to this channel to listen to more spoken word poetry but I see that I have already listened to everything already multiple times. I was never much of a writer but I do appreciate when people share their work online or somewhere accesible. Appreciate the channel, in summary.
Thanks Sadaf! I really appreciate your support, and I’m glad you like the poems!
If you were my literature teacher, I'd end up falling in love ✨
i’ve spent my entire life obsessing over poetry and writing for hours, wishing i were capable of something like this. i’ve read so many poems, they all merged into one but yours are the ones that stand out above the rest, they’re always so perfect
Beautiful ✨❤
Thanks Riya!
:DD
Added to my Playlist of spoken words I can listen to every night (I memorized your "if you love me don't" already). PS: your poems are the only ones in the playlist haha
This is so good
That wait at the end
The way u talked about disappearance
Aah I wish I could give u some award for ur amazing writing skills but for now I can just appreciate and like this beautiful work.
your voice holds so much emotion
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I swear i never got goosebumps before , but today it's different , beautiful voice , beautifuly chosen words ❤❤❤
Thank you ❤️
I don't love this poetry just in the way you didn't love your best friend 🥺
Hahaha I see what you did there. Thank you! ❤️
the way you play with your voice is incredible.. and top of that the poems you wrote.. i don't have physically or even mentally to miss someone and you made feel it.. thank you for your work and writing
Luna you're the best 😌🌻
Right back at you!
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Really touched..Reminds me of the saying if it has to happen then it will..if it didn't happen then it was not supposed to...
You let me cry😭😭😭
This is a masterpiece 💜
Thank you ❤️❤️
You are awesome ❤️
💔💔💔💔 Your poems always touch my souls.
It's so relatable I cant even-
Listened 100+ times look who is back again
What is it that makes all your work hit so hard and purely on every level of emotions, thank you 😊
OMG i cant this is just to good
Thank you for making it and for making my night a little better
Thanks for listening, Elizabeth!! I’m glad you enjoyed.
Your voice is soo sweet ... U never loved him but you are crying ,don't die like that , stay with him is better than dying like this ... Some relationships will not workout wil not be success without knowing the truth ... stay always where your heart is beating faster ....one day will be yours ....❤️
Amazing as always 😍
Voice and lyrics both are heart-melting ❤️
Thank you!!!
...Maybe if I had known then the things I know now, maybe would have done things differently... 😭🥀🥀🥀🥀
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And it continues
@@lunapoems and it continues
Yep! Never loved you...
(Nice Poem👏🏼)
Revisiting all of your videos and this one got me good, wow. Hopefully you can upload the old ones again🤞
Amazing work as always Luna!
Addicted to your voice, recitation and the way you express so well. I look up to you and I hope I'll be able to be as good as you in poetry writing and reciting. 🌷💕
this is just too good
i can always relate with your poems
and maybe i have fallen in love with someone close to me but in the end i had to let that person go
i didn't want to but had to ....
OMGGGG, YOU SPOKE THE THINGS THAT WERE EXACTLY IN MY HEART
It's like you're talking to my soul. So beautiful. ❤️🌸
I love you 🖤
thank you Luna, it is beautifully expressed . You know when the connection was really good it will not be gone. It will linger on in the skies above to remind us of one message; from the gods, with love.
Perfect sad and emotional!
This onnnneeee.. So good. God bless
God Bless ❤️
This defines my current situation so accurately... Just that we haven't grown apart yet..
*This made me feel everything that was going on in my life! Like EVERYTHING!!! Idk why??? It seriously made me feel what I deserve, what I have, and what I can make it to be.... Love you Luna💕
Someday I found your channel while randomly scrolling through RUclips and never missed a video since. Your poems resonate with us. You are very talented ❤️
Thanks Abhigyan!! I appreciate the kind words! I’m glad you enjoy the content :) God Bless.
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Today's my birthday and this poem....this poem says it all. TAking me back to 3years ago
Happy birthday!!
i dont share the same experience but when i listen to this i get goosebumps. this is awesome!
so so beautiful. thank you for sharing
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One of the most beautiful thing I came across this week❤️
I just want to say that this is a beautiful piece and one that really tugged at the heart strings. I don't know if I believe in fate but somehow I clicked on this and your words echoed exactly how I feel..or have been feeling for more than a little while about a friend . Thank you.
why is this so relatable 😭 this is my situation now, all those late night talks and 2am coffees, we shared all our laughters and tears and now.. he's gone.. he's with the new girl and i don't want to interrupt even tho im his best friend i don't wanna contact him now. because this happened before, his ex gf was jealous bcs of me and i don't want that to happen again. so i guess, this is "goodbye, friend" for the second time? 😭
I love this. I mean I love all your work, so that isn't too surprising, but I love this. I love how raw it is. I love the story and the emotion in your voice as you tell it. You are so incredibly talented, and all of your work is so beautifully done. This was incredible.
Such a honest poem.
kinda how I'm feeling right now, you don't miss! another masterpiece 💯
Beautiful
U inspire me
Beautiful.
This is magical
Around 2020 I think? My fave post was your "if you fall in love with me, dont" Im not sure why its not available in your channel anymore but I just wanna let you know that it gave me comfort during my dark days. Thank you for sharing your works♥️
You're such an inspiration..
Always rooting for you💖
So real.
I totally feel this
Beautiful God bless
God Bless ❤️
@@lunapoems 🙏❤️
This is beautiful, period! Awesome stuff Luna
Omggggg this is soooo amazing!!
That line at the end hits me hard
i love ur poem🥺🥺🥺🥺
This speaks to me,I am in such a place too.
this hits me because in this poem, i wasnt the one reading it. i was the one you talked about. and yes, that is why i leave. I'm sorry.
This is wonderful
This inspired me to write a story💛
amazing i feel like there is A point in ur lifewhen this stuff happens and just shut it out and let it swim and settle down in the depths of our hearts nowhere to be felt again
still, thank you for making me less sad
I love your work
Its beautiful.
Just recently got broken up with by the only girl ive ever known who made me feel like I was worth something and that I could be loved and after so long of being her best friend she wants to be friend still but I can’t handle it some times I wish she could still be the same person she was to me I want to be hers and to have her be by my side to have her be the sun that rises for me every single morning that brings me that sun shine everyone hopes for in the morning but I don’t think there will ever be another light that brightens up my day the way she did and I think what ever spark for me that was left faded over time listening to ur poems helps me willingly be sad when I don’t allow myself to be so thank you
It’s surprisingly hard to let your self have a full on cry fest when ya hold in every tear u can subconsciously to be big man
Honestly, it's the perfect amount of cringe that makes me feel so in love with someone even though I've never been in love 😢😂❤️
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@@lunapoems 😑
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Just woke up to this. Another amazing poem. Thank you for sharing and putting these relatable feelings into words. 🙇🏻♥️🍓