I think Swordtail was just trying to look more confident than he felt for the sake of keeping the group’s hopes high in finding Luna and making a change to the continent. And then when Sundew joined the party, who was way more experienced than Swordtail, he wanted to do everything he could to impress her with eagerness. But ultimately he tried a little too hard and looked like a fool a little, but that didn’t stop him from trying anyway in the slightest. I think he simply had a lot of faith that Sundew would make all the right calls for the group and followed her like a scout follows a leader.
Up until Luna’s book he really was a two dimensional character but when we saw flashbacks in Luna’s book, that’s when I really started appreciating his character.
I find this sooooooo relatable! I feel like the 3rd arc was very very rushed. The writing n the second and third arc is soooo different. I don’t think I’m lying when I say the third arc is my least favorite arc. So I love how someone else thinks the same way as me.
Yeah. Third arc had the worst writing. But I come for the WORLDBUILDING AND LOOOOOOOOOOORE. So I like third arc best. I love blue and cricket and all three pantalan tribes are SO creatively designed and super fun to draw!
This was intended for kids wow arc3 has issues I didn’t notice any of this and I’m a kid am I opinion I like dark three I didn’t see many things wrong with it
I personally thought that it was crazy and weird that he was more upset about losing Luna than HIS SISTER! I do agree with Sundew taking his role and I love your videos so much!
Are you fine with him being referred to as "a big, dumb, funny idiot character"? Not trying to be rude, or disrespectful to Cyprus or anything. But are you okay with that?
Cyprus, my girl! I’m so proud of you from an online business perspective-you’ve managed to build a RUclips channel for yourself whose content allows you to showcase your original art pieces through weekly uploads by writing the equivalent of fanfiction for a popular canon in your niche, all while establishing a portfolio, reputation, fanbase, and profile for yourself as a professional artist. The fact that you continue to scale such a career by simply creating more original weekly art content which apparently comes straight from your heart is truly a remarkable, beautiful, and wonderful thing! ❤
I’ve never read the 3rd arc, and it’s because I hear so much of this about it! A lot of people say they enjoyed the 3rd arc, but idk. Thank you so so much Cyprus for being honest in this video, but not butchering Tui’s whole thing she made!
I personally think Tui was just stressed by a lot of people wanting books that are good as her first ten. I mean like she probably rushed her books and tried to get them done faster, not better. So, she spent way less time on side characters, focusing more on the actual plot then on the dragons involved in it.
Happy birthday cyprus!!! I'm very glad you liked my picture. Yeah I am very glad Swordtail was given a little more depth in book 15. I always hated how he appeared in the other books: shallow . . . at least before we saw how Luna saw him: funny, quirky, impulsive in a cute sorta way. What if Moon grew up on the Nightwing island What if the false dragonets swapped with the real ones. What if fathom was evil instead of Darkstalker.
Swordtail is probably one of my tops from the 3rd arc and probably the only one who has the title of favorite introduced in arc 3 in my book. I personally wish Swordtail was the pov for book 11 but instead we got the worst protagonist of wings of fire(in my opinion). Swordtail is a wasted character and if Tui does make a 4th arc i hope for Swordtail to get more focus. I feel like an entire arc could be made just from tying lose ends such as Peril and Sky's reunion or what happened to Sora.
You know, how you described what Swordtail could have been, he sounds like a character archetype called "crouching moron, hidden (ninja. Let's say ninja.)". Works in social situations because they're funny, works in combat because they're stronger than everyone thinks they are.
Yes, I agree, thank you for making videos and in my opinion I love your style and when you talk about the characters. I recently started digital art(on mobile 😂😬💀) and it takes way longer than on paper! I hope to see more whatisfaces! ❤
Yeah I had trouble too. Still having it, but if you don’t mind lo-res, especially if you’re looking for decent animation tools, I suggest pixel studio. Min canvas size is 1024x1024 pixels though sadly.
CYPRUS, I HAVE TWO QUESTIONS!! If you could answer then, that would be really helpful! 1. Will you do any more livestreams? I found them extremely enjoyable, watching you work and answer questions. Also, why were the previous livestreams deleted? Was that RUclips or you? 2. Will you do a Halloween scarlet drawing tradition this year!? I love that idea, and in fact, I made my own and posted on deviant art! If you can answer these, it would get me really hyped up for the rest of Halloween, thank you!
