That was really beautiful. I told myself I was pretty dark-minded when I thought they were going to use him as either plant food or he's going to give birth for the first time!
To much flowery and cheesy, maybe 30% of the story was OK but the rest was unnecessary descriptions and feelings that it felt like repeating themselves, Im OK with whole planet marrying him, but It needs a real flow, not childish girly rom-com sleepover Take it as a comment, if I didn't think it can be improved, I wouldn't bother commenting
That was really beautiful. I told myself I was pretty dark-minded when I thought they were going to use him as either plant food or he's going to give birth for the first time!
Good job. Better than I expected in the first couple of minutes. Ended up being more fun than most.
I was expecting the brides to try to eat him at the end of the story.
Xenos lover. The inquisition from the Warhammer 40k is not happy. 🤨
To much flowery and cheesy, maybe 30% of the story was OK but the rest was unnecessary descriptions and feelings that it felt like repeating themselves, Im OK with whole planet marrying him, but It needs a real flow, not childish girly rom-com sleepover
Take it as a comment, if I didn't think it can be improved, I wouldn't bother commenting