I think it would have been really amazing to show a character who struggled deeply with meantal issues and underlying emotions that he hid away and I agree that swordtail was seriously downplayed
Agreed. Come to think of it, I was pretty disappointed with Swordtail when the books progressed. I LOVED him and his character.... but he slowly faded away T^T BTW, GREAT ART!
I am a book writer myself and indeed he did have a bit of a run down when Luna left I was expecting him to go a bit crazy about it but no he was worried but didn’t have the reaction I was thinking and hopping for.🦋
I agree that Sundew did kinda replace him. I also didn’t really like Swordtail that much until I read The Flames of Hope, and honestly, I kinda love him now. I like him more than Blue, that’s for sure. But yes, Swordtail was put to the side and wasn’t given much character development, unlike Kinkajou, who’s my favorite side character.
It's true what you say; the third arc did seem a bit... bland at times. Sure it had some pretty groundbreaking additions to the Wings of Fire universe, but to me something just felt off about the story. Besides the main characters, everyone else seemed so much lesser. But of course, everone goes through ups and downs. It's nigh impossible to keep up a good streak forever. So if we do end up having an arc 4 or more Winglets books, lets hope Tui is in her full spirit again 😄
Hi Cyprus! I love your videos and it inspired me to also be a WOF RUclipsr, although I'm starting small! Could you possibly make a "don't listen to a word I say" music video or whatever? My idea is that it could be Luna inside the other mind area when she was forced to lie to her friends.
this is why book 15 fell on its face at the end (the last act specifically with cotton mouth and lizard) **spoilers ofc** they are introduced so late we don’t get to learn too much about them, so we don’t quite have a reason to hate cottonmouth and love lizard aside from what’s shown which isn’t a lot, we don’t delve deep into them, all we know about lizard is that she never got a chance at life because of cottonmouth, and that cottonmouth caused the scorching, but we don’t learn enough about them for this to matter. we never get to see what lizard missed out on or think about it, and we don’t learn enough about cottonmouth for him to truly be hateable. he never really,,, did anything that made me want him to die? aside from the scorching which we *barely* see the actual effects of aside from the dragons getting angry, we don’t feel like he did something bad and that the dragons did something good, just that they both did something bad, we don’t see the dragons grieve, or learn about the lives the stolen children would’ve had. Tui didn’t give the *main villains* anytime to develop, we could’ve used a few prologues or epilogues between the two, maybe even wasp! this is all just my opinion! tldr: tui didn’t develop most of the book 15 characters in a way that made you root for what happens to them, cottonmouth is an underwhelming villain for most of it, especially whenever lizard or luna gives him a snarky remark, and lizard just isn’t well developed enough to develop a connection with her imo
I really really like Swordtail, in book 11 I loved him but it felt like he got thrown off to the sidelines because they really didn’t know what to do with him. I hate how he wasn’t book 15’s protagonist because he could have gotten some incredible development and he could have actually been taken seriously. I get it’d be hard to tie that to the characters on Pyrrhia but I feel like Tui could have made it work. Edit: also I despise how he didn’t play a huge role as a Chrysalis member. They really should have done more with that
I like swordtail I think his flop was him trying to distract himself and the others from luna and io when they first found luna his n9rmal self returned and didn't leave for a while of searching then he moped and worried then tryed to distract and say abeyance she'll come back on her own and I think the reason he didn't lead with sundew was because now nobody knew were luna was and he thought he couldn't lead without knowing were she is or with her. Thats what I think what about yall I'd be happy to kn9w in the replys thank you!
I love the Menagerie. Its such a good book and deserves more credit My thoughts on Swordtail are kind of weird. Its like he was a main side character and then started s sliding on books 14 through 15. THIS IS MY OPINION and i think was a bit good and a bit...strange.
What drawing platform do you use?! I've been looking for a good drawing platform for a pc and yours is awesome, especially when you do those amazing dragons!
Swordtail was kind of a hotheaded goofball back in book 11, too. I just never liked him that much. I think he makes a good guy for Luna, though. I love the worldbuilding and tribes in arc three, but I draw way more arc 1-2 stuff, because they have better characters. I’ve drawn the DoD and the Jade Winglet as a group plenty, but the third arc povs? They’re not a group!!! I did headshot the stealth team once, but they’re mostly too big to put in one finished art piece without it getting VERY noisy.
I know this is kinda wierd but the third arc was my favorite arc, I loved the first three books and re-read them almost everyday, personally I think that Swordtail had so much potential until Flames Of Hope where it showed him as being reckless, stupid and dependent on Luna, but Swordtail wasnt like that at all. In my opoin all Swordtail tried to do was lighten up some tense moments, and keep things happy within the group, Swordtail was raised being told that Leafwings would kill all the hivewings, which eventually he wanted to do, so when Sundew showed up he assumed that she had a plan to defeat them and followed her. In my opion Flames of Hope ruined the third arc and it had a ton of potential in the first 3 books, then the last two kinda dropped the tension.
Hey you know I love your videos and I personally love your what if abd character with food videos so I thought that you can do a food video of the legend or a what if of cottonmouth being a good side character and not an antagonist ❤️😀
(this is totally unrelated to the video, though it was very good) Cyprus, are you going to continue your annual Halloween Scarlet poster tradition this year?
the only book i really enjoyed in arc 3 was the hive queen, and it was mainly because it gives more information on how each hive functions (forgive me if im wrong i havent read that book in a while)
I love swordtail but I agree I wish he had kept his personality. He should have been more of himself and I really don’t like book 15 thats when he goes down hill.
@Cyprus there is a youtuber that is completely copying your style, like i cant tell the difference. There channel is TinyTalons. If you dont care thats ok, I just wanted to tell you. I will delete this when you respond to keep the drama down.
Don’t get me wrong I know what it’s like to be really frustrated with a character you think has great potential for example for me shadow the hedgehog. I think that he could have been a really good character but instead we just got sonic but he’s an edge lord. And I think that your criticisms would be valid but although I don’t think this is intended you seem to be talking about all side characters in any work of fiction ever. Don’t get me wrong I like a good side character arc but it’s fine to have characters with wacky personalities so that they can play off the main cast in a fun and entertaining way. And you’re (while probably inadvertently) still implying that all side changes ever should be so fleshed out and have such good character development that you could just make them a main character with no changes. As a private character writer I know that if you have a notion in your mind that that’s how all side characters should be then that completely zaps the fun out of making side characters in the first place. And if you are writing a series that you are going to publish like wings of fire that would probably lead to burnout and severely decrease the quality of your work. Great art though, love it!
I personally loved the third arc, maybe even the most of all three, but I gotta admit that I really don't like Swordtail. He's kinda annoying and barely does anything until the 15th book, and even then he is still really shallow. He just serves as a love interest for Luna, who is much more interesting and better character than Swordtail. I actually don't think that he should have been 3 dimensional, but rather just dropped altogether. I think Luna is a very independent person and I don't think every character needs a love interest. Also not to nitpick but I think Hazel from book 13 should be included in the side character line up.
Honestly even tho arc 3 is the worst written it was my favourite arc because of sword tail and blue men I loved them when I first read the book and then the posion jungle came and men I despised that book ( no effence to any body who likes it) it felt like they just threw blue and sword tail in the trash bin after that :
The third arc wasn’t the greatest for a couple reasons…………..mainly to do with sundew…….anyway I love your take on it and your drawing is as beautiful as ever!!!!
I think Swordtail was just trying to look more confident than he felt for the sake of keeping the group’s hopes high in finding Luna and making a change to the continent. And then when Sundew joined the party, who was way more experienced than Swordtail, he wanted to do everything he could to impress her with eagerness. But ultimately he tried a little too hard and looked like a fool a little, but that didn’t stop him from trying anyway in the slightest. I think he simply had a lot of faith that Sundew would make all the right calls for the group and followed her like a scout follows a leader.
I see ur comments EVERYWHERE OMG
I always think your starflight
@@MintPawYT i’m taking that as a compliment
i always think its deathbringer. also ur comments are in like every video lol🤣
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Swordtail is definitely one of my favorite side characters. I think his personality he had was interesting, and I wish that we got to see more of him.
Yeah same I had a therey on him farther up in the comments if you'd like to cheak it out
Up until Luna’s book he really was a two dimensional character but when we saw flashbacks in Luna’s book, that’s when I really started appreciating his character.
I find this sooooooo relatable! I feel like the 3rd arc was very very rushed. The writing n the second and third arc is soooo different. I don’t think I’m lying when I say the third arc is my least favorite arc. So I love how someone else thinks the same way as me.
Yeah. Third arc had the worst writing. But I come for the WORLDBUILDING AND LOOOOOOOOOOORE. So I like third arc best. I love blue and cricket and all three pantalan tribes are SO creatively designed and super fun to draw!
This was intended for kids wow arc3 has issues I didn’t notice any of this and I’m a kid am I opinion I like dark three I didn’t see many things wrong with it
I personally thought that it was crazy and weird that he was more upset about losing Luna than HIS SISTER! I do agree with Sundew taking his role and I love your videos so much!
My thoughts exactly! And I love the colours you used, beautiful, as always!!
Swordtail is literally my favorite character. Thanks so much for doing him. Your art is absolutely amazing!
Are you fine with him being referred to as "a big, dumb, funny idiot character"? Not trying to be rude, or disrespectful to Cyprus or anything. But are you okay with that?
Cyprus, my girl! I’m so proud of you from an online business perspective-you’ve managed to build a RUclips channel for yourself whose content allows you to showcase your original art pieces through weekly uploads by writing the equivalent of fanfiction for a popular canon in your niche, all while establishing a portfolio, reputation, fanbase, and profile for yourself as a professional artist. The fact that you continue to scale such a career by simply creating more original weekly art content which apparently comes straight from your heart is truly a remarkable, beautiful, and wonderful thing! ❤
You are so right! Swordtail needs more personality!
I’ve never read the 3rd arc, and it’s because I hear so much of this about it!
A lot of people say they enjoyed the 3rd arc, but idk.
Thank you so so much Cyprus for being honest in this video, but not butchering Tui’s whole thing she made!
I personally think Tui was just stressed by a lot of people wanting books that are good as her first ten. I mean like she probably rushed her books and tried to get them done faster, not better. So, she spent way less time on side characters, focusing more on the actual plot then on the dragons involved in it.
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also the drawing is so cute! you made a rly good point about the side characters. i agree
Amazingly said, not to add the whole time I was just thinking of sokka and then you finally said it
Happy birthday cyprus!!! I'm very glad you liked my picture. Yeah I am very glad Swordtail was given a little more depth in book 15. I always hated how he appeared in the other books: shallow . . . at least before we saw how Luna saw him: funny, quirky, impulsive in a cute sorta way.
What if Moon grew up on the Nightwing island
What if the false dragonets swapped with the real ones.
What if fathom was evil instead of Darkstalker.
Swordtail is probably one of my tops from the 3rd arc and probably the only one who has the title of favorite introduced in arc 3 in my book. I personally wish Swordtail was the pov for book 11 but instead we got the worst protagonist of wings of fire(in my opinion). Swordtail is a wasted character and if Tui does make a 4th arc i hope for Swordtail to get more focus. I feel like an entire arc could be made just from tying lose ends such as Peril and Sky's reunion or what happened to Sora.
Omg this art is AMAZING! I missed your whatsisfaces!!
Welp I just wanted to say I absolutely LOVE your style Cyprus! ❤
love Swordtail's color and design
He’s definitely in the top 20 best character designs at least in my opinion
Amazing art as always!!
I actually never really thought about this before :0
I love how you draw silkwings. One of my favorite silkwings is Swordtail because of his color palette and his attitude.
I also have and idea for a What if Video. What if Thorn didn't become queen?
@Owen Hood who would be queen instead? Blister, Blaze, or Burn?
Or sunny
@@seanl2569 sunny would be the best, Blaze second, burn third and Blister worst IMO
(I know you're not talking to me but uhm ya)
I have adopted your art style! Watching you draw has helped a lot!
I legitimately thought the music at the end was somebody's ringtone xD
Also, STILL can't get over your art style, it's genuinely amazing!
Swordtail tbh was one of my favorite side characters. He has a nice confident personality that I adore. But I respect your opinion.
I think we can all agree that swordtail is the best character in Wings of Fire
I totally agree with you on this video. Also your Swordtail speedpaint is amazing!
I *ONLY* liked The Hive Queen, because I loved seeing Cricket's brain constantly full of questions, and I also enjoyed a deeper look into the Hives.
I just realized Cyprus doesn't have enough subscribers, GIVE CYRUS MORE SUBSCRIBERS!
I love your art Cyprus!!
The Menagire is so good.
YES THE MENAGERIE! I haven’t seen anyone else mention it. I LOVED READING IT!
Finally! I read it also, and once I started reading WoF, I was like "Wait that name sounds familiar.." while looking at the author.
You know, how you described what Swordtail could have been, he sounds like a character archetype called "crouching moron, hidden (ninja. Let's say ninja.)". Works in social situations because they're funny, works in combat because they're stronger than everyone thinks they are.
Swordtail is like: My calculations was solid, but man I'm bad at math.
You are so true! Speaking facts!
Yes, I agree, thank you for making videos and in my opinion I love your style and when you talk about the characters. I recently started digital art(on mobile 😂😬💀) and it takes way longer than on paper! I hope to see more whatisfaces! ❤
Yeah I had trouble too. Still having it, but if you don’t mind lo-res, especially if you’re looking for decent animation tools, I suggest pixel studio. Min canvas size is 1024x1024 pixels though sadly.
I love the Wof what if series. Can you make more? I have an idea. What if Arctic and Foeslayer never met?
CYPRUS, I HAVE TWO QUESTIONS!! If you could answer then, that would be really helpful!
1. Will you do any more livestreams? I found them extremely enjoyable, watching you work and answer questions. Also, why were the previous livestreams deleted? Was that RUclips or you?
2. Will you do a Halloween scarlet drawing tradition this year!? I love that idea, and in fact, I made my own and posted on deviant art!
If you can answer these, it would get me really hyped up for the rest of Halloween, thank you!
Yay a new video Cyprus' art are cute and cool and I actually like sword tale I like his wings and hords
I think it would have been really amazing to show a character who struggled deeply with meantal issues and underlying emotions that he hid away and I agree that swordtail was seriously downplayed
the art in this video is really good
Personally, I love swordtail and I think he’s a great character, but I support you opinion!
Agreed. Come to think of it, I was pretty disappointed with Swordtail when the books progressed. I LOVED him and his character.... but he slowly faded away T^T
BTW, GREAT ART!
imo i love swordtail and arc 3 but i kinda agree :3
I am a book writer myself and indeed he did have a bit of a run down when Luna left I was expecting him to go a bit crazy about it but no he was worried but didn’t have the reaction I was thinking and hopping for.🦋
Can you do an updated wing tutorial? Or updated full bod tutorial?
I love your style :)
I love it!!! Total eye candy
I just started the third arc and so far swordtail and cricket are my favorites.....Oh no.
this is so true, idiotic boyfriend Swordtail (NO) confident, awesome, 11-12 book Swordtail (YESSS)
I agree that Sundew did kinda replace him. I also didn’t really like Swordtail that much until I read The Flames of Hope, and honestly, I kinda love him now. I like him more than Blue, that’s for sure. But yes, Swordtail was put to the side and wasn’t given much character development, unlike Kinkajou, who’s my favorite side character.
I think you are right sword tail would have made a fierce but funny side or mine Caracter.
It's true what you say; the third arc did seem a bit... bland at times. Sure it had some pretty groundbreaking additions to the Wings of Fire universe, but to me something just felt off about the story. Besides the main characters, everyone else seemed so much lesser. But of course, everone goes through ups and downs. It's nigh impossible to keep up a good streak forever. So if we do end up having an arc 4 or more Winglets books, lets hope Tui is in her full spirit again 😄
I completely agree
Hi Cyprus! I love your videos and it inspired me to also be a WOF RUclipsr, although I'm starting small! Could you possibly make a "don't listen to a word I say" music video or whatever? My idea is that it could be Luna inside the other mind area when she was forced to lie to her friends.
this is why book 15 fell on its face at the end (the last act specifically with cotton mouth and lizard)
**spoilers ofc**
they are introduced so late we don’t get to learn too much about them, so we don’t quite have a reason to hate cottonmouth and love lizard aside from what’s shown which isn’t a lot, we don’t delve deep into them, all we know about lizard is that she never got a chance at life because of cottonmouth, and that cottonmouth caused the scorching, but we don’t learn enough about them for this to matter. we never get to see what lizard missed out on or think about it, and we don’t learn enough about cottonmouth for him to truly be hateable. he never really,,, did anything that made me want him to die? aside from the scorching which we *barely* see the actual effects of aside from the dragons getting angry, we don’t feel like he did something bad and that the dragons did something good, just that they both did something bad, we don’t see the dragons grieve, or learn about the lives the stolen children would’ve had. Tui didn’t give the *main villains* anytime to develop, we could’ve used a few prologues or epilogues between the two, maybe even wasp! this is all just my opinion!
tldr: tui didn’t develop most of the book 15 characters in a way that made you root for what happens to them, cottonmouth is an underwhelming villain for most of it, especially whenever lizard or luna gives him a snarky remark, and lizard just isn’t well developed enough to develop a connection with her imo
I really really like Swordtail, in book 11 I loved him but it felt like he got thrown off to the sidelines because they really didn’t know what to do with him. I hate how he wasn’t book 15’s protagonist because he could have gotten some incredible development and he could have actually been taken seriously. I get it’d be hard to tie that to the characters on Pyrrhia but I feel like Tui could have made it work.
Edit: also I despise how he didn’t play a huge role as a Chrysalis member. They really should have done more with that
Hey, Sowrdtail is my faverite charecter!!!!
Wow all the possibilities for him I wish he and sundew were friends too
What is the song at the end called? Also I loveeeee swordtail too and I wish he got his own book
You are the amazing!!!
Anyone else feel like Sowrdtail is so much like Qibli
I find him as a slightly less annoying qibli. Luna did comment on that in Book 15 (no spoilers lol)
I like swordtail I think his flop was him trying to distract himself and the others from luna and io when they first found luna his n9rmal self returned and didn't leave for a while of searching then he moped and worried then tryed to distract and say abeyance she'll come back on her own and I think the reason he didn't lead with sundew was because now nobody knew were luna was and he thought he couldn't lead without knowing were she is or with her. Thats what I think what about yall I'd be happy to kn9w in the replys thank you!
I love the Menagerie. Its such a good book and deserves more credit
My thoughts on Swordtail are kind of weird. Its like he was a main side character and then started s
sliding on books 14 through 15. THIS IS MY OPINION and i think was a bit good and a bit...strange.
I love the menagerie too! Who’s your favorite character?
Also, love the drawing :D
Great vid!
Could you do a tutorial on 3/4 head turns. I can never figure out how to do them
What drawing platform do you use?! I've been looking for a good drawing platform for a pc and yours is awesome, especially when you do those amazing dragons!
krita
Swordtail was kind of a hotheaded goofball back in book 11, too. I just never liked him that much. I think he makes a good guy for Luna, though. I love the worldbuilding and tribes in arc three, but I draw way more arc 1-2 stuff, because they have better characters. I’ve drawn the DoD and the Jade Winglet as a group plenty, but the third arc povs? They’re not a group!!! I did headshot the stealth team once, but they’re mostly too big to put in one finished art piece without it getting VERY noisy.
honestly, what does everyone have against arc 3?? 😡and i love Swordtail!!! 😭
I love the menagerie I am currently rereading it I'm ot book three right now
I know this is kinda wierd but the third arc was my favorite arc, I loved the first three books and re-read them almost everyday, personally I think that Swordtail had so much potential until Flames Of Hope where it showed him as being reckless, stupid and dependent on Luna, but Swordtail wasnt like that at all. In my opoin all Swordtail tried to do was lighten up some tense moments, and keep things happy within the group, Swordtail was raised being told that Leafwings would kill all the hivewings, which eventually he wanted to do, so when Sundew showed up he assumed that she had a plan to defeat them and followed her. In my opion Flames of Hope ruined the third arc and it had a ton of potential in the first 3 books, then the last two kinda dropped the tension.
I have a What if.
What if Kestrel didn’t die.
Hey you know I love your videos and I personally love your what if abd character with food videos so I thought that you can do a food video of the legend or a what if of cottonmouth being a good side character and not an antagonist ❤️😀
(this is totally unrelated to the video, though it was very good)
Cyprus, are you going to continue your annual Halloween Scarlet poster tradition this year?
the only book i really enjoyed in arc 3 was the hive queen, and it was mainly because it gives more information on how each hive functions (forgive me if im wrong i havent read that book in a while)
i love your videos
So true
Tbh, Swordtail was amazing. I think it would've been amazing if idk, HIS ENTIRE PERSONALITY didn't just go "ya know what, ima be 2d"
I love swordtail but I agree I wish he had kept his personality. He should have been more of himself and I really don’t like book 15 thats when he goes down hill.
anyone remember when swordtail got stuck in the dragon trap in the poison jungle
Yes.
WHAT ABOUT TAU?! TAU IS AMAZING!!!! (If i spelled anything wrong sorry)
Video idea: What if Queen Thorn Did Get The Letter?
@Cyprus there is a youtuber that is completely copying your style, like i cant tell the difference. There channel is TinyTalons. If you dont care thats ok, I just wanted to tell you. I will delete this when you respond to keep the drama down.
how has your day been going
or you posted this before going to bad in which case good night
I think that tui should take a break or go make new story's and comeback later with new motivation and ideas.
I definitely agree. I saw a lot in swordtail. He had potential. But arc 3 kind of just turned "Meh." for me.
The should of made a book about sword tail instead if queen snowfall
What if turtle and tsunami switched places
Erin Hunter made WC not Tui
Did you know that my daughter is making a book Siri’s it’s called paws of power about winged wolves wolves with wings
YOU FORGOT THE LITTLE TRIANGLES😭😭😭
Don’t get me wrong I know what it’s like to be really frustrated with a character you think has great potential for example for me shadow the hedgehog. I think that he could have been a really good character but instead we just got sonic but he’s an edge lord. And I think that your criticisms would be valid but although I don’t think this is intended you seem to be talking about all side characters in any work of fiction ever. Don’t get me wrong I like a good side character arc but it’s fine to have characters with wacky personalities so that they can play off the main cast in a fun and entertaining way. And you’re (while probably inadvertently) still implying that all side changes ever should be so fleshed out and have such good character development that you could just make them a main character with no changes. As a private character writer I know that if you have a notion in your mind that that’s how all side characters should be then that completely zaps the fun out of making side characters in the first place. And if you are writing a series that you are going to publish like wings of fire that would probably lead to burnout and severely decrease the quality of your work. Great art though, love it!
what do you use to draw/
I agree that character is important. But it is hard to build one. Mabel you should try. Just for once
I think tui should’ve based swordtail off sokka it would’ve have been a better arc
vermilion is my favorite aka scarlets son
Wow I’m here early
tui didnt make warriors erin hunter made warriors :>
I personally loved the third arc, maybe even the most of all three, but I gotta admit that I really don't like Swordtail. He's kinda annoying and barely does anything until the 15th book, and even then he is still really shallow. He just serves as a love interest for Luna, who is much more interesting and better character than Swordtail. I actually don't think that he should have been 3 dimensional, but rather just dropped altogether. I think Luna is a very independent person and I don't think every character needs a love interest. Also not to nitpick but I think Hazel from book 13 should be included in the side character line up.
Honestly even tho arc 3 is the worst written it was my favourite arc because of sword tail and blue men I loved them when I first read the book and then the posion jungle came and men I despised that book ( no effence to any body who likes it) it felt like they just threw blue and sword tail in the trash bin after that :
The third arc wasn’t the greatest for a couple reasons…………..mainly to do with sundew…….anyway I love your take on it and your drawing is as beautiful as ever!!!!